[Subtitles] Illustration correction 70! A professional will explain!

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@antama9488 5 ай бұрын

元絵も炎部分を強調するために背景がグレーだったり、肌の色が落ち着いてたりして、色彩感覚いいなあって思った。でもこのモチーフって神絵師が仕上げようとも「手から火が出てる系女子」以上になるのかなと思って見てたら…… みごとに「髪を炎に変換する能力者」に変わっていく。アイディアが組み合って、めっちゃキャラクター出てきてゾクゾクした。絶対つよい。

@mlxu_sort 5 ай бұрын

元絵は背景がカラフルで炎が全然目立たないのがつらい😢

@asterv843 2 ай бұрын

In the first version, the impression I got was that the character is newly discovering her magic power, because her raised eyebrow and shoulder come off as apprehensive. I figured she was a quiet girl learning about her Flame Attribute, which is an interesting contrast to a shy personality. Maybe this expression could have stayed the same, but pushed further to be clearer to the viewer. I do enjoy the corrected version, too! Maybe it's a picture of the same character later in the story, showing what her Flame power has brought out in her. Maybe she's even overboard and feeling vengeful or "mad with power"... The two artists accidentally collaborated to create a story...!

@1220gen 5 ай бұрын

さいとうなおき先生はいつもニコやかで、ポジティブでたくさん動画見たくなる！

@hiro-rb3bf 5 ай бұрын

（知ってる！魔法学園もの序盤に主人公を苦しめるチュートリアル役として登場し、その後かませかギャグ要員になってる子だ！）

@shoyofilms 5 ай бұрын

好みの問題なので無視して欲しいんですが、炎（髪）の下にある手、親指を炎エフェクトの奥にしても違う（威圧してるように見えて髪を手でいじっている）印象になっていいなあと思いました

@anny_senpai9832 5 ай бұрын

Fire and water are so fun to draw, I love 💕🤧 The drawing is beautiful and I love the character 🥹🤌 my favorite parte is the "before and after" 🥰 both paintings are very pretty ~ ❤️

@daytner3837 5 ай бұрын

Thank you for teach us a lot of tips for drawing ❤

@triz6525 5 ай бұрын

finalmente achei seu canal novamente! obrigada peloz tutoriais!

@user-pm2cq8pr3w 5 ай бұрын

再放送ありがとうございます！！元の絵もいいのにさらに良くできるのスゴすぎる…勉強させていただきます

@Glic3 5 ай бұрын

Спасибо за видео, помогают в развитии собственных познаний в рисунке! ❤

@user-ih7oi6oo1e 5 ай бұрын

本当に本当に悔しいがこの人の絵の添削説明って本当にわかりやすいんだよな、、、、いつもありがとう、、、

@joaquingutierrez3600 5 ай бұрын

Excelente video y clase ! Mantenga los subtítulos en español por favor sensei 🙏🙏🙏❤❤❤

@Sasukesanimation 5 ай бұрын

I dont speak much Japanese but let me just say these videos are really helpful 👍😃

@iiraingirlii 5 ай бұрын

Thank you so much ❤ 😭i am happy you exist

@aoama_second 5 ай бұрын

やっぱり影で印象すごく変わるなぁ

@user-ipponnyari 5 ай бұрын

ビフォーは無表情ながらも幼馴染くんに好意を持って魔法の使い方を教えてあげてる感じがするし、アフターになると幼馴染くんに近づこうとする女を陰で威圧してる感が出たように見える。先生の添削動画によってこのキャラにストーリーが生まれた感じがしてとても好き❤️

@user-eb2nl8bc2d 5 ай бұрын

顔に影だけで、立体に見えるの凄い。

@Terururute 5 ай бұрын

さいとうなおきさんにイラストをどうやって送るのでしょうか？

@user-yv6bv3ui2e 5 ай бұрын

محتوى رائع شكرا لأضافة الترجمة العربية

@linli_n1 4 ай бұрын

Love your videos!

@user-sz1rq7mb6y 5 ай бұрын

👍

@ALKIRUS_BONES 5 ай бұрын

Saito San, I want to ask about how to apply for image correction, right?Sorry if my question might be strange because I'm really new to following your channel.

@lintea_ 5 ай бұрын

additionally you can request a certain part or aspect of the artwork to be corrected in the post, naoki saito has corrected some artworks by artists overseas, so i don’t think language is a major obstacle (but you can use a machine translator if you really want to)

@lintea_ 5 ай бұрын

i don’t have twitter/x so i can’t prove it really

@ALKIRUS_BONES 5 ай бұрын

@@lintea_ Thank you very much, but is something cut off here? Or did you delete comments? This additional information seems like the previous part is missing.

@lintea_ 5 ай бұрын

@@ALKIRUS_BONES my reply isnt going through for some reason, i dont know if youtube bots think im spamming or its a word that triggered my comment's deletion, i'm gonna try replying to your other comment

@Limetfarc 4 ай бұрын

Me encantan tus correcciones pero esta fue la unica q siento que no me a gustado tanto xD

@winter_dud 5 ай бұрын

こんにちは、斉藤直葵さん。まず、映像と関連のないコメントであることをお詫びいたします。添削をお願いしようかと思ってみたのですが、私がツイッターができないのでコメントで先に挨拶をします。ほかでもなく、用意する作品のキャラクターシート用に全身絵を描いています。でも、どこかひんやり未完成のような気がします。誰が見ても趣味で描いたようなイラストになってしまいます。その内容と関連した映像があるのか、それとも映像をアップしていただけるのか気になります。