Me: *smiling and laughing* Mom: is she going crazy*worried* 🤣

When the end starts to fall I fall from my bed crying and the funny part is my brother sitting in couch is waching the whole situation with a disgusted face that's when I relize that I am still in his room 🤣🤣🤣😂

When jungkook was like JIN HYUNGGGGGG I was like “Jin better dashi run run run 🏃‍♀️”

I love how the "The End" Words are just falling out of the sky😂😂😂

I love Taekook stories.... but honestly this one bothered me. Not setting a good example that JK would repeatedly beat the person he loves (and do even worse) and then all he had to do was say Sorry and everything is ok. That is NOT ok

In the beginning of the one shot can y’all hold me back I won a smack the Back of jungkook a head. How dare he hurt his little taetae. Bahahaha love it queen 👑

Good writing. I love Taekook FF. But domestic violence is never ok and I honestly can’t see Jungkook being that person.

Feeling bad in not enough - especially if you are wrong. I love these two together - but sometimes reality is not so simple - you cannot just forgive and forget- abuse is a real thing and there is a lot of healing involved for both - physically and mentally. The people involved should get the help that they need in order to forgive each other and to love each other. You can fix a realtionship when you are able to move on and get the help that is needed. I would like to see a special episode where JK really learns and repents for his mistake. then they can both start afresh and love and appreciate each other. I would love to see them together and appreciating each other. 💜💜💜💜🐆🐅🐻🐇🐇

English not my first language. Message to the writer I like Taekook FF but, this one really hit home for me. I was abused physically and mentally for years by my husband. I know this is fanfic but please don't let this idea/message be OK. Its been 6 years since I got away from my abuser and I'm still healing from it to this day. I am not bashing you or anything but please do some research on abuse victims to understand that its not all a happy ending with a "Sorry, Please Forgive Me, or a I Wont Do It Again". Trust me not all us make it out alive and the ones that do (like myself) still fell the aftermath of it.

taehyung is my bias and jungkook is my bias wrecker........i love both of them so much but i HATED jungkook in this FF I HATED HIM from the bottom of my heart🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😡😡😡😡 but in REAL LIFE i love u jungkook 💜💜💜💜💜🤞🤞🤞🤞

Woah it was so cute, lovely 💖💖 and amazing. I loved it. Keep going on 👏👏👏👏👏👏 author nim ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️. BORAHE 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

Rape and physical abuse is never okay or romantic!! For decades advocates have tried to make these subjects in book and movies unacceptable entertainment. I can see being cold or angry but to see these two beautiful people depicted as abuser and victim is never acceptable.

That was not a prank. That was a wake up call.

I love it😭😭💜💜💜💜💜💜

13:46 his iconic line :- it's me, just me 😁

I think you should make part two which is jin and namjoon it is bcs jin look oike lonely 😂😂

i love your stories keep it up💜💜💜💜💜💜💛💛💛💛💛💚💚💙💙💜💜

Second love it purple you💜💜💜💜💜💜

when i was reading the words ''not today'' no one: me: no not todayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy sorry hehe

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Good prank you know🤣🤣Great ff 🤗 Please keep writing 🙏 your writing skills are great. I purple you 💜

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"Featured by Yoonmin"

I want more please and but no ending ...I am crying beacuse of what headid of tae....

Best best ff ever i purple you 💜💜💜💜

By the way I am your new subscriber author!!

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i cry for real tho and you so creative fighthingssss ❤❤

The begging is sad but the ff is good tho

I enjoy a taekook story but not this one. Abusive relationships should never be “normalized” even in a fan fic. I was glad for the concern Jimin showed in wanting to help his friend. I was relieved when Jin took Tae out of there. I can understand Tae still loving Jungkook despite the abuse, BUT to write it off as “just a prank” to make Jungkook admit he loves Tae rather than facing and dealing with the physical and sexual abuse was a missed opportunity to write responsibly. I mean an abuse victim should never just brush off being severely beaten and raped by anyone, but especially not by their partner. Had this been part of a longer story where the characters actually stayed separated while working on their issues ands friends and family protected Tae from Jungkook over a few episodes, then you would have been handling a major issue the way it should be handled. Since you are using the names and likenesses of these fine young men, remember their campaign against violence and at least write about it responsibly. I’ve read many other ff (taekook and other ships) and seen tough subjects (even abuse and rape by partners) as part of larger stories handled well so it can be done. Please do not write this type of one shot in the future. Abuse is not funny. It can’t be corrected with tears and “I’m sorry.” Too many people are in relationships like this for real and they do not need to see a story treat it like all the abuser needs to do is feel bad and apologize after a week and everything will be fine. Lots of abusers feel bad afterwards. Someone in it being abused doesn’t need to think they need to accept the apology. It won’t be fine after an apology. After love and trust are shattered like that, will take lots of time and therapy to recover from and the relationship will most likely not be able to be saved. From just a writing technique standpoint, it’s well written just given more consideration to subject matter and the length of time it may actually need to be handled responsibly.

wow just wow

it was *chef kiss* good

Really sad! You need to improve your writing skills and a bit of grammar, also the plot is well made at the beginning but you went off at the end. The end result is a bit messed up. Another thing is about your photos and how you edited them into the video, it's kinda unpolished. Just a bit more editing, angst, grammar and a better ending could improve this fanfic! I loved it, don't think negatively. I'm sure you'll improve~ 😁😊❤️ I purple you 💜💜💜💜💜💜

Lol Jimin calling Yoongi dumb***

I don't think the ending is appropriate here.. abuse and rape is serious problem here ... only a victim can understand .. how effective can it be both mentally and physically.. although this is only a ff still a mere sorry is not enough for to cope up with ... and *prank* ????? Are you kidding me ...

Please special episode

Can you make a part two please

Ff is not bad but domestic violence is not a small thing to forgive someone that easily and forget everything ... It takes so much time to heal from that trauma plzz make sure write ff's carefully coz it will probably misleads people

I have a request to make for a ff itz "clothes off game" ik itz already done many times but if u can Plz do it in my pov🥺..(Jk as the top And Tae as the bottom) Pov:Tae and Jk studied in highschool they were bsfs from 8 years and none of them had a partner ever in their life..They had a huge fucking crush on each other from 8 years but nobody dared to confess only jm knows abt it!They kiss,sit in each other's laps,feed each other etc cuz they thinks that this is normal is bestie thingy! Then Our one and only Jimin told them to try the "Clothes-Off Game"firstly they denied hardly but Jimin said "if u don't I'll believe ur not bestfriends anymore" they get angry whenever anyone say things abt their bestfriends thingy so they agreed! Tae went to jk's home cuz jk's parents went to u.s for business meetings...They started- Jk:Tell what's goes in hard comes out soft? Tae: Condo- Jk:LOL*laughs hardly*itz a chewing gum! Tae:Say what's brown and sticky? Jk:A stick lol... Tae :UGH... Jk:what's my fav color? Tae:itz black Jk: hmm Tae:what's my fav color? Jk:uhm ORANGE! Tae :WTF- itz grey! *-*The game continues till they are only in under covers*+* Jk drooled over tae in tae's case itz the same they started leaning in and *+*kissed each other hungrily for 14 mins and they started making out!-Im not gud at writing smuts*+*...... Then-give a happy ending- Add some lines of ur own too i did it in short ofc!

I am not hating the author but he forgive him really easily he should suffer more that was so unrealistic because no one will never forgive the person like him

This was a good ff... but I feel like abusing is totally not ok.. this might be just a normal ff but the word abuse must never be normalised like this... tae should have had his self respect and get away from him... no matter how much you love a person you can't stay with a person who abuses you it's wrong. and "I'm sorry, I won't do it again" doesn't make a difference don't ever forgive a sinner like that... hope you understand and don't take offence 🙂

Please make a sope one too

OK that was just prank for them but I cry🥺 IDKW😭

uhaaa its tea

I love both of them but didn't like the story . How can a person , abused and raped by his/her husband, forgive him that easily. The message that this story convey is ridiculous . I am sorry author but you could do better than this.

Author ik u wanted to make a Lil short a Lil big but still the thing i wanted to talk abt was tae shouldn't have forgiven jk so easily he "raped"+"abused" him these two words are dangerous the victims of these can understand even if he got abused by the love of his life itz nog right!I think u should have made jk waited for 5-6 years to be forgiven.He just cried for ig 2-3 hours and asked tae if he could forgive him or not ....and end... In my opinion this's a half completed story but still i love ur ffs watched almost every ffs of urs just wanted to give u my opinion✨

U dont have to forgave the person who abused, raped .....

I FOUND YOU PRINCESS. HI QIS!!

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It’s really bother me...what's the moral of the story? Nothing....Jk torture him,then say sorry,Tae forgave then...finish?Wow

So Jungkook beat him, tied him up, raped him and THEN wonders if he was too harsh on Tae? Tae is an abused spouse who blames himself for Jungkook's abusive nature. Jungkook shouldn't be crying behind closed doors; he should be crying behind bars. Forgiveness came too cheaply. Both of these people need intensive therapy along with their " friends" and family. This story should have come waving big red flags and trigger warnings.

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ummmmm i was joking im not gong to kill

I didn't watch till the end but I cried when JK Asked jin For help

What was the prank

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