Another fantastic Chapter! If you love the story like me, and you'd like to show your appreciation, why not buy the author a coffee (I know some of you have already - And to you we Thank You 🥰). Please use his ko-fi link here: ko-fi.com/ekhidnawritez Thank you.

Yeah, he'd have probably taken out the entire raiding fleet had he not passed out from his injuries, the brilliant mad bastard.

More… More….. More…. More !!!!!! Lolol

This is one of the best Sci fi stories i have ever heard. There are so many popular tropes in this story, that your imagination easily can run wild and set you in a completely different universe... Almost like the snap of your fingers.

It’s always amusing swapping to Clara’s or Cynthia’s perspectives whenever Wyatt’s doing something ‘impossible’. At some point both Clara and Cynthia are just going to be so desensitized by it to the point that everyone will think they’re just as insane as he is lol.

Loving this series. The only thing I hate is now I have to wait again.

Usually I listen to a story or read along, occasionally I will listen to the latest chapter twice, but in a few instances I will listen to the latest chapter, then go back and start at chapter one and listen to it again from beginning to end. This story is one of those few instances.

Been waiting on the edge of my seat for a new chapter

DAMN, 26 minutes didn't feel at all as 5 minutes even less. Was that good. One of best stories ever listen for space and battle. More fantasy, rpg and medieval style . But DAMN these series is fraking awesome.

MY MAN WYATT can't get over how much I love this series seriously hanging on every chapter

I have to say that I have NEVER looked so forward to a installment of a story. It reminds me of the stories I was told when radio was king and there were a cliff hanger every week and the audience would have to wait until the next installment. This truly is a incredible story and I can't wait till the next chapter. Thanks so much for giving me the honor of listening to it and man I hope this becomes a movie of any kind.

Someone ought to make this tale into a movie! Damned, but this is good stuff!

Thank you for the author painting the canvas Thank you for the audio that give emphasis on its moments

Having been a fan of the genre for over 60 years ( yes, I am that old) I can say that this is Space Opera at its finest!

Waiting for the next chapter is going to hurt me, this story is so good.

Awesome story!

Always look forward to each chapter, excellent story.

I LOVE this series! TY for narrating it!

I have just watched all 16 chapters one after the other. this is without a dought one of the best syfi storys ive ever heard. cant wait for the rest.

OK, you got me hooked. that was an awesome telling from the perspective of Woodshaft. I am looking forward to seeing the next chapter.

I am enjoying this story immensely and wait eagerly for each new chapter. I also love the narration, it is far more fun to listen to the story that to read it on reddit. Thank you for all the work that you are putting into this. I keep wondering about the rest of humanity outside the Principality. It will be interesting to find out where the black ships come from.

All i can is, this is good can not wait until the next installment. Outstanding job, thanks.

Awesome story! Thank you 🙏

Yay!!!! It is so short.😢

Excellent episode! Hopefully the nano-drug that Lady Cynthia injected will get Wyatt back into the fight!

After this battle with the Drazzan, I hope The Prince would promote Wyatt to Captain and command the Noirnavio with Golt & some of the other prisoners. Those who didn't join him can burn in hell! Then officially accord Wyatt as a knight & noble. Can't wait to see the look on Salazar Reid & other asshole nobles, lol. I'm already seeing Princess Clara falling in love with Wyatt. Even more spicy Lady Cynthia also making the love triangle - that's gonna make us drool!!!

I'm not usually into this type of stories but this one is keeping me interested

Keeps getting better and better

Every Chapter just gets better and better. I love it.

By far the best and most engaging HFY story. This chapter was especially captivating.

Can't wait for the next one! I really like the budding romance (maybe) between Wyatt and the Princess... I wonder if they'll make pancakes lmao

So glad someone continued this. Just finished ch.16, can't wait for the next one. I drive a lot for work and listening to this and other stories like it make that so much better.

Running out of patience waiting for each one

This story is awesome! Can’t wait another 2 days for the next episode 😮

Drazzan can probably be blinded by flashbangs and flares overloading their optical leaf.

Listened to the serious 3 times now brilliant and captivating 👏👏👏😊

Thanks Jonathan for yet another amazing narration!

Interesting to have this chapter covering things from Clara's pov the defense of Woodshaft and reacting to events in chapter 15. Interesting to learn how Woodshaft setting up its internal defenses in preparation for the Drazin boarders. I am not surprised that Uriel was pleasantly surprised that Clara would send most of her 10 RM to help with Woodshaft defense efforts. I do like we learn more about the Drazin, like the Drazin raiders independent of their government for plausibility denialbility. Interesting to hear what Uriel saw of the battle between loyalist and tratior forces and his interest how the stealth cruser was taken out. Yeah not surprised that Clara would flip out hearing that Wyatt went out in fighter by himself. I do like Uriel realizing that Wyatt was a pilot and instead of a bodyguard and someone Clara deeply cares about. It's hilarious seeing Uriel and Clara's reaction to Wyatt using a fighter bomber to kill 30 normal Drazin fighters😂. Great job with writing the ground combat between the Drazin and the defenders of Woodshaft. Great job of depecting the RM, especially how the lone RM pissed of the Drazin to the point they mutilated his corpse not interested in his fluids. I do like how easily Clara was able to figure out Wyatt was in comand of the ship was acting like a starfighter. I do love how dumbfounded both Clara and Uriuel were at how APN Noir killed a Drazin crusier with 1 shot. Great way to end the chapter with Clara full of dread that Wyatt is seriously injured due to how Noir was acting. Especially when think about he probably was serious injured doing that insane starfighter miracle earlier. Next chapter probably will be with the Prince reacting to the Drazin coming in syestem.

Can’t wait for chapter 17!!!!

Impatiently waiting for the next chapter, thank you 😊

The last episode definitely ended as a cliffhanger.

this is an outstanding story line! bravo

This should be a TV Show!!!!!

That is a fantastic chapter. Please do the next chapter soon.

These two pants would make a good 40k faction

My favorite story on this channel and always eagerly look forward to another.

Awesome story

Excellent story. Many thanks

Damn Awesome

Brilliant chapter, looking forward to the next..

This is the best story I've seen on KZfaq. Please post more regularly.

Wyatt is definitely being made out to be a "John McClane" hero character. Die Hard the wife: "he's still alive... only John can drive somebody that crazy" then you watch him get beat down and get back up over and over for hours.

Great series 👏 best of 2024

Thunderous applause!!

Waiting for next , please don't make us wait more time

Awesome again

LETS FUCKING GOOOOO!

Read the helmsman by Bill Baldwin gives you the same feeling

enjoying the story. thanks

Thanks!

So good can’t wait for more

Awesome! More more!

Amazing!

Adrenaline is a hell of a drug!

Time to get that voice and better augmentations

It was interesting to see everything that Wyatt did in the previous chapter from a different perspective . I can't wait to see what happens next. Question if the space station could see the previous battle where is the Prince's fleet in this battle? can't wait to find out.

Excellent narration, the next two chapters are going to be 🔥

next please

Great story!

Need more thank you

I’m a addicted lol

this was a realy cool chapter 😃👍

as much as i like this one i need more of Perfectly Wrong n Out of Cruel space

Great!

Nice

Lets pump the Algorithm. Dont forget to hit the like button folks.

bastard extended cliffhanger

Come on dude, you cant leave it like that, it was almoast a repeat of last episode, we need to know what happened to the pilot... Please upload the next episode today, please never leave us with sutch big cliffhangers as it has a negative effect 😞

Can we release studies in dangerous alien life forms?? Please 🙏

more plz

All I can say is damn

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Will there be another?

This was written a while ago... did they ever get it published?

Chapter 17?

I was about to watch another video but now it's private?? Mean

Is there more than just the 16 chapters?? Just cut off,and left hanging like that??

does someone here know of something of similar kind?

The history is excellent, the only problem is that I couldn't figure out what they look like, I mean the draazan - plant alians Ykanti - birds But either I lost description or is lacking somewhere, I don't even know if the principality is an human species or an "human like" species since I saw things like "something feathers" in the dialog, the royal Marines tho, are just 40k on my mind

Always look forward to each chapter, excellent story.