The Common App essay that got me into a 4% acceptance rate university: Caltech (+ essay tips!!)

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wAmy

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Common App essay
Caltech
California Institute of Technology
STEM
university
dream school
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@theangler1051
@theangler1051 Жыл бұрын
I actually just finished my personal statement and I think it has improved. Thank you so much for the advice!
@wamyy5
@wamyy5 Жыл бұрын
Wow yay! So glad to hear that’s. Good luck 😊
@enviableace9987
@enviableace9987 Жыл бұрын
Very smart analogy at the end, bars 🔥
@wamyy5
@wamyy5 Жыл бұрын
Hahaha thankssss
@arniie5288
@arniie5288 Жыл бұрын
I love your real Madrid flag in the background!
@markus_park
@markus_park Жыл бұрын
Thanks! Really hope to get there too!
@wamyy5
@wamyy5 Жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@user-tm8ko6yn3c
@user-tm8ko6yn3c Жыл бұрын
Thank you wAmy 😊
@wamyy5
@wamyy5 Жыл бұрын
Happy to help!
@2DarkHorizon
@2DarkHorizon Жыл бұрын
Maybe a memorable line for the acceptance essay at the end could be. I hope I didn't sound cringy. Great advice in this video. As you get more experience in life you will conceptualise tasks more and you will miss feeling one of your tasks without preconceived notions. Looking back at your letter maybe overtime you feel that way to it.
@wamyy5
@wamyy5 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your thoughtful comment! Yes, more experience does make that happen.
@ruxsoraxonkenjayeva1097
@ruxsoraxonkenjayeva1097 5 ай бұрын
thank you so muuch :) you are awesome
@loeng888
@loeng888 Жыл бұрын
My son admitted to Caltech,Harvard,MIT, and Princeton in 2018. He graduated 10 months ago from MIT and is now pursuing master program in this institution.Thanks MIT.
@nanditha4477
@nanditha4477 7 ай бұрын
What tutor do you recommend for math science english
@RDuder
@RDuder Жыл бұрын
This is what I wish my college essay was.
@zahra3685
@zahra3685 Жыл бұрын
A ques. What if I don't have exceptional extra curricular and outstanding grades but a perfect SAT score and a strong essay and LOR? Do I have a chance at the top colleges?
@kennethluo4934
@kennethluo4934 Жыл бұрын
Some students are able to earn admission to schools like Stanford and Harvard with very average applications if they convey enough passion through their essays. It is possible but highly unlikely.
@ShaniaPinkney
@ShaniaPinkney Жыл бұрын
what does the thumb test mean?
@user-qs2kc1uw7x
@user-qs2kc1uw7x 5 ай бұрын
I like how you say let's cringe at the essay and then the essay is super well written lol
@zitaoyang7968
@zitaoyang7968 Жыл бұрын
Thank you Amy! Also what do you think about Caltech REA?
@wamyy5
@wamyy5 Жыл бұрын
Happy to help! I think REA is an interesting new option - it seems that someone who applies REA has a better chance of getting in than applying regular decision and then if you get in, you don’t have to worry about any other applications! On the other hand, it would be difficult for students who would like to apply early but where Caltech isn’t their first choice. Not sure if that helps haha 😅
@saiguvvala3598
@saiguvvala3598 Жыл бұрын
Dr song from Alpharetta?
@uri_1199
@uri_1199 Жыл бұрын
Why do you have a Real Madrid flag in the back?
@ashleyereyemi6860
@ashleyereyemi6860 Жыл бұрын
What’s the limit for the essay IS IT 650 or 250
@randomone2331
@randomone2331 Жыл бұрын
Hala Madrid y Nada Mas!
@burrito2981
@burrito2981 7 ай бұрын
Now I deadass need someone to prove me that a² + b² = c² in 42 way
@saurabbanstola7839
@saurabbanstola7839 8 ай бұрын
why didn't you have given the same esaay to havard, this one is better than that you have given them , in my opinion
@wamyy5
@wamyy5 8 ай бұрын
I did. This is the Common App essay!
@saurabbanstola7839
@saurabbanstola7839 8 ай бұрын
did you apply to new york uniersity or not at that time?@@wamyy5
@keylomoon
@keylomoon Жыл бұрын
what are the chances of getting into Caltech with a 2.0 GPA but owning 3 businesses?
@wamyy5
@wamyy5 Жыл бұрын
To be honest, Stanford would probably be more suitable and likely to admit that background!
@keylomoon
@keylomoon Жыл бұрын
@@wamyy5 thank you :) Already applied hopfully I get in. ill let you know the result
@tommylin764
@tommylin764 Жыл бұрын
@@keylomoon so did u get in stanford?
@arniie5288
@arniie5288 Жыл бұрын
@@tommylin764 posting a comment to see the update
@kennethluo4934
@kennethluo4934 Жыл бұрын
@@tommylin764 Assumed you don't apply through early action, results come out in April.
@anshdeep9415
@anshdeep9415 Жыл бұрын
That was very interesting....
@wamyy5
@wamyy5 Жыл бұрын
Thanks, Anshdeep!
@KY-xz9yb
@KY-xz9yb Жыл бұрын
6:30
@isabelleniu9615
@isabelleniu9615 Жыл бұрын
it's poorly written and does not reflect intellectual depth.
@mr_vizier
@mr_vizier 5 ай бұрын
Concurred
@AJ_0O7
@AJ_0O7 11 ай бұрын
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