Adagio replying with “not bad” is so in character lol. Basically saying “do you have any idea how many people I’ve dealt with in this lifetime? But I’ll give you that one”

You can feel the shifts of power, like Sunset getting the upper hand right away with the emergency exit line. But then Adagio counters and it's all downhill from there. Sunset tries to come back, but she can't. As time goes by, the dazzlings tear more and more into Sunset until they reach her very core. Adagio calling their actions mercy for Sunset shows how little of a threat she is to them. Although she earned a bit of respect from the emergency exit line.

in this scene Adagio is basically every bit as selfish, cruel, and power-hungry as Sunset was, only she has none of the few redeeming traits Sunset had.

The fact that there are various parts without dialogue, just still images and it manages to convey emotion is beyond me

Aria and Adagio bullying the heck out of Sunset while Sonata is in the back like: Yea what they say

Sunset may have lost this one, but that emergency exit line was peak bully Sunset!

This seems like something that’d actually be in the show, like that “emergency exit” part was just spot on with the show’s humor. Also I enjoy how they gave Aria more lines in this, I like how she plays more of a part in bringing up Sunset’s insecurities. It gave her more dialogue instead of just being there while Adagio does all the talking.

The thing is, the original was still pretty good. Yet you managed to make it even better, as per usual! You never fail to amaze me!

The battle of the bullies

Sonata has two lines but damn they are good lines. Sunset gets to use her bully side for a good cause, but too bad Adagio's a worthy opponent. I also loved the back and forth between Adagio and Aria, while Sonata was probably just nodding to everything they said in the background! Overall loved the rewrite. Also the scenery and tone is tense

Wow, this was really good! I like how despite the different dialogue, it still has what made the original good. Sunset had some good lines, especially that 'emergency exit' one that even Adagio admits was good! Actually, I think the Dazzlings bounce off better here. Sonata had more lines, Aria being cold as usual, and Adagio... Adagio got an upgrade. I like how her dialogue is more ambiguous here with Sunset's past, having it being applied to those who have similar struggles. It's an excellent change and still in character for her. All in all, a great rewrite!

“But i guess it’a a lot situation in these kinds of experience am i right ? “ This line of adagio really had me

adagio giving green goblin vibes with the your struggling line. it oddly suits her

Dang I love a cold, calculated, sexy badass for a villain

Another great rewritten scene, can't wait to see more of these!!!

The original was good, but this one, oh boy, this is absolutely sinister. 😮

Great seeing The Scene I suggested and was hoping too see got Rewritten. It is a Pretty Good Rewrite, I especially like The Emergency Exit line. These Videos are pretty much making me like Equestria Girls again. Once 15.ai Adds More EQG Characters, I will look forward to Even More Rewritten Videos. :)

A friend of mine linked me this video and I honestly didn't know what to expect because I'm not familiar with the voice emulation software but I got to say this was a spicy confrontation 10 out of 10

your dialogue is always so fresh and creative

This was a wonderful rewritten scene for this confrontation!

Godamn This gave me Goosebumps the background music and the Dialogue really made me feel worried for Sunset, i Wish this was in the movie. Alex you should rewrite the scene in the first Equestria Girls Movie where Twilight Was gonna confess to the others and not pinkie just ruining an a emotional moment or even the friendship games post credits scene where Pony Twilight Meets Human Twilight the two need to Interact with eachother

"Now that I think of it, the emergency exit, you might need it. " How are you so good a this Sunset??!!! Great job on the vid, BTW. I love your vids.

In the future we'll be able to put all these rewrites into one playlist and have the definitive version of EG

Wow Boy, You Really Outdone Yourself!! 😁👏👏 The Sarcasm, The Back And Fourth Sassyness And The Jokes. Really On Point 👌 This Is What The Series Needs! I Love Also The Fact That Adagio Is Bigger Threat To Sunset, Since She Just Said She Knows Just Enough Of Her Past, To Make Her Doubt About Herself.

Whoa, this was intense. Awesome!

This plays very heavily into the 'uh... no offense' scenes and that's what I like about this.

The part where *struggling* adagio words reminded me of Goblin form NWH almost similar dialogues *consider it/this mercy* nice one end liner that’s something of or like my enemies would say to if I stand in there way like with *Batman vs TMNT* like with shredding saying “Stay out of my way next time I will not be so merciful” I think that’s adagio said I get it

I think what makes this scene interesting is that it's an INVERSION of the typical "teenage flick" cliche of a bully intimidating the loners. Here, the loners are the ones intimidating a (former) bully. And it's hard to be too angry at the Dazzlings because we know Sunset doesn't exactly have the moral high ground on them. I think this scene could have been even more harsh if, instead of provoking Sunset by the belief that OTHERS don't like her (focusing on Sunset not being accepted), they instead argue that Sunset IS still just a mean bully and will never change, to the point where they themselves believe Sunset is just an irredeemable bully. And instead of laughing or mocking Sunset, have the dazzlings show disapproval of Sunset, like they're shaming her for her actions and are distrusting of her when she claims she's changed. Have Sonata of all people get confrontational and leading the talk for just a brief moment, surprising even Aria and Adagio, by shaming Sunset for being a bully and making a point about how it's "not cool" being humiliated in front of others, implying that she was bullied herself at one point and is still hurt. Then have Aria and Adagio pick up from there and further shame Sunset. That might actually hurt Sunset a LOT more and leave her even less space to argue around, while at the same time making the Dazzlings seem less mean and more reasonable.

i love this

Better than the original IMO

This is way too good. I've also tried to rewrite RR actually.

This is so awesome

Plz rewrite the entire movie our lord and savior, Alex

Hey everyone I’m Selena and I’m 11 years old. I love the dazzlings, they’re my fav. I honestly think that adigo is just plain power hungry,cunning,manipulative,sadistic,selfish,and cruel I think aria is cold and manipulative, and I think sonata is a troublemaker who seems very whimsical. I love these girls they’re all so pretty. They just want power and to take over the world, and be adored and heeded by everyone. These dazzlings are my favorite villains. And dazzlings is an awesome name for them.

Now we to see how Sunset feels when she likes to be Bullied.

Yooo. Where were you when they were writing the movie?? This is so good!!

Can you do more videos where you talk about MLP:EG in general?

Literally the Pillarmen from battle tendency

Good and cool 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Not even 10 seconds in and Sonata already stole the scene

So... No pony uno?

Sunset-😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠You’re never getting away with this Aria Adagio and Sonata! They laugh 😆! Aria-😈! Sonata-😈! Adagio-😈! If it isn’t Sunset! Sunset-😠! The three of you don’t know me or the first thing about me! Adagio-😈! Oh we already know about You Sunset! Sunset-😠! I’ve Changed! I’m In A Much Better Place Now! You’re the ones who don’t understand the power of friendship like I do!

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