⚠DISCLAIMER: Welcome to Dreamworld is NOT affiliated with FNAF anymore! It is a 100% original project with a webseries here on KZfaq and an ARG website in the works! DREAMWORLD EPISODE 1: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/ftR_hs-XntHHY2w.html EDIT: My mistake! I thought SB was the finale of the series, but it’s not!! :>

In the words of Glamrock Freddy, "Well done Superstar!"

THIS SOUNDS SO COOL! People don’t appreciate the concept of music in fnaf enough! Ballora’s little tune gets stuck in my head way too often.

This FNaF game concept is so cool!! As someone who’s been a fan since the game came out back in 2014, you basically nailed explaining all of the games and what the fans would like in the next game(s)! I would love to play this game, it seems so interesting and I already love the characters! I’m happy that you’ve decided that the player doesn’t have to destroy the animatronics but rather help them and you have to be near them since you’re a mechanic, something we’ve not seen in the games before. I would love to help anyway I can if you do more with Welcome to Dreamland! I’m so happy that you’re a FNaF fan and it makes me happy that the fandom still lives on!! Edit: I just finished watching this and I have so many theories and ideas for stuff!! I hope you make a part two, if you really want to! ❤️

Honestly, this sounds like a game that should be entirely separate to the fnaf games. Just simply call it "Welcome to Dreamworld". You've created a truly compelling idea, so why should it be connected to the rather limiting fnaf formula?

This is honestly great, I kinda want a sidestory with one of the founders offering the US military the tech to make combat robots because the military industrial complex is extremely profitable and you have revolutionary new tech on robotics that can make you lots of money since the robots even unarmed are already super fucking dangerous, give them weapons and well... I think that explains itself

I love this idea! I always find it fascinating when someone creates their own story based off of an existing fandom and it still feels like an original idea. I might even make some fanart of the animatronics, looks like I have another project to do now!

The one lore question I have is...does this game connect at all to the original games? Or is it in its own world? I'd have it at least mention something from the other games like maybe have an NPC mention how this all is wqy too similar to that Freddy's place with the bear

18:03 so basically like Sun and Moon from security breach also I really like the idea it’s different unique something you don’t see often for ideas for fan games and if it does become an actual game at some point I bet it would do pretty well

HOLY-- A fiew years back, I had a very similiar idea for fangame centered around shadow animatronics! It's so cool to see that someone else actually vibes with such concept!

I really like this!! I like the idea of toying with actual phobia's people would have, I have sub-mecha phobia, and you started describing Glory(?) and the pool, I just stood straight up and just- threw my phone across the room. Anyway, this is a really good idea. Taking the different perspectives and points of other FNaF games, it becomes a really good story. I would like to add ( I thought it would add to the "phobia" aspect), that perhaps when your the mechanic of the place and you are repairing the animatronics- each animatronic would give you different clues as to help you along the way of leaving the building. Or maybe give tib-bits of lore?? Fruit for thought. One last question: Would you be okay if I sort of played with the idea and made a short story tib-bits to flex out the idea of phobia's and storyline? I'll give credit to you and even send it to you (To whichever social media you would prefer). Can't wait to see more!

Ok we need this to become an actually game. Cause this is an amazing concept. And the fact that the aim of the game is to fix the other animatronics. (chiefs kiss) Fucking amazing i hope you might consider either making this into an actual game or making a comic series about this. Cause it's so interesting i want to know if the protagonist succeeds in freeing the animatronics and not dying of course. xD

1:39 I know it is best for the series to have more family-friendly elements because of the young audience, but this IS a horror-game series and making the series less scary because of children who snuck past the age limit would give the series a big decline in many categories. The people in the FNaF fandom often say that "the games aren't scary anymore" and "they are becoming childish" and i agree to a certain level that they are not that scary anymore. Things like the staff-bot jumpscares and the fear of being hunted is nice in FNaF: SB and the map is HUGE and there are many places to go, but in the eyes of children, game design, character development, coding, AI and lore are overlooked and overwritten as "scary=cool" wich is a shame, but children are children i guess... I remember when i first was introduced to FNaF, it was 2014 FNaF 2 was just around the corner and i really felt an exitement by this franchise, so i stuck with it until FNaF: VR. I came back rencently only to find a huge 3d game almost finished and ready for play. I watched a few videos recaping things i missed then i watched a little playthrough of FNaF: SB, but then i stopped and i played the game myself, it was nice, i felt a sensation of fear and horror and it was sooo fun and i hope other people who have played it had nice moments. I know i am not an adult yet, but when kids roleplay fnaf outside in the public i can't stop getting second-hand embarrasment. I know that judging people is not ok but i just keep thinking "go inside and roleplay" because i want people to be themselves. Hope those kids find their own way. All in all i guess there are a few things that are positive about this "Family-friendly'ifying" like more income for scott and steelwool due to kids buying the games, we were kids too i guess. My opinion still stands that many kids who play/watch fnaf can be cringe and annoying. *'*'*Come with your own thoughts if you want*'*'*

This was amazing wish an actual fnaf fan made the security breach though

This fnaf game seems honeslty so amazing! All the stories, colors, and animatronics are so well designed and cool. I hope people will see this more!!

I love this idea! Though, from a character designer perspective I feel the designs of the animatronics could use a bit of work, as they don't really feel scary enough. I think they could use things like smaller eyes or smiles too big to help capture a "uncanny valley" feel.

20:02 i feel like it would work better if the last “fun” was aggressive Also i love this so much. the submechanophobia is something I’ve loved the idea of for a while. And have been sad I haven’t seen anyone use. (Wearing goggles) You’re in the water, you cant even see your own legs. Something huge grabs you’re ankles and drags you down. You were able to take in a breath before you went under. The underwater lights flicker on and illuminate the water. You are met with a massive mechanical face, it’s body down and behind it. It has a robotic unnerving smile. Suddenly it jolts its head and swims away from you in to more dark water. You rise for air an duck back under looking into the darkness for the massive animatronic. You can only hear the whirring of machines and feel the current of it moving. It goes quiet. The silence unsettling… it lunges at you from the darkness and swallows you! Ahh! Can you imagine!!!

THIS is the kind of stuff I expected from Security Breach! And even if this never becomes a real game, I like this "fanfiction" a lot! The concepts are super interesting, the story so far is concise and interesting, and I love the fact that the protagonist _needs_ to look for the animatronics to fix them, even though they're trying to get you. Anyway, great video! I'm super excited for the follow up video!

The good thing about this concept is that it is separated enough from main FNAF that you could make it without any fear of copyright infringement. The voice acting really sold me on these new animatronics

This seriously sounds like the only fnaf game I would be interested in playing.

I just thought of a possibly more 'pull on heart strings' moment then when Glamrock Freddy died. What if Star starts crying, so they use that mask, but they are also happy that you are there with them and have been there along the way, so they push over the other one aswell and says something like, "Thank you, for being here." Because this whole time they saw their guidence as you allowing them to tag along and spending time with them. And then they die. The scene seems normal, they are standing through it, and then they just fall over and die. It's a fun idea, but I don't know if it will work now that I'm rewatching the video...

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY- I would love to see more of this story and these characters!!!! I hope to see more about Welcome to Dreamworld!!!!!!!!

From what I remember, Scott Cawthon himself has sad that Ultimate Custom Night is Canon due to the lore you get throughout the game, via animatronic voicelines or challenge completions. And as for this spin off concept, I'd love to see it. I stopped watching fnaf for the horror after 4 cause it just was genuinely scary. One, two, and four were genuinely scary, three felt rushed but still had a fear factor, and sister Location and beyond were all just lore additions in my opinion.

God.. why do all the people who have the potential to make an amazing game don't ever have the ability to make said game... This was honestly amazing and though I'm not counting on it, I just hope someday (whether that'd be in a month or 10 years) you or some other fans of your idea are able to produce this game. Of course, not that you're obligated to do so, but it doesn't hurt to dream.

I love the fact that you can help these robots. I hated the fact that you destroyed the robots in security breach, especially because of how much personality they all have

IT COULD BE A 4 PLAYER GAME With the Janitor, Guard, you, and the other Technician, it could be multi player! They would either start in different areas, or times. Roles are randomized, and any not filled in roles would be NPCs. And the Technician who gets Star as help could also be random, switching between the two Techies, or all four of them, or multi player could be a hard mode where Star is actively trying to hunt you until you remove Bluey. Just an idea my sibling helped with. 😀

Honestly, one of my biggest gripes with the direction of the franchise is how humanized the animatronics have become with the dialog. I think this takes away a lot of the uncanny factor from the earlier games. But if there was an animatronic chasing you down with a limited amount of voice lines that are chopped and screwed to be menacing, or even to try to lull you into a false sense of security, god that would be magical. Terrifying and magical.

Star light seems like a theatre kid. That the vibe I get from him. And, his dual theatre masks just solidify that for me.

I like the idea I do wish there would've been a main crew or atleast a freddy I mean it's called five nights at FREDDYS it would make more sense Here's an idea for the main crew Blastfreddy:a almost kind animatronic bear who can get annoyed when somebody complains about the show and that can cause him to be more aggressive when people are around him by themselves and tends to act out and not cooperate at all Blastbonnie:a blue-ish-purple bunny who loves to jam out his guitar he would be in his own room for older people so they don't get bored in the other areas however when small kids sneak in the helps them back to there parents Blastchica:while a backup singer she does occasionally get off stage to play with kids she is also built with stronger material so kids won't tear her apart easily she is also very easy to get stains off of Blastfoxy: a comedian built to hold kids over till a new show starts and a very kind and playful fox but does know when to tell kids to stop and slow down (Blast means bright colors in this occasion)

This is a very nice idea, I think that each floor having a different phobia as a theme is really cool; if the underwater bit is anything to go by. But if this ACTUALLY becomes a fangame project I can see it becoming very easy for scope creep to sneak in.

I love this idea so much, I was intrigued throughout the entire explanation oml. The idea of repairing them? That’s an amazing idea that we’d all be horrified of doing and I LOVE IT. And all those character designs are so wonderful, I love the underwater one and star one. Just *mwah*

OH MY GOD YOU JUST MADE MY DAY. I love the concept, love the art, love the... EVERYTHING! I really hope this gets a part two bc I'm already way too invested in all this >///

While you may or may not read this I can only say this… Coming back to this whole project was a treat. I ended up binging the series in a day and loved every second of it, it is both crazy and interesting to see how the story and universe you made evolved and changed. All I can say is… a phantasmagorical good show.

This entire concept is incredible, I especially like the whole bit with Ribbon Dancer, the whole "Oh yeah, they're not possessed, they're just like that" thing is always so funny to me, though, unless Ribbon Dancer was possessed by a psychopathy, him acting that way when he's supposed to be working with kids doesn't really make much sense, something I think would be really cool for him specifically is if during his jumpscare animation, just before the screen cuts, he gets a look of horror on his face, as though he didn't intend to kill you

I love the underwater concept! I'm currently working on an analog horror thing that takes place underwater and I used this idea of the pizzaplex being flooded as inspo for sound design.

I like how Loli take son the role of bon bon, trying to help her brother

(Sorry for the rant, I just really like this idea :D ) Now I just have this theory that when you first load up this game you are told that only one of the animatronics doesn't have a chip and is safe to be around. The player instantly thinking Star is the safe one who doesn't have a chip then later you meet Ribbondancer and assume they are hacked because of their weird mannerisms. Only after playing the creepy game of that floor you (the player/character) get hurt and Ribbondancer is concerned. That's when you find out Ribbondancer isn't chipped/ hacked so it's almost like a plot twist that Ribbondancer isn't hacked and Star is.

In the thumbnail I saw star’s design and was like,”hmm, that back rail really reminds me of GLaDOs and Sun/Moon due to silhouettes and themes.” *watches video* “ … Oh that makes sense now”

I adore the idea, plus there is so much potential for it(either in story, comic or game format) and the chaos that can unfold from it. Imagine the security guard and the triplets being pseudo-rivals and challenging each other to games when the guard isn’t working on guard duties and entertains them. Or Rex and Glory being two young lovers and died together and the soul in Rex died trying to protect the pre-deaded Glory … you hooked me into a rabbit hole and I crave to see the other side. Bravo Rainbott, bravo

Adore this way too much, it fuses the bright colors and environments with horror that feels much more than security breach, and the fact that you can collab with fixed animatronics and find other people trapped in the facility? Knowing there are other humans in the facility makes me feel both scared for them, since we’re separated and I assume they may be trying to escape any corrupt animatronics and I don’t know if they’ll get out as well, and comforted knowing I’m not alone and I have more allies on my side to escape. It also seems to be all underground perhaps, which only adds to the claustrophobic and trapped feeling Edit: had to get up and pace around for a little bit cause it made me so giddy, please know I’m loudly applauding you rn

I can't wait to see this i love the art and design already

I love this!!! This is so cool!! I like how a bunch of the animatronics (especially Star) give the same vibes as the Daycare Attendant while still being their own distinct thing I cant wait for more!

About the animatronics being associated with different phobias, Schmorp Mcdurgen has an excellent AU with really creepy and unsettling appearances for the different FNAF animatronics with each animatronic being associated with a different phobia and incorporating them in their design.

The voice acting is stellar in this, everyone involved did a great job. I love everything else about this too, of course, but the voice acting immediately struck me as very well-done. 7:50 To be fair, Sister Location also had a bit of a plot going on, though it was still very much a background element - you hear about it happening, but don't directly take part in it much save for a few parts near the middle and end. 9:00 Didn't Pizza Sim introduce the concept of post-death animatronic lines? The robots even speak when they get close to you in the vents. 13:19 I just _know_ that this activated someone's neurons. 18:41 _Very strong_ Funtime Freddy and Bon-Bon influence, I see. I approve. 20:34 Welcome to Dreamworld world record, 20:34.

This is truly an incredible idea!!! I love it!!! It has so many ideas which all fit together perfectly!! I also appreciate how you help the animatronics instead of destroying them! I personally don't like doing anything particularly violent, even if it is in a game and like to befriend everyone instead! This is an idea in its own sense, as much as it would be nice to be linked to Fnaf; I feel like it should be inspired by it and turned into its own game so it doesn't have as many restrictions if it were to be directly linked to Fnaf and its lore. Stay amazing!!! :)

11:51 im so so so so SO glad you mentioned this part. One thing i think the majority of the fandom forgets is that, inside the fnaf universe, the animatronics are meant for children's entertainment (i mean to be fair that kinda applies irl now). They arent meant to be full on scary because the company that owns freddy fazbear's pizzaria would go bankrupt and lawsuits from parents of traumstized children would come up often

I LOVE THIS SM ITS SO COOL, so I'm gonna share a bit of my thoughts on it. I love the story and idea of running around trying to fix all the animatronics along with the idea of basing stuff off of phobias! The few things I would change though, are the voicelines and character designs. I feel like having cheerful sounding and just general voicelines in some of the more intense parts like the underwater or haunted house scenes takes away from the scary atmosphere and vibe. I feel like only the star guy should have voicelines (y'know, because he's the guide lmao), the others could have some too but maybe during little bits like an easter egg or in background visual like a tv displaying an ad. And for the character designs I feel like they should be less security breach like and more like the fnaf 2 designs. I think a part of what makes the fnaf animatronics scary is how simple and a little goofy they look. The bright and colorful designs are, imo, what made security breach a LOT less scary then the other fnaf games since they feel like they dip more into fan service then horror. I'd suggest giving the characters more fnaf 2 or chuck-e-cheese/showbiz pizza looking designs, with a sprinkle of sister location or pizza sim if you wanna add that more bright feel to the designs

Dude omg! I love this! The video is very well made like you almost perfectly summed up the fnaf games and honestly presented a very cool concept for a fnaf game, like something I’d see a lot of gamers playing if it actually became a thing! I love that one animatronic that’s not even chipped, robo really just be insane and that’s low key a character I can form an unhealthy attachment to :) Star is also very cool! Very good spin off of the characters sun and moon from the game with an added flare of theatrics and fun personality! I feel similarly about the lollipop characters because it’s notable that’s the concepts in regards to the chipped only one half of the robots personality/characters is shared between Star and lollipop, and even then it’s clear they are separate characters! Again awesome job and I hope to see more on these characters! Might even doodle it later if I have time :D

I’d LOVE this to be an actual game!! If you ever do make it a real game I could do art for posters and signs for each area!!

The three lives mechanics could work sort of like a fail safe where Star can extend from the ceiling and save the player but after a few times in the levels the “arm” would break and would need to be fixed with a special item or something.

This actually looks more fun and scary then security breach!

the idea of the levels representing different fears reminds me of Winnie the Pooh and the way that each stuffed animal can be interpreted as a different mental illness/disorder. Great concepts! I love your take on this "perfect" FNAF game! Edit: the duality of Lolli and Pop makes me think of Funtime Fredbear and his puppet Bon-Bon! Especially with the voice lines of "nope, no one's here!", love that incorporation from Sister Location :)

Honestly I really want this as a real game or something similar! It's amazing!!

3:00 Me: *instantly starts jamming to Daycare theme*

I think the FNaF games can still be scary WHILE being targeted at kids. Goosebumps, Scary Stories to tell in the Dark, Coraline are all technically children's media that are still recognised as horror.

Your video was awesome! I really hope that any future FNAF projects listen to the community and somehow implement what made the franchise pop off in the first place. Also, the vibes in your bedroom are immaculate.

The aesthetic of "Star" was one of my favorites. I like the concept of the drama masks, which reminds me of old theater masks. And I think it's fun. And the name "Star" is actually quite intresting

Everything aside, the daycare theme has crack in it and you can’t convince me otherwise.

I would like to see this concept come to life as a game . It sound really fun to play

Y’know what? I wish this was a real place, with the insane animatronics and their dope personalities! Also, if it was real, the hacking thing would’ve never happened. I think I would see all of the animatronics but the triplets the most as I love all games. You go, rainbott!

Fangame creators: “Write that Down, Write that Down”!

Love it! Also I think the idea of the characters having a mesh like material on their face so that that way they could express more would be a good idea. Just an idea though.

I absolutely love the idea I can't wait to see more of dream world

Okay, imagine the Star fight happens later in the game after a heart to heart. Maybe seeing Glory and Rex interacting makes Star remember that he had someone like that. He can't remember the person's face, but he remembers details about him. Like how he gave the best hugs, how he would actively listen to anything you talked aboit and would ack questions. Like he was dying to know more about anything, from some story you made up in your head to how you put together a robotic fox creature for robotics class/club. How he would bring people together and was happiest when surrounded by loved ones all making each other happy. And as he starts gushing about this person, maybe even aboit to say his name or reveal something about his own past, the bluey mask clicks into place and suddenly Star completely changes. Maybe there are dialogue optioks and knowing more about the characters will help you pick the dialogue that makes him angry or sad. Heck, maybe on the second playthrough you unlock an option that reveals something about the player character and his motivations and it stops the boss fight by evoking the scarlet mask through bittersweet emotions or shock or something. I freaking love the potential of an emotionally driven boss fight!

You did a wonderful job conveying your concepts. I really loved the character designs you did too

I LOVE this! I can see the janitor being like a scronky man who never realized it was night and their trapped

Calling any and all indie game developers, have you got the opportunity of a lifetime, I don't care if it's a fan made spin-off or what,but this is an AMAZING idea, can't wait for more on this

I'm already obsessed with the designs and prototype voice lines for these characters, if this was a real game I would have a lot of fun playing it. Maybe eventually actual game developers can pick up this idea and make it into a FNAF fan-game! Also, Lolli and Pop do remind me of Funtime Freddy and Bon-Bon! Not sure if it was intentional, but I like them haha

I can’t relate to a video this much before. I keep on having dreams of games that I would like to make. For someone to make money, view, content, and a fanbase from distant dreams are amazing. Also here's my opinion on the best features in each game Fnaf: Atmosphere/Secrets Fnaf 2: Chaos/Huge cast/Secrets Fnaf 3: Lore... Fnaf 4: Horror/Sound design/Characters/Lore Fnaf 5: Minigames/Creative uses of each section/Horror Fnaf 6: Horror/Character/Gameplay mechanics Help Wanted/AR/FNAF World/UCN/EX: Cool minigames that could be extras/ VOICE LINE!!!! SB: uh, creative use of each section (They’re creative, not fun, nor scary) I also think that we creative human beings should apart of the creative team.

this is why i think the fnaf fanbase is the best fanbase I've ever seen

at least you're being brutally honest with everything and I like the Idea if I was a game developer I would make this for you :) (also I just subscribed)

Well my ideal fnaf security breach fan game is basically the same with a few big changes 1. Since you're a child why not exaggerate everything that looks cute and colorful to look dark and creepy 2. No allies, you're basically f'ed. All animatronics and the nightguard want to kill you 3. Harden things a bit: one animatronic runs fast but turns slowly, one constantly hunts you down, one can hear your running and other noises, one hangs on the ceeling waiting for you to walk under it and finally "the main boi" he will learn your moves, will plan an ambush and can set traps in hiding places. All that while you *AVOID* getting spotted by the cameras, cus he will come for you. 4. No explaining lore nor exposition, if you wanna know what happen look around the map and piece it together 5. And finally simple endings: bad ending- you think you escaped but he got you, good ending- you got out, and secret- you summoned the first victim This could be a good fangame Edit: since a lot of games have this "hiding places" mechanism i thought to change it up a bit, *WITH NO HIDING PLACES* you gotta get creative with that crouch button and the surroundings

Hello yes, I don’t even really love FNAF but I would watch a two hour long video about this concept because it is REALLY COOL

Yes, this would be a perfect game! The only thing I want to talk about is the animatronic, it’s a bit to beautiful and complicated, i think it should be more scary, maybe?

I need more of this, WTDW seems like such a cool concept even if it isn’t an actual game!

I never play horror games myself, I always watch others play- but I would SO play this. Your ideas are so cool and I love the characters!

Rainbott: Me: So you have chosen...DEATH. FNAF: Welcome to Dreamworld: You must repair the animatronics. FNAJ Chapter 1(White route): DESTROY DESTROY DESTROY!!! Also, FNAJ is my fan game. I am working on it on Newgrounds with several other people.

I believe a horror game in a very large area can be good if done right, through my experiences this would be, such an open empty area you have no where to hide, and no where to run to, also you shouldn’t see the end of it. Making you feel like you have no where to go just like the others. I also would like to add, it feels as if you forgot this was supposed to be fnaf.

OMG THIS IS SUCH AN AMZING IDEA!! I absolutely love glory, she seems like she’d be such a loving mom. (Just the feeling I got) would definitely play this if it were an actual game!

i genuinely want this to be a game , the designs and the game play are so creative ! Well done :D

This proposed game sounds really good.

SOMEONE GET IN TOUCH WITH THIS MAN AND START MAKING A FANGAME

The theme song for the whole game should be like something calming like for the opening with whispering like welcome to dream world or something a bit creepy but also something a bit that will go along with the game!

I love this idea! The colourful atmosphere turned on it's head at night-fall. Amazing! And with an adorable day-care concept! Also, love the concept art.

I love this concept! And the designs are amazing!!💕💜💕💜

If this game actually existed I would play it 100% of the time and would not take a break until I beat at least one level lol, and your idea is so good that in my opinion it sounds like it would be good enough to be a real fnaf game, it also sounds like it would be good enough to be its own game, or game series if a sequel ever happened lol, but honestly, great idea!

All of these ideas are so cool! And the voice-clips you shared are fantastic, I could already imagine some of the characters possible movements or facial expressions when they're saying them! There's so much personality, packed into those samples, and the characters designs! Honestly, this is the most promising FNaF fan concept, I've seen in a while, and I'm now wishing it was an actual game. Though, I already know the water-park level bound to give me trouble and or a small heart attack- xD

Ok this video was so well made! I like the discussion about specific details that made each game good, and then the introduction to the Game idea, I like the description of the setting, an example of what a level would be like, the personalities of the animatronics! The way you described everything was very well done!

This sounds so cool, I'd love to hear more about your idea! Also, hypothetically, if one where to make fanart, how and where could it be posted? Hypothetically

As a person whose always hated FNAF, security breach made it acceptable.

that first voiceline is very solid. legitimate goosebumps. well done.

I wanna say that your idea is fantastic. The designs, the voices, and the voice acting fit each and everyone of them perfectly in my opinion. I hope someone will assist in this idea of yours. I'd love to see a whole series with this and my favorite KZfaqrs.

im literally so invested? also gloria,, having a animatronic underwater,, something scott could NEVER do

Someone needs to help make this an actual fan game btw WHYS THE STAR SO FINE THO😭

this is absurdly amazing i really really hope to see more of this concept oml

I love the design for the aquatic machine. Reminds me a lot of Dratini with the head fins, but it’s an incredibly unique design regardless. I can imagine it’s already giving Subnautica players a heart aneurism.

Please make a follow up video about this game! It's really awesome! Also, it sounds surprisingly more functional in its environments that this story needs to be developed fully! So excellent job. If only this would come up in reality.

I've been a fan of the games since I was eleven or so. It is my personal belief that those who liked security breach were those who either are WAY to far gone of a fan to notice that it's kind of crap. Or it's someone who wasn't there when the franchise was in its prime. Its pretty sad that its become this kind of franchise where it needs to be more kid friendly. I don't know about anyone else but I was a kid when I first discovered it. So I don't understand why now all of a sudden steel wool felt they had to hit that T rating. Especially considering they came off one of the most terrifying entries of the series with help wanted. I think it comes down to a couple thing right. -First the designs of the animatronics are good. But not creepy. They feel like robots. They aren't anywhere in a sort of uncanny valley. They don't have moving face plates like the funtimes. Or wierd oddities missing like the toys. They don't really even have that feeling of retro or nostalgia that the old crew do. So it should've been changed. -The teleportation of the animatronics is immersion breaking and choppy. The animatronic should have a soft lock in the areas like the kitchen and areas that lure them to your general vicinity so they can just run in instead. Or at least teleport them out side the room. -The staff bots are annoying. There should be way less and maybe make the actual animatronic try to look for you. I'd go as far as to say 75% of the staff bots should be gone. And replaced with this soft lock. Search mechanic. Then you don't even need teleporting animatronics. -Make the damn hiding and running mechanics better. All of the animatronics should be faster in general. And should only really stop when you hide AFTER breaking line of sight multiple times. -Remake the running animations for the animatronics. They look dumb not scary. -Make the AI actually function. They literally have the worst pathfinding I have ever seen. I know even now it would be to far gone for them to do this but. I honestly would have preferred them to keep a real time aspect to the game. Where you go around and aren't as limited with the amount of passes and security badges you need to go places instead you explore and figure stuff out as you play and as the night gets later the animatronics become more active and harder to get away from. This would replace the system of a linear time passing. However I think like in the base game now you should be able to play at 6 o clock but its just constantly at max difficulty. -Add more of moon. He is a creepy animatronic and in the trailers we saw him creeping around a lot more. He is a spooky character. And we spend maybe half an hour with him and that's it. -Make Vanny a more difficult threat and also make her appear more. I think allowing her to maybe control doors and shut off certain routes and potentially increasing her speed would make her a unique foe. Also in the trailer wherever she goes there is usually red lighting so maybe in the nearby areas of where she goes there is a change in lighting. I also think she should appear randomly throughout the building similarly to a big daddy from BioShock. She should be a character you dread running into. With the red flashing lights being your indicator to get the fuck outta the area your in. (Also when I mean make the lights red I don't mean that stupid over the screen effect we get. Honestly that should just be scrapped for the change of lighting in areas she is around. Would be so much creepier. -Screw the Burntrap ending. It is stupid, the office looks nothing like what it should have been in Pizza Sim. Also the fact they basically scrapped Glitchtrap in return for reviving Afton's physical form again is so annoying. Glitchtrap should've been the only thing remaining of Afton in my opinion. Either that or at least make the final fight against him a little more cool. Like have a call back to fnaf 1 where he comes after you and you shut doors in his face. Also in that same vain give a good reason as to why there is fire in this old pizza place. Like make it that the boiler is failing and you have a recharge for a boiler explosion in a room while trying to survive him. And then in the end it ends up with the place in flames and him getting munched all the same. I swear to god if they bring him back to life one more time I'm out. -I hate the theory that Greagory is a robot. And that all the aftons are scattered through the Pizzaplex. If that is what's going on they really need to rethink that. Because it's more dumb than it is a wow that is such good lore. -There are multiple areas in which they showed in trailers yet scrapped despite the fact they looked great. Instead they felt the need to create an atrium the size of a football field. Yet the infinitely more dangerous and tight back corridors of the place feel few, and unfinished. Not to mention I think there is such a thing as too much lighting in a game. The example is in the atrium there is way too much light. Where in those backrooms its much cooler and more spooky. -The endos. I think the endos should continue being an enemy. Like once you release them every once and a while some of them will appear around a turning corner. Making sure you keep eye contact. That part of the game was one of the scariest. I think there should've been a point buy system. Like once again BioShock. They can keep the more useless collectables and notes in the boxes and such. But you should be able to get like Faz Coins or Faz Tokens or something that you can spend on a Vending Machine that will give the upgrades you can find. As well as some more of them. Also maybe make it so you can play the aracades that are literally everywhere in the pizza plex with them as well. We were teased saying that these would be playable but then there is like the princess quest one. The BB air adventure. And Monty Golf. And that's it. -Freddy is to OP. Honestly I didn't like that he was good in the first place but he saves you from every animatronic. I think after a certain time he just becomes unusable. It takes away from the whole stealth horror from the begining. -The game runs like crap on most devices. Despite looking mediocre at best. And the AI being dog crap. -The game is waaaaaayyyy to big on the storage for what it is. Everyone of the things should've been done and more with the storage it takes up. -Did nobody actually professionally hirer beta testers for the builds they were doing in development. These were just some of my thoughts. I think that the game would do so much better with treatment that it is an actual horror game. Screw the little brats now coming into the series if I went through nightmares as a kid from the game then they should have to as well. But I do think making these changes would've appealed to a lot more people. Because a real time fnaf game that is free roam is a unique concept that was missed. And steel wool spent way to long on designing the lighting and graphics that they completely ignored everything else, how it runs, what's its size is, weather the story was good, weather the mechanics were good, and weather the AI ran well. I'm not gonna lie it seems like they were trying to impress Nvidia more than anything because the higher graphics and ray tracing does make it look beautiful but in doing so they failed everywhere else. Now I personally think that Steel Wool itself was not ready nor did they have the experience of creating a non VR gaming experience as most of what has come from them is exactly that. So, I think in the first place they bit off more than they could choose with the scope of the game. I also think that if it was me I would've wanted a different company one who has more experience with non VR games to develop SB. Don't get me wrong I love Steel Wool but they are clearly not experienced with this. And clearly are in over their heads.

As a person with my own pipedream fan stuff, I'm happy to say I'm interested to see where this is going. I suppose my only complaint is that your brief discussion of the killer doesn't feel different enough from William, especially when you emphasize that Will should have died after FNaF 6 (which I agree with). There are a lot of villain concepts I feel could be explored surrounding the idea of people's souls trapped in animatronics. I would give suggestions and concepts of my own, but I feel like that might be too self-serving, I dunno. You seem pretty clever, though. I'm sure you could come up with something unique :)

I have my own idea for a FNAF fangame that I'm probably never going to do because I don't how to, but it's fun, so, my idea is called "Golden Stars Theatre" There are only 4 souls that control the animatronics, Marie, Ezekiel, Samuel(Sammy), Peter, Marie is kind of a Susie/Chica, Ezekiel is the Gabriel/Freddy, Sammy is definitely like Cassidy or Andrew, Peter gives you tips. Humans: Davin Ashton, Detective Burton, Janitor John, Nightguard Kayla Mercy. Levels: 1. Dramatic Entrance, 2. Magic Show, 3. Unfamiliar Friends, 4. Silent Isles. Each level has 7 nights. Areas: 1. Golden Stars Theatre, 2. Forest Funland, 3. Junior Stars, 4. Warehouse. Golden Stars(Originals) Animatronics: Goldbear, Randy Rabbit, Hannah Hen, Captain Foxtooth, Left&Right, Eloise, Lora. Forest(Mediocre Melodies) Animatronics: Tammy Toad, Nedbear, Parker Pig(Peter Porker lol), Harold Hippo, Elliot Elephant, Penny Peafowl, Wolf Hunter. Junior(Toys) Animatronics: Freddy Fazbear, Barnaby Bunny, Chelsea Chick, Clumsy Clown, Balloon Boy, Balloon Kid, Darling Dollmaker. Warehouse Animatronics: Poppy Fox, Yennbear, Cottontail, Molten Endo, The Cluster, Ticktock Tasmanian, Sean Shark, Octavia Octopus, Night Terror. Goldbear hates light and will rush you when it's dark enough, Randy hates heat and walks over to you like a Karen, Hannah will try stealing from kitchen but gets scared by the alarm(Not a threat but you'll lose pay and losing pay means less battery the next night and a longer night), Foxtooth will rush you if you're not watching cams, Left&Right can be persuaded if you use the speaker, Eloise can mess you by putting balloons and ice cream in front of cams, just call John, Lora vents, close the 1 with music(There's 3), Tammy is nice, just don't piss her off by paying attention when she's talking, Nedbear will silently come up to your door, don't be too close to Parker, Harold wants to tell you a story, make him coffee, Elliot wants you to watch his show, Penny will psychadelic drug the cams, Wolf can come from anywhere and can trick you by shooting an arrow from his crossbow at the other hall, Freddy comes when power's lost, Barnaby rushes right door, Chelsea will distract you like Funtime Chica except if you don't turn off cameras in time, you're dead, Clumsy vents, BK drains power, Darling needs music for her puppet show, Poppy climbs, look up and flash your light, Yennbear will chase you, find a safe vent and go in, Cottontail can come out of vents, listen for metal clamping(he has an orange white pink bunny mask), Molten charges, just dodge, The Cluster comes from above and will slowly chase you down if you see or hear him, Ticktock hides for an ambush, takes 3 ambushes to kill, healing is possible, Sean is blind, but if his eye sockets light up yellow, you better not be close to him, listen for his steps, Octavia will set tripwires and cause things to fall, watch for strings or tilted boxes, Night Terror will follow you all night, listen for breath, only then, look behind you and flicker(turn it on and off) your light, BB doesn't attack you until you hurt him at the end of night 6, on night 7, he will be a full solo bossfight, he is extremely quick, strong and has good hearing, turn off the lights, hide, and hold your breath, the doors only delay, he has a mallet by the way, so you will hear slamming and throwing as he's in your room, when that stops, you're good, he also drains power and can come from any direction, he's small enough to hide from you in cams, occasionally, his eyes light blue and you have to fend him off FNAF 2 style, with a mask, I also want a cutscene or something at the end of his night where he holds you in place before you leave and tells you something.