The Magnus Archives Animatic - The Coming Storm

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4 жыл бұрын

I've wanted to do something with this scene since I first heard it an this took me like a month to finish.
This is technically my first animatic, and though I'm really really happy with how it turned out I've certainly learned a few things for next time. There are a few things I'd go back and change if I was striving for perfection, but this was more an exercise and an effort to get back into a creative groove.
Enjoy! :)
/ quicksilver26

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@dumbbullet4981 4 жыл бұрын

Hey, this has been up for a month and I'm blown away by all the love it's gotten! Thank you all so freaking much for the kind words. I'm not able to reply to every comment but I read all of them and they make me smile! :)

@kafka9905 3 жыл бұрын

thinkin bout the fact that Mike,,,, , ,, an avatar of the Vast,,, , , , was Buried

@azulBjort_1406 2 жыл бұрын

Oof..... Sucks to be him I guess 😅

@safyakhan7857 2 жыл бұрын

That's what he gets for being short /j

@samdal420 Жыл бұрын

Lmao

@valodia1 Жыл бұрын

@@safyakhan7857 That's what he gets for being short /j

@valodia1 Жыл бұрын

@@safyakhan7857 That's what he gets for being short /j

@percyorsomething2641 2 жыл бұрын

Season 3 Jon was so clueless. Like he had absolutely no clue what was going on. He didn't even realize that he was using his weird eye powers half the time.

@DN-yu9nb 3 жыл бұрын

The fact that this is the moment that traumatized Jon the most?? But despite that they still became good friends? And Jon would willingly sacrifice his ribs and jump into the coffin for her?? AAAAA

@janehowlett5158 3 жыл бұрын

What did she ever do for him? No really

@stevenmcclary534 2 жыл бұрын

@@janehowlett5158 it was mostly off tape, but she did kill a lot of mannequins.

@drownedtrashrat3501 Жыл бұрын

@@janehowlett5158 he's a fundementally self sacrificing person sbzhsbsbshskb beyond that he doesn't believe his own life is worth much, and he didn't have much else to do

@megadude967 Жыл бұрын

Personally I always interpretted him going into the coffin to save her as being more for Basira then Daisy. Their eventual friendship was because he realised she'd been at the whims of the Hunt, and with him being neck deep in avatar bullshit he could understand

@ThatShapeShifter851 Жыл бұрын

I think it was also that Jon wanted to prove to the others, especially Basira, that he wasn't as much of a monster they were making him to be.

@pheo4156 3 жыл бұрын

"I’ve been scared, terrified for my life so many times these last few years. But I’ve never, not once, felt so horribly, abjectly, powerless as when she took me into that forest to kill me." Jon, The Magnus Archive, Episode 178.

@tneK95 Жыл бұрын

"I am not a brave man. I believe I am starting to come to terms with that fact, but I am, in certain circumstances, a very stubborn one." (MAG 41)

@atlander4204 4 ай бұрын

Remember, Mike’s was the first death Jon EVER witnessed in person…he saw the Leitner aftermath, but this has got to be SO much worse.

@Queer_Nerd_For_Human_Justice 3 жыл бұрын

The way he's looking back and forth, wracking his brain, trying to See, when he's saying "I th- I th- I think it was Elias", that part is gold.

@KenKen3593 2 жыл бұрын

When she half-rolls her eyes in response is just as gold.

@thedistinguished5255 Ай бұрын

2:29

@_telling_tales_ 4 жыл бұрын

I love how people assume Jon knows about anything that is going on when he is, in fact, really fucking lost

@moriarty1243 Жыл бұрын

TMA is a nutshell: Jo'n lost or kidnapped or sleep deprived or in a coma

@TallHallyHiatus Жыл бұрын

@@moriarty1243i love jon so much:'(

@someoneawesome8717 3 жыл бұрын

I noticed a lot of people seem to think Jon is physically weak just because he could only get one audibly noticeable hit on an enraged servant of the Hunt but are we also going to ignore the fact that despite constantly being described with diminutives he was able to hold his own against Tim (who is confirmed to be "sporty") for a good few minutes WHILE COMPLETELY DISORIENTED.

@LizzyWithAWhy Жыл бұрын

Dang I entirely forgot about that with Tim when did that happen?

@someoneawesome8717 Жыл бұрын

@@LizzyWithAWhy during the Unknowing Tim attacked Jon and Jon was able to fight back

@ThatShapeShifter851 Жыл бұрын

Jon is described as "physically unfit, as other characters refer to him as scrawny and he tires easily from physical tasks that others perform with little exertion." He probably got an adrenaline rush when being attack so that's probably why he was able to fight back. And it probably caught Tim off guard. He still quite weak but can still get some hits in when it counts not enough to win tho. (I'm not trying to argue with sorry if you read it that way)

@CuteGummi Жыл бұрын

to be fair, Tim was also under the influence from the unknowing

@atlander4204 4 ай бұрын

I like the idea of him being scrawny because it adds to his S1 anger and desperation to be taken seriously- he’s used to being looked down on.

@leebee42069 4 жыл бұрын

Either Jon is so small or Daisy is very tall. OR BOTH! I LOVE IT!

@biblicallyaccurateangel2476 4 жыл бұрын

aldhajv i like to imagine that daisy is short, jon’s just shorter

@eleanor8196 4 жыл бұрын

I think daisy’s pretty tall, and Jon is moderately small (so basically, both.)

@someoneawesome8717 3 жыл бұрын

Yes both, tall lady :D short guy :D

@notfamedtvpersonalitydrphil Жыл бұрын

Tall hot werewolf wife tiny short king archivist babey 😊

@interstellarkitten6487 10 ай бұрын

Both, both is good.

@rorygiambalvo2955 3 жыл бұрын

Jon trying to compell Daisy to talk, not really knowing he has that ability just attempting to buy himself time is so good, and your embellishment with the eyes was great!

@Matreats Жыл бұрын

HES JUST A LITTLE GUY LEAVE HIM ALONEEEE

@notfamedtvpersonalitydrphil Жыл бұрын

RIGHTTTTT HES BABEY LET HIM BE :(

@jcat379 4 жыл бұрын

I love this so much. And I adore the way Daisy's eyes changed because of the Hunt's influence.

@boowind4432 4 жыл бұрын

This is so good, your style is so clean! I’ve always loved this scene, it’s the first time we hear Jon actually sound scared. It just showcases how great a voice actor Jonny is

@dumbbullet4981 4 жыл бұрын

Thanks so much! And oh yeah 100%, his voice acting is incredible! I kept going back and listening over and over again.

@clanso7887 4 жыл бұрын

Me too

@clanso7887 4 жыл бұрын

But it's much better with visuals

@lokimemes4694 4 жыл бұрын

And here I thought I was in pain when I *listened* to the episode. How dare you make something so beautiful yet so painful?

@kevinsdomain9045 4 жыл бұрын

I just love how Daisy towers over both of them. I always picture her like one of those 6'5" amazon types

@totallynotabot6612 3 жыл бұрын

God I was so disappointed when Mike died he was such a cool character that was killed so so anticlimactically

@Cosmic_Mj 3 жыл бұрын

Spoilerish. This hits hard again after the newest Magnus episode 178

@zenodotus-xxiv785 3 жыл бұрын

hoooo boy. Uh. Went and watched this after 178. These are certainly... feelings. Hm.

@alexo.4562 4 жыл бұрын

The one dislike is Elias

@clanso7887 4 жыл бұрын

Y E S

@glumbortango7182 3 жыл бұрын

Good.

@someoneawesome8717 3 жыл бұрын

There's a second one, probably Peter

@coffeewolfproductions9113 2 жыл бұрын

Third one's probably Martin

@kingsaracoon9594 4 жыл бұрын

I'm new to tma and this episode absolutely wrecked me so the fact that you captured this so dramatically OH MY GOSH 👏👏👏 Jon crying out "I'm sorry" always breaks, me so now you just gound all the rest of the pieces into dust.

@mammon_is_god 4 жыл бұрын

"keep those tapes in your hands and you just... deliver them" The Web runs the show, y'all.

@Cosmic_Mj 3 жыл бұрын

I forgot she pulled a knife on him, so seeing that was a bit of a shock.

@tryintheirbestpacito7765 4 жыл бұрын

I love Jon's expressions! You really captured his fear and panic and it great to watch!

@CuteGummi Жыл бұрын

that no shit expression daisy has when Jon say he thinks its Elias

@asia246222 4 жыл бұрын

oh this was great, all the staging and expressions! you must've done so much work, it turned out amazing especially on "I didn't kill anyone", Jon leaning forward into the gun was A++. Thanks for posting!!

@jonathansims967 3 жыл бұрын

Oh to know that this is the moment he was most scared in is kinda sad, he also considered daisy a friend after that, thats how alone he was, how alone they were. Oh well, :')

@milobowhay2218 3 жыл бұрын

do u ever cry JON IS SUCH A TINY LOOKING MAN,,,, I LOVE HIM oh my god thE EMPHASIS 'I DIDNT. KILL. /ANYONE/.' DO U EVER /CRY/

@greengrass2954 3 жыл бұрын

Coming back after 178 is really painful 😖

@HippyDigger 4 жыл бұрын

I just found this! Your animation is amazing! It's such a key moment and my God Injust wanted to hug Jon, he sounds so utterly terrified and rightly so. You captured the expressions and body language beautifully, the threat of Daisy, the fear in Jon and the calm of Basira. The extra detail with the eyes of Jon compelling and Daisy's eyebrows of her 'yeah, he's on my list too' so well done! Thank you so much for sharing!

@SoulQueenoD 4 жыл бұрын

Oh this was amazing. I love the expressions and the detail in Jon’s scars.

@notfamedtvpersonalitydrphil Жыл бұрын

2:45 can we talk about how adorable and tiny Jon is in the background here he’s just a little bean

@alabaster_rox Жыл бұрын

Holy shit I forgot how nerve-racking this scene was, you captured it so well!!! And I love the subtle Hunt influence in Daisy's eyes when she pressed the knife deeper!

@lee5706 4 жыл бұрын

oh SHIT! the EXPRESSIONS! the BODY LANGUAGE! absolutely love this!!

@whatisausername7679 4 жыл бұрын

well done! this is so cool! jon really deserves a hug.

@dundee176 4 жыл бұрын

FUCKING SPECTACULAR GOD I WISH I HAD THE MOMENTUM AND FOCUS TO DO SOMETHING AS THRILLING AS THIS EXTREMELY JEALOUS AND EXTREMELY HAPPY TO HAVE FOUND THIS, IT'S AMAZING AND YOUR'E AMAZING

@zenodotus-xxiv785 3 жыл бұрын

your daisy is TERRIFYING and i would die for her

@Agent-wj1ft 4 жыл бұрын

JOn i lOVE yOu,, stAy StrONG

@Agent-wj1ft 4 жыл бұрын

i don't remember sending this??? wtf??

@thistleywistley681 3 жыл бұрын

@@Agent-wj1ft lmfaoo

@Companion92 4 жыл бұрын

I especially love the part with the eyes. That was really cool.

@grandmanancy3570 Жыл бұрын

Omg I was listening to this episode before falling asleep and when Daisy shot her gun it woke me right up

@jaybarou 3 жыл бұрын

This hits differently now, still a great animation. But now I might cry

@giannaaaaa2299 4 жыл бұрын

this messed me UPPP!! AMAZING job!!! the scene has more impact with ur skills and im REALLY sad now shdbdbfn

@claudiasturgell3118 4 жыл бұрын

Your jon is amazing. He's so... Adorable!

@soleilsmith4775 4 жыл бұрын

This was so beautifully made! My favorite part is the detail you put in where Daisy roughly pulls Jon to his feet! All the slight changes in position and expression!

@battyrae1398 4 жыл бұрын

holy crap amazing. this must have taken so much hard work. i love your character designs. daisy is intimidating looking af

@thetypingdragon2239 4 жыл бұрын

Ahh!!!! This is so good! I love your character designs, and everything seems so fluid. I love the thing you did with the tape recorder inside the bag. Also the scene is even more creepy when I can see what Daisy is doing to Jon, the knife against his throat and the blood. It’s terrifying.

@maicey_t. 3 жыл бұрын

I just listened to this episode for the first time tonight and couldn't get this scene out of my head. Jon sounds so scared. It wouldn't leave me alone. This is really well done. I'm super impressed, especially with it being your first animatic. You nailed it. Great job. :)

@williamlosing1t 3 жыл бұрын

What episode is this?

@maicey_t. 3 жыл бұрын

@@williamlosing1t I think it's 91? It's the statement of Michael Crew.

@williamlosing1t 3 жыл бұрын

@@maicey_t. Thank you SO much

@i8chocolatecake995 8 күн бұрын

The near silent "okay" from Jon after the gunshot killed Mike and he was told to hand over his bag- aughhh every time I relisten i find more and more cool things hidden in TMA !!!!!! God that little "okay" is just so good!!!!!!!! Voice acting ✨ Edit: its at about 0:26 !!!

@antharay9975 3 жыл бұрын

This hits different after 178 😓✊

@alinafang2822 4 жыл бұрын

This is extremely well done! I love the body language and the directions you gave.

@Lightning-ik3so 3 жыл бұрын

I have a feeling this video is about to get a lot more traffic

@herohiroshima243 4 жыл бұрын

Even after just listening to the actual episode, this still brought me to the edge of my seat. The art style is awesome and the scenes were amazing! I'm so glad you did this, good work 👍

@tammikilpi6993 4 жыл бұрын

The emotions were amazing! So clear!

@forestwulf828 4 жыл бұрын

I wish I could like this more than once. I've watched it several times, and its just so good!

@beta_nd_greeble 3 жыл бұрын

This made me Feel Things

@KiraNightshade Жыл бұрын

Okay but I just caught that as soon as Daisy was handed the cassette, all she wanted to do was bring the tapes to him. And, well, S5 end really makes it clear why that is in a way I never caught before.

@leeferenc4877 3 жыл бұрын

Huh. I can't wait for the uptick in views when the new ep is finally released.

@theenchantedteapot5882 3 жыл бұрын

That was so good!!! Like... after watching this i could understand so so SO much better why this moment was the most traumatic one for Jon! You really made a good job showing emotions!

@amphitritemists4595 3 жыл бұрын

Just finished this episode and quickly went to check if anyone made an animatic thanks for delivering quality art and now someone please save Jon :(

@samnlh5836 3 жыл бұрын

F We'll miss you crazy big lesbian Daisy

@amphitritemists4595 3 жыл бұрын

This hits different after episode 178 you did a really good job at capturing their expressions

@Ghost_inthevoid 4 жыл бұрын

This is absolutely amazing. Especially the expressions.

@monikakavaliunaite8017 3 жыл бұрын

i love this. every minute of it! The expressions, the body language and especially the way you portray their powers through their eyes

@kokosan09 4 жыл бұрын

this is just excellent, I got goosebumps all over!!

@whitepearlreaper 4 жыл бұрын

That was amazing!! I love your designs and the expressions are just A++

@krasotabella9675 4 жыл бұрын

this is the COOLEST SHIT IN THE WHOLE WORLD I’ve relistened to this scene so many times and I LOVE ur interpretation of it!!! PLUS DAISY’S FACE ON “yeah? well he’s on my list too” fucking TOOK ME OUT IM

@namine3023 4 жыл бұрын

I love this! You did such great facial expressions!

@theartpuppet4220 4 жыл бұрын

One of my favourite moments. You captured it perfectly and the art is amazing. Love the portrayal of the characters as well.

@wormonastring6888 4 жыл бұрын

Brooooo i love this. I didn't think it was possible for this scene to get any more emotive but you managed it. :0

@characteractressiwaspeerpr7292 4 жыл бұрын

Hell yes! I just listened to this episode today!! This is great!

@Lots43 4 жыл бұрын

I loved it. High quality art

@alphalilly8207 2 жыл бұрын

Wow! This is pretty well done. Almost exactly how I imagined the moment. Down to the character's body language and everything.

@myoldnamewascringe5617 2 жыл бұрын

Spoilerrr I hated Daisy so much at first but then she became one of my favs and at the end when she died I cried tbh

@trucetruce335 4 жыл бұрын

One of my favorite scenes

@bek390 3 жыл бұрын

I've watched this a few times and I'm always blown away by how an already tense scene is made even better with the visuals that you put in. Everything--the body language, the expressions, it adds so much more and I love it!!

@klltsun_2576 4 жыл бұрын

I just finished listening to this episode and now you've ground my heart to the ground. (But this amazing! Love the expressions and body language!)

@pandoras_tupperware 3 жыл бұрын

This is literally my favorite scene in this whole season, and maybe the whole show!!! (maybe not a good sign but whatever) THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!

@domi8619 4 жыл бұрын

I come here regularly cause I miss the better times where daisy tried to kill jon and I could listen to her voice while she does it

@caseyd4272 4 жыл бұрын

This is amazing!!! I love all of Jon's actions and the way the eyes manifested behind him!

@dormens_mortem 11 күн бұрын

Wonderful

@blueriver. 2 жыл бұрын

HOLY COWWWWWW THIS IS INCREDIBLE - IT LOOKS SO EPIC VISUALISED!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!! (also all the character designs are so on point imo!!)

@mirandakilbride2034 3 жыл бұрын

I love Jon's design

@clanso7887 4 жыл бұрын

This is wonderful!!

@LostFandoms 3 жыл бұрын

don't mind me as i slurp this up and move on. It's so good. I love your art style. i don't just love it, i adore it. the body language is amazing and the expressions got me. I love your designs of the characters. Also I just love the idea of jon being a tiny man, so thank you for gifting us this masterpiece.

@SunnyCapricious 3 жыл бұрын

Smol babey jon

@indianna1549 4 жыл бұрын

amazing

@stella-hg7gl 4 жыл бұрын

THIS IS SO AMAZING i love all the emotion and ever frame is set up so well and so creatively!!!!

@josiebarnett8861 4 жыл бұрын

O I Love your attention to detail in the faces!! They feel so perfect for the emotions at any given time and ahhhhhhh your designs are so good!!!

@TyOrMaybeTay 4 жыл бұрын

This is so cool!!!

@rosemarycat5 3 жыл бұрын

This is amazingly well done! I had seen this be suggested when searching TMA , so I was really hyped when i finaly got to this episode earlier so I could watch this! I really like how you did this, especially with the bit of selective color and doing the facial expressions.

@bethbuell 4 жыл бұрын

This is incredible!

@bitter-bit 2 жыл бұрын

This is absolutely brilliant

@Aurora-kt1co 4 жыл бұрын

This is amazing!! It really deserves more likes

@daffodil-lamentations 4 жыл бұрын

manlet jon manlet jon manlet jon

@notfamedtvpersonalitydrphil Жыл бұрын

TINY BOI JON RIGHTA

@thedistinguished5255 Ай бұрын

im not scared of being watched so its generally hard for me to understand how the victims are so hurt by the questioning power, but daisy is a bit of an exception, scared of vulnerability and has alot of secrets, shes like the perfect person to have a negative reaction to it