these stories were decent but they are all starting to sound to much alike. all to often a ships captain loses his daughter or an ancient earth fleet that the enemy scoffs at saves the day. And god knows there is the old "the captain fights hand to hand against the leader of the enemy even though he could have just shot him and sacrifices himself for the cause. Or the captain stays behind to sacrifice himself for the cause as the ship explodes. All of that and how many more times will you hear the writer say that the rail guns tore through the ship like paper. This worked at first but seeing the repetitive uncreative nature of it has lost me.

The problem with this story is that it wrongly says that the human ship had five crew but describes only four: Green, Thompson, Davis, and Thompson. Then they rescue some humans but only Dr. Chen is named and given a role in the story. So basically the author misuses the number of humans and even the crew of the Kalnari who remain unmentioned in the plot. Eventually the two ship captains just sacrificed themselves in a stupid and inane plot that could have made sense if not for the simple-minded author.

I can’t believe that this story is so loaded with commercials!

Cool story but how many times by how many different you tube channels. I'm about done with these. oh well I was looking when I found this. I guess I keep looking

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! 88😊

i like the stores

88 this is a great context for more.

88. Good story but the jump cuts were a little jarring. I don't blame you for doing a lot of editing in a short time frame. Thank you for continuing to create new stories where so many other people are making careers out of increasingly desperate efforts to revive past stories.

AI written?

what's with 88 ?

Haven't we heard this one before?

hi

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IF you're going to use known Star Trek references, STICK to known canon. Tellerites do NOT have 4 arms.