What is all the background noise?! Vincent, this should be removed.

This would be a far better piece without the pointless noise. I couldn't get past the two-minute mark before I shut it off. If I were directing this song, the music would be smoother, jazzy and low-key, and Vincent wouldn't shout his lines--he would croon them, with careful pauses now and then, his voice rising and falling as the song builds. But that's just me. Otherwise, I'm with @Praying Mantis.

better stick to acting dude.