The story makes me cry. Glad everything worked out well for them.

Another great story! I've seen every one of your videos on this channel. Keep it up with the uplifting and wholesome stories.

It is a beautiful story. At last I am hearing a lovely story beautifully narrated..

Oh man! I thought sure he was going to ask her to marry him while they were dancing while their daughter sang! Great story!

Beautiful story, thank you!!!

Awesome & breathtaking❤❤❤

Beautiful story

A beautiful story

Beautiful story ❤️ ♥️ 💕

To be honest I was crying too and something dripping out my 👃😊. Thanks for the beautiful story.

Beautiful story ♥️

Such a heartwarming story..

what a reat story. a real tear jerker. very unusual for these made up stories. whoever created this has real talent.

This story is so beautiful. 🙂

Too much description and very wordy why not be direct ?

Wow so beautiful story

This is god’s work don old boy just think about it don’t you think so Aussie Pete ❤❤❤❤

What a besutiful story! I sm only a bit annoyed at the wrong spellings & haphazard way words were printed that I was thrown off guard at what the storyteller was really putting across.

What a great story.

i love this story. it made me cry

We never saw the begger Gail who uplifted him or heard her sing lord have mercy on us

Beautiful 🥲❤

Ok, on and on about the restaurant, we get it, focus on the beggar girl!

what a beautiful story.

It’s look like true story

Some parts are just too much. If the extra muchness was cutout then the focus could be on the heart ♥️ of the story. In addition, at 36 minutes, I almost didn't play this video.

fairy tale indeed but nice

God will make a Way .

So lenghty iß the narrative

Amazing ❤❤❤

Remedial reading?? Please.

That's the problem when you '' put the cart before the horse '' --having intimacy even before getting married and Elsie having to fend for herself with an '' illegitimate child '' --a single mother and without a husband . Conscience should have struck him or the love -bug should have bitten him that he should go back to her and marry her -- not unless he .Don . treated her as just another of his casual consensual sex partner . No excuse to put her . Elsie and Dorothy in such a dire situation . The problem is , he promise to go back to her but he never did ............Only an idiot would do that !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The narrator needs to learn to read

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Nice story, but waaaaay too many words.

Too much talk, get to the point.

Is this story about the description of a restaurant and a business place and how to establish same? Bs, very drawnout. Bs

Get to the point!!! Never finished listening to boring story. Hope it ended well.

AI pronunciations make me cringe. Why can't programs be undated when these errors are noticed - or does no-one else but me care?

don almost ruined lady life almost break the promise so he is just a jurk 35:11 -35:56 what a reason 💩💩💩

Beautiful story