what does OUTWEIGH mean in *do the advantages OUTWEIGH the disadvantages*//ielts writing task 2

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Lilie IELTS

Lilie IELTS

Күн бұрын

Advantages-Outweigh-Disadvantages Essay Archive: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/ad...
The question used in this video is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 2.
In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 Definition of “Outweigh”
03:10 Body Paragraph 1
06:08 Body Paragraph 2
08:51 Another Example
10:36 Introductory Paragraph
12:05 Conclusion Paragraph
12:32: Key Takeaways

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@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 күн бұрын
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@maymabzd5747
@maymabzd5747 Ай бұрын
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@minhnguyetnguyen7827 Жыл бұрын
I love watching your videos, it helps me a lot. It's so easy to understand when you have to self-learning the whole IELTS exam
@ramsharanrasthoki7044
@ramsharanrasthoki7044 11 ай бұрын
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@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 11 ай бұрын
So nice of you😊♥
@parigill5541
@parigill5541 2 жыл бұрын
Hi Lillie you are one of my favourite IELTS teachers, you cover the latest and cambridge IELTS topics which I appreciate the most.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 2 жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you! Yeah, those topics are hard.
@parigill5541
@parigill5541 2 жыл бұрын
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@poorneshkumar5123
@poorneshkumar5123 9 ай бұрын
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@riyamehta625
@riyamehta625 Жыл бұрын
I just love the way you teach...❤❤ Absolutely helpful for preparation. ❤❤
@Mainanbrayenandmobil
@Mainanbrayenandmobil 8 ай бұрын
now i dont need to watch 1 hour video, this video is amazing its only 13 minutes but i got the whole point. much appreciate
@nadeeshathennakoon523
@nadeeshathennakoon523 4 ай бұрын
I just love the way you teach.
@rebeccaseera5853
@rebeccaseera5853 9 ай бұрын
Am new to this channel but so far I feel your knowledge is so applicable and easy to understand, I plan to resist my exam because I got 6.5 in reading and 6.0 in writing, I passed speaking and listening with 8, I pray your tips help me to pass with above 7 for all. Very grateful for your knowledge.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 9 ай бұрын
Hope you got the scores you need soon!✊
@RHabib548
@RHabib548 2 ай бұрын
Thanks for the video , keep uploading more on Ielts academic writing and speaking
@ayuamaliar1026
@ayuamaliar1026 Жыл бұрын
hi lili, for the past 5 months I've been taking IELTS preparation classes, but your explanation is the best
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Happy to hear that!😊
@eligibozmakhalira5109
@eligibozmakhalira5109 Жыл бұрын
Your style of teaching,is just great,thanks for the videos it's really helping
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
So nice of you😊💜
@bayarmaamunkhtur7718
@bayarmaamunkhtur7718 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. This video was extremely helpful.
@muhammadaburaihan6477
@muhammadaburaihan6477 3 ай бұрын
Hey Lilie! you are really extraordinary person I've never seen before. Honestly speaking, I think your explanation is well-organized and clearly understood for any apprentice. This informative video will be helpful for those people who struggle to achieve the desired score in the IELTS exam. Thank you so much.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 3 ай бұрын
Wow, thank you!😊💕
@jay_the_shivaholic1919
@jay_the_shivaholic1919 10 ай бұрын
Thank you so much i was not able to get 6.5 band but after applying your method just yesterday i got 7 band
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 ай бұрын
Woow, you made a great improvement, congratulations!😊
@best_s
@best_s 4 ай бұрын
thank you very much, it was so useful for me
@surajdass5842
@surajdass5842 Жыл бұрын
Thnx for giving this topic to everyone
@ry7290
@ry7290 Жыл бұрын
Very neatly done. Understood thoroughly. Thank you ♥️
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
So glad! And thanks for watching.😊
@mdiqbalhossan1550
@mdiqbalhossan1550 Жыл бұрын
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@midoahmed2725
@midoahmed2725 Жыл бұрын
Your are brilliant in making it easy, thank you very much.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!😊
@sarahtaher9993
@sarahtaher9993 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for making my life easier, great illustration
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Welcome 😊
@sevvalbilgin1787
@sevvalbilgin1787 29 күн бұрын
Hi Lilie, thank you for your elaborate videos
@itsmusic2046
@itsmusic2046 10 ай бұрын
she is best the method of teaching is best
@reyhanerooeyn4373
@reyhanerooeyn4373 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. Your videos helped me a lot.🥰
@himanchalbhatta1631
@himanchalbhatta1631 10 ай бұрын
I love the way You Explain IELTS video I will never forget abou "outweigh" meaning now , A lot of blessing from Nepal🇳🇵🇳🇵
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 ай бұрын
So nice of you😊
@alinafendembo6673
@alinafendembo6673 Жыл бұрын
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@hiraali5988
@hiraali5988 Жыл бұрын
Really great and substantial stuff.!👍
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it💜
@manjugupta4203
@manjugupta4203 Жыл бұрын
Hello Lillie you are really awesome its first time when I found writing task two become quite easy just because of you plz upload more and more videos thanks
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Really glad to hear that.😊💜
@doitandmakemoney7039
@doitandmakemoney7039 11 ай бұрын
Exactly. I was too frustrated with it. I started reading your blog first, and it's through it that I discovered videos from your youtube channel 🙂🙂
@fuwadahmedsunny2534
@fuwadahmedsunny2534 Жыл бұрын
This is a wonderful video. I learned a lot. Thanks
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
My pleasure! 😊
@LYFB
@LYFB Жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot for explaining it thoroughly.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!😊
@TassyOmah
@TassyOmah Ай бұрын
This is my first time ever commenting on any youtube video regarding IELTS, but I just wanted to say thank you for the writing videos. I wrote an IELTS exam for the first time ever on 30/03/24, scored a 7.5 in writing even though the timer elapsed before I could finish and I barely practiced 😭. The steps you explained: give one main idea, explain it, give general examples are exactly what I did. My task 2 question is similar to "outweigh" but it was coined in a different way. I can't remember clearly the exact words but it was sth like: are there better advantages to this than disadvantage. L - 7.0, R -6.5, W - 7.5, S - 8.0 = 7.5 Overall. God really helped me here. To anyone reading this, please give yourself enough time to practice, Over a month of consistent practice guarantees an 8 - 9 band score. I did only about 1-2 weeks practice, 2 - 4 hours daily, but I'm okay with my results. Again, Thank you for sharing real value Lilie🙏
@maymabzd5747
@maymabzd5747 Ай бұрын
I'm so glad to hear this! happy for you!! I'm currently preparing for the IELTS too, I was just wandering, did you find the mock tests harder than the real exams?
@Ram-hn8zf
@Ram-hn8zf Жыл бұрын
Your content is impeccable. I was confused in outweigh essay.After watching your videos.I cleared my all doubt thankyou so much
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Really glad to hear that!😊
@kesiyasimon532
@kesiyasimon532 Жыл бұрын
This lesson is very easy to understand thank you🙏
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Really glad to hear that!😊
@tharanganisandamali5321
@tharanganisandamali5321 Жыл бұрын
very amazing you are like a magician. very effective and useful lesson/video. I like ur teaching style very much..
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
So nice of you😊
@Samirakarimvlogs
@Samirakarimvlogs 7 ай бұрын
I have my exam on 7th October 2023 your videos helped me a lot . Thank you dear . ❤
@macykwok1453
@macykwok1453 Жыл бұрын
May I know if we could make up statistics/figures as example? Sth similar to the numbers that u have given in the cost on driver's salary
@justchill5475
@justchill5475 Жыл бұрын
Your are my favourite teacher for writing module❤❤❤❤
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Wooow, my honor!😊
@rezairanpour9463
@rezairanpour9463 Жыл бұрын
Thank you Madam.
@devimagar4076
@devimagar4076 2 жыл бұрын
Hello mam.I really appreciate your teaching style
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 2 жыл бұрын
My pleasure!😊
@caridadapril
@caridadapril Жыл бұрын
I love your teaching Lilie. I'm taking my test this week, wish me luck
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Best luck!! ✊Don't forget to come back and tell us your test result.
@quemanikhaans3396
@quemanikhaans3396 6 ай бұрын
Great video
@iroshinidissanayaka
@iroshinidissanayaka Жыл бұрын
Your way of teaching excellent Mam..💐👍 This will realy help me for my ielts on coming exam More thanks... ❤️
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Glad to hear that😊
@Rajwinderkaur140
@Rajwinderkaur140 Жыл бұрын
Excellent
@tdmhimaging2322
@tdmhimaging2322 Жыл бұрын
its terrific explanation
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
thank u!
@johnwinjoby544
@johnwinjoby544 6 ай бұрын
@LilieIELTS ma am i am lacking coherence and cohesion what should I do to correct it
@sapanatamang7416
@sapanatamang7416 Жыл бұрын
Hey,Lilie it’s very helpful 🙂 Hoping lesson on To what extent do you agree or disagree?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Thanks, Sapana. You may find these agree-or-disagree essays helpful: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/agree-disagree-essays/
@md.hadiujjaman5525
@md.hadiujjaman5525 10 ай бұрын
Great ❤video
@DavinderSingh-gt9xt
@DavinderSingh-gt9xt Жыл бұрын
Thankyou mam 😊❤️ ....you explained it very well.... bless up 🐣
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
My pleasure 😊
@heattransfer8003
@heattransfer8003 2 жыл бұрын
Within the next years, all vehicles including cars, trucks and buses will be driven by itself and there will be no driver except passengers. This essay will demonstrate how driverless vehicles make people’ life easier but will also this can lead to such problem if people can be fully trusted to autonomous vehicles. In my opinion, in the near future benefits of driverless vehicles will outweigh the disadvantages. To commence, driveless or autonomous vehicles including every vehicle that you can see on road will make our life easier and more comfortable. Besides that, driverless cars will certainly diminish the ratio of traffic accidents compared to non-driverless vehicles. These vehicles can help us to reach the destinition point with ease. For instance, imagine you are in hurry and you do not have any time to check availability of roads from your phone but driverless car will make it for you. On the other hand, relying on to robots in other words, the system which take actions without any human motion or access can lead to some trust issues. Driverless cars are still developing and engineers still do not have clue if we can trust driverless vehicles fully. Moreover, artifical intellegence (AI) is not totally trustable. For example, the traffic accident I have seen before in Australia, the man who decided to sleep in the car, crashed into a tree because of the misconception of car’ vision cameras. To conclude, although we can count many advantages about driverless cars such things as making our life easier or relieve the workload that people take while they are driving, we need to be more careful than usual to any hardware crashes. In my opinion, eventually autonomous cars will replace with its brothers called fossil fuel vehicles with cutting-edge techonology.
@salmaahmed3834
@salmaahmed3834 22 сағат бұрын
if a have a different opinion that driverless vehicles might result in higher rates of accidents if any unpredictable thing happens, and this endangers people's lives; I disagreed with the statement they gave at the beginning of the task, will this result in me getting a lower mark?
@jingranchen8947
@jingranchen8947 Жыл бұрын
Hi Lilie, thanks for the video, very helpful. I was wondering if it is possible to hold a balanced view on this type of question? If so, how should I structure my essay? I came across an "outweigh" question in my last IELTS exam and I choose a balanced view by saying there are both advantages and disadvantages and they weigh the same...it wasn't until I finish the essay that I realize it was kinda stupid to say they weigh the same.....But I just don't know how to put this with a balanced view. Any suggestions? Thanks.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
I don't think it's possible. To get a high score, you need to explain why one side carries more weight than the other.
@sujaniwettasinghe2585
@sujaniwettasinghe2585 Жыл бұрын
@@LilieIELTS Hi maam, It can be advantage or disadvantage?
@muxlissalimova9652
@muxlissalimova9652 11 ай бұрын
Hi Lili, I really liked your explanation. My question is: Can I describe two advantages in one paragraph, for example: Online educational environment has so many advantages like having an access to wide range of courses and personalized learning experience
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 ай бұрын
I have never tried your method in an actual exam so I don't know if it works, sorry.
@sajibhossain7475
@sajibhossain7475 Жыл бұрын
I can't access the link you shared in your description below
@abbycode7353
@abbycode7353 2 жыл бұрын
You just cleared my doubt :) Can you please tell me how to approach "To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 2 жыл бұрын
Hi, the easy way to answer it and get a high score is to either completely agree or completely disagree. I've published many essays of this type on my blog. You may find them helpful: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/agree-disagree-essays/
@abdelrahmanalhayek1869
@abdelrahmanalhayek1869 Жыл бұрын
thank you so much ! have you done a video for tasks just asking for the advantages and disadvantages cause i wonder if i should mention my opinion in this kind of task , and what should be the structure of the intro. and conc.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Sorry, I haven't but you can read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/advantages-disadvantages-essay-structure/
@AmbikaMahat-fl8vx
@AmbikaMahat-fl8vx Ай бұрын
can u make a full video that includes all types of essay plz
@payal9108
@payal9108 3 ай бұрын
I have a question...in my writing ..I wrote all the advantages in 2 bps and mentioned in thesis and conclusion that though social media has disadvantages , merits are more significant How many bands can I get?
@chanderjyoti504
@chanderjyoti504 Жыл бұрын
Lillie you are the best
@user-gq9mu4lh7p
@user-gq9mu4lh7p 10 ай бұрын
Hey Lilie , I am so thankful for your videos. However your videos leave me unsure how good/well written my essay. I do not understand especially the 1 "topic idea" thing the most. Could you please have a look over my essay. I really need help. Thanks in advance: One thinks in retrospect how primitive our use of cars and other transport means has been. Nowadays, vehicles have been dominated by automation, where the car moves. I do strongly believe that automation's benefits, like driverless vehicles, surpass its disadvantages. Starting with its advantages, on one hand; having these vehicles bolster technological advances and one's future lifestyle, where one prospects to live in a modern world as supposed by our foresight. Secondly, saying that they utilize automated technology means they use electrical power instead of gasoline or any other carbon-emitting material, which is humane and friendly to our environment and mother earth. In addition, they are a way to eliminate traffic congestion and accidents. For instance, they employ software and radars that measure the length between 2 vehicles and calculate the jam on these roads to refrain these 2 problems from occurring. On the other hand, they, indeed, have some implications. Take the loss of jobs for drivers as an example, it may seem that they are replacing us. However, they do create newer jobs for them, like learning how to enhance the software or radar systems, which is important for the manufacturers of these vehicles. Another implication might be one's distrust in the vehicle's implemented software or radars, but humans are more prone to failure and accidents than these algorithmic complex machines. To conclude, it is true that driverless vehicles may have some disadvantages, but in my opinion it's negligible compared to the benefits they provide not only to us but also to our world.
@hhanie-ng5619
@hhanie-ng5619 11 ай бұрын
Hi Lillie~ If I say advantages outweigh disadvantages, can I write 2 ideas for advantages and only 1 idea for disadvantges? Your videos make my self-learning journey become easier and more effective. Thank you!
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 11 ай бұрын
I've never tried your method in an actual exam so I don't know, sorry.
@kiranmahato5034
@kiranmahato5034 Жыл бұрын
Hi Lillie, thank you for the tutorial. But I was just wondering, if we should write at least two advantages and disadvantages since the question says, "do you think advantageS outweigh disadvantageS?" Also, is it okay to write advantages first and then disadvantages even when i think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
1. You can do that if the question is "does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages". Here's an sample essay: www.ieltsessaybank.com/paying-for-things-using-mobile-phone/ 2. Better first discuss the side you disagree with. Hope this helps.😊
@Sandeepkaur-zs5qn
@Sandeepkaur-zs5qn 7 ай бұрын
Mam is it good if we explain only one advantage along wirh one disadvantages in given paragraph
@nirbannadeem2496
@nirbannadeem2496 23 күн бұрын
Hey Lilie, I have general IELTS exam on 19th may I have not prepared yet but I want to score clb 7 for my pr process How can I prepare in this short time help me.
@Fkaziyev
@Fkaziyev Жыл бұрын
Keep continue please 😊
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Sure thing!😀
@johnwinjoby544
@johnwinjoby544 6 ай бұрын
Can u create a video in common word's synonyms and vocabulary used in write
@prakashthapa7127
@prakashthapa7127 Жыл бұрын
Thank you madam
@saganpreetsingh9302
@saganpreetsingh9302 Жыл бұрын
Thx mam
@qaisarmahmood988
@qaisarmahmood988 11 ай бұрын
After one day i am going to give my ielt exam kindly suggest me which things i should not do in paper.?
@palvi0344
@palvi0344 2 жыл бұрын
Superb video .....I'm your new subscriber 🤗Please upload more videos on different types of essays. You are an outstanding teacher.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much 😀
@user-lj6xu5bc4y
@user-lj6xu5bc4y 6 ай бұрын
Hi Lillie thank you so much for your explanation it helped me understand a lot but i want to know is it okay to just write one advantage and one disadvantage in this kind of essay?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 6 ай бұрын
Yes
@atosee23
@atosee23 8 ай бұрын
hello, I just have attended my ielts , in the writing part I didn't get much time for task 2 ... my bad ... in task 2, my starting and 1st paragraph were much informative and long, but 2nd paragraph was too short😔 just wrote On the other hand...then 1 long complex sentence😢 it was hard to finish but I wrote in line, just paraphrased why i disagree along with one reason. some words had repeated 😞 I am totally disappointed for what I did😞 what band it would carry(just task 2) ?
@adamphung
@adamphung 10 ай бұрын
Do you know any IELTS Essay Correction Services that I can use to check my band?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 ай бұрын
I don't but I will publish a video on free apps for ielts preparation this evening.
@AsifZeeshan
@AsifZeeshan Жыл бұрын
love it.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
thank you😊
@user-vm8yn4hb4w
@user-vm8yn4hb4w Жыл бұрын
I quite tough to make this knowledge fully own myself..
@mohammadsiam3095
@mohammadsiam3095 Жыл бұрын
The way you explain its seems so easy but whenever i set to go to write i get frustrated. i didn't organise my idea please give some idea for overcome this problem.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
I usually plan out my essay before start writing. I suggest that you practice planning. It may be difficult at the beginning but practice makes improvement.
@gkaur1884
@gkaur1884 2 жыл бұрын
YouR waY oF Teaching iS superb ThaNkyOu MaM plEaSe upload More viDeos on WritinG module !!!!!
@joyzyjazzyjeboomjae4893
@joyzyjazzyjeboomjae4893 Жыл бұрын
THanks for this ma'am...i have an exam on June 10, 2023...your explanation is very clear and concise..praying and manifesting that i have already pass the exam🙏💪..1st time taker😊
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊
@richu6148
@richu6148 11 ай бұрын
Hi How was your exam?
@joyzyjazzyjeboomjae4893
@joyzyjazzyjeboomjae4893 11 ай бұрын
@@richu6148 Glory to God i pass the exam. just got the result today
@joyzyjazzyjeboomjae4893
@joyzyjazzyjeboomjae4893 11 ай бұрын
@@LilieIELTS Thanks much madam..just got the result of my exam today....Glory to God i pass..
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 11 ай бұрын
@@joyzyjazzyjeboomjae4893 congratulations! What are your scores?
@takdirulalompritom
@takdirulalompritom Жыл бұрын
Hi, um can you make a video about how to develop ideas of essay, like I can generate the ideas but I can't not develop them.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
This video may help: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/ZrB6e8Vz3rq9mac.html
@izabelaszczygielski2205
@izabelaszczygielski2205 Жыл бұрын
You are the best
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the nice words!😊
@HanhNguyen-1213
@HanhNguyen-1213 8 ай бұрын
Hi Lillie, is the question 'to what extent do the advantages of ... outweigh the disadvantages of ...' the same as 'do the advantages of ... outweigh the disadvantages of ...'?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 8 ай бұрын
Yes, except that we need to use words like far or completely if the question contains to what extent: the advantage far/greatly/completely outweighs the disadvantage.
@HanhNguyen-1213
@HanhNguyen-1213 8 ай бұрын
@@LilieIELTS so it means that I can also say ‘the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages’ right?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 8 ай бұрын
@@HanhNguyen-1213 yes.
@HanhNguyen-1213
@HanhNguyen-1213 8 ай бұрын
thank you!@@LilieIELTS
@maisarahrashid8478
@maisarahrashid8478 Жыл бұрын
Hello Lilie! I appreciate you making these videos to ease our IELTS journey!! Keep up the good works. I have a quick question regarding example part. Can I give any personal experience as an example? For instance "I attended a concert last week"- this kind of reference.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the kind words. No, don't use a personal example.
@saganpreetsingh9302
@saganpreetsingh9302 Жыл бұрын
Plz make video on how to make variety of sentences.
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
The next video will be focusing more on sentence constructions.✊
@forestworldtv8989
@forestworldtv8989 Жыл бұрын
Hy your essay is great but whenever it's my time to write i am unable to develop new ideas and write in a proper way. So, can you suggest me any tips?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Hi, consuming news helps a lot. I recommend WSJ tech news briefing.
@mariyamjeewa1460
@mariyamjeewa1460 Жыл бұрын
I have a structure in which I have to write 1 advantage and 2 disadvantages if I agree it is disadvantage and if I agree that it was advantage I have to write 2 advantage and 1 disadvantage so it is correct I have to follow this structure??
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
I've never tried your structure in a real exam so I can't answer your question.
@mariyamjeewa1460
@mariyamjeewa1460 Жыл бұрын
Ok thanks
@mariyamjeewa1460
@mariyamjeewa1460 Жыл бұрын
But ur video help me to write
@princegamingax5085
@princegamingax5085 Жыл бұрын
Help me with this Do we have to write both advantages and disadvantage in advantage or disadvantage question?? I am asking because you have written both on your site ielts essay bank
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Hi, we need to write two advantages and two disadvantages if the question is "what are the advantages and disadvantages".
@tarahumagain1480
@tarahumagain1480 Жыл бұрын
Is it okay if we write 3 body paragraphs? One stating advantages, second disadvantages and the other with our thoughts ?? . In this essay you writing advantages and your opinions in same paragraph . Does it meet the criteria of only one idea in one body paragraph??
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Hi, I've never tried your method in an actual exam so I don't know. Yes, each of my body paragraph has only one main topic because the opinion sentence is also about the topic sentence.
@HarpreetSingh-mq7kk
@HarpreetSingh-mq7kk 10 ай бұрын
to what extent do u think its benefits outweight draw baks...is it same as adantages outweigh disavantages ?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 10 ай бұрын
Yes, just make sure to use words like 'GREATLY outweigh' or 'FAR outweigh' to address 'to what extent'.
@HarpreetSingh-mq7kk
@HarpreetSingh-mq7kk 10 ай бұрын
@@LilieIELTS ohh ok, thank you so much 😃
@divyaughade3601
@divyaughade3601 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much😊 I scored 7
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
That's amazing! You scored a 7 on the writing test? What are your scores on the other three sections?
@labibasultana1200
@labibasultana1200 Жыл бұрын
Best💓
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
💜😊💜
@rakibhasan4328
@rakibhasan4328 Жыл бұрын
tremendous work 🖤🖤
@AbdulKader-ee4vm
@AbdulKader-ee4vm 10 ай бұрын
Sundory you are real zinis.
@AbdulKader-ee4vm
@AbdulKader-ee4vm 10 ай бұрын
I wanna contact with you, please leave your email.
@harwinderpalkaur2492
@harwinderpalkaur2492 11 ай бұрын
Hi lilie..in intro you mention advantage far outweighs disadvantage..but later on in conclusion u said downside is greatlt outweighed by the upside..????
@harwinderpalkaur2492
@harwinderpalkaur2492 11 ай бұрын
Isnt it is wrong..
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 11 ай бұрын
It's correct. Note that in the conclusion, the passive voice 'is outweighed' is used.
@harwinderpalkaur2492
@harwinderpalkaur2492 11 ай бұрын
@@LilieIELTS thanku lilie
@quynhnguyennhu-zo3yq
@quynhnguyennhu-zo3yq 7 ай бұрын
What band score of above essay is,lilie?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS 7 ай бұрын
The essay was improved by a native speaker. I think it deserves at least an 8.
@quynhnguyennhu-zo3yq
@quynhnguyennhu-zo3yq 7 ай бұрын
​​@@LilieIELTS really I had admit that i like this method because it's easier and clearer than others i conferred,my tutor taught me a different outline so that it is difficult for me to learn other ways because he just checks my text with the outline he did before
@jahongirjumayev9756
@jahongirjumayev9756 Жыл бұрын
It is very useful thank you how can i find your block please help me
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Here you go: www.ieltsessaybank.com/
@krishpuri5805
@krishpuri5805 Жыл бұрын
Mam can we totally on one side and write both Bp of either advantages or disadvantages
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Sorry I can't answer your question. I have never tried your method in an actual exam.
@krishpuri5805
@krishpuri5805 Жыл бұрын
@@LilieIELTS ok mam
@captainbgmii
@captainbgmii Жыл бұрын
On February 25 this type question is given in IELTS exam
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
I hope you did well!
@zeeshanakbar6676
@zeeshanakbar6676 Жыл бұрын
Wow mam
@shamsiddinmatiakubov
@shamsiddinmatiakubov Жыл бұрын
Hi can you say what score did you get for writing? I assume at least 7
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Hi, I got a 7 twice on the writing test.
@shamsiddinmatiakubov
@shamsiddinmatiakubov Жыл бұрын
@@LilieIELTS Good
@abdulawalemon1699
@abdulawalemon1699 Жыл бұрын
Best explanation I ever got for this kinda essay! Tomorrow is my exam. Im gonna kill it if I get this specific type of essay.🤣🤣🤣
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
Best of luck!✊ And don't forget to come back and tell us your test result.
@abdulawalemon1699
@abdulawalemon1699 Жыл бұрын
@@LilieIELTS Lilie, wo ai ni ❤❤! I cant believe I got "outweigh" today😂😂😂 !! Why didnt I came accross your chanel before?!
@anushashrestha1998
@anushashrestha1998 Жыл бұрын
Is this only for general training?
@LilieIELTS
@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын
academic and general training
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