How to make a cringe banished story: Have it take after the Sasuke retrieval mission usually succeeding. Fail if you feel edgy. Make a bs reason to banish him regarding the 9 tails and bs laws to make it happen. Then nake an OC who knows everything then disappears Usually a family member. Have him break the toad contract despite him seemingly forget about it in his battle with Sasuke. Final Step make him an edge lord
@MrCadeRay3 ай бұрын
He's way to accepting of his banishment and doesn't resent the land of fire for literally banishing him, but he hates jiraiya? Nah
@nassalbraimbridge9243 ай бұрын
These authors usually throw logic out the window when writing these. Anything for the plot, regardless of how stupid or unrealistic it sounds.
@MrCadeRay3 ай бұрын
@@nassalbraimbridge924 it's crazy too because they could have used the Akatsuki as a reason. Banishing him because he used the 9 tails chakra in a life or death situation is fucking stupid. They didn't mind when he used it during wave, the chunnin exams, or the invasion. Also have them deny that Sasuke actually betrayed the village is the definition of stupid. He was supposedly "influenced by orichi" an S class missing nin, yet they banish Naruto on the ground of "the 9 tails might influence him" . Also since this story acknowledges the tailed beasts as valuable assets it wouldn't make sense to essentially give him to a potential enemy village. I've ranted long enough. I hate these banished stories. Literally uses all the terrible things in Naruto and multiplies them by 100
@ascensiongenesis_sigma3 ай бұрын
Thank fuck. A real person that acknowledges the idiocy of these stories
@nassalbraimbridge9243 ай бұрын
@MrCadeRay Very true. I know it's hard to write these, but that's no excuse to write BS.
@EVILMOLIK3 ай бұрын
Part 2 ❤
@RYSRTA20 күн бұрын
Part 2
@amandabaldwin56803 ай бұрын
Thank you for posting. I really enjoyed it.
@sayyedaamil96743 ай бұрын
Part 2 plz
@IdealKasimi3 ай бұрын
Part2
@robertruse65523 ай бұрын
Okay this story is very good I did enjoy it I like how the story told me in a couple of notes I do wish it was a lot longer I like the character development I like how you had one of the seven Swordsmen how about Naruto pass along a little bit of information I like how you did it I hope you come back make a part two like I said I do wish it was a lot longer and keep up the good work
@danostextingstories96542 ай бұрын
Can't wait for the next part
@philippa80183 ай бұрын
Please make a part 2 soon
@johnathanhenderson933 ай бұрын
More parts, please. I saw similar stories, but they never continued it
@SerratedSun58412 ай бұрын
Unfortunately there’s only two more chapters past this and the story was abandoned in 2017
@jalenwaller15543 ай бұрын
Fanfic name please?
@jamesboone85203 ай бұрын
fanfic link pls
@josephgalla40343 ай бұрын
part 2 please
@jjerzey13 ай бұрын
Title?
@darthwitchkingmain3 ай бұрын
Naruto by the 80 clone Mark is doing 6 years worth of training in one month
@annuchiha303 ай бұрын
Part 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 all the way to 12
@DashhishigBaterdene3 ай бұрын
You know the name of the what if
@MidnightLost013 ай бұрын
Title of story? Name of author?
@ret1sgreyes3 ай бұрын
found it Banished Uzumaki By: bwhite9
@mikebaraki17123 ай бұрын
@@ret1sgreyes thank you but the author still has not finished the story
@lifewithquezz3 ай бұрын
Naruto was not this bright as a kids😭
@ravwood72773 ай бұрын
why is Naruto aways mad at the wrong people in these type of stories