I wonder why this wonderful channel and this wonderful video has so less subscribers, likes and views. Nevertheless, I take it on my part to promote the channel and the video. Furthermore, I would like to congratulate and confer my best wishes to Mr. Andrew for this woonful lesson. I am currently in my tenth grade and just tommorow is my boards exam. "Flow" is a new assessment criterion this year and i was really puzzled with it. However, I feel that watching this video and a few more similar ones has improved my writing in seconds. Please consider this comment also as a piece of writing and feel free to judge it. Thank you a lot..

I'm a creative writer and have tried to find the answer to the mysteries of 'flow'. I can't be more grateful to have found this video. The explanations and suggestions make so much sense. No wishy washy ways but concrete actionable tips. I'm hoping on the next videos on flow now. This will help me so much. Thank you!

Thank you. Good lecture. I really should have taken more English classes in college and experimented with a Creative Writing class. I came to writing long after college. The quality of your videos are one reason why I like them so much. I just started my Poetry Sketchbook…a few lines already.

I just want to know that your videos help me a lot in writing. Thank you.

Thank you Andrew. As a struggling student with lots to write, your video was super clarifying. After having watched your video, I realized that I probably flipped like all the information from primary ed writing classes I’ve had. Like I thought I was told that “sentences shouldn’t be longer than 23 words” or “never start with but, and, for…”. But I’ve read SO many scholarly and media publications where most of the “rules” were not strict. I have added this video to my a limited “writing” beliefs document where I keep all my childhood writing rules next to the myriad of exceptions.

Hi Andrew! Your lesson is simply amazing because points,you mention,are essential to achieving the flow of writing. Thanks & regards.

This is an excellent video! Thank you!

This video helps me a lot. This 15 minute's are trillions time better then spending 2 hour daily on boring classes. I'm from Pakistan and I'm in love with you'r teaching skills. Morever few of my friend also love you're videos because you're videos are easy and simple to understand. I hope you make more videos like this masterpiece. Regards Moiz Khan

My God! I regret not discovering your channel alot earlier. This is the first video I am watching from this channel and I have no words to admire it enough! LoTs of Love from Pakistan!

Thank you, dear Andrew. Your explanation of flow is the best I have ever heard. 👍

You are the best! Thank you so much.

I only recently found your channel, but it makes me want to write more. Ireally appreciate the time and effort you put into these videos. I wish you would write a book on writing and then record the audio book for it. Or sell a complete and comprehensive video course.

Good stuff👍this is the first time I’m hearing this kind of advice

Awesome!!

This has helped me so much for my writing competition! Thank you!

Great video; clear and the examples are not overwhelming Thank you

Thanks You are both brilliant and beautiful

Love the style of your videos. And they're very helpful!

Thank you for the video :)

THANK YOU!

Attractive man with attractive thoughts, your voice is so soothing Andrew.

This channel is criminally under-subscribed/rated. I'm glad to see you're gaining traction recently! Keep up the good work Andrew!

Have just discovered your channel and found your videos helpful and interesting! I am writing my master thesis (in art history), and now I am on the stage of editing and re-writing previous drafts. But I would say it’s quite a frustrating process. Is there any tips you can share with us or do you have videos related to this stage? Thanks! Best, Man Lai from Hong Kong SAR

Could you please pin the follow up videos you made about coherent sentences? Most of us in Indian universities are never taught how to write. Content like yours is hence so special to folks like me. Love and thanks from India ❤

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I'm really confused I have lots of idea I want to write a book but my writing skills are bad I want a mentor who can guide me, what should I do?

Is the skull named Yorik?

I have been seeking flow my writing in the context of how my classical music feels when I play it. I want my sentences to connect. This is a timely topic. I am working on my re writes and editing. Do you teach online. I have numerous short stories drafted from 800 to 6,000 words needing the flow and editing to be finished stories. No for sale. For my own book of short stories.

Hello sir, I am a student of post graduation in UK. And I got first assignment essay to write on global business strategy subject. I am very very confuse to start work on it, as I tried to understand topic and find materials but my all efforts were useless. Could you please guide me for how to approach on specific question of essay and how to research startigically for the topic content ? I read books and example essays but didn't understand the system also I'm in fear that how to complete this task within deadline. Please help me and share your knowledge to me

Hi Andrew, do you know of any poets who are as easy to read as Bukowski? They don't have to write about the things Bukowski wrote about but should be as easy to understand. Thanks.

This video has really helped my writing, so thank you for making it. The video is great, but there is a small improvement I can suggest. The combination of the alerting tone+pop up graphic from the skull distracts from what you are saying, so I found myself rewinding frequently when they occurred. I’m not suggesting you get rid of the jokes, but your video would be easier to watch and listen to if the jokes came during pauses in your speaking. I want to reiterate that the videos I’ve seen from you are great

thank goodness I found this video, because I've spent the last 30 minutes googling how flow and coherence relate to each other. Ironically, everything I found did not flow. This do be flowy though

Still struggling.

I find the description of the tree as being full of cackling birds to be jarringly inaccurate. Tanagers chirp; oriels whistle; geese cackle. Geese are water birds and are not found in trees.

the pop up is so distracting but i got value from your teaching

I so badly want to love this video and its lesson. Still, the New Agey background noises are so distracting that I cannot focus on the lesson you are offering. Don't get me wrong, I'm a hippie, so New Age isn't my concern, it's the noises themselves that, for me, only serve as a distraction to your message. If you could provide a video with only your voice, I'd be able to make it through, and then maybe I could really appreciate what you are trying to share.

Lost the interest of this video beyond 6 min of duration, for, it becomes tedious and cluttered.

Please: more examples and less talking head verbiage. ❤

you should grow your hair out into a pony tail