I like how this is almost like the other story, but this time from the boys point of view.

That was a tad confusing. One moment they were in the diner/coffee shop when the agents burst in. Yet Jake was able to somehow hide Zyra before they spotted her. Slight mention of how she could be disguised, yet the next moment they were back at his small home!!

Fun story, but ChatGPT has left out too many details/plot holes... Title said she was in heat but barely any mention of it. She took the message from home then story cuts to next day, and barely eludes to them having a passionate night (possibly). Then after bounty hunters arrive, they kept advancing yet still within the treeline! No real answer as to how he was connected, or how the exactly escaped them or what they did afterwards. Slight critique... If using something like ChatGPT, try to make sure there is little to no plot holes etc and better details in certain areas. Overall, 7/10. Could have been better, but still enjoyed it. And at least you haven't had sections repeated like so many other similar channels are doing, and too lazy to correct it. Great job, anyways.

She turned into a he.

Your storyteller has a problem with gender identy.

1. I thought the translator was broken 2. the title has nothing to do with the story 3. where are the dogs? :(

Not a bad story, but it doesn't match the title.

This was actually a really great story. At first I thought it was going to be silly that little girls would know how to fix an Alien Spaceship better than their own crew would, but the fact that they are using human parts that the Aliens don't understand helps makes it work. My only suggestion if you do a similar story in the future is to have an Alien Engineer assist the girls to help the girls understand their technology better as well.

He she, get woke go broke,. Pathetic ...

I like this one a lot. I LOVE that the Humans and Aliens are are not friendly with each other right away. It seems more realistic than the other 'Girl on Hostile Planet' Stories where everything is all sunshine and rainbows once they encounter each other.

he / she - is this Nyara a hermaphrodite or doesn't the AI know the difference between a male and a female? highly irritating, clearly proofreading/listening is too much work. channel blocked

This story needs part 2.

It would have been nice for the poster of this to leave the option of thumbs down on the video, because it deserves it. The SEX of the protagonist went from him, to her to IT. Learn to editorialize your work, and correct problems.

Of course all aliens breathe oxygen)

Funny, he didn't introduce them to the internet. So, he didn't get two wives. Poor guy. Incel.

The sudden switch from first person to third person is jarring and leads me to think this story was (badly) written by an AI. 🤖

Zorak is a jerk!

Picture and story do not match.

What really annoys me when the "writer" shifts the gender of lyra back and forth faster than a flaming yo yo

Thank you for this Story, It was my first for today, and I Liked it, It did take A different direction than I Thought it would

First Zara to female then referred to as he him then as her. Make up your mind and proof read before publishing 😂

I can't imagine how the unconscious alien they left behind somehow beat them to the evac pods and managed to enter it while unconscious without either of them noticing.

No editor 😐

It's a shame this is a good story but you confused he and she get it together

Nope, I am done at the 2:39 mark when you continued to have the AI mix up him and her. Too distracting. Come back when you are better and clean up the mistakes in editing or don’t make those BASIC MISTAKES in the first place!!!! Oh, hell, is this one of those doggone transgender stories where this kid cannot tell if it is a boy or a girl????????

No one at the maternity hospital have eyes?

Did you review this before you put it up? It doesn't add up. If they don't want the child born, they had many chances to abort it and they could have destroyed the ship when it left the station.

Interesting, I have a few problems with the story. He was wounded in the leg and had to be helped then he was running with no help. The information would not really help them as they would not have the tech needed to make it or the time. Unless it led to a cache of the tech.

if its good ill sub and like

Can you make sure you the correct sex e.g man (he, him or male) female (her, she or lady). As it could be hard when you female sometime and male other time.

This is one of the best damn HFY artworks I have ever seen. The story was O.K. Are you translating it or something? Calling the girl a 'He' and 'Him' got pretty annoying.

Lyra is a she NOTa he

He could shift his form and size she love it and him to.

How bout reimagining a narrator that doesn't keep switching genders of the main character

Amazing how bad the incoherent English is

He he 😃✨

Eunuch? You apparently don't know the meaning. That means a male whose testicles are removed. Sexless and sterile.

Absolutely rubbish, this is not a story just AI gone rampant. This should not have appeared on any channel

The Code was '1234' :D

Well, someone efed up 😓

ok and why do students have to be called to arms while the adults had what to do???working??holiday??

Right on!

He, she? Which one is it?

so you keep saying it is a woman, then you keep saying its a he.... make up your mind, is it a female or a male..killed the story, get your facts straight.

Story repeat's in places.

I stopped listening after reading the first few comments. Thank you all for keeping me from getting peeved off at this.

AI crap

AI junk😅

The ai is not good, it feels like I am reading woke stories