Does anyone check these stories before they put them up. I hung in until I went through 3 rewrites of the same escape. Man, if you're gonna do all this work, why not do it right????

😂 Beer is like elixir of life for the military. You haven’t lived until you’ve mustered at 5:00am for a formation run while hung over.

So... Earth suddenly has interstellar travel in the middle of the story? I HATE AI stories, they get worse by the day

Jonathan is a snitch.

If I hear the word diversity in any more of these stories, I'm going to vomit.

IF you have a quantum displacement engine, that can move anything from anywhere to anywhere. You no longer need a military fleet to attack, nor a merchant fleet. All you need to do is shift an enemy fleet into the nearest star or another galaxy. Then say we wont bring them back unless you are a good boy. Goods and people could just be shifted from planet to planet, you wouldn't need large interstellar ships, just some local small cutters.

Thanks for the great content, I learned a lot! Already subscribed, liked, and commented. Your channel is really great! I am also working hard to learn how to write audio novels. I hope you can help recommend my channel so that more people can discover it.

Double encrypted? Doesn't do anything better than single encryption.

I love syfy, I really do that's why I subscribed to your channel. I love that has FAR more suspension of belief. Do you even know what that term means? I was in the Military for may, may years. In fact it was all I knew. You continually put women in charge of ENTIRE Flotilla's and Command of the Battlefield. I'm telling you the truth here. I would NEVER follow a woman's orders in battle. They DON'T have it in them to lead such a thing!!! Suspension of Belief, has fled the room when it comes to your stories!!! I'll never listen to another of your "stories".

Keeps reiterating the same thing over and over....and over and over and over. Oh there are accolades....and over and over. Tedious, yes?

Is there a reason you never tell us how old the girls in these stories are? Whenever it's a boy, his age is stated within the first few sentences. But whenever you have a girl... we have no idea how old she is. Why? First it sounds like she's supposed to be a kid, but then she's fighting in an arena! So freaking annoying.

You don't credit a human author, so I suppose this is probably something you've had an AI throw together for you. It's not a great writing style - far too florid IMO and far too much exposition.

I really expected to hear some physical description of “Benny” very early on, immediately after finding him.

"Well you are here now and this is your home too" A very kind and strong Grandma phrase

I like this story. Heartwarming. But i swear to god. Please, one. Just one sci fi story without the world "resilience".

Wow. This brings to mind the Alyoshenka alien baby from the late 90s.

Then Tim said to the class, "Now you know the most peaceful place on my homeworld. Wait until you interact with the dominant predator of our land." And he smiled so violently.

gdi stop reading stories written by ai, they're terrible

Why is it always... How is the word? Satisfactory, epic, at all cases breathtaking? When you see something enormous marching, in most cases weapon of war

How can they rejoin the galactic community when they were never a part of it? I mean James did say I thought we were alone as he met his only alien lifeform.

Huh. Well. This whole story can be summed up in a couple sentences. “Not a single alien in the entire galaxy has ever heard of the electromagnetic spectrum, and none have ever developed any tech that would let them see anything more than their unaided eyes are capable of. Realizing that humanity can see a slightly different spectrum than any other species, they immediately decide we are all scientific geniuses who are ready to co-rule the galaxy.” I’m sorry, but it’s disappointing and pretty pathetic.

Ah... KZfaq is Drunk again

Yep, 100% Ai generated

I feel like this is chat gpt generated

Boring!

If you can not proof watch your own videos so you do not have it repeating you deserve losing followers.

Why do Thay read same shit twice

Really getting irritating that in many of your stories they start repeating half way through the story.

9:30 AI written, isn't it? Way to generic, abstract, yet very dramatically descriptive.

My question is, why does earth want to be in the Galaxy chamber. They seem like the United Nation's useless.

This is nothing new. Case in point just because we who learned English know the difference between to, too, and two for one example. Or the many different spellings of words from American English and British English!

To be honest, I would actually categorize the other world's as death world considering we're hording all this life for ourselves.

This was a really great and enjoyable story thank you so much❤

I will say that I have no clue about the difficulties of using AI. Having said that, I can't for the life of me figure out why the words used in these stories are mispronounced and with incorrect spelling. The alien names sometimes have several spellings? Go figure!

Was this written by a computer program?

Oh fuck this Ai swill. So many channels like this one now. Every single one of them now thinks they are writers. The stories are boring, generic and have little to no structure. And Ai voice is terrible to listen to.

Lol a nuclear engine that growls. 😂😅

In the 26th century, he could have turned that Abrams into a Bolo MkXX and REALLY impressed them. (referrence Keith Laumer)

"The sounds of engines roaring..." in space?!? I sometimes think that whoever writes these fleet-battle stories has never actually read a military sci-fi story or novel in their lives. Read some Steve White, David Weber, Elizabeth Moon, Mercedes Lackey, or John Ringo for crying out loud!

I can't wait for the Wonders you got stored for us😀🤔😏🥰

They missed referencing the Earth's most dangerous creatures: Mosquitos.

tim should have addressed how deer love staring at 1 ton or even 10 ton vehicles coming straight towards it

I totally thought they would kill Tim

Wait, wait, wait. You forgot the real ending. The one where we Nova bombed the galactic council and unfurled our Terran empire Eff yeah flags.

You know how fed up you are of the word "diverse" when you listen to this while gaming, that you actually were relieved when the story was over to not hear that word anymore.

The attack was military precision, who owned the dead ships ?

If Garrett was so afraid of aliens, what was he doing on a spaceship?

Just don't tell the Aliens that to start it Humans have to give the energy core A really big kick.

Amazing and Awesome storytelling. Can't wait for the next one. As we Humans do like story's that we are the good guys. And that we are feard by the big bad of the Galaxy.

Never use the word palpable again😂