What a shallow analysis. What good is all that structure if they can't keep their characters consistent and develop them well?
@lobomedina631216 сағат бұрын
Exactly. Sapochnik leaving was a 🚩 New CEO Zaslav slashing the budget, giving Oprah 130 mil for her Color Purple reboot was another 🚩 We got mud wrestling instead of the Battle of the Gullet, and Rhae canoodling with Misery rather than strategizing with her seasoned council.
@The3dge4 сағат бұрын
@LCR-iy6xq - Thank you for that shallow and vapid comment. It added nothing to the conversation, but still pulled more views to the video and that's awesome! Thing is, I bet you can do better. I bet you're highly intelligent, have given the show some real thought and COULD tell us all something interesting about the characterization and things you think they could do better. That kind of comment would have merit, actual substance and would add value to the conversation. What do you think? Think you can do it?
@lobomedina63123 сағат бұрын
@@The3dge Wish could've given a 1/2 👍 coz I only agreed with the 2nd statement. I don't think your analysis was shallow. How could it be when you put so much thought and consideration into your work? Obviously a labor of love. CIVIL discourse is key in any kind of discussion.
@Black-cq7cmКүн бұрын
You are entirely tripping sir that was a bad finale to a below average season.
@robertsmiley2207Күн бұрын
The time skips definitely annoyed me which is why Laenas death 💀 had no real impact on me I didn't feel like I knew her well enough to care
@user-ep7wt6pe1j2 күн бұрын
What about fantasy worlds? After all the dragon stuff, I’m hoping to see some of that.
@johnparnham59452 күн бұрын
There are lots of goo tips in this video and I'm listening.
@michaelstark87203 күн бұрын
I hate this season more than anything of late. This season was good up until ep4. everything later was junk except Vermithor and Hugh. Daemon should stop having visions in ep5. ep 3 and 4 was already boring to see. Meetings of Riverlords should have happened in episode 5, battle of rivermen and winter wolves vs Lannisters should happen in episode 6 or 7.Gullet should have happened in final episode. This is story about war and yes i want to see war otherwise political talks make no sense . Also Alicent betraying her family makes no sense. There is nothing to be said between Alicent and Rhaenyra. War is started and cannot be stopped. Only good thing is that Rhaenys died. I couldn't stand her wisdom talk that actually contains no wisdom at all
@The3dge2 күн бұрын
Yeah, I found the Alicent Rhaenyra scenes...odd. The idea that either of them had such lackluster security a random person could easily approach them, then slip away undetected made no sense.
@lobomedina631215 сағат бұрын
@michaelstark8720 Aha, so I'm not the only one who thought Rhaenys was meh. She was supposed to be virtuous and wise, didn't torch Aegon & Co at the coronation, nevermind trampling 100s of smallfolk to death. Plus it seems like Condal and Hess are imposing their own worldview onto the narrative. Ironically, they're robbing Rhaenyra and Alicent of their agency.
@wingsoffreedom35893 күн бұрын
This is one long video indirectly asking to see Aegon's conquest 😂. Most of the answers are there from dragons burning doen castles which then cause other kingdoms to surrender without a fight to dragon religions being formed etc.
@wingsoffreedom35893 күн бұрын
I ahree with so much of this but I will defend the existence of some of the typical fantasy elements like the typical army warfare and castles. Let's remember when this takes place the Targaryens dynasty came into power with dragons less than 150 years before the point of the show. Most of the castles were built long before dragons came to the continent, winterfell and house Starrk is over 4,000 years old. Like you said they are useless against dragons hence why the burning of Harron Hall was considered an infamous event as one of the few monarchs cooked in his own castle for not bending the knee to Aegon the Conqueror. His Dragon Balerion the Black Dread was bigger than vagar and the bigger and older a dragon is the hotter their magical fire burns. Apparently Balerion's fire was hot enough to melt stone and steel and was colored black. As for armies let's remember this is the first major war in westeros with both sides having dragons because it's a civil war nobody is experienced in this kind of war because dragons were mainely a deterrant and 1 dude, Aegon and his 2 sister wives conquerored 7 kingdoms with just 3 dragons there wasn't combat with 2 armies that both had dragons. Most wars post dragons era was between feuding lords who themselves don't have dragons so atandard warfare would apply until the king sends a targaryen with a dragon and the fight is over instantly. Lastly dragon patrols wouldn't work as only the royal family can ride them and they have royal duties to attend too, not to mention the caloric needs of a dragon would be insane to keep them flying all the time. Dragons on average eat about a herd of sheep's worth of meat every 3 weeks and spend most of their time sleeping like lions while going for an afternoon flight to stretch their wings for an hour or 2 each day at most unless they have a mission with a rider and may be flying for hours on some journey.
@The3dge3 күн бұрын
@wingsoffreedom3589 - Excellent information, thanks for sharing! The inexperience factor makes a lot of sense for the current regime. Though I thought dragons had been tamed for thousands of years prior to the events in Westeros. Which book / supplement goes deeper on Aegon's conquest of the Seven Kingdoms?
@OriginalStriga3 күн бұрын
@@The3dgeI’m only a few hours into Fire & Blood but I think it did cover Aegons conquest. I also would like to know if it is told directly from one of the main characters rather than as a historical reference
@wingsoffreedom35893 күн бұрын
@@The3dge as far as I know dragons were indeed tamed in Valeria millenia ago but westeros had little contact and no valerian rulership in those times as the empire focused more on essos.
@wingsoffreedom35893 күн бұрын
@@The3dge most of what we know about Aegon comes from Fire and blood. The rest George keeps vague on purpose but leaves just enough info so we understand the world building. Some hope we will get a book about Aegon from his perspective.
@ohioguy19463 күн бұрын
I agree the ships make no sense, vhagar could easily swoop down and burn the majority of the valeryion fleet in 10 mins
@childrenoftheabzu3 күн бұрын
The first season was perfect and objectively one of the best seasons of TV ever written. This season was a lil weird due to the writer strike and the HBO merger which resulted in them being forced to cut things thus resulting in having to stretch other things to fill the limited episodes we got. They wrote 10 episodes but were told they couldnt film some of the costlier stuff thus we got Daemon wondering around harrenhal to much. But even that was not real filler in the traditional sense, it was a deep dive into the lore and how magick works in this universe. Something D&D diddnt understand and cut from the original show sadly. And yes, a vast majority of book readers are into all the expanded details and huge story and want to know and explore the whole world in detail. Kind of a defining feature of the books. Its the TV audience who is lacking "sophistication" and should spend their time with the latest marvel movie. Also George had NOTHING to do with it and is a master at his craft. So yeah, if your a author, you do want to be like George but probably cant pull off the complexity that is in these books. complex enough for people to have been dissecting it for decades and to continue to do so. The 1000s of years of history, the parallels with real life myth and within the story lore itself regarding character archetypes down through the ages, the mystery's hidden in the seemingly smallest of details, the characters who act like real people and again, the sheer complexity which makes it feel like real history. Nothing happens in a vacuum and every little thing affects everything else; just like in life.
@AcidTripOk4 күн бұрын
The biggest problem with dragons for me, is that there's no f*king way a beast of the size of Vhagar can take flight and stay in the air with a couple of wing flaps. It's waaaaay too masive to stay in the air. Aerodynamics don't make any sense.
@muntu12214 күн бұрын
And that's your _problem_ with them? I hate this era of nitpicking physics in media. Can't have Godzilla or Smaug anymore because a bunch of people learned about the square cube law.
@AcidTripOk3 күн бұрын
@@muntu1221 bro, Idc that the dragons are big, but they are supposed to be animals and they are supposed to fly, not levitate. And there's no way an animal of the size of a fortress is able to fly.
@wingsoffreedom35893 күн бұрын
They are literally magic beasts who's bones are lighter than wood yet hollow like a bird but stronger than titanium. Sprinkle in some magic anti gravity affect in their wings and you are good to go.
@OriginalStriga3 күн бұрын
@@wingsoffreedom3589 Yes!! Can we all acknowledge there is magic involved! It doesn’t have to actually be possible.
@YaBoiDREX3 күн бұрын
@@AcidTripOk Dragons are magical. They aren’t supposed to be realistic. They are literally meant to defy the laws of physics which is why they are treated like gods, in an otherwise, grounded medieval world.
@schlechtgut83494 күн бұрын
And what bothers is me the fact that these particular dragons agree to fight each other. I mean they are basically all relatives and knew each other for decades
@muntu12214 күн бұрын
They'll literally maul the people who raise and feed them at any moment, but are completely subservient to their rider. They don't regard familiarity at all.
@The3dge3 күн бұрын
That is weird angle. The roars and cries in the show are interesting, I appreciate the sound design, but I always wonder what they are saying to each other and I wonder which ones like or hate each other from their younger days.
@Slamdoxicalz4 күн бұрын
Rhaenys Targaryen's death was unnecessary, she should've flown back
@Void7.4.144 күн бұрын
In Valyria they did have a religion based around the dragons. In Westeros the dragons and their riders were viewed as borderline gods, they show as much and the books and show. But it isn't the same as it was. The old religions are deeply entrenched and there are likely other things pulling string.
@The3dge3 күн бұрын
Interesting. Where was Valyria? Was in the same place Westeros is now, or somewhere else?
@YaBoiDREX3 күн бұрын
@@The3dge Valyria is in a sunken peninsula in the eastern continent of Essos. Valyrians formed the largest and greatest empire in the history of the GOT world.
@YaBoiDREX4 күн бұрын
Dragons fights were inspired by Eagle fights which do lock claws and plummet to the ground.
@The3dge3 күн бұрын
Interesting, makes sense watching how they rake each other with those talons.
@Gigipretty643 күн бұрын
@@YaBoiDREX Except: Eagles also do that as a trust fall when looking for the right mate. It’s a courtship ritual not necessarily just a fighting tactic.
@YaBoiDREX3 күн бұрын
@@Gigipretty64 It’s both. The behavior is a common mating activity for bald eagles, it can alternatively be a ritualistic fight between males defending their territory.
@Gigipretty643 күн бұрын
@@YaBoiDREX I know. It’s pretty cool. That they incorporated it into dragon fights, it would be awesome to watch the dragons do it as a mating ritual as well. Probably the wrong kind of story for that lol 😂
@YamatoTre4 күн бұрын
I wanted more idle dragon scenes, even a background blurred feeding scene wouldn't have been expensive and would have gone a lonnng way toward making me feel the reality of the dragons.
@muntu12214 күн бұрын
What makes you think they wouldn't have been expensive?
@YamatoTre4 күн бұрын
@@muntu1221 Okay, pick at my words why don’t you. Blurred background dragon scenes would have been “less” expensive than a typical in-focus dragon scene, more comparable to the background flying shots we repeatedly get from Seasmoke and Syrax
@muntu12214 күн бұрын
@YamatoTre I'm not picking at your words, I'm wondering why you said them. The reasons we see those flying shots is because they serve a storytelling purpose. We have a few shots of different dragons just chilling in the background, notably Caraxes. And we often hear them calling if they're not in a dragon pit.
@YamatoTre3 күн бұрын
@@muntu1221 Yeah! And it’d be great to get some besides Caraxes and Syrax! 😃 All scenes serve a purpose, if you hate seeing background dragons that’s fine, I personally thought it would have been nice. Especially for Sunfyre since we got him for all of 5 minutes.
@YamatoTre3 күн бұрын
@@muntu1221 Almost every time someone mentions the dragons in a logistical sense, they mention how much they eat and how annoying/difficult it is to keep them well fed. Drive that home with a scene why don’t ya? Lord knows it would have livened up some of the repetitive scenes.
@adrianlajas53365 күн бұрын
Vaegar is the one it sleeping in the forest, Vermithor is Hugh hammers dragon at dragon Stone...
@The3dge4 күн бұрын
@adrianlajas5336 - Yeah, no idea how I got that in my head. Thanks for catching it.
@Airhead3485 күн бұрын
Did you read Fire and Blood??
@The3dge4 күн бұрын
@Airhead348 - Not yet, it's in the queue... What did you think of it?
@Airhead3483 күн бұрын
@@The3dge it explains everything you think they got wrong. Also the figgts in the show are based on large birds of prey and dogfighting. Also the dance is the first time dragons ever fought dragons in westeros aside from Balerion killing Quicksilver years ago. So they had no expierence with dragon combat. The book explains this all better.
@The3dge2 күн бұрын
@@Airhead348 Well now I have to read it😅. The show has tantalizing clues and interesting details, but it leaves me wanting more.
@ReginaFalange.15 күн бұрын
Also, Dragon travel speed is debatable/inconsistent in both the main show and House of the Dragon. In season 7 of GOT, Danaerys receives the raven requesting help from Jon while he’s chilling on that rock beyond the wall. Unless they had teleportation powers no one was aware of, it would take her a fair old while to travel a few thousand miles (assuming they had built in GPS, as otherwise they’d definitely have gotten lost). But the fact that she rocks up not looking remotely dishevelled indicates she made a few stops to redo her hair to make sure she looked good rescuing Jon. Also, she would have to not gone full pelt otherwise she wouldn’t even have been wearing that outfit by the time she arrived, I reckon a leisurely 40mph max as she looks immaculate upon arrival. Oh and the lore says dragons can go from Dragonstone to King’s Landing and back in a day - it’s around 400 miles each way so that gives us an idea I guess 😂
@AcidTripOk4 күн бұрын
Don't quote the later seasons of GOT. They never happened.
@ReginaFalange.15 күн бұрын
Hi - interesting video. I see someone already pointed out Vhagar is Aemond’s dragon - also worth mentioning she’s a she, not he. She’s known as Grumpy Granny Vhagar.
@The3dge4 күн бұрын
@ReginaFalange.1 - such an embarrassing mistake with the name. But I'd missed that Vhagar was a she. Interesting.
@wingsoffreedom35893 күн бұрын
@@The3dgefun fact Vagar is one of the 3 original dragons that conquered westeros and was ridden by Aegon's wife. She is also only the 3rd largest in the Dynasty's history.
@UltraViolet6665 күн бұрын
Great video
@The3dge4 күн бұрын
Thanks for the visit!
@OriginalStriga6 күн бұрын
The only dragon fights we’ve seen so far have been emotional attacks of the dragon rider. It will be interesting to see what happens in the actual war next season.
@The3dge6 күн бұрын
I can see that. Angry people do tend to rush in without much thought. I'll call this the barfight theory of dragon riding.
@The3dge6 күн бұрын
The dragons are cool. The look, the sounds, the effects--awesome. But how real do they feel? What do you think of how the show has handled them?
@Gigipretty646 күн бұрын
It bugs me enormously with how few and precious the dragons are that Rhaenys would risk Meleys against Vhagar after escaping their first spiral without serious injury and after downing Sunfyre. The fact that she also flew blind over the castle instead of gaining a higher altitude or taking a wider route around the castle avoiding Vhagar, was dumb and frustrating.
@Gigipretty646 күн бұрын
Vhagar, Aemond’s dragon is called Vhagar not Vermithor, Vermithor is the Bronze Fury claimed by Hugh Hammer on team Black. Vhagar is the biggest, then Vermithor.
@The3dge6 күн бұрын
@Gigipretty64 - Thanks for pointing that out. I had that stuck in my mind, don't know why. It was one of the things I didn't look up first. Ooops.
@The3dge6 күн бұрын
The best theory I've heard on why Rhaenys went back is that Meleys was mortally wounded in that first spiral and she decided to go down with her dragon. However, the way the scene was shot, I read it the same way you did: that Meleys was not seriously injured and that going back was a very poor choice.
@Gigipretty646 күн бұрын
@@The3dge no I don’t believe she was mortally wounded at all. I believe Rhaenys went back scanning the battlefield for a fallen Vhagar and lost sight of the huge dragon (who was surprisingly swift at getting airborne again) and when she couldn’t see her, continued over the castle to head back to Dragonstone and got munched in that fly over. Meley’s wasn’t mortally wounded, she had a sore paw from grappling with Vhagar’s larger claws and was slightly burnt on one side of her snout but her wings and body were in tact and no visible blood had been drawn and she didn’t hit the ground at any point. Sunfyre broke off a horn but that was aesthetic damage. That’s my read anyway. Aemond wasn’t even bothered pursuing Meleys at first. It does annoy me how little they seem to protect the dragons. They just take for granted that more will hatch.
@eW91dHViZSBpcyBjZW5zb3JzaGlw7 күн бұрын
it was bad. too much build up. zero pay off. it was a obvious writing downgrade from season 1.
@aaronlandau55757 күн бұрын
I felt the one major plont point unfulfilled, which I would have appreciated a resolution towards, would be the taming of Sheepstealer by Rhaena. I felt the dinner scene in Tyrosh with Tyland could have been cut. An agreement should have been made after the mud wrestling match. It felt like time spent on a new subplot rather than resolving a mid-tier active subplot. I felt the Rhaena subplot to already be a little messy, so the cliffhanger felt unnecessary.
@The3dge6 күн бұрын
Agree with all that. The whole Rhaena thing made no sense and was a distraction more than anything. Curious to see if she's more important later in the story.
@pugsondrugs23857 күн бұрын
If they want to do it this way give them more episodes. If Daemonds ark was more spooky and the main story characters had more agency - I'd be more engaged.
@The3dge6 күн бұрын
The lack of agency was a big one, that and their constant indecision.
@Valder19898 күн бұрын
George may be bad at pacing, but the absolute king of terrible pacing in the book series was Robert Jordan.
@The3dge8 күн бұрын
Oh yeah, haven’t been back to those in a while but I remember skipping entire chapters.
@dolgacevairina698 күн бұрын
Harenhal hallucinations scenes are total garbage.
@octav16008 күн бұрын
HAH! I like how you have a lot of my favorite things in the background (Lego and the best board game ever - Gloomhaven <3) Lovely discussion and it clearly helped <3.
@The3dge8 күн бұрын
Thanks! I’d have Frosthaven there too, but this summer I’ve been having Frosthaven Fridays so it currently lives full time on the dining room table.
@octav16007 күн бұрын
@@The3dge the one drawback to that game ... you can't put it back in if you use it actively <3.
@baddaman888 күн бұрын
Cool prospe tive and very insightful 👌 subbed
@The3dge8 күн бұрын
Awesome, thank you!
@ThatGuy-bh9qh9 күн бұрын
This would have been a great episode if it was ep 8 / 10, and not the season finale
@The3dge8 күн бұрын
It was disappointing to find out there were only 8 episodes. I want more 😩😡😩
@PrepucioJudeu7 күн бұрын
No, it would not. Is shit by itself, no just because is a finale, period. The show is being shit since season 2 started, full of shit characters developments, wokeness and bullshit. As GRRM said: 99% the times the adaptions is way worse from the books. Thats is a clear example
@ryanvia3477 күн бұрын
It was supposed to be, but hbo cut the last two episodes without letting them rewrite it
@ThatGuy-bh9qh6 күн бұрын
@@PrepucioJudeu why so serious?
@lobomedina63123 сағат бұрын
@@PrepucioJudeu Yeah Zaslav gave a huge chunk of change for Oprah's Color Purple reboot (Fail), which should've fulfilled HBO/Warner's DEI quota. Interesting how the overarching feminist/muh Patriarchy theme actually robbed the Princess and the Queen of their true agency 🤔
@LesMachinesNoires9 күн бұрын
I fully disagree, since I enjoy the season 2 fully. The last episode was realy touching. There's more to the tales than just slaughtery, there are new dragons, a reversal of forces, a complete reversal of Daemon's personality seeing the future and bending the knee. The high peak is on E4, then the consequences appear on 5, 6, 7 and 8 = super long outro bonus. Then cut to the table turns. A good effort to have offered this. The longer the better, no need for twists and turns every 20 minutes. By far the best epic fantasy tales on screen.
@The3dge9 күн бұрын
Yeah, it’s a great show and a compelling story. One of the best things out there right now. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Do you write as well?
@The3dge10 күн бұрын
I think it worked. What do you think? What parts did you love? What parts did you hate?
@noahisnotme39109 күн бұрын
i only like episode 4 and 7 but the season felt very slow and boring and the plot wasnt progressing as fast as i wanted. but i am excited for season 3
@OriginalStriga10 күн бұрын
They definitely pulled it together for the finale.
@The3dge9 күн бұрын
Yes, well done. Can’t wait for the next season.
@adamhenrysears328810 күн бұрын
I might be jumping the gun, or crossing the bridge before I get to it, (insert proper expression here), but I like the plans you've come up with, and may implement a few of them, even though I am still two chapters away from completing the first draft. The first read through, the scene breakdown, a combination of characters and arcs, all good stuff. However, I already know much of what needs to be changed, modified, and dropped. I'm not saying I remember everything, and the read-through will be a refresher on some of it, but the biggest stuff I already have a hang of. So, I might do at least the dropping of certain scenes on my read through.
@The3dge10 күн бұрын
Two chapters from the end of your first draft is a great place to be. What kind of novel?
@adamhenrysears32889 күн бұрын
@@The3dge Hi, Edge, thanks for the reply. It's much appreciated. The novel is an epic fantasy. I only say epic because I think I have the makings of a high concept, and it's a two-plot novel, with the plots separated by hundreds of years.
@The3dge7 күн бұрын
@@adamhenrysears3288 that’s an interesting structure, I haven’t tried that kind of time offset before. It sounds tricky. What kind of fantasy elements are you tackling?
@adamhenrysears32887 күн бұрын
@@The3dge Thanks for your reply. I'm afraid that if I reveal too much about it, there will be nothing fresh left to share. And I do hope that the concept is fresh enough to catch the eye of an agent and editor. What I can reveal here is that while there are some fantasy elements within my story (magic/supernatural beings/good vs evil) I have tried to come at them from an old but new perspective, if you know what I mean. Not to mention, there are elements of other genres within it. I love fantasy, but it's not only a fantasy epic. It is many other things as well.
@The3dge6 күн бұрын
@@adamhenrysears3288 I get it. Sounds interesting from what you've shared so far and I hope you finish and have something you're proud of!
@user-ep7wt6pe1j10 күн бұрын
Felt like a tease. I’d hoped to see more dragon action this season. Sigh. Guess I’ll be waiting for season 3 😖
@The3dge10 күн бұрын
Kind of, but in a good way 😸
@alyssondasilva448411 күн бұрын
Maybe instead of having Daemon walking around Harrenhal and repeat the similar dream/hallucination scenes 20 times, they could have added some interactions between different characters, and in different regions
@The3dge10 күн бұрын
Agree, found that tiresome. And Daemon is one of my favorite characters.
@SayMy_User_Name11 күн бұрын
Make that 3 episodes
@Mutazili11 күн бұрын
Alicent betraying her family for Rhaenyra? The woman that wanted Aemond tortured right after he lost an eye, starved a city, and husband decapitated her grandson? Please someone make a video about this fanfic plot...
@The3dge10 күн бұрын
Yep, curios to see how long before that plot eats its own tail.
@supereero911 күн бұрын
Season 1 was worse, it had terrible pacing with nonsensical and confusing time skips
@robertblue463011 күн бұрын
Thank You!!! I'm amazed more people haven't realized this fact! HoD is being stretched by HBO/Max for $$$ rather than quality story telling
@reaver141411 күн бұрын
George didn't write the show
@matiasrisatti67011 күн бұрын
George calls himself a gardener, but what he doesn't seem to know is that in the garden of a good gardener, every plant grows precisely where and how the gardener wants, and those that do not are weeds that must be cut.
@neroulgb383712 күн бұрын
season1 had something special about it that was lost i noticed with the beach dragon scene it was the most reductive version of that no intensity nothing cinematic ect had a bad feeling that never got better
@supereero911 күн бұрын
Season 1 was worse
@The3dge10 күн бұрын
Yeah, that scene. It could have been exciting and tense if she'd had to chase him or force him down -- showing clearly that he doesn't know how to ride a dragon and she does. And that would have made us think she might kill him. But a pleasant standoff on the beach was...unnecessary.
@neroulgb383710 күн бұрын
@@The3dge you have a dragon approaching dragonstone island and we got no time in the air ect ect just 2 ppl stood on a beach meh fuck lol
@CosmicJestar12 күн бұрын
Am I out here on a Ledge all alone? Am I the only one that felt the whole first season just felt like a lackluster writing and not a single line of dialogue or its delivery stuck out to me? I can pick at least four lines from every single episode of season 1 of Game of Thrones and say damn that was some good writing. I don't remember that spark here once...
@ETibbs1111 күн бұрын
No, you're not alone. I think both seasons of HoTD have been inferior to early GoT.
@isaacade-odunlade807912 күн бұрын
Is this a criticism of the show or books? As from what you are saying this can all be attributed to the show. ASOIF has not finished yet so the question of if it has bad pacing remains to be seen. And Fire and Blood is written a lot differently to how its portrayed in House of Dragon.
@The3dge10 күн бұрын
IMO both. ASOIF wanders around way too much for me, poking into little corners of the world that don't matter much. I think the first 5 books could easily have been done in 3 books, and there series would have been more engaging AND done by now.
@ted7331812 күн бұрын
I think you've hit the nail on the head. Gorm clearly loves to expand and world-build, which is good for beginnings but not for endings. Gorm just felt like having a Pirate story, so along comes the whole Euron Greyjoy plotline in AFFC.
@AshfaultAssassin12 күн бұрын
I feel that if your settings are all super unique it draws from the fact that it’s a world. Sometimes you need that one cliche overused city dirty city to add to the grandeur of the super important settings. Though adding slight changes to personalize and add to your settings can really go a long way for even the smallest areas. your advice was amazing! Keep up the good work!
@andrew.hamsterdad12 күн бұрын
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