Bit upset naruto couldn't say , he can sense negatively on him and powerful being suppressed 😅 been epic to expose him right off the bat haha
@RyosProduction262 сағат бұрын
If I wrote that so soon, the fic would have ended and conflict would have stopped. I planned on this fic being much much much longer with a lot of original content
@brundonxbrandon1212 сағат бұрын
@@RyosProduction26 yeah, just felt like doing so would just mean he will run before getting caught , equal to major changes to the conflict if you wanted to. However we all have a POV to take it Other then that seems like a great story big time if finished
@RyosProduction262 сағат бұрын
@@brundonxbrandon121 thanks. glad you like it despite how it is weird to hear a robot read my story. There are a lot of original content and changes that his presence will cause as the clone wars continues and he is in the middle of the chaos. I also have some design drawings for some things on this fic and I plan on continuing this fic when I can. Though I planned on fixing some of the errors on this fic but this channel apparently started the reading before I could even start corrections
@fictionz1902Сағат бұрын
my bad!
@brundonxbrandon121Сағат бұрын
@@RyosProduction26 excellent, I look forward to it 😀 , only tiny stuff naruto not telling the truth and sharing his story with fist bump. If that's possible since I think chakra is needed not sure. With all the facts I doubt they see naruto as a sith since that be laughable. Pure heart in a sea of hate 🤭 .
@landisschoeberl54194 сағат бұрын
Plz make part 3 and I was wondering why doesn’t not has a pet and mount Varacty and a ship I am just wondering how will everyone react back at his home village
@RyosProduction262 сағат бұрын
are you talking about the animal Obi-wan rode in the movie? I never thought about adding a pet for Naruto but maybe I could have him find a baby one and he keeps it as a pet later in in the fic. I'll make a note of that so I can have it in a later chapter. and there will be a chapter later on that shows what is happening in the village
@brundonxbrandon1214 сағат бұрын
Surprised, author didn't bring jraya with naruto at least 3 years 🤔 or someone to teach him ninja stuff but I guess the QB is good 🤷 too sage jutsu 😅
@ianuzielbejerano31915 сағат бұрын
hope for part 3
@ianuzielbejerano31915 сағат бұрын
one of the best fanfic crossover todate😮😮
@JoseRivera-pj5dp11 сағат бұрын
Part 3 please
@timwolfberg568712 сағат бұрын
Need more
@beauhackett9913 сағат бұрын
Part 3🙏🙏🙏
@brandonmacgregor96913 сағат бұрын
Woot this story is so awesome
@brandonmacgregor96920 сағат бұрын
Part two please
@ianuzielbejerano3191Күн бұрын
this is cool is there a part 2?🤔🤔😊
@laughingcoffinkingofdarkne3085Күн бұрын
45:10
@dylanmerrifield203Күн бұрын
Awesome story, part 2 please
@laughingcoffinkingofdarkne3085Күн бұрын
Part 3
@laughingcoffinkingofdarkne3085Күн бұрын
1:12:46
@JoseRivera-pj5dpКүн бұрын
Part two please
@beauhackett99Күн бұрын
Part 2 🙏🙏🙏
@chris-may_weidow5360Күн бұрын
Please do the full story
@RyosProduction2611 сағат бұрын
Kinda hard to do since the author is still in the middle of writing the story, and it isn't going to be short
@cetonja3240Күн бұрын
This is awsome
@christopherhass9173Күн бұрын
More please from CHRISHASS.
@arc042whatif5Күн бұрын
Okay honestly I can't wait until part 2 come out because I had seen this before but I can't find it
@tommahar5702 күн бұрын
Can't wait for part 3
@JoseRivera-pj5dp2 күн бұрын
Part 3 please
@JaakoppM-u4y2 күн бұрын
Here is a new series what if Naruto was in acceleracers but do your homework first to be safe then write a story.
@JaakoppM-u4y2 күн бұрын
And put him on the teku street racing gang and put him the twin brother of nolo or vert
@shadowfoxy74252 күн бұрын
Looking promising so far.
@shadowfoxy74252 күн бұрын
Don’t give Emo king the force.. hate uchia poster boy of civilian council.
@grimvexx2 күн бұрын
AWESOME WORK! MORE PARTS OF THIS SERIES PLEASE!
@grimvexx3 күн бұрын
AWESOME WORK! MORE PARTS OF THIS SERIES PLEASE!
@willshappley99353 күн бұрын
Great story please give part 3. Keep up the great work!
@assassingodking44783 күн бұрын
Next part plz❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
@wilbertjasonswarts60613 күн бұрын
Please make more 2,3,4 make more
@trevlongervais72353 күн бұрын
Part 2 plz ❤❤❤❤❤
@angeldavidcolon93633 күн бұрын
Unfortunately this story is abandoned lasted updated back in 2017
@laughingcoffinkingofdarkne30854 күн бұрын
36:29
@dragonkingdom954 күн бұрын
Part 2 asap, please
@deshawntidmore28434 күн бұрын
Please make part 3.🙏
@deshawntidmore28434 күн бұрын
Please make part 3.🙏
@user-sv5tj1og9r4 күн бұрын
Please make part three and part four if you can
@cullenwalsh97334 күн бұрын
Unless the fanfiction pacifically says it will involve something like god's like with the Percy Jackson verse which has clear god's whenever they include a god call kammy or the other two or five guess what that turns the fan fixing into godly awful s***
@beauhackett994 күн бұрын
Part 2🙏🙏🙏
@grimvexx4 күн бұрын
AWESOME WORK! MORE PARTS OF THIS SERIES PLEASE!
@grimvexx4 күн бұрын
AWESOME WORK! MORE PARTS OF THIS SERIES PLEASE!
@ashleymurphy78704 күн бұрын
Part 2 please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
@icyreality90994 күн бұрын
Next part please
@JoseRivera-pj5dp4 күн бұрын
Part two please
@coreyshell92804 күн бұрын
This is really awesome episode of part 1 of naruto malestorm 💣💥💥💥👍please make part 2,and 3 it's really amazing please make part 2,and 3🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍
@user-pd6bi6nv9y4 күн бұрын
Part 2 please
@user-no1jo8rh5e4 күн бұрын
I cannot wait for part 2 of what if Naruto trained as a Jedi and became malestorm
@Jay89-de7cf4 күн бұрын
Part 2 please 🙏🏻
@spencersproul9954 күн бұрын
We can’t wait for the next part of this video please