Thanks for the feedback! Is there anything I can do to help improve my speech?

@@Itsamanman I feel like you shouldn't be so nervous or trying to force yourself to be more than you really are, most times it usually results in detriment. I find like a genuine personality and being yourself is usually the best, whoever enjoys who you really are, will stick by your side. That advice comes with the bonus of being much less emotionally exhausting for you. Keep going man, as someone who always wanted to do what you're doing but never had the guts due to self-esteem, i admire you.

@@pedroslim2 Thanks man, I appreciate it!

@@Itsamanman if i could put in my two cents, just slow down a bit. even if you continue talking at the rate you do, it's a bit more digestible when it isn't given all at once. Again this is just my 2 cents as a non content creator. also maybe make game audio and your voice volume a little more balanced, the bass is a little much compared to your voice. While you do seem anxious, it isn't something to be ashamed about. I like essay videos that are just yappin upon yappin, so it's kinda nice to have an active speaker during a horror game.

even just a second or 2 can help you make your words fit better with your content. give yourself a second to think. I.E. saying journal/homework/*or anything school related* instead of thingy, your reaction to the enemy in this video could be more like "what the hell is that eldritch thing." which while isn't as in line with the snappy witty persona you seem to be trying to fit into. but it stops it from taking the viewer out of it when you are putting yourself on the spot. Again, not a content creator. and i tend to do a similar thing when i play scary games with friends, so i get that it's a bit of a hard habit to break. acting brave or witty when cornered or alone. again you can just ignore this and lean into it, making success from being campy like hit video game resident evil 4. (original).

that's true tought