Hi! Please could I get some feedback on this, I know I need to improve but I am unsure on what to improve on. Mary Shelley presents the narrator's disorientated and disturbed feeling about the creature through a variety of language and structure devices. He exclaims "I had selected his features as beautiful. Beautiful! ". The repetition of the emotive adjective "beautiful" demonstrates his disbelief over how he had calculated on something that should have been perfect, but was wrong, which brought him distraught. This impacts the reader, as the reader would think that the narrator was mocking the creature's looks, evoking a sense of sympathy for the creature in the reader, and a dislike for the narrator. The reader can also see the narrator is completely horrified by the minor exclamatory "Great God!". The exclamation mark demonstrates the narrators shock and disturbance, in addition to the idea that the narrator uses the noun "God", as if he felt like he needed to be saved by God after looking at the creature, clearly demonstrating his disturbed feelings.
@missadamsteaches...15 сағат бұрын
This is great but watch your topic sentence. Avoid generalised ‘through a variety of language and structure devices.’ Aim to be more specific. Watch clunky expression - ‘brought him distraught.’ Otherwise, it’s excellent.
@homesickbywavetoearth3 күн бұрын
thank you🙂
@qt.813 күн бұрын
This is very useful. Thanks!
@xLeafy_y6 күн бұрын
Hi Miss! I just came to say thank you so much for all your help. Your videos were so useful and I managed to get an 8 in lang and a 9 in lit - very happy about this! :)
@missadamsteaches...15 сағат бұрын
Congratulations! That’s amazing news. So pleased to have helped. Thanks for letting me know! ☺️
@al3xandra2226 күн бұрын
Heya Miss Adams! I just have to say the biggest thank you ever for the help you provided me with this year. I got an 8 in language and 9 in lit and could not have done it without you. Thanks so much 💞💞💞
@missadamsteaches...15 сағат бұрын
Congratulations!! That’s amazing news. Massive well done and thanks for taking the time to get in touch! ☺️
@enayamajid85647 күн бұрын
Can you explain how do I find implicit and explicit meanings, of words
@missadamsteaches...15 сағат бұрын
When something is explicit you are being told information directly. When there is an implicit meaning you are using your skills of inference - looking at what else you learn from the word choices that isn’t given to you obviously. A good way of looking at this is to look at the connotations of a word - what you associate with them. Hope that helps.
@dinushlinganathan230211 күн бұрын
Hi, do you know what questions came up in the end? Also, do you know where i can find flashcards/ notes for romeo and juliet and an inspector calls (for the Edexcel IGCSE exam) since everything i find is for the gcse equivalent. Thanks!
@Rose-ry9vy12 күн бұрын
Your videos are going to save me for my finals, Thanks so much!! I hope there are more english past papers walkthrough videos for CIE in the future. I would really appreciate that :)
@missadamsteaches...15 сағат бұрын
Am planning on doing a walk and talk before the October exams so keep a look out. Glad you’re finding them useful! ☺️
@Rose-ry9vy15 сағат бұрын
@@missadamsteaches... Thank you !! 💗
@btnmondial12 күн бұрын
I am a parent looking for resources for my daughter .. This is a good one.
@saherki14 күн бұрын
Thank you. This is helpful!!
@AnyaL0V318 күн бұрын
How does sicence link with utterson are you talking about lanyon
@amarachiat693419 күн бұрын
These videos help me so much, I really appreciate it :)
@user-cn1so2bq3y19 күн бұрын
Thank you so much for your content 😊 I'm studying for my GCSE, as a mature student.
@missadamsteaches...15 сағат бұрын
Glad you’re finding it useful!
@seanmulvaney231921 күн бұрын
Thank you Miss Adams. I enjoyed and appreciated your insights on a poem and poet that has grabbed my interest. I'm a Yank, and as such I am feeling a bit lost with only the line: " no whit less still and lonely fair than the high cloudlets in the sky". I understand the phrase "no whit less" to roughly mean, "couldn't care less", but I am only grasping at this lines meaning in the context of this poem. Any help would be greatly appreciated. I both want to / don't want to visit Adlestrop, knowing how things change. Thank you, Sean
@manishdamagatla4272Ай бұрын
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@ravyna27Ай бұрын
hi Ms Adams regarding the Paper2 Q1 i wanted to ask you some questions . Well your videos are great help
@Laura-yn7unАй бұрын
Great video but the audio quality is a bit distracting
@user-kc7wh8im7mАй бұрын
Bravo , you are doing well, and l'm improving my english language
@RelzFNАй бұрын
Thank you so much for doing videos like these. I don't even studying the great Gatsby (perhaps at a-level) in school but I actually realised its enjoyable and interesting to read books, so purely out of interest I am reading this book and watching your videos along, they help a lot so thank you! Also, when I was studying for my GCSEs a few months ago I watched your videos for help and my exams went really well so thank you, Im aiming to do English lit at A-level.
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
This message makes me beam! Thank you so much. I hope you love the book! Good luck with A levels next year - I’m sure you’ll love the course. ☺️
@sameemafarveen88802 ай бұрын
very good
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
Glad it was useful!
@Mary-LouiseSlupek2 ай бұрын
Excellent, helped me prepare my lesson
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
So pleased it was useful! 😊
@user-cl6zc3zu6j2 ай бұрын
Wow thanks so much What a wise woman
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
Thank you so much! 😊
@sankaranarayanan9012 ай бұрын
19-06-2024 a poison tree- william blake - thanks mam
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
You’re very welcome!
@IssaHanse2 ай бұрын
Thanks
@maryamaurangzaib71762 ай бұрын
What does stigma mean in this sentence 11:46
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
It means when there’s a sense of shame surrounding something. So in this case it means doctors often feel ashamed or embarrassed to ask for help. Hope that helps.
@maryamaurangzaib7176Ай бұрын
@@missadamsteaches... thank you so much 💕
@yoohoo13922 ай бұрын
Thank you for your services. It was highly appreciated❤
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
You’re very welcome. Hope the exams went well.
@RazorFlash12 ай бұрын
Hi I’m wondering do we have to use all 3 language, structure and form.For example, is it fine if I don’t use form?
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
Just try and get a good balance. If you miss form but have plenty of language and structure you should still be good.
@animals_are_cool2 ай бұрын
This video was so useful!! Your smile is so wholesome btw :)
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
Thank you! 😊
@yahyael-tawil63592 ай бұрын
What does "you must suffer me to go my own dark way", actually mean regarding the context in chapter 6?
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
It means that Jekyll wants Utterson to leave him to his path, even though it’s one of darkness and difficulty. He’s essentially asking Utterson to let him get on with his own problems. Does that make sense?
@sAYOOJ-ju5gg2 ай бұрын
This poem is in my portion, I serched for the video for piano poem and i found this video and is absolutely the best explanation
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
So pleased you found it useful. I love this poem!
@simranpatel31092 ай бұрын
What was his reasoning behind writing this poem?
@auroragoryalice2 ай бұрын
hi miss adams! i just sat the paper and i thought it went pretty okay ^_^ much better than paper one for sure. i couldn't have done it without you though so tysm for everything!!!
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
I’m so pleased it went well! Thank you for the lovely message! 😊
@oatmilk-pp8cv2 ай бұрын
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH I REALLY NEEDED THIS!!!!
@missadamsteaches...Ай бұрын
Glad it helped!! X
@auroragoryalice2 ай бұрын
what showed up on last year's paper?
@oatmilk-pp8cv2 ай бұрын
what topic are you doing??
@auroragoryalice2 ай бұрын
@@oatmilk-pp8cv society and the individual
@oatmilk-pp8cv2 ай бұрын
@@auroragoryalice oh damn if it was encounters i could've helped you sorry man😭
@auroragoryalice2 ай бұрын
@@oatmilk-pp8cv ahh no worries!! i appreciate it anyway. good luck tomorrow!
@floppitidy2 ай бұрын
miss one of the extracts was from the bbc show this is going to hurt it was okay
@flameedits64882 ай бұрын
thank you
@haydenthebigbrain43452 ай бұрын
I failed I ran out of time I only answered the first two questions and the last one I give up man
@Danielgoofyahh2 ай бұрын
cooked
@ohoh7982 ай бұрын
paper 2? I sit it tomorrow what questions were on it? and what texts do you do?
@haydenthebigbrain43452 ай бұрын
@@ohoh798 are you edexcel?
@ohoh7982 ай бұрын
@@haydenthebigbrain4345 yes
@bissol12 ай бұрын
Just finished, many thanks for all the help over the last 2 years miss ♥
@InnyDelphi2 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! Very helpful for someone on a part time, time table.
@InnyDelphi2 ай бұрын
Great video as always, very helpful! Thank you!
@InnyDelphi2 ай бұрын
great video, very helpful. thank you!
@aaliyah11622 ай бұрын
Is it just me or does the video sound get cut a few times
@ilovetoeatwa31512 ай бұрын
Thank u soo much ur the only edexcel teacher i can find online. Thank you for helping me for all of my exams. I love your videos and keep up with the good work <3 Im just quickly reviewing what to do so i dont get confused. Wishing any other yr 11 a good luck💕💕💕💕
@missadamsteaches...2 ай бұрын
Massive good luck to you!!! 😀
@kenmakozume9482 ай бұрын
your videos are life saving tysmmm
@missadamsteaches...2 ай бұрын
Thank you!! Best of luck this morning! 🤞
@Orphanss2 ай бұрын
thank you so much going into my board exam in 5 mroe hours and this had been very helpful
@missadamsteaches...2 ай бұрын
Good luck! I hope you got some sleep!
@lalalal-oi1zb2 ай бұрын
This is the best revision resource ive found for paper 2 im surprised youre nit more well known