Your channel is my go-to when I need a pick-me-up. Thank you for that!
@bernardosantiago9615Күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing my story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, despite the subtitles being a bit confused and some of the naming issues :) This encompasses 3 chapters of a story and I have posted the fourth chapter a few hours ago :) Once again, thank you for sharing my story! Cheers, Noobosawr aka u/ Huge-Animal-8818
Hot DAMN! The aliens removed that damn anchor from our necks! No more UN! Now we can get on with some REAL progress!
@edhenderson16552 күн бұрын
Oh my....that's a cliff-hanger if I ever heard one! Please, part 2...
@edhenderson16552 күн бұрын
The thumbnail picture doesn't even make sense. He needs to wear an environmental space suit which maintains proper air pressure and breathable air, and yet he can just open the suit by dropping his pants to use a toilet.
@noahkleugh93232 күн бұрын
More!
@malcolmanderson67352 күн бұрын
This is not a good story. The AI narration didn't help, but the story is disjointed and random.
@bernardosantiago9615Күн бұрын
I'm the author. How would you improve it? All inputs are valid as long as they're constructive. Where did you feel it was disjointed?
@XpaceTrue11 сағат бұрын
@@bernardosantiago9615 I'm glad to see a creator engage with feedback like this. And I applaud your attitude about constructive feedback. Personally, I thought the story was pretty good. I did *not* find it disjointed or random. It was fine - certainly better than most HFY sci-fi videos I've heard. Though, I was disappointed in the way this ended on a cliffhanger like that when there's not even a hint of more. Is there a part 2?
@bernardosantiago961511 сағат бұрын
@@XpaceTrue this video encompassed three chapters. There's a fourth chapter posted and I am currently in the process of writting a fifth :)
@viperhyrda62212 күн бұрын
This is the largest mess of a rebellion I've ever heard.
@murphymmc2 күн бұрын
Expecting the UN to be effective🤣🤣, now or any time.
@user-og1ux8nr3i16 сағат бұрын
The UN is ineffective due to some countries having veto power.
@markfergerson21452 күн бұрын
The Senate and People of Terra, eh? Pax Humana is here, like it or not.
@simens6662 күн бұрын
Where is ending???? 😢😢😢😢 garbag3....
@larrythompson86302 күн бұрын
Now to find part 2
@lkuhhdsfgasdgvdadfg2 күн бұрын
Ok... this story was boring...
@Sihgilanu2 күн бұрын
why... why are they all clones
@vin53162 күн бұрын
This is crap
@Laodell3 күн бұрын
uhm, no, we wont. Success is the best revenge. Time and energy is wasted on revenge.
@sekarmaltum16952 күн бұрын
how spineless and delusional of you. ~prosperity and forgiveness can be considered AFTER examples were made and the offending parties ruined for any stretch of the future.
@basicarduinoprograming73492 күн бұрын
You're just a wuss. Of course we'd take revenge
@PCJustice7015 сағат бұрын
Someone hasn’t studied game theory. There’s a reason why so many plants and animals are poisonous, instead of altruistically giving up their flesh to their attackers.
@XpaceTrue11 сағат бұрын
The title is misleading. The human response was *not* about revenge, per se. It was dealing with a *threat* - a species that, as a whole, regarded any life other than their own as inferior and not worth consideration. The rest of the galaxy was wary of the K'krai and condemned them for their heartless behavior. If humans did *nothing,* then you *know* the ruthless K'krai would've just continued their expansionism and spread more destruction and misery.
@XpaceTrue11 сағат бұрын
@@PCJustice70 Indeed. If humanity did nothing, they'd be considered weak and quickly attacked again. I'm reminded of the most famous problem in game theory, the Prisoner's Dilemma. Computer simulations prove that cooperation pays, even among rivals, but it does risk being taken advantage of. The winning strategy for the Prisoner's Dilemma was clear: Be nice and somewhat forgiving, but don't be a pushover.
@fanfight3 күн бұрын
16:56-16:58 -> "Humans would describe him as a sexy green orc" 18:41-18:50 + 18:55-18:59 + 19:01-19:02 -> *coff coff* Well,I have to disagree with that... *smirk*
@suzettewilliams17583 күн бұрын
A goid story, however, the trouble with the AI reading is that there is no change in tone or pause for a new chapter. So, there is no difference when the narrator of story changes. Is there a party two.
@theamiralgarner3 күн бұрын
Also 2 thing cadet: don't hurt their kids and do not touch their boat
@EdwinJohnson-xk3bq3 күн бұрын
As a human i can verify the thumb nail is true because if we do kill or eat it were gunna fuck it
@zeztox3 күн бұрын
no thumbnail
@tamop3 күн бұрын
Man, this story is so poorely written. Like - how these aliens got to the human armory? Was this armory built alone in the middle of somewhere instead of the protected human's territory? How the shooting guard killed only 2 attackers while they were armed with stabbing weapons? And so on and so on.
@johneuard47253 күн бұрын
it like this it is different and very interesting more please
@davidrains39183 күн бұрын
I enjoyed the story but the subtitles…not so much.
The story concept is good, but it seems like it may have been written by generative AI. Which, if the case, is disappointing.
@EngletrollКүн бұрын
No Ai was involved in the writing, just not a native English speaker and rushed worked.
@sirbum19184 күн бұрын
What the....
@BussyBoyBonanza4 күн бұрын
They only offered the two things humans hate most. Taxes and being told who they can't fuck
@LisaApril4 күн бұрын
Best writing of all the Syfy channels.
@SHAINON1174 күн бұрын
Amazing work thankyou and just think our ai will be like us just way way more scary hehe ❤ AI and humans most definitely will be the rulers of the universe soon enough
@cambobaginds92745 күн бұрын
Good one
@revendax25845 күн бұрын
Im just here to say that the title of this video just flat out implies rape and may not be what youre actually presenting but I dont really want to bother watching this if it does have rape....
@MichaelWinter-ss6lx5 күн бұрын
Dozens? Wow, lets try: Humans, Monkeys, - dozens Elephants, Cats, - dozens Beaver, Dolphins, Octopuss, Whales, - dozens Kuttlfish, Koi, (?) Raven, Magpie, Parrots, - dozens Parakeet, - dozens Birds in general have much more going on under the hood. I have no data from the predatory birds(!) and it also is somewhat unclear how to define sentience. Even small animals, and not only birds, show that individuals have their own distinct characters. We'd surely be in for big surprize, if we could translate brainwave scans. A masterpiece of SciFi I have read is from Stanislav Lem. The two explorers find the planet of the perfect race. They all lay around on the beach, losing limbs and doing nothing. The two try to contact them, get thrown out to space, and come back again. So the perfect people give in. "You are perfect and can accomplish any- & everything; you must help the galaxy." "We tryed that, many times. Effortless." "But you must! We will help you." "Sigh. All we can do is give you this powder. It makes sentient beings empathic, but use with caution." Well, the two end up on Earth. After some trouble, the empathy powder ends up in the water supply, in a much too high dose... If you ever find this story, now is the time to sit down before continuing. I don't remember its title. Should be in Robot Stories? Without spoiler, it is a master piece. If you like to laugh, you must find it. 🚀🏴☠️🎸
@GrigoriZhukov5 күн бұрын
Alien prudes, wait until they find out the perves dolphins are.