That is a common comment I get from people and it is understandable. I am trying to work on making my sets more realistic.

Thanks for the kind words, friend. As for the carbine, that particular carbine is the variant seen in Halo 5 called the "Blood of Suban" which fires needler rounds.

@@vraptorhiss my mistake good sir.

Lucky for you, that's my focus.

I'm not entirely sure.

There's a reason for him being there 😉 in due time you'll see. Thank you!

Hm?

I wanna say thank you for taking the time to actually inform me of what you did or did not really like as well as any flaws with it. I will definitely use this for future reference when making animations. I may be able to explain some of the flaws a bit, though it doesn't excuse them but regardless I'd still like to tell you. I get the comment about the clay a lot haha. It really does look like caramel, peanut butter, and yes even wax. I have nothing really to say for that because I honestly that it was darker when I bought it, but it was a surprise. The overall look and feel is oil, but that's a given seeing that it is oil based clay. The character movements were definitely the hard part to master and where I tried in other parts I did have trouble with other parts. Some parts were simply because I was being lazy with it because I was getting a little burnt out for the day. Throughout the animation, as far as I'm aware, you can definitely tell some parts are better because I was worn out for the day. The elites jumping over the wall was annoying in production because I originally had more framed but it looked really fast and I scrapped them, which ended up appearing worse than before. Working on various fast paced figures is something I do plan on working on in the future so thank you for providing feedback for it so I know what to look for while the film is in production. The audio was very tricky too. I'm not sure why the grunt's voice clips, though my suspicion is that it's because I actually had the sound in the stop motion apparently rather than post production so something happened when it saved or something. It may very well be the app. I do see that the voices for one elite, if not both, can be a little quiet which I did not plan. It may have to do with the fact I added in music after editing the scene as a whole so when the score was added it was a sacrifice of the dialogue audio or music audio and I made the sacrifice of dialogue which probably wasn't the wisest if decisions making this. I am very glad you like the voice acting though! You can thank not only ender, but the other brilliant people for having good sense of tone. Going into the story, I didn't think about the fact that this looks very odd to an outsider of halo lore because you have alien on alien fighting when your more accustomed to human on alien fighting. I will admit that it is my fault it is unclear without prior context to the games and I relied too much on that prior knowledge so my apologies 😅. The skirmisher (which is in fact a type of jackal called the T'vaoan) did have issues. The subtitles were definitely the trickster because I didn't want the text going on longer than the audio because it takes away from the overall pacing of it. I will admit that the subtitles are quite quick and I didn't take that into account very well when I was editing and I suppose when I put them in I assumed it was good enough. I did not think about the fact that I know what the subtitles say prior to them appearing so I know what to expect when it speaks. The audience doesn't though. I tried to make it simple without it being blatantly obvious what was happening. Like you said, 10 minutes only gets you so far. If I had a longer length I would have definitely fleshed it out more so it's more of a thought provoker. Like I said, I'm not brushing off the flaws and justifying them. I just figured I'd shed some light on them so you can see why things are how they are. I'm glad you enjoyed it overall and I really do appreciate you taking the time to comment this so I can improve. It really does go a long way. I hope to see you in the comments of future films.

¡Gracias! Me alegra que te haya gustado la perspectiva de las espadas en lugar de la unsc. Habrá más pronto, así que estad atentos. Confía en mí, ¡con tiempo y determinación te volverás genial en stop motion! Perdón si el español no tiene ningún sentido, tuve que usar el traductor de Google jaja.

I got them off of a guy on ebay who goes by the name of K11mall. It's about 5 bucks for 5 pulse carbines + about 3 for shipping since he's out in China.

@@vraptorhiss Ah, I got it. I'll bet it's just an unpainted version of the one that comes with Spartan Agryna.

@@CloneCommanderCrater1102 most likely.

Thank you for addressing the sound issues and I am aware it is flawed. I did try and balance it but I either sacrificed the music volume or dialogue volume so it was a lose lose situation. I'm glad you liked the animation and the story, I wanna thank you for cluing me in on halo lore regarding sanghelios.

@@vraptorhiss I'm happy to help