AFTER APPLE-PICKING ANNOTATIONS L. 7. Essence of winter sleep-the environment is full of the intoxicating scent of apples. L. 9. I cannot rub the strangeness from my sight-as the apple-picker begins to drowse away, the familiar and the common begins to assume the dimensions of unfamiliarity and strangeness. He cannot rub or wipe off this film of strangeness from his eyes. L. 11. I skimmed this morning from the drinking trough--the ice which he had collected in the morning from the surface of drinking water in a trough, which is a long narrow vessel for watering animals. L. 12. Hoary grass-grass covered with frost or snow. In his drowsy haze, things appear new, strange and unfamiliar as they had appeared to him when he looked at them through the ice he had collected that morning. L. 20. Fleck of russet- every bit or spot of reddish brown colour on the apples. L. 21. Instep arch-the prominent upper part of the human foot near its junction with the leg. L. 34. Spiked with stubble--pierced or bruised with some stubble, still standing in the field. L. 38. Whatever sleep it is-a touch of mystery is imparted to the entire aura. The apple-picker is not sure whether his sleep is the ordinary sleep of human beings, or the long winter hibernation of creatures of nature like the woodchuck. (B) EXPLANATIONS WITH CRITICAL COMMENTS L1. 1-5 My long....some bough-The dramatic setting and initial commitment in tone is remarkable. “Pre-sleep and sleepy reminiscence of the day, condition all that is said and the speaker's first words show what form his dreamy talk will take.". L. 6. But I am....apple-picking now-The apple-picker is thoroughly tired and bored with apple picking. Fatigue and boredom gas he decides that he will have nothing to do with apple-picking. L. 7. Essence of winter sleep-The entire atmosphere is laden with sleepiness. L. 18. Magnified apples-Though the apple-picker is seeing the apples against the sky with daylight accuracy and clarity, they appear to be magnified and enlarged. For him, they stand out as symbols for great dream like spheres. L. 19. Stem end and blossom end-This repetitious way of describing the apples over and over again helps in blurring the precise details and giving the whole set up a metaphoric dimension. L. 30. There were....to touch- This line instantly brings to mind the line in The Daffodils- 'Ten thousand saw I at a glance.' L. 40-41. The wood chuck......long sleep-This is the closing metaphor of the poem, and as such, it adds to the strangeness of 'winter sleep' by bringing in the non-human death-like sleep of hibernation. L. 42. Or just some human sleep-“The poem is absorbed with states between not only of winter sleep, but of all similar areas where real and unreal appear and disappear. After Apple-Picking illustrates exactly Santayana's remark, that the artist is a person consenting to dream of reality. The consent in this instance is implied in the perfection of the form." EXPLANATIONS WITH REFERENCE TO CONTEXT L. 7-12. Essence of winter....hoary grass-- In these lines there is a very fine and vivid description of the atmosphere in the orchard. This description by the apple-picker gives us the very touch, the very feel of the atmosphere in the orchard. This description is sensuous and becomes alive because the words he chooses are just apt for the description and create an impression of drowsiness. Untermeyer rightly comments that it is a vivid memory of experience that the reader absorbs it physically. I feel it is not a memory of an experience it is much more-in this description the apple-picker is reliving the experience. The smell of the apples is too overpowering for him. He also senses the quaintness of the world as it appears to the exhausted worker. The scent of apples in this poem reminds us of a similar expression "drowsed with the fume of poppies" in Keats's Ode to Autumn. The apple-picker feels himself pervaded with an oppressive feeling of drowsiness. Here again we can trace a similarity between this drowsy sleepiness and the drowsy numbness of Keats' Ode to Autumn. The entire landscape and the atmosphere around him assumes a mysterious halo and is misted by over with a rare quality of strangeness. These qualities transform the scene completely and the apple-picker can neither get rid of quality nor can he comprehend the transformed world. As he unknowingly steps into the realms of this world of sleepiness the narrative of the about the ice skimmed from the trough mingles gradually with the dream the time references of the tenses become fused and confused. Brown comments on the rhythm and images of the poem. "The meaning implied by the self-hypnosis and dreamy confusion on rhythm is finely suggested in the image of the world of 'hoary grass' the morning that anticipates the night vision. This blurring of experience focuses in the central metaphor of the poem, essence of winter sleep. Essence is both the abstract ultimate nature of sleep and the physical smell, the scent of apples a metaphysical image in T.S. Eliot's sense of the term. Fragrance and sleep blend, and sight and touch merge in. “I cannot rub the strangeness from my sight." L1. 37-38. One can....sleep it is--"In these lines tone and rhythm work together beautifully, implying a great deal in relation to Frost's metaphor. The slight elevation of "One can see" recalls the more mysterious seeing of the morning just as the almost banal lyricism of "This sleep of mine" sustains the rhythm of dream-confusion. The rest of second line barely iambic, barely rhyming, casual and rough, assures us that the speaker has at least one toe in reality"
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@tiagokondageski-ingles4 жыл бұрын
thank you very much. It was very clarifying.
@sofiamonturiol58214 жыл бұрын
Really good analysis, thank you very much!!
@ndavidson3194 жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it!
@ankkonadas75074 жыл бұрын
Can you please provide me the pdf of this notes..?I really need it.
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Ankkona Das hi, if you send me your email I most definitely can!
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@@ndavidson319 [email protected] This is my email..Pls send the PDF...Thanks in advance🙏🙏🙏
@annahereford30294 жыл бұрын
Please do the tuft of flowers
@shaimahmood88904 жыл бұрын
Please please upload more on T.s Eliot waste land , Shelley , and Keats odds
@shaimahmood88904 жыл бұрын
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@shaimahmood88904 жыл бұрын
Gorgeous explanation
@raisa_cherry334 жыл бұрын
So helpful,thank you dear ❤❤😍
@mollymilliken30534 жыл бұрын
Can you do a video for section A? 😃
@nasirhussain66264 жыл бұрын
Very informative.
@sebastianw6144 жыл бұрын
good job, thanks
@niallohare22965 жыл бұрын
Thanks you very much for uploading lots of the AS Spec poems! They really helped me out this year and in the exam! Any chance you could start doing videos on the A2 William Blake set of poems please?
@bestie66675 жыл бұрын
The way my teacher didn't teach me you saved me omg
@aineatchison2885 жыл бұрын
Please do gathering leaves 💕💕
@harrisonb61045 жыл бұрын
wish I had one of those cheat sheets
@laurence97495 жыл бұрын
Could you post a sheet techniques on how the writer engages the reader
@laurence97495 жыл бұрын
Where can I find the cheat sheet?
@tuttifruityfrankie95445 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much I am repeating and your videos have really helped me as some poems have less online than others!
@harrisonb61045 жыл бұрын
this saved me a lot of time, thank you.
@princeyaz87725 жыл бұрын
Brilliant anlaysis. Could you please do a passage analysis of Tennesse William Sweet bird of youth and Twelfth Night.
@snoopdoggyloleg5 жыл бұрын
Please do Gathering Leaves!!
@paradisegirl99695 жыл бұрын
God bless you!! You have no idea how much you have helped me. Thank you soo much!
@ndavidson3195 жыл бұрын
Four 5 line stanzas... not quatrains... excuse my silliness!
@shaistakanwal77505 жыл бұрын
Good
@hollymccrea26635 жыл бұрын
Do you have this written down?
@ayushdarokar76755 жыл бұрын
👏
@jamiemcconnell88645 жыл бұрын
do you work in RSA
@ndavidson3195 жыл бұрын
Jamie Mcconnell I do indeed, I made the videos for my English class but thought I’d share!
@abemelekadsh27085 жыл бұрын
Thank you it's very helpful.
@willthompson9255 жыл бұрын
resitting this in 2 days, this really helped, thanks
@gracemoore99965 жыл бұрын
loved this thanks for the help x
@ndavidson3195 жыл бұрын
Apologies for how many times I say “ermmm...” - not scripted - I just make it up as I go. 😊
@faatimahmaljee69025 жыл бұрын
Could you do a video of Robert Frosts "The Cow in Apple Time"?
@lameesshaath40925 жыл бұрын
is there a paper 1 video as well as this was so helpful
@ndavidson3195 жыл бұрын
Lamees Shaath there isn’t yet, but keep an eye out as I plan on making more!
@padmaisonaroll86135 жыл бұрын
Also, I got an A in AS English Lit and got into a top university for journalism! Thank you so so much! <3
@ndavidson3195 жыл бұрын
Padmaja.r renga aw that’s so great! ☺️ it’s most likely down to your own hard work though! Well done! ☺️
@makemelaugh7105 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for making this video, you quite literally saved my life :)
@ndavidson3195 жыл бұрын
MakeMeLaugh no problem ☺️ I’m glad you found it useful!
@n.saniya53826 жыл бұрын
Nice video
@Jade.H016 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for uploading this after my request. It is really really helpful 😁
@ndavidson3196 жыл бұрын
🦉No problem, sorry it took so long to make it - I thought I had made one but obviously just had the PowerPoint! ☺️
@Jade.H016 жыл бұрын
Hi I was just wondering could you do an analysis of mowing? Thank you
@ndavidson3196 жыл бұрын
Study Owl 1 Hi Study Owl, there should be one for each Frost and Heaney poem on the spec so that’s an oversight by me, sorry! I have a PowerPoint for it and I can do a voiceover analysis of that. Hope this helps!
@Jade.H016 жыл бұрын
N Davidson Thank you so much for replying! That would be very helpful if you have time and if you dont mind thank you! I find your analysis of poems so helpful and it really helps in my understanding of the poems and helps me achieve the top grades so thank you!
@padmaisonaroll86136 жыл бұрын
You are the reason why I am hopeful of getting A in AS literature. Nothing can express how grateful I am to you. I hope you have loads of success!
@ndavidson3196 жыл бұрын
Padmaja.r renga that is quite possibly the nicest comment that I have ever received! Thank you, I’m glad you find the videos useful (despite my waffly monotonous voice which always seems to get tongue tied). I hope you do well in your exams and that they’re not too stressful! ☺️
@padmaisonaroll86136 жыл бұрын
N Davidson oh you bet! I gave my exam today and I just had soooooo much to say. I’ll say it again! WOW! You made my life so much easier I enjoyed that 2 hours of my exam and I love Robert Frost so much! I am going to recommend your videos to the future CIE students who’ll be doing frost in the coming years. They’re going to love it!
@chloecam6 жыл бұрын
Hi! I was just wondering do you have any tips for Frankenstein/prose? I'm getting 40+ with poetry and Streetcar but I'm around 26-30 for Frankenstein! I've got my context in and about the structure of the novel, but I'm struggling with methods. I'd love any tips, these videos are great!
@ndavidson3196 жыл бұрын
ChloeCam - make sure you define any key terms in the question, engage with them throughout, Have topic sentences to clearly organise your work, mention the structure, narrative POV, tense, tone, symbolism and motifs as well as language devices and character! 😊 Examiners look for pieces that show a thorough understanding, so if you can set yourself apart from other candidates who will only look at character and some language!
@ndavidson3196 жыл бұрын
Oh, also: foreshadowing, pathetic fallacy, onomatopoeia and the heightened senses to build tension that’s synonymous with the gothic genre, don’t knock simpler techniques like adjectives, adverbs etc too! Hope this helps 😊
@chloecam6 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much I really appreciate it! 😊
@charliebruno28596 жыл бұрын
thank you for posting
@annaphuong32606 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for your time making this video. P.s: Who would dislike this video... really *Angry face*
@TheGGbond6 жыл бұрын
love your accent
@chloecam6 жыл бұрын
These are so helpful thank you so much! I've missed some school this year due to medical reasons so these are a life saver!
@ndavidson3196 жыл бұрын
ChloeCam glad they are of help, I hope you are feeling better now!
@ahmedatifabrar76986 жыл бұрын
Your pronunciation sounded a bit different but still sweet. Thanks for this!