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Timestamps:
0:00 - Intro
1:15 - Samwell
2:26 - SD12
4:26 - Jake
5:44 - Orcish Dad
7:31 - Josh
9:03 - Tommy
10:31 - Curtis
12:21 - Frai
14:30 - Minda
15:57 - Mads
18:34 - MoonShadowElf
20:34 - Jangal
22:23 - Ryol
23:28 - Ben
25:15 - Final Thoughts
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Пікірлер: 43

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

Vote here of the best opening line! (The winner & their team gets to pick a book that Richard and I must read) forms.gle/gJk1KRQiXPHKUcKm7

@justinsantilli719 Жыл бұрын

It looks like your patrons are fighting some demons😂

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

Reaching out to Curtis ASAP

@muhammedshibin621 Жыл бұрын

Here's Mine, The Man walked through the forest trampling the Trees-forsaken Leaves with a weird and distinct nostalgia that he really wanted to forget but he still really liked it and it reminded him of his old doings.

@arzabael Жыл бұрын

I’ve always loved this type of concept for novelist content. Ive been listening to first line frenzy for years, and am so happy to see you two supplying us with this kind of vid. You rock!!

@samm8190 Жыл бұрын

Richard hates Bens because it reminds him of The Name of the Wind. 😂😂😂

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

I think you nailed it

@excellent.side.characters Жыл бұрын

I was thinking the same thing 😅

@ajrv Жыл бұрын

You guys continually inspire me to keep writing my book. Thank you!

@harmennl21 Жыл бұрын

I love these podcast and this may have been my favourite so far. For at least half of these contributions I want to read the full book knowing full well it doesn't exist

@archifrai Жыл бұрын

Damn. Don’t know about you, guys, but my money is on Frai. Looks like the guy knows how to write intriguing stuff. Wish him all the best

@josh5h24 Жыл бұрын

The war between patrons has begun! Btw that Josh dude must be a poet🫣

@carlosandino5524 Жыл бұрын

Empire of Silence. The light of that murdered sun still burns me.

@carlosandino5524 Жыл бұрын

Best line: "We're putting this online now."

@justinsantilli719 Жыл бұрын

Great concept!

@sprague18 Жыл бұрын

That Jake guys is really good

@orcishdad8075 Жыл бұрын

Wow, that Orcish Dad guy is pretty cool. I bet his adorable orcish children would be supper disappointed if he didn't win...

@jovanivilla197 Жыл бұрын

Minda was very good!!!

@r1ngil746 Жыл бұрын

I think curtis' clears from pure imagery and why the fuck is he skinning himself and what is the membrane he can go through by freeing himself of his skin. But I personally think MoonShadowElf's might be better from a concept or idea standpoint, need to see more of both.

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

They did a great job

@Sbadoosh Жыл бұрын

Felt the urge to come up with a little story myself: "So long, old man" was the last thing John heard as the door closed shut. The dread set in instantly, as did the overpowering pain in his crushed legs. It will be a long and lonely summer after John's only twenty-third winter.

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

I like it. I love the last line. Simple and intriguing.

@matt9591 Жыл бұрын

Will you guys do this in the future? What patreon tier do I need to submit something? Thanks! Love the channel

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

We will do something like this again. The patron is only 1 tier, and you join our discord. Thanks for your interest and support.

@matt9591 Жыл бұрын

@@2ToRamble best booktubers out there imo

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

@@matt9591 dont make us blush you bastard!

@DarrenHuckey Жыл бұрын

Third one is very similar to how The Frugal Wizard opens.

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

Oo interesting

@katymessick4051 Жыл бұрын

Curtis needs to drop the book asap.

@davids128 Жыл бұрын

I will spam every video i can with the recommandation of the Will of the many !! Austin you need to read it. I know you will love this book

@samm8190 Жыл бұрын

I will read it if you vote for my submission. 😂😂😂 (Samwell)

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

Screenshotted this comment so that I remember 😁

@davids128 Жыл бұрын

@@samm8190 throw in that you will convert at least one more person to read it (Austin preferably) and its a deal. (also your section was actually pretty good so know that it's not complete bribery )

@emersonwright5390 Жыл бұрын

I never heard of the word viscous either

@2ToRamble Жыл бұрын

Im not alone!

@clermontknightrb Жыл бұрын

Lungs enflamed, I can no longer hold out and gasp for air as the salted water fills my throat like a broken dam. I see my kingdom burn above me through blurred reflections; hear the animalistic cries of my kin as acid meets flesh. My vision fades, and I sink deeper and deeper into the darkness.

@samm8190 Жыл бұрын

First comment. Suck it patrons. 😂