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hello everyone ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion. Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution. Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur. Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time. In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

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hello everyone ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion. Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution. Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur. Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time. In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

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Yes you should... Then in the conclusion, you have to indicate the one you chose. Also, remember not to add any point that wasn't added in the paragraph stated earlier under the conclusion.

I think you should say that I completely agree or disagree and state the reason

@@sandrachisom8656 Thank you veryyy much!!😊I have been mulling over this question for a long time but couldn't find an answer.Thank you again!

@@amnabutt5679Hello, as you have said I need to mention completely agree or disagree but what if, I partially agree or disagree with a statement?

Agree or disagree essay is much easy

Why are you face difficulty in it?

To what extent do you agree?

Can we partially agree and disagree?

@@sahilmirza6583i am facing difficulty in making my self clear through out the essay whether i agree or disagree

Gongrats, how you prepare for reading have you go through ielts books Cambridge, any advice

Yeah. Did you?

I preferred makkar readings rather than Cambridge

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@@PREET_in_CANADA bro, when it comes to writing, should I use phrases like, "on the other hand "or in conclusion"

I'm afraid I don't have a video on this topic planned, but we look into each essay type and how to answer them in our courses if you'd like to have a look

@@FasTrackIELTSThank You Mam ! I would love to!

Hello, could you help me my lesson of ielts speaking, I am writing from Mongolia, i've already booked my exam a month later 6 June of 2022, but i can't speak 😪

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Hey,congratulations how long did it take to prepare?

Hi! I'm so happy to hear you've passed your exam and my lessons helped you along the way. And thank you so much for your kind words. All the best with whatever you took this exam for!

What is your overall score

Hi Saeid! In this essay I followed this structure: BP1. Reason 1 + impact BP2. Reason 2 + impact You can also structure the essay the way you're suggesting, with all the reasons in one paragraph and the impact in the other. I've explained this in the video about this sample essay (linked in the PDF)

@@FasTrackIELTS Thank you Asiya for your clarification. Now I can understand your approach better. But I don't know why I feel that the essay is focused much more on the first question without fully elaborating on the impact of the problem on society. Even in the introduction, reasons are referred to, but there is nothing about "impact on society". I just wanted to share my understanding with you. Anyways, I've learned from your videos and again thank you for your valued efforts. I know what you're doing is not easy.