5 Ways to Write a Likeable Character: Hobie Brown

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Simeon Writes & Reviews

Simeon Writes & Reviews

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In this video I break down 5 things the Across the Spider-Verse writers did to make Hobie Brown such a popular, likeable character.

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@watermeloneo
@watermeloneo 11 ай бұрын
i love how they make us believe hobie will be a love rival against miles but do a complete 180 and make him a homie
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Me too! It was a great bit of writing that made every conversation between him and Miles funnier.
@Marcelius.
@Marcelius. 11 ай бұрын
homie hobie
@busebuse8968
@busebuse8968 10 ай бұрын
Opo
@busebuse8968
@busebuse8968 10 ай бұрын
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@busebuse8968
@busebuse8968 10 ай бұрын
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@whyisyoutubeshowinghandles
@whyisyoutubeshowinghandles 10 ай бұрын
I think my favorite thing about Hobie is that he doesn't talk down to Miles. Gwen and Peter B. mean well, but they(mostly Gwen) try to let him down easy by sugarcoating things or omitting details. Miguel never even gives Miles a chance and tries to decide what right and wrong should be for him. By contrast, Hobie simply gives Miles the puzzle pieces and stands off to the side, keeping an eye on the situation but trsuting he'll put them together when the time is right.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
That's a really insightful comment. You're right, Hobie's approach with Miles could actually be the most healthy.
@bloom418
@bloom418 10 ай бұрын
Thats why they homies
@freddman0135
@freddman0135 10 ай бұрын
"dont enlist until you know who you're fighting" -Hobie Brown, 2023? 2099? who knows
@eeveeofalltrades4780
@eeveeofalltrades4780 10 ай бұрын
Hobie has every reason and characteristic necessary to be a jerk and part of a love triangle, but he's not doing it because he doesn't conform to overused writing tropes.
@EmberAnimates
@EmberAnimates 10 ай бұрын
This comment wins
@dan_asd
@dan_asd 10 ай бұрын
Hobie doesnt believe in the mainstream
@parasocks1613
@parasocks1613 10 ай бұрын
Hahaha
@johnx140
@johnx140 10 ай бұрын
@@dan_asd LMAO
@HowdyPartnerNiceToSeeYou
@HowdyPartnerNiceToSeeYou 10 ай бұрын
I thought I left a comment that I forgot about when I saw the pfp
@basmalaalkhalaf1713
@basmalaalkhalaf1713 11 ай бұрын
i thought i would hate hobie's personality (i liked the way he looked lmao) but honestly he was so real. so actually punk as well, like it was great. great video btw
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Yeah, I completely get that. They executed it really well. Thanks for watching!
@premiumheadpats4150
@premiumheadpats4150 11 ай бұрын
Same. I didn't think I was going to like Hobie or Pav, but I really like both of them.
@TheNinjaRacoon
@TheNinjaRacoon 10 ай бұрын
Same, I was mostly excited to see Pav but to my surprise I really enjoyed his character
@AdidTurreno
@AdidTurreno 10 ай бұрын
His animation style gave me vertigo, but I loved him
@Indigo360
@Indigo360 10 ай бұрын
Fun Fact, the creator of Spiderpunk has very strong leftist beliefs like hobie does, his beliefs were toned down a bit for the movie, i def recomend reading his comics
@morganqorishchi8181
@morganqorishchi8181 10 ай бұрын
A tiny detail that I noticed on a rewatch: Hobie has blue shoelaces, something punks and related subcultures only put on when they've killed a police officer. Hobie doesn't deny it when Miguel all but states every Spider-Person has lost someone. Suddenly his decision to be on Miles' side from the very beginning gets recontextualized: he either killed his universe's equivalent mentor figure, couldn't save him and feels as if he might as well have killed the man, or killed a police officer while doing Spider-Punk duties. Hobie Brown has depths upon depths and the fact that we don't get to know 99% of them makes him infinitely more intriguing. As the audience you want to know about his world, how his dynamic is with the people there, and, once you notice them, you want an explanation for those shoelaces. Hobie lives in my head rent free at all times.
@stardancer119
@stardancer119 10 ай бұрын
Ooh, thanks for this detail!!
@thecookiemeister5374
@thecookiemeister5374 10 ай бұрын
Bold of you to assume Hobie would ever pay rent
@carimeslockdownedtree2654
@carimeslockdownedtree2654 10 ай бұрын
He did actually kill a political figure in his comics! I havent read them but that's what I've heard!
@tlayudaaa
@tlayudaaa 10 ай бұрын
​@@carimeslockdownedtree2654 he chopped off norman osborn's head in one of the comics for being an asshole and being a fascist dictator. it's been a while since ive read it
@pokaay3163
@pokaay3163 10 ай бұрын
thats awesome. the people who are making spiderverse are seriously so into the story and its characters and it shows
@ZetaNiGHT
@ZetaNiGHT 10 ай бұрын
I think a key aspect of what makes him so likeable that was possibly missed or glossed over in the video is how SUPPORTIVE he is of the other characters. He talks shit, and is assertive and confident in his beliefs, he encourages Miles to think for himself and consider all the angles but doesn't force it, and he doesn't actively put down or insult anyone (just kind of indirectly talking shit on Miguel haha), just questions their beliefs and their line of thinking. Just... what a cool mother fucker.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
I agree, I could definitely have done a section on how supportive Hobbie is, especially with Miles.
@louissemarguerettenavales1253
@louissemarguerettenavales1253 10 ай бұрын
Everything you said is so valid and real ⁉️⁉️
@lucasrichardson3434
@lucasrichardson3434 11 ай бұрын
Hobie is honestly like a big brother to Miles in a lot of ways
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Yeah, he really is. That's a nice way of looking at it.
@wren_.
@wren_. 10 ай бұрын
hobie’s the big brother, pav is the little brother, and miles is the middle child
@astrix_moon8334
@astrix_moon8334 10 ай бұрын
I also see him that way 😭
@nadiahapsari3359
@nadiahapsari3359 10 ай бұрын
​@@wren_.Yeah,I can see that too
@redditStoriesHSP
@redditStoriesHSP 11 ай бұрын
I started hating hobie the second he appeared, yet when the movie ended I loved him. Great character and great movie
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Absolutely 💯 %
@saulgoodmanKAZAKH
@saulgoodmanKAZAKH 11 ай бұрын
When he was introducing himself and politicising everything that was funny. Loved him right from then
@niggardosenpai
@niggardosenpai 11 ай бұрын
Chaotic Good characters are always PEAK. Just look at Luffy and Goku
@wajeehrizvi
@wajeehrizvi 11 ай бұрын
I loved him as soon as i saw him
@SelenaY.1331
@SelenaY.1331 10 ай бұрын
Why?
@Nana-yh2wp
@Nana-yh2wp 11 ай бұрын
Dude I honestly didn’t know about the stupid love triangle rumor until after I saw the movie. I really appreciate how they portrayed his character as an actual punk and ally to Miles. Obviously knew how Miguel (+ Spider Society) viewed miles and finding out the reason why he (Miles)wanted to join the society(cult) he became a supporter and defender. Though he’s still a kid himself, he looks out for the younger spider teens as well, for instance he let Gwen find shelter within his dimension because she was homeless and in a vulnerable position; both becoming friends due to their love of music, style and powers. He’s very playful and hyper with Pav, since he’s(Pav) the youngest, both have shared distaste for the British and are very kind & caring in their own ways. Great video, I really enjoyed it and I hope you get more views for this! Ps: I really hate how there are people in the spider verse fandom who mischaracterize Hobie as mean and uncaring and it’s like ? 🤨? Did we watch the same movie & see the same character? He’s far from that to like, infinity.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thanks so much! Loved your comments. I agree that Hobie is caring. It comes through in his actions more than in what he says, so maybe that's why sometimes people don't see it.
@CrazyWeridoRH
@CrazyWeridoRH 10 ай бұрын
What’s the drinking age in England because I thought Hobie was early 20’s or something.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
@@CrazyWeridoRH It's 18 here.
@day7163
@day7163 10 ай бұрын
Honestly I thought Hobie's personality would get on my nerves. It didn't thankfully and he was developed as a character much more than, "authority=bad." I don't know if I necessarily like him though. Just wasn't grating.
@johnx140
@johnx140 10 ай бұрын
Am i the only perv with a dirty mind that assumed Gwen and Hobbie fucked? Goddamn., thats what you supposed when a girl leaves her thoothbrosh in a mans house.
@arandomqueerfanpeep7655
@arandomqueerfanpeep7655 10 ай бұрын
I was a little nervous about Hobie, because he opened with jokes about punk stereotypes, and i was worried that was actually what the writers thought punk was Was very happy with him in the end, love him lots I should have had more trust
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
I get that. It was an easy thing to overdo or get wrong. I'm so impressed with how they played it.
@hkr0065
@hkr0065 10 ай бұрын
That, and I think we (as an audience) are still not sure how to trust mainstream animated movies. For decades, we've been fed cliche after cliche, and platitudes after platitude. When *this* guy shows up, our gut reaction is to think, "okay, this is clearly just some attempt to sound smart," but it turns out that he's actually legit. The writers took a character that most mainstream animated (or hell, live-action) movies would have ruined, and they actually made him true to his convictions. Legitimately, Hobie Brown would be ashamed to realize he's the star of a comic book. Based on how cliche mainstream animated movies have been out here, it's no wonder we thought, "Oh shit. Here we go."
@Sandstimes
@Sandstimes 10 ай бұрын
Fr, I love that they actually went all in and made him a Real punk. It's more than just an aesthetic or hating rules without purpose, people often mistake "punk" with not caring. Hobie is so refreshing because he Does care and that's exactly why he fights the establishment, he has purpose. the writers clearly did their research, maybe a few are punk themselves
@ishathakor
@ishathakor 10 ай бұрын
i LOVE that they used cockney rhyming slang. it adds so much personality so quickly
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Absolutely!
@foxywoxy1915
@foxywoxy1915 10 ай бұрын
And stuck to other interpretations which also shared the cockney accent
@kags9367
@kags9367 11 ай бұрын
Great video! Hobie is the best. He was warning Miles from the very start not to fully trust Spider Society, helped him with breaking Miguel's barrier, gave Gwen a place to stay after she was homeless, told Miles the only reason he was still in Spider Society was because he was looking out for his drummer (i.e. Gwen), and after everything went to shit he left her a watch :')) Though I will say I don't think Miles necessarily wants to be liked by all of Spider Society, I feel like what he told Hobie, he mainly wants a watch so he can see his friends.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thanks! That's a really good point. I agree, seeing his friends is the main driver for Miles. I feel like part of him wants to be accepted while Hobbie is trying to show him that it's more important he's true to himself.
@rowanistired5708
@rowanistired5708 10 ай бұрын
I really liked how he was a subversion of the “romantic rival” trope. During all the foreshadowing, you expected Hobie to be overly affectionate with Gwen and unnecessarily mean to Miles. But he wasn’t! He treated Gwen like a normal friend and even went out of his way to help Miles. He was set up to be a character you’re meant to hate by playing on cliches, but once he’s revealed, he’s just really cool and entertaining!
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
That's a really great point!
@tanya292
@tanya292 11 ай бұрын
I agree with others. I was like I hate this man coming between Miles and Gwen. And then he became my favourite character when he tried his best to help miles. I would die for him.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
What's interesting is that almost everyone doesn't want Hobie coming between Miles and Gwen. It's such a clever manoeuvre by the writers to position Hobie as the rival and then flip him to being a friend.
@foxywoxy1915
@foxywoxy1915 10 ай бұрын
@@simeonwritesLike your layers bit, they really have us make assumptions only to do a 180° and show us that we were wrong about the character, and that there’s more to it than just our original thought
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
@@foxywoxy1915 Thank you! It's really clever of them to recognise and play with our assumptions like that.
@sherlock___holmes
@sherlock___holmes 11 ай бұрын
when it comes to intellect, every spider is equally as intelligent as the next if not more intelligent, so logically hobie would be able to accomplish the same dimension warping technology with more or less equipment compared to miguel... i wonder if miguel has realised this? i feel like maybe hobie is a little bit smarter than miguel, not needing a streamlined workshop with perfect technology. plus, spiderpunk in his anti-establishment glory, realised that miles (and mayday to an extent) disprove the idea of canon events or anomalies and are in part utilising this to destabilise miguel's strict spider society
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Great comments. I think Miguel tends to underestimate the other spider people.
@Doctor4077
@Doctor4077 10 ай бұрын
"Hobie you're not helping." *"GOOD"* "Just for the record, I quit." Greatest Hobie moments right there.
@gardenshed6043
@gardenshed6043 10 ай бұрын
For me I also feel like there may have been a little personal bias because I’m from London. My friends and I speak like Hobie and we have similar senses of humour. He feels much more like a friend I might have IRL than the other Spider-Man. I think that might also be why I liked Pavitr. I have many more Indian friends than I do American friends. And since a lot of the spider people were American. Maybe that’s why I gravitated towards the English and Indian spidermen. Since I live in England and have a lot of English and Indian friends.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
It's great to hear Hobie feels like a friend you could have IRL. I'd say that means the writers did a great job.
@gardenshed6043
@gardenshed6043 10 ай бұрын
@@simeonwrites Yeah. But also personal bias due to geography. And you’ve gotta give props to the writers of Pavitr as well.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
@@gardenshed6043 absolutely!
@Carlton17277
@Carlton17277 11 ай бұрын
Hobie is like my top 5 favourite characters in this movie. When I first heard of him coming into the movie. I was like they are going to do another love triangle which would’ve made the movie a bit flawed. But I’m glad they didn’t and instead made him a brother type character to Miles and a genuine friend to Gwen. I like how he told miles use ur palms not just ur fingers and how to use his venom blast when he meets him. which helped Miles later on escape. And how he gives him respect and hyping him up for saving inspector Singh and the little girl. Hobie calling Gwen (Gwendy) and Miles (Peter Pan) just makes me laugh because he knows they love each other. And I like how he tends to make Miles jealous on the missions she has been on with him and leaving stuff at his place. Just to see if he indeed likes her which he does ofc. Him designing his own watch for Gwen while having a conversation with miles in Nueva York and giving advice to him that “ The whole point of being Spider-Man is ur independence and being ur own boss” which is amazing because that’s what miles does at the end by saying “I’m going to do my own thing.” Honestly, his a brother/friend we all want having ur back and giving advice that will help u later on when u need it the most. But also him helping gwen by designing a watch to go visit miles because he knows how miles would feel about her at the end. Just shows how much he cares about their relationship and how much he wants her to patch things up with miles. I’m done. What an amazing character with so much depth and layers.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Completely agree! You summed it up really well. 👌
@davidcheater4239
@davidcheater4239 10 ай бұрын
I completely disagree with what happened with the watch. It doesn't make sense that after throwing the Spider Society watch back at them when he quit that he would then build a watch for Gwen, dropping by her universe then... how would he get back to his own universe if he left the only outside watch with Gwen's father? I think he dropped off the watch for Gwen weeks or even months before. I think he's figured out the technology and is building a lot of watches - at least enough for Gwen to form a team of 8 or 9 Spiders + Miles. I think he's been planning, infiltrating, and undermining Miguel's operation for a long time.
@Carlton17277
@Carlton17277 10 ай бұрын
@@davidcheater4239 yeah, I think u bring good points about the watch. But remember everyone still has Miguel’s watch and he doesn’t know that many have joined Gwen’s band and we do see hobie picking up pieces while miles conversation with him. I do think he hates Miguel’s canon event theory and knew Gwen was going to be a liability with her feelings for miles. So I wouldn’t be surprised if he plan this from the start. And maybe he designed his own watch during his time in the spider society.
@user-vf8yr6hh1u
@user-vf8yr6hh1u 10 ай бұрын
I was worried Hobie would be a cliche dickhead love rival, but I was so shocked by how likeable he was. For once a character that others say is cool, and actually ends up being cool. Hobie's awesome.
@gerardwayyy4353
@gerardwayyy4353 10 ай бұрын
Hobie not being a love interest for Gwen was the right move for sure. He also guided both her and Miles, telling her that she may not have told miles enough about his place in all of this. He never shamed or scolded her outright but he was always looking out for Miles too.
@Blio_
@Blio_ 10 ай бұрын
I think he has a specific appeal to people on the left. Even if we aren’t exactly the *same* type of progressive we all know people like him, youthful and firey in the fight against authority. I found it kind of endearing.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
You're right. His passion and strong ideals are endearing. I'd be interested to know if there's a left/right split on Hobie.
@reubenax
@reubenax 10 ай бұрын
​@@simeonwritesNo split everyone loves him
@Monki-6969
@Monki-6969 10 ай бұрын
@@reubenax He es an anarquist of course everyone who believes in liberty loves him :)
@ObeyLucifer
@ObeyLucifer 10 ай бұрын
NO LITERALLY. Me and fellow leftists LOVE him on a small community channel here on youtube that posts lefist content everyday. It's awesome.
@marcusosborne6123
@marcusosborne6123 10 ай бұрын
“It’s a metaphor for capitalism.” If Hobie didn’t immediately become your favorite Spider-Man after that line, you’re a self-mythologizing, narcissistic autocrat
@Fayanora
@Fayanora 10 ай бұрын
I hate the implication that caring about other people isn't inherently a very punk thing to do. Honestly there's nothing more punk than caring about other people.
@evansbaguette
@evansbaguette 11 ай бұрын
I’m such a huge Hobie fan I love how they made him! But this is such a good video! This needs more views
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thank you! I'm already really pleased with how it's done and that people are enjoying it. :)
@Trashley652
@Trashley652 10 ай бұрын
I also love that Hobie doesn't just embody the aesthetics of punk, like we often see, but also the ideals. He's got the substance as well as the style, and we see him back that up with his actions, and it's shown as being real and helpful, rather than silly and childish
@chelseawhite7117
@chelseawhite7117 10 ай бұрын
The fact that Hobie can just be that freaking smart and not feel the need to say anything about it is such a … well, it’s a smart move
@rottensquid
@rottensquid 10 ай бұрын
I think a lot of these can be summed up more simply: The archetype foundation you started with, in every instance, is contradicted in the character's introduction, and often throughout their story. Han Solo may be a thief with a heart of gold, but the contradiction is built into that archetype. We don't know whether Han is going to transcend his self-interest until the very end of the film Star Wars (sorry, I'm too old to call it "A New Hope"). I mean, we do, because it's obviously telegraphed, but the point of the story is to watch it play out, not to keep the audience guessing. His act 3 turn is implied by his introduction as a disinterested mercenary. We know better than to take characters at their word. It's always actions that tell the real story. Characters like Obi-Wan and Merlin, similarly, are typically introduced as strange hermits, even fools. Yoda is a perfect example, his comical appearance and behavior hiding the deep well of powerful wisdom within. Hobie, similarly, is introduced as the Spider-Man who doesn't follow rules or care about responsibility. In fact, he seems not to care about anyone or anything beyond looking cool and listing everything he hates. Initially, he seems like he's in it for the LOLs. And when he bails on the whole mess when Miles and Miguel end up at odds, this impression is confirmed. He seems too "cool" to take sides. As a guy who grew up in northern California in the 80s, I knew way too many "punks" like this. I still do. But as the story plays out, he contradicts that initial impression by proving himself not a nihilist, but a rebel, secretly working against Miguel's oppressive system. Hobie's "punk" attitude isn't rebelling against society, it's rebelling against mindless rule-following. And as with Han Solo, we can see this coming a mile away, because we know not to take characters at face value. When Hobie bails, we can guess we haven't seen the last of him. And when we're proven right, that creates a strong bond with the character. I think this is the key to making a character like Hobie lovable. Though his true nature is telegraphed from the beginning, just the act of seeing through the initial presentation involves the audience in the storytelling, rather than forcing us to sit back and watch passively, without drawing our own conclusions. This simple contradiction is the source of the character's layers. We're delighted to see Hobie bond with Mayday. It doesn't really surprise us anymore than his ultimate betrayal of Miguel surprises us. The contradiction is the obvious subtext to the text of his seeming indifference. And that same dynamic is the source of his humor. It's funny to see mister too-cool-for-school bond with a baby. But it deepens his character, because his connection to her as a born rebel is both hilarious and a meaningful observation about the nature of childhood. We're not born rule-followers. It comes from our desire to explore and question authority being stripped out of us. It's funny and poignant. So I think a simple formula for creating a lovable character is introducing that contradiction, and finding the character's unity within it. Your character is a bad-ass intergalactic gunslinging bounty-hunter? Give him a baby to look after, and profound bond with it. A midwestern creampuff football coach? Reveal his positivity as an unbreakable force of will, winning over a team of surly, angry, stubborn british footballers. A pretty, lonely teenage orphan girl? Make her the most deadly chess player in the world. The contradiction between what they seem and what they are sets up everything you need to win over audiences.
@aspiring.creative.person6092
@aspiring.creative.person6092 10 ай бұрын
Hobie’s first appearance I got scared that they would make him so one dimensional just cause of how he introduced himself. So glad I was proven wrong lol.
@michellegiacalone1079
@michellegiacalone1079 11 ай бұрын
Excellent writing advice! Hobie was my 'type'- the over-smart sarcastic observer type.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@mc_ocelot3577
@mc_ocelot3577 10 ай бұрын
I feel like another thing that immediately makes the audience perceive Hobie as 'cool' is that he is introduced as being immediately able to do something that Miles can't/struggles to. Hobie enters while Miles is struggling to break the laser-wall with his electric powers, and does it without breaking a sweat. This also works because the audience is given the impression that Hobie is better than Miles because he is more experienced, rather than just by virtue of being himself (characters being skilled by virtue of being themselves and no other reason is something that is common in modern media and drives people crazy). Hobie being more competent than Miles is also set up by his earlier mentions, as him being known by Gwen and Pav establishes him as a member of the Spider Society, and obviously someone competent enough to be part of the society. Which at this point in the movie, explicitly means he must be better than - and thus cooler than - Miles.
@diamond9030
@diamond9030 11 ай бұрын
I thought I was gonna hate Hobie, but he ended up being my favorite character
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
I get that! Although, there are so many great characters in that film, I find it hard to pick a favourite.
@soupryu
@soupryu 11 ай бұрын
I feel like this video will blow up. Maybe not now, but definitely soon, and I'm all here for it. Keep up your grind.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thanks so much! I'll definitely do more like this.
@mackielunkey2205
@mackielunkey2205 10 ай бұрын
I wished more people talked about how the original Hobie started off as a total loser with a lot of talent who beats himself up too much, and the alternate version of himself is a person who has a strong sense of who he is and doesn’t feel sorry for himself.
@packman2321
@packman2321 10 ай бұрын
If I was going to suggest a break down for making a character cool I'd say, find a style repertoire (clothing, language, behaviour etc) that has values matched by your audience, exaggerate some parts of its aesthetics, and don't let the audience see the work that goes in to preparing it. So with Hobie, he's presented using signifers pulled from a punk aesthetic, which has a history as an anti-authority, activist and art movement, and co-opts signifiers of military and police violence to satirise them (as well as combining them with music and behaviour linked to those values). The audience the film is aiming for is already expected to be somewhat anti-authority (because the point of the movie is Miles standing up against a major one, so any authoritarian lens is going to struggle to engage with the plot) so you make sure the elements of the character design match that value, so it'll be positively received by the audience. Then to make it cooler, you just don't show the audience the character having to try. When we follow Miles or Gwen, we see them struggle and compose their identities (the shoulder touch from the first movie being a good example). This lets us see their awkward uncool elements, and undermines their cooler ones. For Hobie we just exclude that, making his awesome parts, appear as natural and simple and making his aspirational (he embodies a value the audience wants and he doesn't seem to have to try to get it, thus cool). A similar trick works with beauty in films. Directors often hide the effort that characters that are supposed to be seen as attractive put in to things like fashion, make up, self-presentation, while when we want a character to seem relateable or awkward, we simply show that hard work. The more work you show, the less natural the performance seems and the more opportunity a character has to trip over themselves or show a crack in their unified presentation.
@MK-zl1kc
@MK-zl1kc 10 ай бұрын
Oh i loved hobie, because i remember reading his comics few years ago and they were so CHAOTIC
@mochiattoart514
@mochiattoart514 10 ай бұрын
I instantly fell for how cool he was! He talks like me except I say those things ironically. That instantly made me relate to him.
@hoop6822
@hoop6822 10 ай бұрын
Another technique I’d highlight to specifically make one character cooler than another is by giving the cooler character a certain “idealistic” quality, not as in perfectly exemplifying that quality necessarily. Just a more favourable quality than the opposite. Such as how Hobie doesn’t care what people think about him whereas Miles is quite concerned about that. Because not caring about what people think about you is something everyone is told but isn’t necessarily good at Hobie being good at this in contrast to Miles makes him cooler.
@Sootielove
@Sootielove 10 ай бұрын
I love how Hobie uses the audience's familiarity with bad punk characters to turn the story on our heads. We see Hobie, he's making jokes about everything being capitalism, not being a team player, not being consistent, etc. and we think we know the stereotypical straw punk from all media. And then they show his support of Miles, encouraging him to stand on his own feet and go against the grain, and his intelligence in weaponising people's perceptions of him in-universe to get away with stealing technology to make his own bands! Hobie doesn't even have that much screentime but he's subversive and honestly one of the most pure-hearted characters in this film. Kindness is core to punk and finally we see it on-screen
@rinco1532
@rinco1532 10 ай бұрын
the thing that makes hobie even cooler for me is that he doesn't start the love triangle bs thank the gods for that
@pizzastolfo856
@pizzastolfo856 10 ай бұрын
He's a realistic and interesting portrayal of the Chaotic Good alignment
@isengarde9490
@isengarde9490 10 ай бұрын
1:03 b r u h Sword in The Stone- That is a memory I just unlocked.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Glad you unlocked it. It's really underrated.
@crispy0799
@crispy0799 10 ай бұрын
When i first saw this movie i thought: "huh he's normally the prowler in the comics and in other universes he's spiderpunk" so i'd love to see what they're gonna do with him. This guy ended up being a FUCKING CHAD! 👍🔥
@andrealiee
@andrealiee 11 ай бұрын
will keep this in mind!! i am working on a screenplay and want to make characters both believable and enjoyable. thanks so much
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
I'm really glad it was helpful! Thanks for watching, and good luck with the screenplay.
@cosmicspacething3474
@cosmicspacething3474 10 ай бұрын
I just like the over the top Anarchism in almost every aspect of his personality
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Me too
@leoottaway138
@leoottaway138 11 ай бұрын
Great video! I genuinely didn't realise this was from a smaller channel until after i watched the video and went to the comments.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thanks! I tried something new with this one. I'll definitely do more like this.
@LeiaAndFriends_
@LeiaAndFriends_ 9 ай бұрын
I loved how Hobie was written, how he was drawn/animated, and the way he interacted with the other characters. (Specifically Miles.) He helped Miles the whole time, gave him advice, but didn't treat him like a kid like the others did. He let Miles make his own decisions while helping along the way. (Giving the palm advice, recommending to make his own watch, helping him out of the cage, and leaving/quitting as soon as the chase began in order to make a watch.) Bonus for the accurate desc of 'Punk.' Not making him a jerk, or making him against rules for no reason. Bonus bonus for his amazing comedy!!
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 9 ай бұрын
Completely agree! Thanks for watching and for the great comments.
@Protofall
@Protofall 10 ай бұрын
I'm now realising I somehow missed so much during my viewing of the movie, even just for Hobes alone - I missed all the foreshadowing and mentioning of Hobe before his reveal - I missed his name, although I hear they later made a revision to the film where comic text of "Hobes?" appears on screen when Miles says that - I completely missed the fact Miles was jealous of him, I interpretted it as confusion in places and admiration - Didn't hear any of the "I don't like Comedy" joke - I missed 90% of what he said because of that accent and the film's audio mixing XD I was paying attention during the film, but I guess I was distracted with everything else going on.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
There was a lot going on to be fair. It's well worth a second watch. Thanks for commenting!
@willow_2312
@willow_2312 10 ай бұрын
Not your fault homie the sound mixing was super weird for this movie, I was only able to catch about 3/4 of the dialogue clearly
@hope3290
@hope3290 10 ай бұрын
@@willow_2312 For real. One of the employees in my theater came in during the previews to apologize about how loud it was and tell us it was the volume suggested by Marvel.
@sakareeh
@sakareeh 11 ай бұрын
Yalll I thought they were gonna make a dumbass love triangle and I was gonna get annoyed. Ended up loving hobie. Also subscribed
@Joy-zz8wz
@Joy-zz8wz 10 ай бұрын
"cool punk rebel anarchist" is the trope that hobbi is
@jeritheweirdchild
@jeritheweirdchild 10 ай бұрын
In the romatic silly swing in Miles' dimension with Gwen, she literally says: "Hobie? oh my gosh you would love him" to Miles when she mentioned about him. You coule tell for a moment he felt a bit insecure, a dude letting his crush crash in his own dimension and hanging out more than Him, who sounds so much cooler, and he didn't even know what reason it was for too. He meets Hobie, gets the jealousy a bit but you can tell Miles understands why everyone thinks hes cool. An interestinc character with this guard of q cool and independent self image.
@okewittat
@okewittat 10 ай бұрын
I LOVED HOBIE FROM THE MOMENT HE APPEARED ON SCREENNN
@marcopohl4875
@marcopohl4875 10 ай бұрын
"You're not helping" "Good"
@lanaloveschocolate
@lanaloveschocolate 11 ай бұрын
This video is really good! I hope the algorithm gods pick it up!
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thank you! That would be awesome. Really I'm just glad people are enjoying it.
@madds5281
@madds5281 10 ай бұрын
At first I thought Hobbie was all talk no action, that he would point out criticisms but not actually do anything about it. So I was impressed to learn that he believes his punk philosophy to his core and will truly break any hierarchy no matter how potentially dangerous. But what makes him great is that his anarchy is calculated to help ppl. He’s in Nuevo York to be there for Gwen and he’s the first one to be on Miles’ side. There’s few things more satisfying then a kind character who sticks to his principles.
@egg-queen3574
@egg-queen3574 10 ай бұрын
About making someone “cool”, I think someone another perceived as ‘cool’ demonstrates the traits and personality others wish they had. For Hobie, he’s confident, smart, he’s ‘woke’, good-hearted, and sure of himself. He does whatever he wants without worrying about what people think of him. Those are traits that I believe most people think of when they think about self-improvement.
@hollowwoods7130
@hollowwoods7130 10 ай бұрын
Found the guy who calls black people on the street woke for existing 💀
@tatianalangerholz6280
@tatianalangerholz6280 10 ай бұрын
Wow enjoyed the video, I was really captured by Hobie when I first saw him and agree with a lot of ur points!💕
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@AlternatedYt
@AlternatedYt 10 ай бұрын
He turns pink when touching or near miles because it's like showing their bond or love even tho they just met they like homies
@phantasmicphantasies
@phantasmicphantasies 10 ай бұрын
‘rival for gwens affection’ had me rolling on the floor laughing
@4novey
@4novey 10 ай бұрын
step 1: make him fine asf
@damianstarks3338
@damianstarks3338 10 ай бұрын
Yes yes and yes Hobie Brown aka Spider Punk is officially my new favorite Spider Man amazing analysis/breakdown by the way !
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@Tuntor689
@Tuntor689 10 ай бұрын
I did not like him at first, but he definitely grew on me.
@silbury2325
@silbury2325 10 ай бұрын
It's a really cool experience to have my own process illuminated. I always start with a core idea identity that I add layers to and kitbash tropes and archetypes until I have an organic feeling character.
@RohanTatlow
@RohanTatlow 10 ай бұрын
This video is so helpful because I want to be a writer. Thank you so much!
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
I'm so glad it helped! Good luck with your writing.
@ZephyrBW
@ZephyrBW 10 ай бұрын
He’s also like the big bro for miles and really had his back the whole time like doesn’t even bat an eye when miles wants to do the right thing. I think hobby is the only one who’s really stopped and think does Miguel actually know what he’s doing or is he just playing god?
@alexielouisl.8462
@alexielouisl.8462 10 ай бұрын
i don't agree to the rivalry with miles thing, i rather saw that miles is impressed by hobie, consider miles as an outcast, he was told he wasn't "supposed" to be spiderman and he has powers other spiderfolk do not, the thing of him is to be his own person, his own spiderman in spite of the expectations put on him. None of those he frequented had bioelectric powers. And then out of nowhere entered Hobie outright executing the thing Miles did and thought only *he* could do, then telling Miles the trick to those powers, "use your full hand, not just the fingertips". The payoff later when Miles is captured by Miguel and Miles turns to Hobie, he reminds him of the trick and it allows him to escape. In those scenes, and the movie in general, Miles looked up to Hobie, and he acts i think like a sort of mentor*, helping Miles achieve his best self. I say mentor with an asterisk because he doesn't truly teach him, but he pushes him to do what hes best at and fight for his ideals. he's inspiring him but not truly teaching him. I also think the relation between Gwen and Hobie isn't meant to be regarded as love, they're just friends, but the way Gwen said it made it sound like that indirectly, its mega clear she has a crush on Miles and not Hobie.
@MegaMGstudios
@MegaMGstudios 10 ай бұрын
What I really like is that he is forshadowed as a rival for Miles, but when the entire spider society turned their back on him (even his old friends), Hobie is the one who helps him by telling him how to escape.
@KarateGirl999
@KarateGirl999 6 ай бұрын
From day one, I knew that rumor floating around that Hobie was gonna get between Miles and Gwen was pure, 100%, unadulterated bullshit. He's not some man-slut who wants to stir up jealousy, cause unneeded drama, and try to steal Miles's girl. He's HOMIE BROWN. Lovable punks are among my top three favorite character archetypes. It's truly amazing that Hobie only has about seven minutes of screen time, yet he does so much and has unforgettable lines. So because of that, he doesn't feel underutilized.
@Czech-we5zk
@Czech-we5zk 10 ай бұрын
you are so underrated you have at least 51K man just keep making videos I’m sure it’s going to come to you sooner or later❤
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Thanks, man. I'm already planning my next one in this little series.
@Not.Creative
@Not.Creative Ай бұрын
I also really like how Hobie clearly has a dark past. Canonically his dimension is a dystopian type and is super dangerous. And when Miles finds out that other spidermen have lost people too, and it’s a cannon event, he looks at Hobie and we can see for only a split second, he seems spaced out before realizing that people are looking at him. Just makes his character better in my opinion 🤷‍♀️
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites Ай бұрын
That's a great observation!
@ALIEN-DUDE
@ALIEN-DUDE 9 ай бұрын
What i love is that hes like uncle Aaron if he because spider man instead of the prowler, they both are named after the prowlers civilian identity, both tech geniuses, both extremely creative with art and finally they both support miles.
@s0ne01
@s0ne01 10 ай бұрын
His accent is what made me love him instantly
@lukestarkiller1470
@lukestarkiller1470 10 ай бұрын
I didn’t think I would like Hobie as much as I did, I thought his whole punk personality would get old really fast but he was written so well he became probably my favorite character in the movie
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Quite a few people have said they had that reaction to him. It shows how easily things could have gone wrong if the writing hadn't been on point. Thanks for watching!
@lukestarkiller1470
@lukestarkiller1470 10 ай бұрын
@@simeonwrites it definitely could have gone wrong, but yeah man it was a great video
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
@@lukestarkiller1470 thanks!
@lukestarkiller1470
@lukestarkiller1470 10 ай бұрын
@@simeonwrites yeah you’re welcome
@employee472
@employee472 10 ай бұрын
I also think another thing to add is that he wasn't given an unjust amount of power from the start. A lot of times bad writers try to make a character important by almost forcing them to have an important role the story, but hobie's inclusion in the group felt pretty natural but naturally ramped up as he ended up playing an important role using the personality traits we've seen AFTER he was introduced.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
That's a great point. Trying to make a character popular that way may well have the opposite effect.
@amycox5733
@amycox5733 11 ай бұрын
Love Hobie Brown, love this video!
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thanks!
@1stAid
@1stAid 10 ай бұрын
Seeing the thumbnail and title was kinda funny for me, since I didn't especially find Hobie likeable
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
That's cool. Thanks for checking it out anyway!
@BingBangPoe
@BingBangPoe 10 ай бұрын
I think this entire film, much like Into the Spider-Verse, is an absolute masterpiece. Every single character is so exceptionally well written and serves a purpose. Hobie Brown was arguably one of the spotlights because of how he stuck out like a sore thumb, with his rebelious, anarchistic attitude that is reflect in every single aspect of him, down to his design and everchanging animation. Truly the team behind this film went above and beyond with the imagery. It easily became my favorite Spiderman film _ever._ I can't wait for the third film.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Yeah, I feel the same way. The writers knocked these films out of the park!
@shimerrill967
@shimerrill967 10 ай бұрын
i want More Spider Punk in the next movie ! 💙 i love him ❤️
@alericia
@alericia 10 ай бұрын
Nice analysis and great video :D
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@foxywoxy1915
@foxywoxy1915 10 ай бұрын
Absolutely love this video. Glad I stumbled across it. Great for references for writing
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
I'm so glad it was helpful! Good luck with your writing.
@foxywoxy1915
@foxywoxy1915 10 ай бұрын
@@simeonwrites Thanks! Looking forward to watching the rest of your videos!
@QueenGreenflame
@QueenGreenflame 10 ай бұрын
To this day... I still have no idea what he's saying half the time 💃
@kittysunrise313
@kittysunrise313 10 ай бұрын
Been considering getting a spider punk tattoo since I seen this move 🤟🏾🤟🏾
@PalpitoadLover
@PalpitoadLover 10 ай бұрын
This was a good video, thank you simon
@batmanvsjoker7725
@batmanvsjoker7725 10 ай бұрын
The fact that he's voiced by the dude from Get Out is the cherry on top
@RandomSkyeRoses
@RandomSkyeRoses 10 ай бұрын
He also played a character in Black Panther (2018)
@randon_dude_on_yt350
@randon_dude_on_yt350 10 ай бұрын
Thanks for the information, Simeon! I will note these tips for the characters in my novel that I am writing, and will definitely credit you in my acknowledgements.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Wow, thank you! Good luck with the novel. Let me know how you get on.
@randon_dude_on_yt350
@randon_dude_on_yt350 10 ай бұрын
@@simeonwrites 👍
@Sabrinaaa36
@Sabrinaaa36 10 ай бұрын
i loved hobie since he took the mask off!!
@natalya402
@natalya402 10 ай бұрын
Another thing that makes him likeable is that because he is honest to Miles and helps him use his powers better, he is capitalizing off of Miles likeability and our natural tendency to root for the hero of the story. Miles is a great protagonist anyway, and seeing characters talk down to him, lie to him, or try to stop him from doing what he sees is right makes them less likeable to the audience. This causes Hobie's support and honesty to stand out way more.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Great point!
@willow_2312
@willow_2312 10 ай бұрын
Spider-punk was always the best spidey and that's not changing any time soon
@Entropy1318
@Entropy1318 11 ай бұрын
Underrated Video, underrated channel. Glad I got this recommended regardless.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thanks! I'm still fairly new to this, but I'm working on my content like this video.
@Entropy1318
@Entropy1318 10 ай бұрын
@@simeonwrites Ay, good luck making it big, your quality surely deserves it.
@rainbowcloudss_
@rainbowcloudss_ 10 ай бұрын
"make your own watch" *makes his own watch* i didnt even realize that wtf
@lefay7637
@lefay7637 10 ай бұрын
I hate how well I could understand him, despite his thick accent
@Bubble_Nugget
@Bubble_Nugget 10 ай бұрын
When I first heard about him I disliked him, I thought he would be some random strange guy Miles would be jealous of, then he turned out to be super cool
@skycreeper0173
@skycreeper0173 10 ай бұрын
Awesome analysis video. I really enjoyed it.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@HopefulMathGirl
@HopefulMathGirl 9 ай бұрын
I actually like this video very much. Appreciate your creativity, knowledge and presentation.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 9 ай бұрын
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for the great feedback.
@HopefulMathGirl
@HopefulMathGirl 9 ай бұрын
@@simeonwrites You're welcome :)
@noahlemay-assh2651
@noahlemay-assh2651 10 ай бұрын
I'm gonna be honest I don't like Hobie for several reasons, however I dislike him less after someone pointed out that he only grabbed what he needed to help Miles out later.
@gardenshed6043
@gardenshed6043 10 ай бұрын
Hawks is a character who I feel like fits these criteria quite well.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
I haven't seen My Hero Academia, but I'll have to check it out!
@gardenshed6043
@gardenshed6043 10 ай бұрын
@@simeonwrites Honestly, it started off great but I’m not a big fan of where the manga has gone. Like it’s gone from S down to B in terms of quality for me. The spin off, Vigilantes is S all the way. If you are gonna get into any of them, read that.
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
@@gardenshed6043 Good to know, thanks!
@bucky5634
@bucky5634 10 ай бұрын
he annoyed me at first but then he quickly became likeable, on the second watch he was cool the whole way through
@ZeekarPRIME
@ZeekarPRIME 10 ай бұрын
Slight critique, it's perfectly acceptable to use cam footage when nothing else is available (and most importantly it's free), but when you're attempting to show off quotes or clips of characters saying things you should really add subtitles to the screen, for people who don't have the best ears it's really difficult to understand what's being said Again, just for quotes and clips. Your voice is very clear. And overall the video is great, easy to follow along to, which is why not being able to tell precisely what's going on in the clips stand out that much more
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Hey, thanks for the feedback! That's a really good point. I'll make sure to do that for the next one I make.
@935ryan5
@935ryan5 10 ай бұрын
hobbey movie would be sick
@shimerrill967
@shimerrill967 10 ай бұрын
Yes totally
@amberrichards2778
@amberrichards2778 10 ай бұрын
Good video, 9/10, room for improvement, would watch again
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 10 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@yougiveloveabadname
@yougiveloveabadname 10 ай бұрын
Hobie was the g
@filippaklingenberg8057
@filippaklingenberg8057 11 ай бұрын
Great vid, deserves more views
@simeonwrites
@simeonwrites 11 ай бұрын
Thanks for watching!
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