BATTLE AGAINST THE WORLD - LYRICAL COVER [Deltarune: ChapterRewritten]

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@dreayth 7 ай бұрын

Yup. I've decided to bring them back. Joker's actions are not defining of me or my work, and I shouldn't deprive my audience of the things they enjoy because somebody I don't associate with did what they did. Enjoy.

@ihavenoidea1304 4 ай бұрын

Imo this is your best work.. Just remove him from credits. Why should that bastard cost you your hard work

@TheGoofyDevine 4 ай бұрын

what did the joker do? i must have missed it

@discozdisco3566 3 ай бұрын

@TheGoofyDevine I remember a post about something, but can't remember what even happened

@ihavenoidea1304 3 ай бұрын

@@TheGoofyDevine he was shitty person and he abbused members of the team

@noscopespider 5 күн бұрын

as far as i'm concerned joker didn't even make BATW. he just tweaked it a little and slapped his name on it

@craz2580 Жыл бұрын

What to say.... This AU is one of the most famous now apparently. It even got lyric videos

@gamercentral2417 Жыл бұрын

6k views. But in terms of deltarune au’s sure. But salt route or chapter 1 weird route will take that spot

@Lettucem3n Жыл бұрын

@@gamercentral2417 there is another puppet

@clamdeity Жыл бұрын

@@gamercentral2417 ima be real ive never heard of chapter 1 weird route in my life IMO salt route hella takes that spot

@clamdeity Жыл бұрын

@@Lettucem3n BASED

@Metrocysh Жыл бұрын

@@clamdeity Chapter 1 weird route is a nice concept honestly

@SteveyBobJoe101 Жыл бұрын

0:59 Jesus, I got shivers. Its scary and also sounds so weird having this motif have different lyrics...and I love it!

@MintyMoron64 Жыл бұрын

I'm used to "Fingers coming from the inside of the phone, a hand is waiting 'til you're all alone. It pulls the strings and makes 'em ring, until your heart gets ripped up! Fingers coming from the inside of the phone, a hand is waiting 'til you're all alone. It pulls the strings and- pulls the strings- tell- me- what- you- BIG SHOT!" because I noticed that the original version has it timed so that that section and its equivalent in BIG SHOT are in exact sync and just kind of sang the BS lyrics to the tune of that part of BATW.

@Shnoz591 Жыл бұрын

Bruh that theme is the don’t forget not that part of big shot

@theladiescallmesona Жыл бұрын

1:23 is that a reference to one of the unused battle dialogues? *You have come once again to this wonderful place. *Now tear off the mask beneath your face!

@jojidubi4 Жыл бұрын

I wasn’t really a fan of the voice for your previous lyrical cover for Junkil, but THIS VOICE works just perfectly!

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Thank you!!! I tried to take some of the critiques I saw on the last two covers and improve upon it. I'm glad that's paying off!

@Sylvan404 Жыл бұрын

Man, you did NOT pull any punches for this one! Was worth the wait! P.S. If the lyrics about the wind and all that during the flashback were referencing "The wind is howling", I applaud you.

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Spot on! I'm glad someone caught what I was referencing!

@SC3P100 Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth at 1:01 the rhythm turns into “there’s a light inside your soul” contrasting the darkness in your soul amazing work man

@RamixNotRemix Жыл бұрын

Holy God, this is really amazing, just like the Spamton dub, I like how you didn't make her a constant screaming goblin, she just sings camly how she is going to kill you. Also, I really love the "flashback" part, the echoes fit really well there. With that said, I really enjoyed this, you did an amazing work.

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Thank you so much Ramix... I'm glad it wasn't all for nothing.

@NL7206 Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth "she"? 🤨

@ehfuywfrhviufuybrewfhwyubc7132 Жыл бұрын

@@NL7206 pretty sure junkil is he/she/they might be wrong though

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

@@NL7206 Junkil is Non-Binary. Goes by He/She/They pronouns

@johncronk8867 Жыл бұрын

@@NL7206 and due to them being in Undyne the Undying’s armor*, they go by “she.” *like how Spamton’s in Mettaton’s NEO body.

@dylanzlol7293 Жыл бұрын

Asriel's references: 1:05 Reference to how in Undertale when Asriel became a soulless flower. 1:14 "Hopes and Dreams" 2:08 i think this line is vaguely similar to one from the UT tp Asriel's fight, "i can feel it, every time you die, your grip on this world slips away"

@jma0645 7 ай бұрын

🗣️We are JUN(bac)KIL‼️🔥🔥

@thecrazybee1907 4 ай бұрын

It's Scamptover We're Jun(bac)kil

@aaronkelly1912 Жыл бұрын

You know how Spamton theme called *BIG SHOT* well I don’t what type of gun Spamton would have But I think that it’s obvious what kind of gun Jevil would have, a revolver and he would definitely call it *world revolvering*

@TailsClock Жыл бұрын

It sounds like you're trying not to wake up your parents in the other room. Your voice sounds surpressed and becomes flatter as a result. It might be worth finding a better place/time to record so you can go all out.

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Heh, I wish that were the case. Unfortunately, I've just got a naturally softspoken voice. These videos are me practicing to break that.

@tf2isagoodgame282 Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth personally I think the voice works really well in the second part 👍

@mrkathooloo5711 Жыл бұрын

Wow dude! This is super well done, you've got some talent for writing these lyrics for sure.

@begining9807 Жыл бұрын

and THIS is why smaller youtubers (content creaters in general) are typically better. passion, determinaition, and new ideas are on the table!

@subjectdelta578 Жыл бұрын

Leave it up to Dreayth to make a banger of Rewritten Jevils boss fight!

@TemplarHolyCrusader Жыл бұрын

didn't even finish watching it and can already say it was 100 percent worth the wait

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

I'm so incredibly grateful to hear that. Thank you!

@RmationYT Жыл бұрын

Logically If Spamton = Mettaton NEO Then Jevil = Undyne the undying

@DarkGope Жыл бұрын

They do undying tho

@Questions854 Жыл бұрын

Didn’t even know this existed, looked it up, and now I love this au

@GennyBoy89 Жыл бұрын

Now this Is what I'm talking about ! a lot of improvment in the voice. Lyrics fantastic as always.

@Aduck1 Жыл бұрын

This is amazing definitely the best you’ve made so far(not saying the others are bad their all great but this one was amazing)

@gameplanetanimations Жыл бұрын

Oooooooh! This is quite nice! Did quite a wonderful job on this one 👍

@tntvale3763 Жыл бұрын

The World is Spinning, Spinning !

@prorobot64player Жыл бұрын

this. is. even. BETTER THAN ALL OF THEM COMBINED

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

I'm glad you found enjoyment in it!

@NailsnTape Жыл бұрын

your voice definitely suits jevil/junkil better than any of your other roles

@dylanzlol7293 Жыл бұрын

yknow the initial part sounded like jevil from the DR Ch1 weird route concept, like, 0:34 sounds like that stuff

@undertablethe 5 ай бұрын

this is my favorite with lyrics cover of attle against the world glad its ack i was questoning its existence

@littlegoat713 Жыл бұрын

WITH ME YOU CAN DO ANYTHING!! I CAN- YOU CAN- WE CAN DO ANYTHING!!

@Poopyheadhehe Жыл бұрын

Thank god I found out about Deltarune early and will be able to keep up with the AU's :)

@thecrazybee1907 Жыл бұрын

Morse code on the cover art says: CHAOS FREEDOM BATTLEAGAINSTTHEWORLD TNTVALE

@cetadel6597 Жыл бұрын

JUNKIL turns down the lights.

@TheAdvertisement Жыл бұрын

Holy crap that was quick, guess you can do anything!

@harchosmia Жыл бұрын

My guy, this is amazing! You planning on making anymore AU song lyric covers?

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Given how successful these were, I'd be foolish to not do more. However, currently I don't have any more AU covers planned, but if something comes up, yeah. Anything you wanted to suggest?

@harchosmia Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth Well, Dusttale could probably be interesting.

@TheBenjiNebby Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth what about TheOtherPuppets giga kris theme?

@A-strange-visitor Жыл бұрын

@Dreatyh sorry for the but-in but my suggestion would be "M_tv.ogg" though, you'd have to ask for permission from sparks

@trouslinabone Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth Giga Pudding or Yo Buddy from The Other Puppet.

@A-literal-insect Жыл бұрын

literally thought this was jevil verison of battle against a true hero and not spamton's neo theme but it still is a welcoming surprise

@catthatscreams Жыл бұрын

I CAN YOU CAN SING AGAINST THE WORLD!

@vichotoro3358 Жыл бұрын

Succumb to the worm

@vichotoro3358 Жыл бұрын

I'm late but God THIS IS AMAZING!! Seriously, i love it

@isaac18896 Жыл бұрын

The [incomprehensible caos] is saying: I can you can do anything

@t.g.r8703 Жыл бұрын

This would make a pretty interesting game ngl

@silenteclipse1340 Жыл бұрын

I only just noticed Gaster in the background

@BrandonMeuser-sk2rb Жыл бұрын

When I heard that voice, I have to think about it

@incriveldinossauro5282 Жыл бұрын

*Traped inside* gave me chills!

@gabrielnavia168 Жыл бұрын

cool bro

@TaeSkull Жыл бұрын

yooo raw

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Happy I could deliver. :>

@Steelpotgamingbecuaseyes Жыл бұрын

This voice fits the most

@Poseidon-SeaGod Жыл бұрын

"FILLING YOU UP WITH HOLES-" nexsus

@shidqy0003 Жыл бұрын

With me you can do anything! I can-youcan-wii-can Do Anything!

@notme9915 Жыл бұрын

This is definitely an improvement, but there is one thing you still need to improve on it is that you sound like you’re fake screaming, don’t be scared to put all your effort into your voice, don’t be scared to wake up your neighbors By the way I Hope for the best for you

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Heh. Small victories I suppose. I've got contact with JunoSongs so, I've asked them for some advice that I'm gonna try to incorporate going forward but, I appreciate the honesty. All about improving.

@aaaaastr0man584 Жыл бұрын

I CAN YOU CAN WE CAN DO ANYTHING

@beclet Жыл бұрын

This is cool dude :D

@incriveldinossauro5282 Жыл бұрын

Character! Good lycris! BEUTIFULL

@beywheelzhater8930 Жыл бұрын

Lyrics are masterful! Only problem I have is, at the end, you say "do anything thing" instead of just stretching out the "anything" part and it completely throws me for a loop Would also perhaps work on your voice acting a bit, the quiet rasp doesn't really fit the chaotic force that is Junkil

@mushroom4466 Жыл бұрын

AMAZING lyrics. The only thing that's really holding it back in my opinion is your singing. Not trying to insult you, but the raspiness kind of hurts it and the you definitely need a lot more practice on the fast parts. Maybe if you get bigger you could potentially ask one of the big lyrical artists (Man on the Internet, Juno Song) for some tips? Hope this helps you!

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

*sigh* yeah, I see a lot of people make this point and I realize it's valid I just... I don't really know what to do about it. Thankfully though, I do actually have some connections to Juno so, I may reach out to them for advice. I've got the writing down... and I agree with you on the singing. Thank you for the honest critique.

@mushroom4466 Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth np man

@user-ee8br7jp7b Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth sorry for butting in but it's about the singing thing it might be just me but i think part of the problem is that, in many cases, your voice sounds kinda... strained? like you want to scream the lyrics but have to keep the volume down so you resort to a half-whisper? maybe if that wasn't a problem your singing would improve? just a suggestion tho

@uwuorsomething1320 Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth i personally think its a fun twist to the usual jevil voices

@RockTheSecond Жыл бұрын

Gravebuster Junkil Music:

@dittosayshi3856 Жыл бұрын

clearly you were no sleuth

@darckzac78 Жыл бұрын

1:12 Won the wireless in '52 Awake and tuning in on you Didn't stop you coming through You were the first one Took the second symphony Rewritten technology Now I see I could do anything*

@technopathic7599 Жыл бұрын

The lyrics are oddly familiar to fighting omega flower

@pupeteriartist Жыл бұрын

Amazing the vocie acting looks İMPRESİVE DUUDD ı think its kinda beter than the orginal junkil voice actor

@cetadel6597 Жыл бұрын

JEVIL cackles incomprehensibly.

@bruhbrehii Жыл бұрын

lowkey fire

@incriveldinossauro5282 Жыл бұрын

Omega flowey and this are goooddsss

@sirpugsalot7459 Жыл бұрын

Let’s fucking gooooo!

@SansTheSkeIeton Жыл бұрын

0:40 dark dark yet darker huh

@KTkotiktapokKT Жыл бұрын

yeaaaa. I like rhymes

@iplayroblox112 Жыл бұрын

Underatted fr

@frangolles Жыл бұрын

Actually the final part of this song also fits for the holy grail of persona 5

@somechupacabrawithinternet8866 Жыл бұрын

chaos CONTROL!!!!!!

@tf2isagoodgame282 Жыл бұрын

These lyrics are perfect

@TheChicaNugget Жыл бұрын

Did you remove my FACE?

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Chica did you really think I was seriously keeping that bit in. In a joke video sure, but I put a lot of work into this. I wanted it to be serious.

@TheChicaNugget Жыл бұрын

@@dreaythIT WAS A FRAME, YOU LIED TO ME

@ggmnk3945 Жыл бұрын

I really liked it, but most of the song you seemed to be whispering that, although it sounds cool, it doesn't fit into some parts of the song

@ATAKwaCN Жыл бұрын

1:10 BEFORE THEY >:( DIIEE :D

@vamosturbo3407 Жыл бұрын

0:59

@mossystabbyboi9710 Жыл бұрын

Is that …. Morse code ?

@pplOOLL Жыл бұрын

this is amazing wonderful and outstanding

@MocaHere Жыл бұрын

hi there i know you're probably not gonna see this but i love your lyrical covers so i was wondering if you could do immortal hydrangea and heaven says cause theyre pretty cool ok thanks

@germinalmira4976 Жыл бұрын

hey hey could you do a giga puddin cover?

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

WHAT IS GIGA PUDDING? I'VE NEVER HEARD OF THIS SONG AND I'VE BEEN REQUESTED OF IT LIKE 3 TIMES. Apologies for the yelling, I'm rather confused.

@beywheelzhater8930 Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth it is Kris's theme from an AU called "The Other Puppet"

@Gashadokuro297 Жыл бұрын

Make a 1 hour version please

@Leostar-Regalius Жыл бұрын

why does it sound like you're like, whisper singing or something?

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Primarily a lack of vocal confidence. My voice has a long way to go, this is just a step along the way. I'd highly suggest checking out my latest cover of The Hearse Song, I consider it a vast improvement!

@user-cq5vh3kx4o Жыл бұрын

@NerfGraham Жыл бұрын

IS THAT JEVIL!?

@vichotoro1595 Жыл бұрын

it's junkil, basically jevil as spamton, in his special form, called redux

@iregretthisentertainment6033 Жыл бұрын

I love this❤❤❤

@wimby158 3 ай бұрын

Asriel diss track

@xewollo Жыл бұрын

автор, это прекрасно :³

@skyfish77 Жыл бұрын

Okay. The lyrics to this are really good, you are going places my guy. But the singing for now at least is mediocre, and really raspy. Don't get me wrong: This is very much enjoyable, just saying there's a LOT of room for improval.

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

All in due time. I'm just grateful to be developing an audience willing to stick around and watch me improve. Considering looking into a vocal coach, since I'd really like to improve the experience overall. Thanks for the feedback!

@skyfish77 Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth It's no problem, I'll appease the algorhythm gods for ya. Really wanna see where you go next.

@duper7746 Жыл бұрын

angry boi

@unchok_985 Жыл бұрын

His name should have been "Scamill" or something like that.

@vichotoro3358 Жыл бұрын

Sounds cool but he's named junkil cuz junk email and Jevil, just like Spamton is named spamton because spam email and mettaton

@unchok_985 Жыл бұрын

@@vichotoro3358 that makes sense, but he feels more like a scam email from some sort of malware than anything else.

@dylanparisotto1084 Жыл бұрын

wait whats it from

@rabbidyoshi9452 Жыл бұрын

You could make them sound like they seem more motivated to kill the protag y’know?

@Fake_Pep Жыл бұрын

There were official lyrics on SoundCloud. Also, I'm not joking when I say the lyrics are bad.

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

Okay, few things 1) I respect your opinion on these lyrics being bad, but I'd have to wholeheartedly disagree 2) There are no lyrics on the soundcloud, just a little preamble by Junkil. 3) If there were official lyrics, I wouldn't have used them, because the whole point of these covers is my artistic lyrical interpretation. If that's not your cup of tea, the door is right there. 👋

@Fake_Pep Жыл бұрын

@@dreayth ok u didn't need a whole explanation lol

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

@@Fake_Pep Sure I didn't *need* one. But I wanted to make one. So there ya have it. ^-^

@BrandonMeuser-sk2rb Жыл бұрын

You cann the voice of fizzoroli have

@dreayth Жыл бұрын

I don't think I could pull that voice off.

@rami-lb5he Жыл бұрын

thatwasfast

@leviradio3456 Жыл бұрын

epic But do it with I can you can do anything

@H_0wo_2be_gr8 Жыл бұрын

Эх.. Всё замечательно, но почему ты шепчешь, а не поёшь? :

@Only4two100bucks Жыл бұрын

awesome

@tianoc-g4811 Жыл бұрын

It's really rare for Musical lyrics to be created for Au themes or fan games; so I do admire those who get out of their way for to add more to someone else's content that truly shows their appreciation for each other's work. Thankfully deltarune helped brought out their potential and content stacking that undertales AU had inspired, one of the good examples being Snowgrave Spamton giga. Overall I enjoyed this including the animatic in the middle that showed a glimpse of Jevil's backstory. 💜🖤🤍