Begging For That Love │Spoken Word Poetry

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Mel's Thoughts

Mel's Thoughts

6 жыл бұрын

A poem about wanting to be loved so much by the person that catches your eye, that you slowly start to lose yourself in the process in order to obtain that love.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
Background music from freesound.org by the user bruno-ph
Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx

Пікірлер: 133
@mehnazaysha1595
@mehnazaysha1595 5 жыл бұрын
Am I the only one who stopped for a minute and thought how accurate your words are? This was amazing.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! :)
@mariakay3784
@mariakay3784 3 жыл бұрын
I did too. Accuracy💯
@annamariedannehl5971
@annamariedannehl5971 5 жыл бұрын
Litterally my life right now
@VinoVenitas
@VinoVenitas 6 жыл бұрын
"When it could have been me, should have been me." I loved the honesty that sleeps in that line. This was an amazing piece.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
VinoVenitas Thank you very much! That line was raw honesty. Life just happens with us or against us
@nitttin
@nitttin 6 жыл бұрын
Atleast it help me to numb the same feeling knowing m not the only one.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
I completely agree with you
@jasp9576
@jasp9576 6 жыл бұрын
exactly what im going through..
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
I feel you, it's a tough thing to go through
@kazumawinters4262
@kazumawinters4262 2 жыл бұрын
Same
@suparnaray3908
@suparnaray3908 2 жыл бұрын
One of the best poems i have read in years, this particular poem perfectly reflects my emotions right now....i cried while listening to your recitation.....it was relieving to hear that my feeling of devastation could be so wonderfully resonated by someone else.....i have not spoken about my feeling even with my parents......it felt like you r the closest to my heart though u r thousand miles away.
@dawnyork2303
@dawnyork2303 5 жыл бұрын
Mel's Thoughts,the way you beautifully put your words it's just like you're in my head,my mans words cut me deep and makes me fall deeper and deeper and closer and closer to the demons that live within side of me,my heart,and my head and I'm left alone with every emotion running faster and faster and I just scream and pray to God to just take me,take me in the night and take this pain away and let me feel love,happiness, hope,and a clear clean mind so I can love myself again.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
I'm glad I could put words to your feelings and thoughts
@mujeebjawa3974
@mujeebjawa3974 5 жыл бұрын
You write sooo nice lines!! And your voice is teaching to heart
@satya_tales
@satya_tales 4 жыл бұрын
Dont know where to start..but this is exactly the same m dealing with. Thoughtful and so true to have tears falling..
@winonamarasigan794
@winonamarasigan794 3 жыл бұрын
My dear... you don’t have to beg for love. You have it in your whole being. You were created out of love and you’re not only capable of loving and be loved in return. You are love yourself. Look around you, everything speaks about love...it’s not a feeling. It’s a mystery...once you stop associating love with emotions and feelings, then you begin to see and experience what love truly is....
@fasilatsanusi7431
@fasilatsanusi7431 4 жыл бұрын
The heading looks catchy "Begging for that love" 🙂...it is a great poem.
@navyamidha5233
@navyamidha5233 4 жыл бұрын
Its make me feel so upset makes me remember so much while listening to its many thoughts come to my mind I really loved it beautifully written..
@jasonfisher5488
@jasonfisher5488 2 жыл бұрын
I wish you knew you are the only one I love - the love of my life. I knew it from the beginning. I hear it in every line, read it on every page, and saw it in your eyes. I want no one else but you. All can be made sense of in less than 30 min. Real talk. True love
@georgec3563
@georgec3563 2 жыл бұрын
Amazing truly feel ur emotions in this one keep up the gd work 🙂
@Lalaland00888
@Lalaland00888 4 жыл бұрын
I love this so much.
@burningshire
@burningshire 4 жыл бұрын
I like it. I'd like to hear more.
@snoopyw6589
@snoopyw6589 4 жыл бұрын
You’ve always been the one. Let your heart guide you. Not your thoughts because they will dissuade you. Do not listen to others but only your love and let your heart go back where it belongs
@harshupilla6851
@harshupilla6851 3 жыл бұрын
I think these words really hit me hard Cos that was wt im going through ryt at this moment.. Neither u cud xpress your feelings with all ur heart nd soul Nor you could forget abt all the things and move on Its just all about how can something be so beautiful nd heartbreaking at the same tym..😕😕
@mujeebjawa3974
@mujeebjawa3974 5 жыл бұрын
I read your all poetry ..and i love all soo awesome..
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@thoelalger2244
@thoelalger2244 Жыл бұрын
Love your thoughts
@maryfedor7981
@maryfedor7981 3 жыл бұрын
Wow!!
@angelabrown7966
@angelabrown7966 3 жыл бұрын
Courage & faith is the key. Never underestimate your ability to rectify the issue. You've got to have the (courage) to face that person & tell them,"how you feel". A face to face conversation, would be more convincing,than hints. BECAUSE, maybe that person has no clue that, its legit. The best confirmation is FROM your lips. BECAUSE,whenever (someone) hears those(3) words "I love you". Theirs no more blindness,confusion or misunderstanding. Instead theirs potential & possibilities. Faith is the next step. Being willing to take a chance with your significant other. Facing & emracing the future, together. By hoping for the best. And allowing this (dream) to become reality. Its a wonderous thing whenever you try. BECAUSE, you may find that (love) was always waiting.
@jojohanna217
@jojohanna217 4 жыл бұрын
This really hit me. Wow.
@heshithsachintha6032
@heshithsachintha6032 4 жыл бұрын
You don't need to beg for love. Because you deserve love. My dear.
@christeljarry1789
@christeljarry1789 Жыл бұрын
What is for you will be for you...sometimes it isn't the right timing...anyway it's important to be honest and express your feelings, first because it's liberating and second because this person you love will be happy to know that you love him as much, and it might help him one day in darker times...let him experience what he needs to experience and if he is for you he will come back to you...and anyway we all deserve to be loved so the universe will send you someone else if you ask for it...
@deborahornelas-rocha7139
@deborahornelas-rocha7139 3 жыл бұрын
Me .... it’s exactly what I’ve been going through the last 7 years
@prakashgoel4679
@prakashgoel4679 3 жыл бұрын
Hey Mell, you are awasome in writing these. Hope your subscription increase. I literally love you work.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@neerajaneeru-ok4vn
@neerajaneeru-ok4vn 5 жыл бұрын
Express ur feelings and respect others that’s it
@MichelleTorez
@MichelleTorez 6 жыл бұрын
This is my favourite one 😄😍
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
I'm glad you like it! 😄
@estebancruz9032
@estebancruz9032 5 жыл бұрын
I felt that man
@irshadqureshi5320
@irshadqureshi5320 4 жыл бұрын
Heart touching 😭😭😭😭
@mystiquelou1277
@mystiquelou1277 6 жыл бұрын
That happens its very sad becsuse nobody is really yours you share each others company if you both want it
@njabulocaxton4269
@njabulocaxton4269 3 жыл бұрын
Wow...wow...am what a poem so sad😥
@user-hi1xj4gv5p
@user-hi1xj4gv5p 2 жыл бұрын
It's been 4 months since I first told my 6 years of crush about how I felt and he rejected,it still pains me the wounds are still fresh and I keep thinking about him every single day I cry every night to god about him.
@aminbadrul4957
@aminbadrul4957 3 жыл бұрын
Dear...pray is the best way..coz God take care everyone heart...soul...just keeping pray...take action...then let God answer ur pray...never given up or in....pray with pure heart...clear n clean..i wish one day u get what u want...coz sometime u think he good for u buttttt God prepared u more better then him u nuver expect...💖💖💖💖always
@kazumawinters4262
@kazumawinters4262 2 жыл бұрын
I agree on the never give up part as far as god is considered i couldn't care less we make our oh choices we choose we want to be with no one else but us chooses well... Unless our familys (Try) and make us marry someone tho even then you can rejected it think about that next time you think this so call God chooses for us
@janaelizabethsekelski
@janaelizabethsekelski 5 жыл бұрын
Very nice words ❤
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@abdusalamidris2853
@abdusalamidris2853 3 жыл бұрын
"Love, I beg for mercy"😥
@abdulhaqabdulkader8038
@abdulhaqabdulkader8038 3 жыл бұрын
Feel the same.
@janetleigh4701
@janetleigh4701 4 жыл бұрын
Hits hard
@jeanaustin8849
@jeanaustin8849 5 жыл бұрын
But you are the one l made that clear to you. When we were together didnt you realize it x
@spotarmstrong3090
@spotarmstrong3090 2 жыл бұрын
Oh my God oh my God I can't believe it this is exactly how I feel I want my love back in my arms back in like life back in my world I hate that I can't be there because I'm not being believed like a whole liar and it kills me and it hurts like hell
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 жыл бұрын
I am not addicted to that love, I have recovered from them, I don't like to live with the people as you
@serenityspringer6227
@serenityspringer6227 4 жыл бұрын
I agree with this 100 %
@kembarkembar2365
@kembarkembar2365 4 жыл бұрын
love
@jenn9715
@jenn9715 2 жыл бұрын
I will never beg again for you. I wasted long enough but these were all thoughts while we were together.
@mathurinmikehandy8657
@mathurinmikehandy8657 3 жыл бұрын
Yes I feel the same for you.You just don't know how much life damaged me.If I'm still living it's not because of me.I was tired of living.I wanted to die so bad,but GOD still kept me alive.You just don't know how much I love you.You are my pride.
@poeticallyspeaking6879
@poeticallyspeaking6879 4 жыл бұрын
Such a inspiration
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@laurieestep2675
@laurieestep2675 5 жыл бұрын
I'll be here you are the one
@mujeebjawa3974
@mujeebjawa3974 5 жыл бұрын
I am your bigest fan
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
Aww thank you
@spotarmstrong3090
@spotarmstrong3090 2 жыл бұрын
Yes
@mystiquelou1277
@mystiquelou1277 6 жыл бұрын
Begging someone .....then he doesnt really wAnt you...reality is hard and you cry
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 жыл бұрын
I forgot about that love, I feel fear about it
@shruthikumarkamal9893
@shruthikumarkamal9893 2 жыл бұрын
Amen thank
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 жыл бұрын
Give respect and take respect
@dareenmarwan3487
@dareenmarwan3487 2 жыл бұрын
You wanna me to disbelieve my eyes and believe written words!¡¡Convence me that you can hurt any one for me,can you send anyone a bad word now to satisfy me? A year doing nothing but hurting me.You know why you feel all this 💕?coz I never hurt you and I won't
@jenna4420
@jenna4420 3 жыл бұрын
I love him for almost 5 years now, he never felt the same way. Now I'll never gonna see each him again bc we start a new chapter in life (university). My biggest wish is for him to be happy.
@fatimajidda6116
@fatimajidda6116 2 жыл бұрын
I pray that one day you will be healed 😭I know how it feels 💔
@jenna4420
@jenna4420 2 жыл бұрын
@@fatimajidda6116 After 5 months (I wrote my comment 5 months ago) I can tell you that I'm slowly healing and am concentrating on myself right now 🥰
@ef4412
@ef4412 3 жыл бұрын
Baby I still love you won’t leave you You’re my life I’ll wait for you! Don’t give me up cuz I love you so much!! ❤️
@spotarmstrong3090
@spotarmstrong3090 2 жыл бұрын
100% exactly
@judylockhart9503
@judylockhart9503 3 жыл бұрын
I'm here I didn't leave
@karenwhite6407
@karenwhite6407 3 жыл бұрын
I feel the same i love you. Oh it me talking to you.
@kushoautar353
@kushoautar353 3 жыл бұрын
Is for you 💬❤
@wayneminto2740
@wayneminto2740 2 жыл бұрын
I can relate 🙄
@chrisythornton2103
@chrisythornton2103 2 жыл бұрын
Yes I'm the one I lov you xx
@ramyayg9927
@ramyayg9927 4 жыл бұрын
Nice
@h.mohamednazer9704
@h.mohamednazer9704 Жыл бұрын
Ok❤️❤️❤️💕💕
@martinemaryhernandez729
@martinemaryhernandez729 4 жыл бұрын
I love you My Honey♾👣 Thank You for choosing Me as your Lifelong Partner💍🔐🌎 I truly adore you in every way possible😍🥰😘💜💚👫🐞🐸♥️🐻
@KAMROXX2K11
@KAMROXX2K11 2 жыл бұрын
Why God allows me to wake daily and long for someone. The same someone he allows to wake daily to hate me.
@josephroybal1819
@josephroybal1819 Ай бұрын
This is for camille to hearing them
@lillyogg6829
@lillyogg6829 6 ай бұрын
So I know this is for a relationship between partners, but to me this reminds me of my relationship with my bio dad.
@channiegajadhar6392
@channiegajadhar6392 4 жыл бұрын
😢😢😢😢😢no dont leave me dont go away i love u i just dont know what to do if u walk away i will never b the same again u are the one who helps me up all the time when i am down noone believes me everyone thinks i am mad n i gave in to it dont know what to do anymore please dont play with my feeling s if u dont love me go but if u do stay with me love u
@shreyapaul5945
@shreyapaul5945 3 жыл бұрын
Arre baba. . I am here .. I am not thinking about anyone else .. pr I know that jo honaa mushkil mujhse usme how can I say yes .
@user-hi7qu9kh8w
@user-hi7qu9kh8w 6 ай бұрын
I love you elise
@ewarzadkosz1274
@ewarzadkosz1274 4 жыл бұрын
Wlasnie kazdy tak samo czuje i kiedy nadaza sie okazja zeby to wyjasnic to wiekszosc wymieka i ucieka od tej drugiej polowki zamiast stawic czola temu wsztkiemu powiedziec sorry przyznac sie do winy to jeszcze lepiej dokopac jak psu przybledzie na ulicy kopa w tylek i powiedziec paszol wont a potem ludzie maja rozdarte serce i nocami ciagle placza smutne czasami jest zycie czlowieka.
@gsb575
@gsb575 Жыл бұрын
Its ok,
@sammy-dawnellenleigh-johns6272
@sammy-dawnellenleigh-johns6272 3 жыл бұрын
Goodbye. 🙏😢💔💜💙
@victoriaperkovic4938
@victoriaperkovic4938 4 жыл бұрын
Not even coment, have a nice day
@kushoautar353
@kushoautar353 2 жыл бұрын
Message for u my love 🙏🌹
@AliKhan-tn9pw
@AliKhan-tn9pw 4 жыл бұрын
If someone read this comment please rply me i love her so much I cant even think live without her I lost my friend everything for now she keep ignoring me when I ask her what happened she say nothing what should i do
@lightningstrike9369
@lightningstrike9369 4 жыл бұрын
What happened to you dear
@AliKhan-tn9pw
@AliKhan-tn9pw 4 жыл бұрын
@@lightningstrike9369 thank you for your concern alhamdulillah i am good have a nice day 😊
@laurieestep2675
@laurieestep2675 5 жыл бұрын
I do feel love for you I do love you please forgive
@StoryTellerHindi1
@StoryTellerHindi1 4 жыл бұрын
Maybe I'm not the one who's suffering from this
@ianlewis5385
@ianlewis5385 5 ай бұрын
1:40
@carolineakinyi6019
@carolineakinyi6019 3 жыл бұрын
I have tolerated this for long u heard about my ex that makes me feel bad I'm only and single forever if u rejected my love
@bluedragon4168
@bluedragon4168 2 жыл бұрын
It's yours
@noorjanhashim2198
@noorjanhashim2198 4 жыл бұрын
My dear istill love you i can't not leave you,i care you everyday
@hanasione5348
@hanasione5348 4 жыл бұрын
Baby I feel the same way as you. I love you with all my heart. No one else but you. Babe I need you in my life. 👫❤💝💙💋💋💋💋💋💖
@philliphowson1937
@philliphowson1937 2 жыл бұрын
Haha funny really
@philliphowson1937
@philliphowson1937 2 жыл бұрын
Thats no love online
@laurieestep2675
@laurieestep2675 5 жыл бұрын
I'm sorry Chris please forgive
@martyburns5869
@martyburns5869 3 жыл бұрын
It's your that's stopping us not minr
@joannestucker7905
@joannestucker7905 2 жыл бұрын
I trying but I’m giving up no response ever 💔💔💔💔
@martyburns5869
@martyburns5869 3 жыл бұрын
Tell me what you need you won't tell me can't read your minf
@osamabadr490
@osamabadr490 2 жыл бұрын
لا استطيع التحكم بمشاعري لا ادري يأتي الي ويزول ويأتي لاتعلم سنين طوال عجاف احتاجك احتاج عناق يمحو هذا كله لم اعد اعرف كيف نتواجه كيف تتحكم بمشاعري افتقدك كثيرا بكل جوارحي اعذريني مااردت أن تعلمي مامر به من شده الالم اتمنى لك حياه جديده وان تقدري تضحيتي لك ilove yo bb
@laurieestep2675
@laurieestep2675 5 жыл бұрын
Me
@alokranjan2814
@alokranjan2814 3 жыл бұрын
I am loneliest elephant 🐘 .No one is with me so you don't worry.you are a 🦌 deer many of are also deer.Myself resides very far away you can't reach to me.you all live peacefully because no one can catch me.
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 жыл бұрын
Nadikavel M R Radha
@josephroybal1819
@josephroybal1819 Ай бұрын
I love you can I see you today
@vimalamala7658
@vimalamala7658 3 жыл бұрын
One time I dissertation nothing else I don't want anybody's else entry my life I one answer only one more person entry disturb why I tell seriously some more disturb why I don't know
@shreyapaul5945
@shreyapaul5945 3 жыл бұрын
You will go insane .. only lust will satisfy you .. nothing else can ? Already due to this you have made too many mistakes Do you want to make more ? You meet me once please .. I am here only .
@narimankarimi9903
@narimankarimi9903 2 жыл бұрын
All I can tell .... you r love of my life ..... Call me ، text me , before I leave .,,, I love you very much so .... I don’t know Why ????
@spotarmstrong3090
@spotarmstrong3090 2 жыл бұрын
I've been going on for months without you and you're just on and then when I asked like yes no maybe maybe not I don't know the hot and cold and I know and I understand because you're scared from what I did in the past the hours of f****** little freak a lot of times and I regret every single minute of every single day that I have not been with you
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