My best attempt after watching twice: Captain Jones no longer wishes to live such a life since he is enslaved. He sends a bomb disguised as his shipment of glow, but it is disarmed before it can destroy the alien robots. He is arrested and somehow uses glow to destroy Eve, and he is killed as well by the explosion. At the end, we see another human that is still alive and appears to be a clone of Captain Jones, whom I presume may now go on with his life as a free person. Am I even close?

It must be me. the visuals and score were excellent. The score particularly had a "Vangelis/original Bladerunner" vibe that I particularly like. Thing is, I lost the story plot about half way through, and I'm usually pretty good at that. Oh well...

Loved this.

Amazing graphics.

Very good score and far out movie👍✨️🎼✨️

atmospheric and beautifully done ...a wonderful score to a very cool film..love it!😊💕

Как говорится: _"ничего не понятно, но очень интересно"..._

WOW GREAT

Increíblemente.fascinante eso está por pasar. Que los veamos ha estos seres increíbles

Made by Oskar deserve an Oscar

I must say not only art but also screen writing is very important. I can see so many right now already.

Hypnotic graphics and soundtrack negate the need for language in this mesmerizing gem.

One of the best sci-fi fantasy films l seen in a while, music is great too....

Wow bravisimo! The return of the Anunaki!!!

Great SF movie. Thanks

music and visuals go real well with each other to tell the story. Great job!

Now that was extra ordinary. Imagination in skill. Kudos!

great work

Hugely imaginative and just the way i love good sci fi.....

A great score, Lee. I've watched all your videos and love them. Keep up the good work.

Very good 👍

Impressive!

This video makes the Borq of Star Trek look like a better option. If the Humans in this video have even a small hope of eventual freedom? That could balance the scales or make this preferable. Either would suck I guess. Anyway this is a lot of detail for a short film that probably has a really tiny budget compared to Star Trek.

Nice one

The stance of the observer must be to understand. And the wild and unique spinning symbols of the floor as 7:55 with motion to spinning circular (door/temple wall) are 11:00 processional to the jazz flow where everything, while light, form, robot mother, journey......are indeed propelled. As to a Piano base line, hence to the final Lee Daish arraignment (jazz) where as 10 minutes...11 minutes have gone by where I understand a man has walked, has attempted some real mode of effortless goal. Constelar in the end had the place where I was wrapped in salt Jazz, with no memory reference in places along that journey. What stirred something of emote, place, caravan motion plane as box traffic, events...were inaccessible but clearly alive in dream state. I am remarking, I did wake....but just at the eyes open place....I want more Jazz. I want to go back to San Francisco memory. My place is to live reminded my suit scratched and coffee has steam. M.

Absolutely brilliant great work

Interessante.

Muy bueno, excelente trabajo

I'm grateful for brendapaduch2188's comment. I got some of the basic elements of the story but still felt a kind of deja vu and thought immediately of 2001: A Space Odyssey. Nice animation, I have to say.

Great visuals and music, but the story is a bit enigmatic. Interesting though.

really liked it!

Interesting.

СПАСИБО.

Фильмы про фантастику и галактика 🌌 самые крутые 👍🏼👍🏼 я под✍ ся, а вы?

Nice visuals. Nice music. Presumably it was all supposed to mean something???

Thank you . ( 2023 / Dec / 26 )

Cosmic, moody, and transfixing.

I got 2 pods, and they don't float but hanging and don't glow!🤔

Nice short and the music was great. I would say good job on both the short and the Soundtrack.

Could use a little comic relief . Like maybe a talking cat that follows Captain Jones around where ever he goes.☮🐱‍🚀

need a prequel

Excellent, Lee and Oskar. A teaser for a full-feature yet to come? I love it.

Nicely done. Music was engaging and helped the visuals along.

some one has to feel locations ,to be honest. I like all..

Fantastic work Mr. Alvardo! Please tell me that we'll be seeing the Captain once again.👍

This seems to be a common problem with advanced hypothetical civilizations. Not unlike the real ones, where ppl get sick of the routine and want to discharge some sort of weapon. Thank you Uhuru Mazda.

The score is reminiscent of Blade Runner. Any "Making of" videos. Would love to see how you built this. Fantastic concept. Cheers.

🟦.... Being a straphanger I was solidly on the bus with this until a hard left-turn @ 5:12,... I was pretty much lost after that.

He was courageous .

A lot of effort for 1 ' man ' it been easier to put him out of an airlock , saving time and precious energy!

That was a beautiful score and an interesting video. I watched it all.

The music was a specially good choice, well done!

recently , I watched a movie call water for elephant . and I like it. because every thing is strange for fan. In order to ,fall in love. someone has to feel for screenwriting .then every can make movie...

Also called "Future Alien Bondage Cult"

This was great, it felt a lot like a 80s scifi novella. Fantastic video. So why does this have so many dislikes?

yes. somewhere for explore right? yes ,I like every thing . how long do you want to show this location?

Animation and Score are wonderful. Storyline moves very slowly. Plot??? If so many people don't get it, then maybe the problem lies with the writer more than the audience.

Eve does not look primitive at all. The robots, it seems, have the size proportional to their rank... Other than that... It is unclear what happened to him in the end or was it just his dream.

Our future after 300 yrs of generalized AI😢.

ANV, DUST, seems related

Ho hum. Just another day in the galaxy.

The music was fantastic. Didn't hate the story either.

A Tapestry of pure imagination ... or is it? :-)

3rd time watching and still no clue what the hell it was meant to be

Reminds me of Hans Zimmer's work on Blade runner 2049. Did i hear a nod to Jean Michel Jarre's 'Final Rendezvous' (Ron's piece) in the sax' at 11:00 - 12:00? Or just a coincidence?

Der Film ist ganz schön lang.

mmmmm ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, yes, cute

Synthetic film looks like a game engine to me.

I tried, I really did, but I don't get it. And I am a sci-fi nut.

yes. when you say create sci _fi location .I think you want to show these right? I only suggest. screen writing is very important to show in movie. this is first step... you must be brave..( I like it)...

Kinda weird. I like the music.

Stunning and beautiful! I loved the mix esoteric symbolism near the end... but why the saxophone? B/c it matched the tone of the moment? Haunting and emotional? Thanks for this!

Too art-see for me.........

Alvardo?.......Alvarado?

Eyes are light receptors - not light emitters. And what's the point of breasts on a robot?!

Is this about dating tall chicks ??🤔

Good visuals - needs some narration. Just to give a voice to the human. The explanation given is pretty good - Hey, isn't fun to have a bunch of nobodies critique your work?

퐁당

Wonderfully strange... . Stranger than Heavy Metal from back in the daze...

I got lost part way through.. too many 'atmospheric" moments with nothing actually happening.

Confusing as hell

Visually Stunning but overall just nonsense

Efficace👍mais jsur le plan ’’Musique’ je retrette quand même que le concept ’’sound design/ ajouts d’éléments sonores illustration pure de l’image" se soit substitué à celui de ’’musique pure’’ (intrigue musicale développé avec cohérence interne collant à l’histoire). Autre vision.

wonderful graphics and video, poor story line no easy conclusion.

WTF?

Nice exhibition of digital prowess. Too bad there is no story. What's a story without a story? Job #1? Story. Everything else is to support the story. Get a story. Or a different job.

I am very sick, very stressed and I need my money faster

Sorry, nonsensical. Too bad, seemed to be going well until the end.

Hire a writer next time.

Great graphics, rubbish storytelling.

Very boring movie with a bunch of robots and cyborgs.

Absolutely made no sense to me.

Alvardo?.........Alvarado?