you need to extend this, this sounds like a piece i'd hear in a movie/game in a heartwrenching moment

I’m with everyone who says to extend this piece. Holy heck talk about tense!

As a sax player myself, I'd love to play this! It sounds really cool

I love this! Would love to hear more!

I need a longer version!!! It’s too good!

I like the emotion this work gives me, I could use "eerie" to describe it. Anyway great work I admire it

this is actually amazing, awesome job

It’s good, but I think if you could have made it longer and successfully developed it more (using said extra length) it would have been even better

sounds like a distorted version of interstellar

Awesome

Sounds like Batman

i like it!

Is the Sheet music available?

lowkey awesome sauce

Very musically complex and strong structure, keep it up 👍🏻

If you're gonna use live sax for this you need to add more breaths. Some sax players could probably do this with circular breathing but it's usually good not to make them unless you know you're working with players who are specifically good at that kind of thing. Think in terms of putting a pause for breath at the end of every phrase. That causes problems for your short repeating motif since it's hard to jam a rest in there but there are ways around that

Random noise.