Thank you for your very kind words.

Dr. Creepen my boyfriend thinks I'm crazy because when I go to bed I turn on one of your stories to go to sleep to. he said the stories are creepy and yea they are some I only listen to during the day lol

:-) Assure him I'm just some guy with a voice telling stories on KZfaq!

Dr. Creepen I told him your voice was intoxicating and I'd fall asleep he said so you listen to a guy with a intoxicating voice telling horror stories in bed to fall asleep...I laughed a little evil laugh and rolled over. got to keep him on his toes lol

Nova Shadowfeather ikr it's like silk. Wish my husband had a switch n had his voice at a certain time lol WOW now that would be seduction!

It's very kind of you to say so, Aidan.

I concur. Excellent readings, Dr. You'll go far in this.

Thank you for saying so.

+Whispers Deep Many thanks for your kind words.

+Temperature Zero I think 'sealed room to scare kids' is an official part of the blueprints for every school construction.

Not at mine.

I can beat that, My elementary school was on Sullivan’s Island. Where multiple forts from the civil war were built. (SC) Not only was our school a part of a minimal bunker, more of a office type of the era setting, all made of brick and electrical updates, but right across the parking lot, (a very narrow parking lot), was an actual Full size Bunker/Fort. All black, no lights. Many years they’d use it for an amazing Haunted House, and since we were already afraid to go too deep in, as kids, going even further on Halloween, well that required a few extra pair of undaroos! Also, across the street, equivalent of four blocks, was this enormous dirt hill. It was at a slant, and at the top, a tall chain link fence as the bottom was yet another bunker/Fort. And I don’t mean a small 20-30 man bunker, I mean an entire fort, Huge. To enter into it we’d have to go around the back where there was no hill, and walk right on in. Mostly we’d just skateboard and screw off, as again going too deep into the tunnels was not happening for us. I’m not sure what exactly we were afraid of, I suppose just the dark. Now about 2-3 miles down the island was Fort Moultrie, a fairly well known place, often given tours and very kept up. Far more than any other aside from Fort Sumter, But it made for one extremely memorable, and unique, elementary school environment!

+Creepy Pasta Goblin Thanks, CPG. I sometimes, especially on longer narrations like this, get into the flow of speaking softly and calmly and it can be hard to pick up the pace. I'm still learning and trying my best!

Glad to hear it, John... if there's one thing I can do, it's describe old toilets!

+Dr. Creepen And evidently I enjoy the description of old toilets. We may have a problem here lol.

+LordBitememan Rarely tackle these long ones... really hard work, plus I don't think that many people are prepared to listen for so long. Could be wrong, though!

@@DrCreepen I believe you can narrate anything.. You, my friend, are made for this! Doctor do you also write?

Thank you :-)

+Mr. Crouch Thanks, Mr. C, I try and do 2 or 3 narrations a week... not often these long ones though!

Very kind of you to say so.

Lovecraft. The spell check keeps changing the word lovecraft. I suggest lovecraft not loveseat

My intention is to do some Lovecraft very soon!

IKR? First time I saw Dr. Creepen's avatar pic I thought it was a pic of Edgar Allen Poe. His formal speaking tone makes him sound like someone out of a Victorian or Gothic horror movie.

Arthas Menethil May I suggest Pickman’s Model?

Hop Frog hasn't be done very much.

+Jack Payne I'm always a bit worried when I try and take on one of these longer stories.

Indeed!

+Lizz May Many thanks Lizz. Comments like this give me the motivation to continue!

It's my honest opinion and I'm glad to share it with you!

:-)

+Jack Payne Also liking this long one... take your time to tell that tale.

+Jack Payne Thanks, Jack... these long ones are hard work!

+fenix gawaze Very happy to hear that, Fenix.

Thanks :-)

Really loved this story

one of my favorite authors, definitely!

Thanks, Chris. A few people seem to think so; I'll take the compliment!

Chris Fleming I thought the same thing during my first listen. Most people don't hear that :)

My editing skills have improved somewhat since I made this video!

There's a link in the vid description.

Really? Most often people say I go a bit too slowly!

I'm a big fan of Michael Whitehouse's stories, but I appreciate they might not be for everyone.

I disagree on it not being a good story. It is a bit wordy but with that said with this narrator it’s is best to “grab your favorite drink, sit back and relax”