I find it funny that this is a Cinema Sins parody, but ends up also being partially Cinema Wins just because it gets sins removed every few seconds! Laughed so hard when a sin was removed during J’s “introduction.”

This is the best "Everything wrong with" video I've ever seen. Also this one is the best of your videos so far! Love ya! But just one tiny note: J actually does has pockets, you can see them if you take a more careful look at her dress (or is it a coat? I dunno)

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Yes, every project always has some sins of its own, but nevertheless it can be no less interesting to watch what is happening. It was fun to watch! ^^ I especially like the magical disappearance of the key card of the door directly from Uzi's hand, and then the same appearance when it became necessary again. And also J, who doesn't try to dodge when a pen flies at her.

This was so fun to watch as it premiered

24 should have honestly stayed the same during the car scene- disassembly drones malfunction from overheating, and cars are definitely a lot hotter on the inside.

12:31 There's an meme about what happend to Uzi when that happend.

9:40 something about the virus that J uploads to N. You can hear it beeping (yes it's very quite) and it was shown that each beep equals 1% (shown in the first couple seconds when the virus is first shown and focused on) and if you count the beeps you end up with around... 250-275 beeps... N should be dead 2 times over.

Honestly one of few legitimately pretty good CinemaSins style videos, still going to leave some corrections on certain sins. 0:57 I infer that she probably just grabbed a random worker in the scene with the shadow over top of them 2:36 Just guessing, Khan's house is probably much more secure than we see in the episode itself, just not shown because it's not nearly as important as everything else. Even if it wasn't though, no one would want to open the doors to a death sentence, so what's the real point of hiding it? 3:25 No clue how long she's been searching, probably been there longer than we'd expect though 4:27 Genuinely never noticed this lol, I love these kinds of details :) 5:39 Shot intentionally cuts to N looking away from Uzi, the sound could've been muffled by V/J's footsteps on the ceiling 5:55 VERY good sin, this is why I genuinely enjoy this video when compared to most others in the same style 6:17 No clue how much time has passed between cuts 6:50 See above 7:12 I think he was off in another room grabbing a fresh pack of cards like his coworkers had asked a few minutes prior 7:32 She was asking Khan to get out of the way so he didn't get caught in the crossfire, though the monologue bit was fair lol 8:11 Specifically about the first sin, this time, N actually had a connection with the Worker Drone he was intended to kill, which meant he hesitated before eventually sparing Uzi, 2nd sin is fair though 8:48 TRUTH 9:06 Yes, she does 9:16 Truth once again lol 10:06 Actually, this is pretty in character for V (similar to the introduction scene) 10:27 Fair enough 10:51 Minus the V sin on a pretty good streak lol, all of these are fair 11:09 💀 11:28 V got stunned into obliviousness 11:54 First, just general editing thing, cut out like half the scene before the sin because it's completely unrelated, in terms of the sin itself, that's just kinda how the wings appear the entire time 12:48 Hard agree Even though I kinda ripped into this it's genuinely one of the better "Everything Wrong With" videos, it has valid criticism mixed in with some good jokes and I actually liked it, good job :)

This video took ages to make, had to actually watch very carefully and dissect every little bit of the episode.

Sins 16&17: Three problems, actually! The third one being WHY DOESN'T N JUST EITHER BREAK, GRAB OR THROW THE GUN OUT OF REACH?!?

The distance between the spire and the drone colony could be pretty long, but they decided to cut down the running cause it would have taken too long, meaning n could have time to catch up to uzi, uzi's railgun could have recharged in the time she was running. Still, even if it was a gap between long enough for her railgun to recharge, I feel like n would have caught her in the 20-30 minute timeframe, cause I doubt worker drones would be significantly faster than murder drones, unless n rebooting took awhile

I understand why thad, lizzy and other loved characters get the plot armor

okay so not n's head but uzi's head broke through the roof whoever i think an explanation for that is the roof might be made of glass but i do not know

Something that’s always bugged me at 10:04, V is clearly hanging upside down before beating Thad’s ass, where the actual hell was she hanging from? When the camera zooms out, you would have to assume they can float upside down, but we’ve seen N sleep upside down with his tail, sorry for the rant.

11:42 closely you can see Lizzy’s fingers detach from her hands

2:08 A later episode suggests that it's because the part she needs is a Worker Drone body part, so it makes sense that it would be in the corpse spire. Perhaps she learned how it works in the drone equivalent of biology class? 5:04 She's messing with him. 6:00 Maybe because she's a sadistic freak and wanted to give her a head start? 6:25 The landing pod is _in_ the spire. 7:00 There have pretty clearly been a few time skips, lasting anywhere between a few seconds to possibly a couple minutes. Those add up. 7:38 She was waiting for her dad to get out of the way.

The biggest cyn has got to be the fanart. Specified, fanart.

Imma be honest, I don't really agree with a lot of these sins. A few of them are justified, but half of them just don't seem right. Just my opinion

murder drone fans watching this be like "its joever"

Nice video. I know this isn't serious, at all. But let me be a little nerd here and defend the N and V thing. "stories can change as time goes on. Things can get changed and some things retconned. They decided that instead of N and V, they're leaning more toward something else. Maybe you should just accept it instead of complaining about it" 🤓 Btw. Khan has a door fetish. Just saying.

i dont want to know where j was keeping that pen

for sin 22 uzi actually got anime powers from earlier when she was attacked by N for the first time with all the railgun action and stuff

7:47 uzi just didn't want to shoot her dad

Nice video man 😊❤

Alright ONE MORE SEPERATE COMMENT ALRIGHT hopefully nobody said this before but J obviously pulled the pen out of her inventory

4:42 should have gotten like 10 sins added

5:52 plot armor

Some with you with N

The pacing definitely needs more work, as well as the comedy in it. Kind of a miss oppourtunity when uzi left the shelter there, it couldve easily been a scene of uzi going through the desolate and destroyed earth showing us the damage and destruction it suffered, and then when uzi runs away back to the shelter, it cuts to her running pass the places shes been hence saves the weird cut of her immediately back to the shelter.

I was expecting to have him put a CYN up on the scoreboard for J not being in the intro your not the real CYNema CYNS GET IT YOU GET IT

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Perfect

I still don’t understand why the worker drones have hormones, tounges and saliva

"V couldn't have killed anyone in that time." BS! Have u seen V in action? Probably stabbed him on her wing spike on the way up.

I was about say the heck you just say about murder drones but then I read the disclaimer and I was like, oh ok.

4:42 steven universe be like

You could’ve also sinned the animation errors, such as Thad’s eyes being shown even though the camera is behind his head???? I wonder how they made the faces in the first episode because there are multiple scenes where the eyes show in a scenario they shouldn’t, and scenarios where the mouths clip in weird ways

7:06 It’s plot armor OK

6:26 Can't they fly near Mach speeds?

12:33 also the girls head to for some reason

2 more sins bc I’m annoying lmao: J and N got shot by the same railgun, How tf is N alive if J died? What tf is Kahn drinking if they can’t touch liquid?

If the sin counter is higher, the better it is? Can someone please explain?

Where is the sin for robots having testosterone?

I have a few disagreements with some of these 'sins', and one of them is the very convenient key, why wouldn't it be? her father is the maker of these doors, so what wouldn't he have the key in his office? And she didn't crawl to her gun, she likely rolled. Also there's time cuts in films, so most of the sins related to time when there are cuts don't count. Also you missed a sin, mostly a rendering error, but still I would have counted atleast a little note of it, in this episode, the eyes of the characters sometimes clip through the black display plate on their faces.

Yeah the animation in episode 1 is a bit funny

listen mate, i don't care if its satire, this is genuinely painful to watch

You spelled Cyn wrong

Why is n healing uzis hand a sin

Oh Fu-

7:30 and shoot her dad?!

Omg-

Of course Episode 1 gets a lot of sin drops, Murder Drones is amazing!!!

Now that I have collected my own list of pilot sins I can finally watch this video. I am also going to be playing a game of sin the video. Let's see how much, if anything you fuck up. >:] For the people who are about to type an angry reply comment, this is for fun and comedy. I am friends with Yagsterr. Edit with my list of sins: What time were you recording this? You sound like you literally rolled out of bed into your microphone. Also your timer is underneath your black bars instead of on top. Ngl, not entirely sure why you removed a sin for humanity committing self oof. Are you trying to tell us something? What are you planning with the nukes?? 2:50 okay this one got a giggle out of me because I can literally do that with a card, she's just holding it between her fingers. I'm sinning that fact that neither you or me thought to say "Uzi would be excellent at cinemasins." when she says "'cuz this worked so weirdly well", and adding that to my own script. 3:27 well I wouldn't say it's RIGHT there, she's pretty close to the landing pod and that's the center. 4:15 missed opportunity to say "Unless "that" is a doorknob-". Removing a sin for N saying "thank you" to being stepped on? Yagsterr, is there something you want to tell us? Also we are over a third of the way into the video and you have FOUR SINS! FOUR FUCKING SINS! To say V doesn't chase Uzi even though the railgun is recharging is inaccurate. To say V doesn't chase after Uzi even thought she doesn't know what the railgun is would be more accurate. Yes I am going to be this nitpicky. 6:20 clearly my man has never heard of a time skip. Now what I would have accepted is that somehow Uzi doesn't hear that superman landing! 6:50 another stunning example of Yagsterr not knowing about time skips. We have no idea how long it takes to travel from the pod to the bunker. If it's a very reasonable 20min walk and Uzi has spent 10mins talking to N then the railgun would have time to recharge. What I'm sinning here is the fact that Uzi is heavily breathing from the sprint despite being a *robot* Also the fact that the railgun conveniently takes exactly 30mins to the second to charge. 7:30 do you know the defining feature of a railgun? The thing it's kind of known for? *Piercing* through targets. You know what's on the other side of N? Her dad. You see the problem here? 9:00 clearly from the endless holes into another dimension that exist in their arms which house all of their weapons and bubble wands. 12:32 Well V's head is strong enough to break the damn FLOOR. 13:08 AH! Fucking end screen jumpscare.