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@Aaron-kj6cs2 ай бұрын
Who's here for tomorrow exam 😂
@Hellomisskitty-vz6pt2 ай бұрын
me lol
@kingviolence93432 ай бұрын
Me 😂
@MalakhiSand2 ай бұрын
Me 😅
@waynemuyangi69772 ай бұрын
I'm here for today 😂😂
@tttttt-xg4nb11 ай бұрын
thanks to you i got a grade 8 in my english language
@FirstRateTutors11 ай бұрын
You're welcome and congrats!!!
@zaytim455410 ай бұрын
Woahh congratsss!!!!!
@Middleman000010 ай бұрын
I cant stand how english creative works as I think it actually does more damage to apiring writers than good. We are taught to throw as many techniques in as possible and an interesting and unique narrative with memorable charachters is sort of sidelined. The best stories are written out of passion, not a desire to fit a formula perfectly
@lordexplosionmurder17608 ай бұрын
I one hundred percent agree that the best works are made from passion, however the best writer write with passion and techniques all the time, the on,y difference is that they are so experienced that they do it subconsciously. If you look at your favourite authors texts, I’m sure you would fine a good deal of techniques.
@jameslowe84183 ай бұрын
@@lordexplosionmurder1760 he's not saying the techniques are the bad part he's saying how developing a character and a acually interesting and indepth narrative will get u 0 marks and to get a acually high grade u just have to roboticly fill out a formula with little to no creativity.
@cetvies-author-writer2 ай бұрын
the trick is in the have to, but gcse is not writing is about a demo of how you applied learnt techniques. when you try to combine the two, lessons and creativity, very very very complicated indeed.
@freyai2 ай бұрын
And how we are encouraged to not be that imaginative but to write a simple story that just takes away so much to what the story could of been
@cetvies-author-writer2 ай бұрын
@@freyai some writers use it as an exercise of enrichissment. they add challenges to their writings. things, such as these instructions they need to add to their initial drafts. it is very good for the brain, it takes you where you would not go. very very interesting. and of course very frustrating since writing is building and imply much more than 45 min reflexion. you have to go back to your writing to fix it and balance it, ebb it and deepen it. i wrote a book with your name in the title: 'Freya deserts'.
@AwapeNembo22 күн бұрын
Best English teacher ❤❤
@LouisAyers-Mason-qb2pt3 ай бұрын
Thanks this is such a good video and really helped me what to include in my imaginative writing.
@FirstRateTutors3 ай бұрын
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@jadekohly4 ай бұрын
Thank you so much. Amazing video. It helped a lot! Thank you!❤
@FirstRateTutors4 ай бұрын
You're so welcome!
@randomrandom3755 Жыл бұрын
I am in Year 9 and though my IGCSEs are in two years. I love watching your videos and applying them to my current school work. You explain things in such a easily understandable way, you are a brilliant teacher!!! 🥰
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
That's awesome, thank you 😃
@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 Жыл бұрын
bit sad that ur revising in yr 9, nothing better to do?
@tttttt-xg4nb Жыл бұрын
@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 whats the point in being mean??
@randomrandom3755 Жыл бұрын
@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945its really because i got realllyyy bored, I already loved her videos and i was genuinely interested in the topic already. I actually lead a really fun life where i hang out with friends and go out a lot but it doesnt mean i dont have time to study 😹😹😹😹
@randomrandom3755 Жыл бұрын
@@tttttt-xg4nb its okay dw thank you so much for defending me though. this person was just asking a question. i guess because they have really bad time management they thought i watching these videos because i had nothing better to do 😅🤣🤣
@Salit-om2sy5 ай бұрын
thank you so much i appreciate your videos so much thank you
@FirstRateTutors5 ай бұрын
You are so welcome
@distruction9178 Жыл бұрын
This was absolute amazing thanks for the help
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
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@jeromengundu66265 ай бұрын
"They smell perhaps like cigarettes and then there like a shadow behind them and suddenly there's somebody that's followed them..." Interesting story😭
@tasnimbintehaque9346 Жыл бұрын
Ma'am. I appreciate your hardwork and your clear understanding methods. Unfortunately I have my edexcel IGSCEs really approaching after 4 days and I have no time to prepare this new technique. It would have been even more better if you had uploaded this video one-two months before the final exam. I understand that there were other difficult topics than this one that were crucial to upload before the exam. Still I'll try my best to cope up with and follow your steps. Previously I have followed your 'PETER' formula for writing about the writer's effects. And believe me or not, it really helped me get out of hell! This type of question is absolutely challenging and it needs critical thinking which your video has taught me to do. You are actually a saviour! Certainly I will try my best to follow this creative step as well if I want to get a Grade 9 in English Language B In Shaa Allah. Love from Bangladesh 🇧🇩
@dancemodesick9754 Жыл бұрын
My man said Ma'am is not India is Miss/Mrs
@harveersethi24622 ай бұрын
@@dancemodesick9754 ur name says it all g
@harveersethi24622 ай бұрын
@@dancemodesick9754 ur name says it all g
@chickenmonster360010 ай бұрын
this helped but its funny as your example for the beggining paragraph was a sunny sky but what im doing is winter with a soldier in a trench
@lisamenezies21 күн бұрын
I hope it helps in my exam Tmr😊😂😢😮
@nysamiyanaАй бұрын
Doing my English Language Mock tomorrow😭
@korirenockKiptoo-lh2qx Жыл бұрын
Nice one thanks
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
You are welcome
@azizkhan9154 Жыл бұрын
Very useful
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
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@KatieliKelesoma3 ай бұрын
hello im in year nine 9 it really help me in my work study it really amazing
@FirstRateTutors3 ай бұрын
Glad it helped!
@fortaang1145 Жыл бұрын
Would it be ok to write in first person, like using "I", or should I stick with third person presepective? Please tell which one is more preferred by examiners.
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
Either but I personally find first person "I" is easier!
@fortaang1145 Жыл бұрын
@@FirstRateTutors Thankyou
@alesmateixx5958 Жыл бұрын
Will this be helpful if I’m doing edexcel
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
It cuts across any exam board.
@Salit-om2sy5 ай бұрын
what is a protagonist
@FirstRateTutors5 ай бұрын
Main character
@summerxo2993 ай бұрын
does it need to be formal or informal?
@hoe66993 ай бұрын
i watched a video by another examiner and she said it should be formal and u shouldnt use things like exclamation marks because she sees them as childish, idk tho
@zomxeditsАй бұрын
formal ig but depends ?
@godislove333010 ай бұрын
Please is a creative story or description easier
@FirstRateTutors10 ай бұрын
I'd suggest creative writing.
@cetvies-author-writer2 ай бұрын
this was scary enough...for publication.
@Randombutcool1210 ай бұрын
😎
@shirleyyldz874711 ай бұрын
Can I end a story with a cliffhanger ??
@FirstRateTutors11 ай бұрын
You can but make sure it's not cliched and predictable (ie. "and she woke up and found it was all a dream" / "suddenly everything around him went dark"). Avoid, avoid, avoid cliched cliffhangers
@cetvies-author-writer2 ай бұрын
@@FirstRateTutors this must be so textbook!! i came across last week with these exact two examples on a Pearson lesson. talking about cliche.
@bobuzbee5674 Жыл бұрын
🤭 "promosm"
@spooderman266 ай бұрын
Thanks Edit: 8:12 i think i paused at the wrong time