How To Write The Perfect Descriptive Writing Essay In Just FIVE Steps! (GCSE English Exams Revision)

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@Enchxnted_fnm 5 ай бұрын

Her:“Small shift” Me: “the leaf had shifted an inch to the left” Literature teachers: “this portray how he had changed his personality and behavior mostly due to the fact that someone close to him died. The fact that he mentioned ‘inch’ tells us he is from America and that his friend or someone else close to him died in a school shooting which cause him to shift his personality just as the leaf shifted and inch. Also, he mentions how it shifted to the ‘left’ symbolizing that the change in his behavior and personality may have been in the wrong direction since if it was a shift to the right, it would be in the right direction” 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

@yoshihorror1948 Жыл бұрын

Thank you for the video. I am amazed by how much content you've manage to produce across your website + youtube (and I haven't even looked at your Tiktok etc!)

@zoephillips7190 Жыл бұрын

really comprehensive overview thanks

@lucasjunior7677 Жыл бұрын

Really got me ready my exams that I'm going to do this morning thank you

@udouhiara5643 Жыл бұрын

As I speak two languages and learning the techniques of English is kinda hard 😢, I'm not sure if amthe only one that thinks that

@geeti450 Жыл бұрын

Bro i speak 5 still got A never let ur weakness take over u

@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 Жыл бұрын

youre the only one

@vxon9613 Жыл бұрын

@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 wow, bro doesn't care about no one's feelings

@b1an6a 7 ай бұрын

i speak 3 and learning one at the moment, and i’m pretty sure the reason is hard its bc you didnt get used to the exam structure as i struggle with that too

@Enchxnted_fnm 5 ай бұрын

@@b1an6atry doing past papers and marking ur own paper, or if ur lucky, try to get your teacher to mark it for you.

@MM-lr5hv Жыл бұрын

My goodness you look good, you explained with excellence and it is definitely helpful. I watched 4times already to put it inside my head. ❤Thank you

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

Glad it was helpful!

@thebestisyettocome1308 Жыл бұрын

what would you say for feelings, like in general for the setting or just one person, does it matter if u zoom in or out?

@mk-hc3pj 2 ай бұрын

does this also work for iGCSE CIE 0500 english language?

@mahroosh1077 7 ай бұрын

This is the BEST video out there. This is exactly what I needed! Subscribing!

@FirstRateTutors 5 ай бұрын

Thank you ❤️

@user8482. 3 ай бұрын

When it asking questions such as, write a story about a new beginning, how would this apply? should you still just use description? xx

@Hyperrasf Ай бұрын

ilysm miss ty for ur explanation but I dont rlly get the 3rd and fourth part

@Lovetak08 Жыл бұрын

Very helpful for myself thankyou ma'am

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

Most welcome 😊

@YardyBritishfamily 3 ай бұрын

I like your teaching energy .

@FirstRateTutors 3 ай бұрын

I appreciate that!

@Riri-nj1ky Ай бұрын

Hi. Your vids are really helping me.. i have a question in mind. Can you add humans like characters in your description. I have a exam tmmr . And im not sure

@godislove3330 10 ай бұрын

Bless you, thank you

@FirstRateTutors 10 ай бұрын

You're very welcome

@nanospace2389 Ай бұрын

my paper 1 is transactional writing and paper 2 is descriptive writing which i use edexcel but the edexcel papers are the opposite way around here

@Kevin-zf9om Жыл бұрын

can you describe it as if you were there ? For example " I can feel the humid air"

@AdanOxford 2 ай бұрын

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@mollie643 Жыл бұрын

Such a good video tysm

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

Glad it helped 😊

@marleny750 3 ай бұрын

I m always confused with the word essay and descriptive altogether. I Though an essay implies always a thesis, something you need to proved, so i don´t know if a descriptive essay implies that. Can you explain it to me please. or it would be very helpful if you did some videos giving us some examples of it. Can a descriptive essay have 3 short paragraphs? . im confused with expository text and descriptive essays .

@udouhiara5643 Жыл бұрын

Thank you soo much for this hack or example cuz English is just giving me problems, so thank you for making things easier for me 😅 🥰

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

You're so welcome! 😊

@shannelchikumbu3385 Жыл бұрын

Very helpful, practising for November exams 😰

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

All the best, you've got plenty of time! 😊

@stephenallington6478 8 ай бұрын

Is there a model answer available for this structure? I have seen accompanying videos for story writing but not description writing. Thanks

@FirstRateTutors 8 ай бұрын

Here it is: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/mNR-m657tauqkqc.html

@ramrahsmim9020 4 ай бұрын

Did this help anyone significantly after the test? Just wondering if anyone went from grade 6 to 8 via this vid

@Sportcat01 Жыл бұрын

On step 2, is it basically you are using the 5 senses so what you can see, hear, smell, taste, feel etc?

@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 Жыл бұрын

@Crashmat438 Жыл бұрын

Pretty much

@Enchxnted_fnm 5 ай бұрын

How do you talk about the weather and stuff like that if the question says to describe the most interesting piece of art you have ever seen?

@scarlet-toe 3 ай бұрын

Is the last part necessary? Is it possible to end the writing with the protagonist 's feelings and emotions?

@FirstRateTutors 3 ай бұрын

Yes you can do that too!

@samialsadig8610 Жыл бұрын

Can I just write two descriptive writing of jubilant place and a dark place and then memories them for my real exam.

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

You can but make sure that you memorise more general descriptive paragraphs that can be applied to most setting questions.

@isabellesmith8674 Жыл бұрын

what u mean by the feelings of the object like how would i write that

@Stamnoj Жыл бұрын

Put yourself in the shoes of that object. How does it feel? For example if you were given an image of a decaying tree, you could write about how it feels its time coming, its branches wearing down etc. Personification goes a long way in this part.

@NickWarnner-hk1pw 3 ай бұрын

How do you talk about a picnic trip on an island, describing the sights, sounds and smells

@user-ug2sx8iq4q Ай бұрын

Smell the fresh sea air. Describe the ocean, the sky, the sand, the animals in the beach you can children laughing ,birds chirping ,the waves.

@marufhossain6697 Жыл бұрын

I have a question. Can you use 1st person to write a description?

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

Yes but it's slightly more challenging. If you're writing from first person perspective from descriptive writing, make sure you're describing everything you see as if it's a freeze frame / nothing massive is moving. As if you were describing a picture.

@Kevin-zf9om Жыл бұрын

@@FirstRateTutors can you describe it as if you were there ? For example " I can feel the humid air"

@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 Жыл бұрын

@@Kevin-zf9om she just said yes brudda can you not read ??? you might be struggling for tomorrow lad 😂

@Kevin-zf9om Жыл бұрын

@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 that is not what I asked though it's only a couple of sentences try to read everything next time bud 👍

@Kevin-zf9om Жыл бұрын

@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 Or else you will miss important quotes in the exam I love giving helpful information to those in need