In the extended cut they get married. 12 years later she wins the time machine in a divorce. She goes back in time and stops the whole thing from ever happening. Since he created it, he just makes another time machine and goes back as well. Then they fight through time like War of the Roses or Mr. and Mrs Smith. Please make this film 🤘

"You are not a science experiment, you are work of art". The best most beautiful thing he said all day long to her...

8:24 "You're not a science experiment. You're a work of art (so I'm gonna steal you like I stole those other works of art)."

I was about 7 minutes into this short when I realized something... the male lead can ACT. Seriously, when I first saw him dressed 'as Bond' and saw how he looked so stiff and out of place and his dialogue was stilted I thought, "Oh well, I'll watch this because I like time travel not because I'm expecting good acting." Suddenly, I noticed I had forgotten about the first couple of minutes and was 'buying into' HIS story... the story of a person seeking to correct a perceived mistake so he could win his heart's desire. KUDOS!!!!

Plot twist, female lead is the missing 6th Spice Girl, Temporal Spice. Also, the waitress is the best actor in this short.

I have watched about 50 of these short stories. This one speaks to so many of our most personal dreams and fantasies. It's reminiscent of the innermost thoughts we would not dare share with anyone because there has been someone in each of our lives that we felt that way about. It is both poignant and humorous and sad. To be able to capture all that in just 12 minutes is a magnificent feat.

Enjoyed this. Both leads where spot on. Felt for the ‘crocs and socks’ guy and the Bond girls accent was perfect.

The writing in this film does a great job of breaking the viewers' expectations, whether they be good or bad. The characters are also very dynamic, which keeps the audience engaged and invested in the story.

One of the best time travel stories because the time machine or time travel was integral to the story as compared to fish-out-of-water scenarios, closed loops storyline, and does address fate vs. free will through the succession of "nice guys" montage.

Can I give it two thumbs up? Outstanding story Mr. Chen. Ms. Gobel's performance was also an unexpected delight.

Guy bails out, very smart move..

Hilarious! Very well done.

Yeah I love it brilliant 😀😊

I loved it..The Simp and the Princess finally get together.

very well done, Rachel Gobel is perfect.

I am left wanting more. Perfect!

Excellent time travel opportunity film Vincent Chen. I was right in there start to finish. Great.

"You're a nice guy, _____"; that line cuts to my core. 1st. Why in the world would you not want a "nice guy"? 2nd. Its the very fact that girls like her are uninterested in the "nice guy" that "nice guys" become douchebags. Conclusion: Girls who aren't interested in "nice guys" are the wrong girls. Desire: Because "nice guys" were nice from the beginning, I wish every girl who thought like this at one point in their life were just unable to land a nice guy in the end because they don't deserve them. You shouldn't get to go through the worst and get a nice guy when you're done with the bad.

Perfect Sci - Fi short .

Wow the lighting is brilliant on first impression

Very good concept. Funny too. Poor match for him though. His heart is leading him astray Lol. Mr. Nice guy, get a science gal instead.

A very entertaining little movie with a great storyline. Thankyou.

Well played...focus was perfect and just wierd enuff, continuity in time travel is often hormonal, ....sweet characters, loved the cafe crew. Always wise to have a spare booth....waiting for the next 'blip phzzt' ...'jump'....sort of like deja vu with wattage/ jules verneic huberous, of youth ....seriously...humorous.

Smooth. LOL. This was really good. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

The first rule of time travel - don't mess with a woman!

After he discovers the time machine he becomes a cool guy

Sometimes I imagine that I had a device to travel to time

great job!

Now that was enteetaining. Really Good

Si muy groovy, "Yes men prefer blondes, But women prefer money and any man with or without hair." Ok one thing, the ice cubes in the drink were like MORE COWBELL. I liked this short film, well laid out theme, acting and goofy. Well done Marty McFly. .

Haha. That was great. 👏👏👏

Excellent loved it great job

nice and refreshing. So human.

Excellent!

Damm haven't heard that song since fallout!! Sweet

What a great song from the 40's

Sad part is, after a gazillion tries, he finally managed to get her in bed. She got pregnant, sued him for support, and got everything he's got, including his time machine, so he could not go back and fix his biggest mistake. "Be careful what you wish for, you just might get it!!" - Some wise dude

Lesson: Don't be Scott. Be the a**hole. Scotty doesn't know.

this was shot beautifully and all the actors were great! the end got me! so that means he was manipulating her the whole time? and he had been for at least as many lines were crossed out on the board?

Good stuff!

Well Done! 💯

Cute Movie! Do overs are nice!! Unfortunately we don't get them in life!!!☕🤔☺

Excellent ThanX :)

I love these characters

Short and sweet.

me encanto un saludo desde Perù

6:10 Scott has some good taste in music it seems

things more interesting when you start shooting outside.. good film!

Ha ha! Highly enjoyable

Really well done ✅✅✅

Funny!!!

That was funny!

Don't know why she got so mad at the end, millions in historical art/artifacts for the taking all around her.

Yep. I like it.

so good

To misquote from a semi-famous TV show about high school: "You're a smart chicken. But even if the smartest chicken comes up against the dumbest Lion, it's 'instant chicken mcnuggets. You're just 'Apples and Oranges"

I was expecting that he was faking the time machine, and that he did in fact hire actresses and actors as a twist ending.

Hahaha Nice And Twisted Ending One Thing is Sure He Will Try It Again and Again 🤣🌈👌

Remember to see the easter egg

Yep, that's life!

That's the worst thing u can say to a Man... You're a nice guy. That's saying I wouldn't be your girlfriend if u were the last man in the solar system.

I liked it! Nice guy was actually a manipulative jerk. Girl was a bit superficial. It showed the more negative sides of humans. The male lead was obviously older than 25.

Very cool.

A+ :)

Too funny!

8:17 He’s skipping straight to the end part where he “learns a lesson”

Can anyone explain the ending? And I think the lady has good acting.

Nice movie... but some dialogues are difficult to catch for a non-native ! would it be possible to enable subtitles, at least in english ?

11:15 Haaaaaaaa He’s still figuring it out

Could someone explain the ending?

2:28 "Shinjuku Golden Machi" Hey, my Japanese lessons are starting to pay off!!! :D

Great plot and storyline. Suggestion, you might want to take a class in dialogue and speech progression. The lines are very choppy and really distract from the story. Less "telling" and more "showing". Nice cinematography.

Just say, 'Thank you.' When she is freaked out. She is interested in him and he did not see the signs.

wow, perry Cuomo always does this to me. haha ha, Great act.

So the portable time machine box was empty, what does that mean? He still went somewhere in the big time machine, right? So what did she figure out? Where or when was he going at the end? I'm not so smart, apparently. Someone please help me understand this.

Amazed

That would have ruined the night. That's what I call this

My first time watching this I was like bitch stop touching all my shite in my laboratory

Every one of those times he failed she went flying into my bed instead. Giggity giggity! He should go back further and make some real $$$. That's all she cared about anyway.

Loved this. Manipulator to the max

well said glenn

Scott, Scott, Scott, when will you learn? Women! You can’t live with ‘em; you can’t live without ‘em... And it looks like you’ll be working the Game of Hope for a while longer. But look at it this way: when you get tired of the chase, you’re going to have one hell of a novel to sell. Keep the LV duds and you should have success on the book signing tour(s)... I’m telling you Scott, one of the most efficient ways to time travel and/or find true love is through a good book. Meanwhile, it’s your good fortune that Mr. Chen got you launched on your true path. Drop back sometime, OK?

That guy bailed out of that situation like Stewie Griffin.⚡️⚡️⚡️

I did not understand the ending, can someone explain?

The thing is... Lol, he retried that night over and over again to win her over. However, it took revealing his time machine to even get her attention. See what did there.

Four minutes in, and so far it's basically a variation on Groundhog Day. I'll give it a chance though. UPDATE: Yeah, like Groundhog Day (except by choice)--but what they did with it was different and very fun! Well done.

So, when did he go on the last jump? It didn't change her timeline.

Just goes to show that some people are not worth going through time for

Get her Scotty 🤣🤣

This is exact to most women's attitude when things are too good and/or they think you are making things up except for one thing: he was manipulating, which means in reality she would have believed anything he said as almost everybody does when people lie and manipulate.

If he's so smooth, why not catch the cork instead of letting it hit her in the face still lol.

An advice for short film-maker, always put english subtitles. I can't understand english only by speaking :(

what happen at the end

Congrats Vincent. Nicely done. Do you have a Linkedin account?

what just happened .. can anyone explain to me

If you change just one thing you could change everything.....

writer must of never heard the old saying...no one named Scott can ever be respected as a REAL MAN..

Time to cut bait. He should go after the waitress who is cuter.

What name od this Singer ?!

This is a nice Movie. you should make a sequal