We Transcended Flesh, Only To Be Enslaved On A Distant World

We Transcended Flesh, Only To Be Enslaved On A Distant World | Sci-Fi Creepypasta Cosmic Horror

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8 күн бұрын

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@omlem8641 7 күн бұрын

Wow! Not a single second was wasted; another extraordinarily imaginative, thrilling, intriguing, and rich-in-detail narrative. Vivid imagery comes out of the lines of well-crafted streams of words. You're on a roll! A great way to start my day. Thank you!

@GalacticHorrors 6 күн бұрын

@omlem8641 My pleasure, always :)

@danielshelton4358 6 күн бұрын

WELL DONE!!! A true delight to experience. Thank you!!! 👍👍👍

@GalacticHorrors 6 күн бұрын

@danielshelton4358 My pleasure!

@i.gichuki7018 3 күн бұрын

Awesome horror premise! This is worth a multi-part story🤔

@yomogami4561 5 күн бұрын

similar to 'the consciousness collector' story and maybe an evolution of it but definitely more hopeful thanks for a great story

@Rendo87 6 күн бұрын

Josh Strife Hayes. Is this you? You sound exactly like him!

@chrisweidner4768 6 күн бұрын

Thinking I’d choose to explore new horizons. “Greetings newborn ones.” 👍👍☝️

@avmelidor 5 күн бұрын

Outstanding

@MrMitch337 6 күн бұрын

this would be an excellent movie wow!!!

@maikeweige1548 6 күн бұрын

I think this is the best of these stories so far. You've done a lot more showing and a great deal less just telling. But the revelations that they undergo are a bit too dry and still told. In such a short story it is hard to develop the culture but even so a bit more could be done. It might be better to break this up into several short stories where you are given more time to make the story more meaty. 1) this ones main story drawn out and more intense. 2) The alien computer things but think about this culture a bit more and try to be less borg/ ancient ones from stargate. You need to develop the why or how was overwhelming more to grab the readers. 3) the negotiations with and bedrail of earth and possibly the agreement and new direction. also might be good to show how biology has its importance too. I really like the universe building and the possibilities of this story. Really well done.

@GalacticHorrors 6 күн бұрын

@maikeweige1548 I totally get where you're coming from. I just don't plan on making multi-part stories. All my stories are meant to be stand-alone, and as you said, it's tough to fit everything into a short story. So, I usually have to focus on some elements more while giving less attention to others.

@maikeweige1548 6 күн бұрын

@GalacticHorrors understand maybe cut some elements than. but I understand the pain of cutting out thingbfrom our babies. keep up the good work

@happymonkey420 6 күн бұрын

Whoop Whoop homies ✌🏻🐵✌🏻

@kingsolomon2571 2 күн бұрын

Micro- aggression detection 🤔

@s.r.6533 6 күн бұрын

Warhammer 40k storied would fit you well. Or be a subject of inspiration.

@Administrator_O-5 6 күн бұрын

So my ex is Neurosync this time? I still think Soul Prison sounds better & is more accurate of a description. BTW I sent you an email yesterday with a PDF attached.