Horror Short Film "Rhyme or Die"

Horror Short Film "Rhyme or Die" | ALTER

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4 ай бұрын

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Five kidnapped strangers are forced to rhyme to their captor's funky beats - or die.
"Rhyme or Die" by Max R Lincoln
Winner: “Best Horror Short” Atlanta Underground Film Festival, 2023 (USA)
Winner: “Best Screenplay Short” BIFA Qualifying Manchester Film Festival, 2023 (UK)
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More About "Rhyme or Die":
Five strangers find themselves trapped in an abandoned industrial space, metallic collars strapped around their necks. They are COLIN (23), a youth worker who’s too kind for his own good; HARRY (28), a stiff and studious soil analyst; KAYE (25) a confident up-and-coming R&B artist; NIDAL (30) a furious rapper rejected by the industry, and EVE (18), a ball of fear in pyjamas. A spotlight illuminates their captor, DYNAMO (20). She tells the disparate party that they have been carefully selected to play ‘Rhyme or Die’. A beat kicks in as she lays out the rules: Everyone has to improvise rhymes to the beat, and failure... is fatal.
"Rhyme Or Die" Credits:
Cast
DYNAMO - Bethan Cullinane
COLIN - Victor Alli
NIDAL - Mohammad Amiri
HARRY - Samuel Blenkin
KAYE - Racheal Ofori
EVE - Olumide Olorunfemi
Crew
Exec Producer: Ed Sayers
Exec Producer: Rebecca Wolff
Producer: Rami Sarras Pantoja
Co-Producer: Pamela Pifferi
Director: Max r Lincoln
Writer: Alex Moran
Casting Director: Charlotte Chapman
1st AD: Jez Marshall
Cinematographer: Jonny Flint
Gaffer: Frank Hammond
Production Designer: Sarah Asmail
SFX & Collar Maker: Carl Ryan
Costume Designer: Emily Leaf Pond
Makeup & Hair Designer: Shani Mushington
SFX Make Up Artist: Rebecca Birch
Location Sound Recordist: Aris Anastassopoulos
Editor: Manuela Lupini
Music: Joe Farley @Father
Music: Sam McGrail
Sound Designer: Sound Disposition
Colourist: Carl Thompson @Molinare
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@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

Hey I'm the director and not just a KZfaq spectre. Though I'm terrible at rhyming, I'd love to answer any questions about making this short. Thanks so much to ALTER for having us. THis is my second short with them. The other was part of the 'Micro Screams Volume Two' collection

@karaigrayson8198 4 ай бұрын

What was the reason she did all this?

@Blake_Laisure 4 ай бұрын

This was great!

@qwave1322 4 ай бұрын

I’d like to see “Pun or you’re Done” next. 😂

@raspfilms 4 ай бұрын

Did you have a favourite moment?!@@Blake_Laisure

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

@@karaigrayson8198 the film was about the cutthroat nature of the creative industries and in her own twisted way, she wants them to be better and succeed. She's just adding a bit of pressure

@jkidd1982 4 ай бұрын

I would've died first. I can't do anything under pressure

@raspfilms 4 ай бұрын

😂

@MaskedP 2 ай бұрын

Same

@Plane_3 2 ай бұрын

I would cringe so hard and die

@loveniamnisi751 2 ай бұрын

Hope your interviewers don’t see this😂

@NoIDontActuallyLiveInSeattle 2 ай бұрын

Relatable af.

@EmacQLet1 2 ай бұрын

The way I would be in there quoting Dr Seuss. "I said one fish, 2 fish, red fish, blue fish" 😂😂😂

@Anatsacelejon 2 ай бұрын

This is so real Honestly the first thing that came to my mind was " she sell sea shells on the sea shore" 💀

@iiienzo 2 ай бұрын

I can’t rhyme because yea I’m not smart 😭 I would die first round 😭

@haileym5912 2 ай бұрын

But fish doesn't rhyme with fish...they're the same word...

@Jewels2Funny 2 ай бұрын

@haileym5912 you could say: one fish, two fish, three fish, four. I said I don't wanna do this anymore.

@Jewels2Funny 2 ай бұрын

*just said*

@user-ql8pe9lu5u 2 ай бұрын

Bro i was so mad Kaye didnt survive she was so good at Rhymes😭

@koolbrayden21 2 ай бұрын

Really thing she only died just cause the script said so,she 100% shoulda survived

@asparagus420 2 ай бұрын

she literally had the rhyme, she just didn't say in time 💔

@user-ql8pe9lu5u 2 ай бұрын

@@asparagus420 The fact that u also rhymed😭

@ChimDinma-ho2qc 2 ай бұрын

They had to rhyme because the bells of death chimed

@taegijihope4895 Ай бұрын

@@ChimDinma-ho2qc you made a rhyme too

@Yourfavoritechoi 4 ай бұрын

The male rapper was so ridiculous. Imagine being so caught up with facing you OPP that you ignore the fact that you're in danger and need to focus on rhyming to save you life instead of focusing on personal beef.

@MrArtVein Ай бұрын

Silly right,,,? What does that say about the writers depiction of that character? Constructively?

@normaldude7924 Ай бұрын

I mean he did try to change

@TatiZ-ks2eq 19 күн бұрын

I hated him 😂

@catherineyule2646 3 күн бұрын

@@TatiZ-ks2eqsamee he literally smiled when kaye died..

@samanthaballard75 4 ай бұрын

Cat in Hat would definitely win this lol 💀

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

My dream collaborator

@tamaracooper5 2 ай бұрын

Lol true

@Sanj_Miyakie 2 ай бұрын

Rumole stilt-skin would eat him up tho

@Sanj_Miyakie 2 ай бұрын

Rumple

@6-dpegasus425 2 ай бұрын

I love your profile picture!

@solastranded1744 4 ай бұрын

Nidal thought he was being clever with that “warmth” bar. Psyche!😂😂😂maybe next time bruv!

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

I know! You can't game Dynamo! Originally we'd used the word 'purple' instead but then found that did in fact rhyme with the word 'hirple'. Its a random Scottish word but Dynamno would know it

@PapaBPoppin Ай бұрын

Grimace lookin hot in the purple Thought he was clean, but now I’m saddled with the Herp, so….

@justanotheryotuber23 Ай бұрын

North, fourth, henceforth

@APEXGuerilla 4 ай бұрын

'If Jigsaw was from your hood'

@gwenpicchi5719 4 ай бұрын

I'm helping you rhyme even though I'm not that good.

@Oldsportthetangrine 2 ай бұрын

I just ate a block of wood

@Cloudy__gaming 2 ай бұрын

I’m spinning around ur block just like the police would

@Kid_Clutch7 2 ай бұрын

obeying the law being a good citizen just like I should

@Unknown-bs1kz 2 ай бұрын

A good life, ayy doing the best I could

@alexmoranwriter 4 ай бұрын

Hi all, I'm the writer of Rhyme or Die, thank you ALTER for sharing! I always wanted to write a horror without any swearing. If you have any questions - and if I have time - I'll answer any questions you have... in rhyme!

@QXQ1001 4 ай бұрын

What inspired this short?

@emreeren13 4 ай бұрын

even your original post rhymes. noice 👌🏻

@alexmoranwriter 4 ай бұрын

@@QXQ1001 A few years ago the thought occurred When I first performed some spoken word The stage felt hostile, the stakes felt high As though if I failed I could, well... die (I know it's a melodramatic line Obviously I didn't die, and everything was fine) I later used the inspiration To write a short in one location

@QXQ1001 4 ай бұрын

@@alexmoranwriter I appreciate how you utilized your own experience to come up with this creative yet dark horror story! Keep up the good work, this was a unique masterpiece‼️

@esrat2508 4 ай бұрын

so why she was doing it?

@kinyacat5919 2 ай бұрын

I love how they make the antagonist mixture of childish and creepy. 7:45 this scene of her is so good. The actor did a great job with the expressions and got me caught off guard.

@writer46m72 2 ай бұрын

I guess I posted my comment on this video too soon, since you brought it up first lol. The fact that Dynamo's smile faded into a "look of dismay" after Eve asked again "why are you doing this" got me wondering what was really going on. One could interpret that in many ways. Like for example, is Dynamo doing all this under duress herself? was she given orders to do all this?

@jshelton100 4 ай бұрын

It’s shocking what people will do when their lives are on the line.

@brianbutton6346 4 ай бұрын

LOL!

@caymens604 4 ай бұрын

almost like - they're runnin out of time! XD

@dustudent1637 2 ай бұрын

@@caymens604 Then th:ey would do anything to show themselves in prime.

@Unknown-bs1kz 2 ай бұрын

@@dustudent1637cause when life’s at stake, nobody gives a dime !

@Jewels2Funny 2 ай бұрын

@@Unknown-bs1kzwhen all they had to do was make up a rhyme!

@raspfilms 4 ай бұрын

Hi, I am the producer of ' Rhyme or Die' - thanks so much for watching and feel free to ask any questions. We are currently developing our first feature together as a team. Hope you enjoy!

@solastranded1744 4 ай бұрын

You should be very proud. This was dope.

@raspfilms 4 ай бұрын

@@solastranded1744 that's very kind! We definitely are 😊

@tomsdottir 4 ай бұрын

First of all "dope" doesn't rhyme with "are" Which you would have known were you a rapping star. Never off duty: you can never relax Spit some lines or pay the deadly tax.

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

@@tomsdottir love this!

@gwenpicchi5719 4 ай бұрын

My Jigsaw obsessed brain immediately activated when I saw the beginning thing. That's how I know you're an expert.

@CrinklyPizza295 Ай бұрын

Theres no i in team, but there is in win. Dam best line in history

@maxrlincoln Ай бұрын

❤

@z-beeblebrox Ай бұрын

Kinda love that the whole short is exactly what it says it is. Zero twists, just rhyming and dying lmao

@TheSlumpGoddess 3 ай бұрын

Nah me and that woman behind the table would’ve had to square up once that collar was off. Loved this film! Kept me on the edge of my seat

@drumsalive 2 ай бұрын

lol 😂 if ur just as crazy then

@Mylik__ Ай бұрын

Right 😭put me through all of that for no reason

@Micha3l_Wh33ler Ай бұрын

@@Mylik__real

@fornowhere7264 Ай бұрын

That is only if you could make it to the top, you may think you're fast but you might have a bullet to beat

@BatMite19 4 ай бұрын

This seemed to me like a combination of two things. One was an old Twilight Zone episode where a bunch of people wake up in a room with no way out. Turns out they're actually dolls in a trashcan. The second was, of course, Saw. But, since we never found out why this was happening, throw Cube in there, too.

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

That Twilight Zone episode sounds great, do you remember the name? I love the Cube but The Circle 2015 was more of a ref for us. Particularly in terms of the lighting and them being trapped on the spot

@TessaCastro1216 4 ай бұрын

@maxrlincoln it's called Five Characters in Search of an Exit

@hannuv6513 4 ай бұрын

Actually there's a third movie this is related at. The movie is called the running man. There's also a character called Dynamo who's outfit is a bit similar and the character sang opera if I remember correctly. One nice fact also that the Finnish name for the movie is "juokse tai kuole" = run or die

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

@@hannuv6513 oh cool, didn’t know that was the translation. LOVE The Running Man!

@mariamadalenafelintopinhoramos 2 ай бұрын

@@TessaCastro1216, esse episódio, por sua vezl, foi inspirado em "Seis personagens em busca de um autor", de Pirandello e tem ares de "Sem saída" do Sartre. Sorry for write in portuguese, my english is bad.

@keebo3030 Ай бұрын

Eve was giving major final girl vibes from the jump. Glad she survived!

@VesperJester Ай бұрын

Nah Colin should've won. Once she showed her true self, he should've out rhymed her.

@Goo1244 Ай бұрын

@@VesperJesterand if Colin didn't tell her rhyme word then she would of died. 2:59

@keebo3030 Ай бұрын

@@VesperJester Nah we love morally complex protagonists.

@Idontexisthihi001 Ай бұрын

@@VesperJester to be fair, anyone's true self can be warped when their lives are on the line. His plan was noble, but it was only gonna buy them a few minutes. She accepted that one of them was gonna die and decided it was not gonna be her

@sierra9828 Ай бұрын

the actors were so good, the change of look in the last guy’s face when he realized he couldnt rhyme with opponent was so subtle and oscar worthy. i love the antagonist too, really everyone did a phenomenal job

@thetryfan6529 Күн бұрын

He could rhyme with "component" or sth 😢

@K.G.E 4 ай бұрын

What a crazy idea! Very creative setup and truly terrifying since I can't rhyme for the life of me!

@MiddleCross378 4 ай бұрын

Neither can I, but if you were in that situation, you'd be surprised at what you're able to do, you'd see

@jerilyn1984 4 ай бұрын

Me either

@julieellis2870 4 ай бұрын

I would end with "I like the juice of an orange".

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

@@julieellis2870 we’d thought about ‘orange’ instead of ‘warmth’ but then found out it rhymes with ‘sporange’. Some random old word. But yeah, I’d be like Harry and die immediately

@Knockoffedd4581 3 ай бұрын

I can rhyme but you ask me to in a situation like this im dead on spot

@aybangz3583 4 ай бұрын

Eminem be like "Where do i sign up for this game?" 😅

@michaeljames2084 2 ай бұрын

nas

@drumsalive 2 ай бұрын

I was thinking Eminem would of win this

@emmanuelallen4376 Ай бұрын

Overrated

@gotanypain3083 Ай бұрын

"guys, let's do simple rhymes" M&M: "I could rhyme orange with banana, bornana" The other contestants: 😧🤯⚰️

@m.m.m681 Ай бұрын

@@emmanuelallen4376says who?

@Tac0B0y 3 ай бұрын

I’m just shocked by how the deaths are caused. Not because of how it looks, but because of how much more creative it is then most franchises that do “unique” executions.

@Micha3l_Wh33ler Ай бұрын

Ikr! Same

@jaussaunbeach3664 4 ай бұрын

I would love if they made a episode with new ppl every weekend that would be so cool rhyme or die part 2 would go crazy

@raspfilms 4 ай бұрын

This would be fun!

@jaussaunbeach3664 3 ай бұрын

@@raspfilms yeah like ppl from diff continents or countries try to rhyme and we have it translated

@alexofalexyel 4 ай бұрын

Holy crap, loved the villain so much. The ending surprised me, too - in a fun way!

@user-oc5zb5nq9r 2 ай бұрын

I’m not gone lie I cracked up when she said “coooon-gradulaa👺atioooooooooooons-zaaaaaahhh” I’m like yes she’s crazy 😂🤣

@Tacocat793 Ай бұрын

I’d be saying shit like “you can’t be serious you must be delirious”

@anotherdayanotheranimation 4 ай бұрын

Hi all, I'm a watcher of Rhyme or Die, thank you ALTER for sharing! I always wanted to try, a horror not focused on jump scaring. If I have questions, I'll freely be asking.

@eden5243 Ай бұрын

Do you like saw or is that to much for you cuz this reminds me of that

@anotherdayanotheranimation Ай бұрын

@@eden5243 I was mimicking the director's comment while putting in a bad rhyme. Saw's alright, tho I mainly watched it for the plot.

@gwenpicchi5719 3 күн бұрын

@anotherdayanotheranimation I'm a Spiral myself (that's what I call John's fans). Which trap is your favorite? And I know you have one. If I can watch for the plot AND Dynamo laugh at The Rack, you can have a favorite of your own.

@JohnfuckingColtrane 4 ай бұрын

This is nuts. Couldn’t handle the tension…man!

@M0rii_st4n 2 ай бұрын

Zonttttttt Careeeee

@serenityvargas5204 Ай бұрын

Eve: wait, why you doing this... The killer girls face: 😊😃😀🙂☹️😦😮😧😨🙂😀😈

@MichaelvanK 4 ай бұрын

That's a very accomplished short. I liked the fact that there was no explanation, just dive right in! A contained, neat concept, fast-paced and gripping, even if rap is not your thing. Well done. I hope it does really well for you.

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

Thanks so much!!!

@h1kcy 2 ай бұрын

this felt like a black mirror episode

@db4449 2 ай бұрын

*5:48** I cannot 😂 her face was everything* it gave Mr. Obsorn from OG Spiderman

@1gstrm 4 ай бұрын

Absolutely loved Bethan Cullinane's (Dynamo) performance! Just enough craziness and fun without being too over the top

@OneOfTheShadowsHere Ай бұрын

*Plot Twist: Jigsaw turned into Marina Abramovich and now operates an underground killer dance venue*

@unlucky7prince790 2 ай бұрын

She said, "I'm sorry. Hey, I'm hungry, does anyone have an orange?😈"

@RoundYellowThing Ай бұрын

Death order for all you impatient folk 5th place : 2:17 4th place : 6:22 3rd place : 7:07 2nd place : 9:18 Winner leaves : 10:09

@that_one_sanrio_fan Ай бұрын

The way the host just dances at the end like nothing happened

@chokingphgaming457 Ай бұрын

Nah EMINEM would destroy everyone if he was there..

@JinxLol-qz1iu Ай бұрын

Man Eminem is to fast hell shit everyone with lightning

@gwenpicchi5719 4 ай бұрын

I know it's night but I had to return to this. The acting on the channel is truly chefs kiss. And now I'm rhyming again! Does the habit of doing this ever end. Yes, I know that was bad. Get off my back, Chad.

@Longestcomment_Official 10 күн бұрын

Probably the key to survive here are Stay calm, work together, think while it's not ur turn and focus in what ur saying or something like that. . Who agrees 👇

@TravisLobsinger 4 ай бұрын

This short had a really odd killer, thank you ALTER for another great thriller!

@denkikaminari5777 Ай бұрын

LOVE THE RHYME

@da96103 Ай бұрын

"But some people are mean. Look, he is trying to ATTACK. It's probable because that man is ........."

@xxuey_z Ай бұрын

LMAOOO

@ZoraVada-kn7tv 8 күн бұрын

Whack

@chantel4405 4 ай бұрын

Omg the first guy who dies is Samuel Blenkin from Black Mirror's Loch Henry episode! So cool! Love this short :)

@raspfilms 4 ай бұрын

Samuel was awesome to work with!

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

100% he's a total star. And just like Scream we killed him off first! 😁

@ebonymoran 3 ай бұрын

i knew I recognised him from somewhere!

@MrBioWhiz Ай бұрын

This was really fucking good. Love a villain that goes "lets play a game" and treats it just that - a game. The way dynamo made fun of their choking noises at the start was fucking grim

@GiGitteru Ай бұрын

Oh this is just me and my classmates vs my English teacher in literature class

@gwenpicchi5719 3 күн бұрын

How fast does that game begin? Do you and your classmates ever win?

@rolindabrown5629 4 ай бұрын

Dynamo didnt have any friends growing up. 😂😂😂

@smokeymoon420 2 ай бұрын

Man i wish you guys would make a full horror film. A lot of these short stories i get super invested in, then i realize its over and im like maaaaaaan😅

@user-sv4lx1jk4k 24 күн бұрын

The lady is so relaxed 😂😂

@arihawkins1731 18 күн бұрын

After they started saying A, B whatever I'd die immediately

@adele-muguettedelabernaque1357 4 ай бұрын

Here comes the weirdo, the nuts, the villain Loving her life when inflicting the pain Praying for pity is only in vain Long as you live you'll be stuck in your chain

@GingerSnape46 4 ай бұрын

Nice

@malcolmhaynes2528 4 ай бұрын

Booo lol

@Unknown-bs1kz 2 ай бұрын

Just know that villain doesn’t rhyme with the other three

@adele-muguettedelabernaque1357 Ай бұрын

@@Unknown-bs1kz Can you be more specific? English is not my mother language

@froggy5616 Ай бұрын

@@adele-muguettedelabernaque1357 I think its because of Villain. It depends on how you pronounce villain, but the most common way to say it it "vill-EN", not "vill-AIN" like with chain and vain. Villain looks like it rhymes on paper, but when you speak it, it doesn't. Idk if Dynamo(The one killing the characters) would let it slide if you said it like AIN but me personally, I wouldn't risk it. To keep it safe in this situation, you would end the first line with insane or something

@Joshuathegreatest7 2 ай бұрын

Hi, I'm the viewer of ' Rhyme or Die'. This short was amazing and I really loved how well you all did on the short. Thanks!

@ccb.8603 3 ай бұрын

Congratulations to the actors the producers and the writer!

@ryubesson9711 Ай бұрын

Imagine if Eminem played this..

@Jstormrider 19 күн бұрын

Man can rhyme orange with banana

@XxCornyDogxX 6 күн бұрын

It would not be fair at all💀

@newleader5982 3 ай бұрын

One of the best short horror films on KZfaq. Great job everyone👏

@maxrlincoln 3 ай бұрын

Thanks!!! 😍

@louthegiantcookie Ай бұрын

I really enjoyed this! In fact, I could see it very easily being a full length movie in the vein of Saw - although if I had one criticism it's that Dynamo's a really cool idea for a villain, but she needs a more striking design, like all the best horror villains do!

@vmjxriel4956 4 ай бұрын

i love the idea the beats are like a clock ticking and at some point the viewers enjoy it.

@cjowl22 2 ай бұрын

i absolutely LOVED this! I LOVED the villain, she was very quirky!

@julieellis2870 4 ай бұрын

That was well done ! Very disturbing subject, but I like it. Bravo guys !

@user-dk9cg7ej6f 2 ай бұрын

The protagonist is an amazing actress

@MartinisnOlives 28 күн бұрын

This was so good. The “Dynamo” actress was fun to watch. What a great villain she is. 👏🏻

@user-hb4yc5tr6m Ай бұрын

Me busting out the "i stepped on a bee ,after climbing up a tree ,and ow it stung mee

@bradenelswick5355 Ай бұрын

5:32 Literally rap battling to the death

@gimmickfilms 3 ай бұрын

Caught this at the Atlanta Underground Film Festival and it totally stole the show. Great work!

@TheOfficialHypez Ай бұрын

Not one person was securely on beat 😂

@lizamichelleva8375 Ай бұрын

Omgggg the acting in this film is so good this is honestly one of my favorite horror short films I've ever watched. It's just ten minutes but from the start I was so invested in all of the characters and Dynamo's portrayal is absolutely fantastic I am obsessed

@mikemoran8527 4 ай бұрын

Great film! Dynamo was class 👌

@maxrlincoln 4 ай бұрын

She was incredible to work with! Also the last time we worked together was my grad film THYME 10 years before. Totally different thing. That was a 50's dystopian film about cooking

@Tommysays 4 ай бұрын

I just start crying I'd be out the first time. Great concept though

@gwenpicchi5719 4 ай бұрын

You didn't even rhyme! At least try to impress Dynamo! (I'm sorry)

@normamendoza9793 10 күн бұрын

The fact that Eve said why are you doing this and the host face faded away while Collin in the start said why are you doing this I can help you

@linuskentrevtorp Ай бұрын

This short was quite interesting form of a death game, love the announcer being so over the top!

@TomBomb-yy4nn 4 ай бұрын

easily the best short film ive ever seen on youtube

@ARIUS_C_vibes Ай бұрын

The way I would die so quickly it’s not even funny 😭

@jett8193 4 ай бұрын

Had to watch this twice in a row! I adore the character Dynamo🖤

@raspfilms 4 ай бұрын

🙂

@esmeallen3403 3 ай бұрын

I'd be out in round one - what a concept for a short though- loved it.

@jeremysiron9622 2 ай бұрын

If 8-mile was a horror film

@spyceemomma9330 2 ай бұрын

I would have just taken my life at that point but MANNN! this was crazy good job Alter.

@-JaggedGrace- 2 ай бұрын

Could you have done it yourself more quickly than the neck traps though?

@TatiZ-ks2eq 19 күн бұрын

That part where Eve started coming with words that are hard to rhyme was tough 😂

@nightowlowo149 Ай бұрын

You know those hypothetical questions on reddit? "If you were forced on gunpoint to sing ___ song word for word, would you survive" into a short film. Lmao i love this

@gwenpicchi5719 3 күн бұрын

I'd survive if I got Hell's Greatest Dad, More Than Anything, or Bunny Bunny Bunny. Not much else. I know, I have weird taste.

@shedwashington3661 4 ай бұрын

This is a Joker level Villian Game! Bravo!!!!! Bravo!!!!

@raspfilms 4 ай бұрын

Thanks! 🙂

@KagXm1 4 ай бұрын

Rap battle and battle to the death. Two of my favourite kinds of battles. So fun and refreshing. Thanks for the change of pace. Great job! 👏🏻

@kerstinbernleithner3565 3 ай бұрын

Another brilliant short movie!! Bravo!! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 Very, very nice!! 👍🏻 Much Love from Austria 🥰💜✨❤️

@Raven-ei5je 18 сағат бұрын

Why did i just think of “one fish two fish red fish blue fish, your just died bish”

@Jayghun27 Ай бұрын

Eminem: “hold my spaghetti.”

@PomsonGamingII 2 ай бұрын

i was half expecting her to just shoot eve when she won lol

@reubenfuchs2747 Ай бұрын

This was so well-made, I was captivated from start to finish

@typical-teen6040 4 ай бұрын

Even tho dynamo is a psychopath ( ima ignore that ABIT ), she's very hilarious 😂

@l1vel0velaugh129 3 ай бұрын

why is dynamo such a vibe in the end

@PrimitiveInTheExtreme 4 ай бұрын

Wonderful short film. Great all.

@Vivianxo1 Ай бұрын

Wow I was not expecting Kaye to die so early😮

@RavennaDestiny 24 күн бұрын

This was really good. Kinda like the death traps of some horror films but freestyle rhyming singing version. More so than the actual deaths, I have to say I was a bit more unnerved by Dynamo’s excited way of talking. It spooked me a bit. But all in all, I loved it

@user-jm2gm1jo3q 3 ай бұрын

This needs a sequel

@kwynnmccallumbega4705 4 ай бұрын

Omg, that was so great! I'm a good rhymer but I have no idea how I would do under pressure! I enjoyed the short film, thank you for sharing! Aloha from Hawaii 🤙🌴🌈🌺

@BobJones-sd5wn 29 күн бұрын

this film made me learn to become a master at rhyming

@marymitchell8717 4 ай бұрын

This was great! Absolutely LOVED Dynamo!!

@scriptwritersandco 4 ай бұрын

Loved this take on horror and suspense! Congrats.

@Maiden_to_mother Ай бұрын

That was crazy. I could watch a whole series of this shit

@TheCatMomma 2 ай бұрын

Very clever and nicely put together. I love it!

@Billcipherlegend_2. 24 күн бұрын

Me: starts singing hell is forever to rhyme

@v7rses 2 ай бұрын

i wouldve died so fast i cant rhyme for shit

@user-lx7ey4do1h 4 ай бұрын

Bat-shit-crazy writer to come up with this! We live in a bat-shit-crazy world. Damn! That was entertaining. Love the psycho-villain! 👍👍👍

@NameSleuth 2 ай бұрын

This movie is freaking brilliant! Celebrity Death match + Saw + Wild N Out = A gorgeous origin story to the background of Eminem, Hopsin, and so many other wild artist. Beautiful introduction to Hunger Games for Rhyming. Love this! Great work! Thank you!