How do I balance INTERNAL CONFLICT with an action/adventure PLOT? |
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What's up, my friends? In today's episode of #AskAbbie I answer some great questions that came in on the Facebook group - everything from balancing internal conflict with external action to finding awesome beta readers. Smash that like button if you enjoyed this video!
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@guitarwithvalor6927 4 жыл бұрын
the replay value in these videos is insane :D
@MegaDeeEm 11 ай бұрын
John Wick is the prime example of a spy/action thriller that is character drive. John has inner conflict at the beginning of the show: his wife died and it left him empty. Even at the end of the series, it was all about his wife.
@bookishwriter9460 4 жыл бұрын
When are you going to continue the series on all the story beats?
@pippaschroeder4388 7 ай бұрын
A big part of this is just giving your characters personal stakes and a reason to care. Then all of the action will be a result of characters making decisions giving them more investment in how it will resolve.
@ailsa2434 4 жыл бұрын
Hey Abbie. I've started watching your videos really recently. I just wanted to let you know that I've wanted to be a writer most of my life, but you are the first person who's made me believe I can actually do it. Thanks to you, I'm now planning for my first novel. :) Keep making videos, sometimes it just takes positivity and great advice to give someone the push they need. Like me.
@AbbieEmmons 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for your kind words! They mean so much to me, and I am thrilled that the content I make encourages you to chase your dreams and make your story MATTER!
@jessicadennett9708 4 жыл бұрын
My main problem with writing, is that I get so obsessed with other books and other characters, that I find it difficult to make mine different and not compare my writing to other books. Any advice?
@pana71 4 жыл бұрын
Maybe try remember that what you're comparing to is a finished product which has had multiple drafts, pro editors etc whilst yours is a first draft? Idk I've never published anything
@janetmartinson2280 4 жыл бұрын
My two cents on balancing internal conflict and action plots: you can work out a timeline of character conflict scenes independent of what the characters are actually doing. Then as you develop your action plot, you can play mix and match. For every action scene, look for a suitable character scene and weave them together. Emphasize the action, of course, but If both kinds of high points coincide, internal conflict can intensify the action & suspense, not drag it down.
@zordox5533 4 жыл бұрын
Can you do a video on brainstorming Book Titles? I struggle with those a lot, mine are always bland.
@danaprovenzano3961 4 жыл бұрын
ZordoX yes! My actual writing pours out of me (not saying it’s always good , but I’ve never had writers block) but titles I can’t think of for the life of me . I still haven’t even named the book I finished last month . It’s a problem ! Lol
@zordox5533 4 жыл бұрын
Same here! Writers block isn’t a problem but when it comes to book titles, I just stare at my screen for hours with no ideas.
@shamaiahellis8810 4 жыл бұрын
@@danaprovenzano3961 think of the theme and symbolism present throughout your book. Then create names from it
@danaprovenzano3961 4 жыл бұрын
Shamaiah Ellis thank you I appreciate it !
@tophat2115 2 жыл бұрын
Jack Lewis' Narnia was edited and beta read by a group of college dons that included JRR Tolkien, and Lewis helped beta read/edit Tolkien's works. When you have a whole staff of literature professors as your beta readers and editors, you're probably way ahead of the majority of writers.
@TaniaMonroy 3 жыл бұрын
To add to that, for Emma, I wanted to recommend watching Alexa Donne's video on infodumping. I know it sounds completely different but I feel there she suggest many solutions to how to present information and I feel that you can use those strategies to your advantage.
@7Write4This9Heart7 16 күн бұрын
Your note about how our writing is most likely better than we think it is, a LOT better, makes me feel better! I've been doubting my first chapter of my novel lately, kinda the whole thing, espec since a friend of mine tore it apart... X'D I'M really proud of it, though, so hopefully it's not as bad as she made me think it is/I'm worried it is! Thanks a lot!
@cottagestoryteller 4 жыл бұрын
Stellar content as always, Abbie! Thanks for answering my question again, too!
@calliew3733 4 жыл бұрын
I always doubt my writing and compare it to my bff Maddie’s and I feel like my writing is always so bland. So thank you for saying that “your writing is most likely better than it seemed.” You really helped me feel better about it and actually believe my friend when she says that’s it’s good!❤️
@alexishurtado6183 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this video, Abbie!
@passantamreltarek9946 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for answering my question again!! I will make sure to get the new version of the character profiles!
@elliewilde6085 4 жыл бұрын
Hey I loved your series on the nano writing. Couldnt get enough. Could you do more in depth videos on how to write each plot point, and maybe use examples too? I would love it so much🥺❤❤
@emmamichelsohn7515 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for answering my question!!!
@rpsmithpac 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for all that you do Abbie.
@AbbieEmmons 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@TheDreadlockDogMan 4 жыл бұрын
3:03 fantastic advice for solving the action adventure overwhelming the inner conflict. Exactly the answer i went looking for today... la-la-la... going through video channels... then found you today, Abbie... and WHAM! That's when I discovered the A-Ha moment video. BAM! Wow! Hooked. Fell in love with your writing techniques. I subscribed. Wrote garbled morning messages in your comments section because I kept watching videos instead of getting coffee. Began downloading your videos. Went and bought a car. Returned. Kept watching videos. Is now past midpoint and have to stop for today... but thank you... so much. We all know how an insight into your writing can completely TRANSFORM your world... and you've solved so many problems I had with my manuscript... in one day. Goodnight.
@TheDreadlockDogMan 4 жыл бұрын
Aaah... meant "Is now past midNIGHT", not midpoint... love being a writer.
@AbbieEmmons 4 жыл бұрын
AHHHHH thank you so much for all of your amazing, kind comments!! I am so thrilled my videos are helping you! :) Keep writing!!
@tildakorolyart 4 жыл бұрын
I recently got your book (after a long time of waiting, which was a pain) and I just started reading, but I've already cried at least four times and managed to get through half the book - it's so good! And I just love Weston and the way he tries to help Tessa - and the way he is towards his younger brothers. And Tessa's struggle with losing her sight made me think about how I would feel - I love reading and I draw every day - that itself made me feel somewhat connected to Tessa and her frustrations because of her loss of sight. You're really talented, I love reading, but not every book makes me cry. I just love it!!!!!
@AbbieEmmons 4 жыл бұрын
!!!!! I am so glad! Thank you so much. :')
@nikkoleburns3213 4 жыл бұрын
The bloopers at the end were fun to watch.😂
@fredsmith9755 3 жыл бұрын
You cite several books to show how a character's misbelief is a useful way to express itself in action scenes. You lit a bulb in my own head - how about Wizard of Oz? Every character is pursuing their misbeliefs, even the wicked witch!
@jatinameta6048 4 жыл бұрын
First comment!! Interesting topic!! Thank you XX
@jiru1015 2 жыл бұрын
Perfect timing!
@blacktee31 3 жыл бұрын
Subscribed to your sister's youtube just because you mentioned her here. Seems like she's got some pretty good videos to learn from as well.
@jneumy566 Жыл бұрын
I will definitely say that sometimes as a writer, it can be difficult to try and see if your story is good from a reader's perspective because unlike a potential reader, you already know everything that's going to happen, so it's easy to wonder if some things (like twists especially that need shock value) will work for someone who doesn't know what happens.
@adalynhammonds6103 4 жыл бұрын
Can you do a how to Show vs. Tell in writing?
@wendychavez5348 4 жыл бұрын
I agree that character development is central to the writing. In my world, it's the characters who write the story--I'm simply the instrument they use to convey it to the world. Sometimes I'm able to guide my characters, but sometimes they do what they choose despite my best efforts. I must say, I enjoy unpredictable, chaotic characters, though it can get frustrating.
@7Write4This9Heart7 16 күн бұрын
So glad you love Chronicles of Narnia! Same here! One of my faves! >:D
@alliem9404 4 жыл бұрын
for the question about sci-fi vs contemporary, I would say that if the technological changes are obvious to the average reader then it has moved out of the realm of contemporary. To me, the contemporary genre is all about being something that could happen to real people in a real setting. If it's no longer reality, it's no longer contemporary.
@EDDIELANE 4 жыл бұрын
JJ Abrams needs to be asking himself that first question every time he makes a movie! Emma, you’re worried about more than some of Hollywoods 'goodest boys’ ever would. You go girl!!
@HDloly 4 жыл бұрын
Allie M, Iron Man movies are sci-fi or contemporary to you? I believe it's more about how changed society is.
@alliem9404 4 жыл бұрын
@@HDloly contemporary the genre is about reality. Things that could truly happen. I would 100% classify Iron Man and all the Marvel movies as sci-fi. They might be set in our "contemporary" time period, but it's an alternate universe. I like both genres, not hating either way :) just trying to clarify because it's an important distinction to make for marketing purposes
@theportuguesegod 12 күн бұрын
In regards to the first question, I wish I could tell that writer to go and watch 007 movies and take note of how they deliver the internal conflict. Most times, to not slow down the pace, they're explored and woven into action scenes. For example, there's no scene written specifically for Bond and the bombshell to discuss the fact that he can't fully commit to her. Instead, this conversation is had in a car in the middle of a hot pursuit, where they are being chased and shot it. They've woven it together in a way that won't slow down the pacing.
@KutWrite 4 жыл бұрын
I like your new place. Hope it's working out well for you.
@shahilsoren87 Жыл бұрын
I love you so much beautiful and spread beautiful thoughts
@riversplitter 4 жыл бұрын
About the first question, Hunted (on Amazon Video) is a good example of character driven spy fiction.
@mariangriffin5197 2 жыл бұрын
A basic tenet of romance books is that if the story is 50% romance, it's a romance. If your sub-genre is more than 50% you need to edit it back to keep it as a romance.
@waywardwolfie9403 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for always making such helpful and easy to understand content ❤️ I am struggling with getting from the three act structure to individual scene cards. How do you go about breaking down that massive chunk of story into scenes?! Is there any chance you could do a video on this soon please? I'd ask on your patreon Facebook page, but I am super poor right now - I hope you'll consider the topic anyway. Keep safe 🌈
@AbbieEmmons 4 жыл бұрын
Very good question...I will definitely consider this for a future video!
@waywardwolfie9403 4 жыл бұрын
@@AbbieEmmons thank you! I've found your videos on structure really helpful; I've made loads of progress since starting watching them, but now I have a three act structure and am unsure how to move on from this point! 😅 Keep up the good work! 😁
@TheCockroachSlayer 4 жыл бұрын
Hey I love your dress!
@celina-xz4pt 4 жыл бұрын
Abbie, I just read your book 100 days of sunlight and i absolutely LOVED it. I want a hardcover copy to add to my collection, but i cant find it anywhere! Was it ever published as a hardcover???
@AbbieEmmons 4 жыл бұрын
Yep! Here it is: www.amazon.com/100-Days-Sunlight-Abbie-Emmons/dp/173397332X/ref=tmm_hrd_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=1588360619&sr=1-1 I am thrilled you enjoyed the book!!
@ibelonginabook 4 жыл бұрын
Would you do a video on unique challenges with writing historical fiction?
@EDDIELANE 4 жыл бұрын
Love dabbling in historical fiction! My pitfalls are that I can get lost in research for WAY TOO LONG.
@andrearoberts2663 4 жыл бұрын
I really like these vids but when will we get more about outlining???? I liked your every other acedule you had going for a bit
@DomesticatedGoth 3 жыл бұрын
"They are nice people, they don't use weapons" - opposite of my book. They are all terrible people, and I immediately said 'he chooses his weapon based on the targ-' and then thought about what's his manipulation technique which is also very important, because assassins need to ingratiate themselves, sneak, manipulate, get information subtly...
@laurenalyssa4677 4 жыл бұрын
Unfortunately I don’t have a Facebook account, but I liked this video!
@danaprovenzano3961 4 жыл бұрын
Lauren Alyssa or fortunately ? Lol
@jayashreechakravarthy4949 10 ай бұрын
Abbie Emmons will conduct interviews for new writers.
@annejia5382 3 жыл бұрын
Abbie sometimes feels, looks and sounds like a younger Jamie Wolfer 😍
@zakarhussain880 4 жыл бұрын
From where to get ideas for writing
@soukowonder 4 жыл бұрын
I have this writing style which is kind of similar to wine, the older it is the better it gets. And it's not due to practicing it just happens. Due to this i have rewriten my manuscript 6 times, and I can't stop. The story is already nice and I get good feedback already so I feel that rewriting the manuscript 6 times is enough but I can't stop at all because I want it to be it's best. But in that case if I continue this prototype might be rewritten over a couple thousand times. Any tips for this?
@grantweston9778 Жыл бұрын
Did she end up making a video like she said she would about more balancing action/adventure vs internal conflict??
@emmamichelsohn7515 4 жыл бұрын
Second!
@sangwoosbat9132 4 жыл бұрын
These videos have helped me a lot❤ thanks
@AbbieEmmons 4 жыл бұрын
Glad you like them!
@kodokuna. 3 жыл бұрын
when I saw the title I just thought... *percy jackson*
@ggt47 4 жыл бұрын
(Gasps)Oooh.
@renatozanardo9648 3 жыл бұрын
Hey Abbie, why must his necessarily be disbeliefs? Can't it be that he believes in the values of justice for example?
@chethmamapatuna4533 4 жыл бұрын
I want more advice
@uncleanunicorn4571 4 жыл бұрын
Now I'm imagining a perfect weapon for Abbie Emmons. Hmm....
@ZaxorVonSkyler 4 жыл бұрын
A pen/pencil!
@Harper_Batin 10 ай бұрын
#AskAbbie Hello! So I have a question. My character, Castor has multiple fears and desires which are interlinked. I obviously have one main desire and fear but I don't know what to do about the Sub-Desires/Sub-Fears. I can't remove them because they're part of Castor and removing them is practically like killing off my main character. Thanks, love from India. ❤
@Valthalin 10 ай бұрын
Try to distill them down into a common root perhaps? Or look at which one would be most relevant to what is happening at the time in the plot to see which fear or desire to focus more on for that scene? Perhaps the fears are reinforcing each other or even forcing the character to prioritize which one to face up to? Is Castor more afraid of the monsters coming to devour his toes or the stormy waters below the cliff that he could dive into to escape them? Does he get more than a split second to decide or no? He can agonize over his split second choice later if you like, questioning himself afterwards or just try to forget the moment of sheer panic afterwards. Ahh, mental anguish. All interesting questions and best of luck to your character whatever happens!
@Harper_Batin 10 ай бұрын
@@Valthalin Thanks, but my main problem is whether I should remove them or not. If so, well I don't know what to do.
@exist6nce 4 жыл бұрын
im still here taking advice
@user-ty1pk8gd7g 4 жыл бұрын
عربي هنا
@me_yessik 2 жыл бұрын
I appreciate how many times throughout this video I've been thinking "yeah but what about this thing?… " And then you almost immediately answer it in a way I didn't even think of. The weapon of choice thing is really interesting, (or mode of manipulation or whatever.) I don't think that I've ever even considered that with my characters, and it seems really important. I don't quite know how to implement it though… I feel like, when I'm writing a character, I have to really feel that character in my guts, almost as if I'm acting as that character... so doing like a *fill in the blanks* thing with personality traits is sort of hard for me. It's like I almost have to picture a specific person who does a specific thing and place myself in that mode of thinking as much as I can. Do you have any suggestions for how to put yourself in the mind of a character? Especially if it's a type of character you haven't met before? Like sey--a corrupt politician, or a criminal mastermind… Those are very generic examples, but hopefully you know what I mean.
@saeedsaeed4983 15 күн бұрын
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@Kimjongil-pu6rk 4 жыл бұрын
Your view of scifi is sort of dated. Yes, technology is a big part of scifi, but character-driven plots are just as important in scifi as any other genre. You should give it a try. For instance, Becky Chambers books, start with "The Long Way to a Small Angry Planet", are 99% character driven, and the tech is just necessary background.
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