DISCLAIMER: This was my presentation for my final in one of my high school classes! It was rushed in about 4 hours by my friend and I with nothing but laptops, wifi, minecraft, and microsoft's native editing software. I problably wont do more stuff like this, but I hope you enjoyed!

So I got this in my recommended and I really dig the static third person view. Would be cool if you also alternated between aerial shots and close up shots of the build. What I think puts a damper on the whole thing though is the audio quality. I'll echo what others are saying and recommend investing in a good mic. Your presentation can be top notch but if the audio is bad the whole thing goes down in quality

Niiice!!! Cool tutorial

this style of presentation is like an off the cuff program on public television, but in minecraft cool stuff man, interesting pivot from splatoon vids :)

this is great!

the audio needs work, it's really difficult to hear you