A human starship captain stands trial for controversial acts he committed to save humanity from annihilation. All my stories are original.
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@DrFrankNStein-sf2ww6 ай бұрын
Captain James Holden ? Really ??? Has the author watched to many episodes of "The Expanse" ?
@MusikCassette5 ай бұрын
Watching all of them is just about enough. So he can not have watched to many. But he should have come up with an own name.
@carlosposa18096 ай бұрын
It's only when people are safe they question those who kept them safe and how.
@HawkGTboy6 ай бұрын
“You can’t handle the truth!” 😂
@Nempo136 ай бұрын
It is true. I miss the days whenever anyone questioned the treatment of prisoners, they were FORCED to live in the very cell block for a week as a general population inmate before being allowed to bring anything to court. Trust me, they came out wanting harsher punishment on those inmates rather than wanting things to get easier for them. They also used to throw anti-military people into a harsh boot camp. The shock after a week or two of that to only learn they were only doing half of what is required was hilarious. Within two weeks you have discipline beaten into you hard no matter what.
@camrocksincorporated37246 ай бұрын
Like Wyatt Earp.
@serronserron13205 ай бұрын
Because just as many times the justification of safety and survival of the people and culture has been used as an excuse by tyrants and warlords to do anything.
@walterengler57096 ай бұрын
An interesting story. But any supposed Tribunal which would be aghast at the attacks on the religious caste or the slaughter that followed, would ALSO be against any race seeking to exterminate another. The whole premise of the war would have resulted in that galactic group perhaps intervening, rather than letter a slaughter of a lesser race occur. The fact the did not do so makes the whole story moot as it does not fit the narrative of the council.
@yoannbelleville77636 ай бұрын
Not to mention that the captain acted without orders nor proof of the expected betrayal. In real life, this would have been a scandal even among humanity.
@krisandersen86956 ай бұрын
The United States held Native American tribes in prisons for defending their ancestral homes after US Military forces killed entire settlements of their people, including men, women and children. After trying the warriors, they then killed them.
@Soloong_Gaybowzer6 ай бұрын
"as it does not fit the narrative of the council." EXACTLY
@TowGunner5 ай бұрын
James Kirk would have done the same thing. Spock would have stated it was logical, The ends justifies the means. Kirk would have gotten the Federation Council Medal of Honor.
@walterengler57095 ай бұрын
@@TowGunner No the enemy would have gone "Kirk? The legendary Kirk?! Not only do we surrender we promise to act as an honor guard leading you to our homeworld!".
@spencersholden6 ай бұрын
Ah so this is what my descendant is up too.
@exposingproxystalkingorgan41646 ай бұрын
I like these stories a lot. 😮
@ALLSciFi886 ай бұрын
Thank you for the support I post daily subscribe you will always have something to watch.
@ccp44154 ай бұрын
Had to bring a Mary Sue into it ,😂.
@matkasim4 ай бұрын
Humans wont change for any species
@SplendorousPear6 ай бұрын
I'm hearing elements of The Expanse and Halo
@obsidian006 ай бұрын
yup
@toi_techno5 ай бұрын
Aren't you a lowbrow fella Well done
@MusikCassette5 ай бұрын
you mean Captain James Holden reminds you at the Expanse?^^
@Ripsaw176 ай бұрын
We may fight amongst are selves but if a out side species threatens humanity you have no idea what we are capable of don't f around if you don't want to find out
@llengibl5 ай бұрын
Nope. A government would throw away a single individual for the sake of geopolitical expediency. Thanks for the story tho.
@m1garandMUSIC6 ай бұрын
a new question arises from this: to what degree and extent is the threat of humanity and what to do about it. electric boogaloo, quarantine or move on?
@ChangelingDJ6 ай бұрын
James Holden! Hahaha
@benrussell-gough12016 ай бұрын
Sounds to me like this is the start of a GTU-type epoch.
@tehpw75745 ай бұрын
I just thought this would be a Tribunal of Captain STERNN... Funny. The aliens were apparently all apeshit about Humanity's conduct but didn't bat an *idea* towards Humanity's plight?
@Im_Not_From_Around_Here6 ай бұрын
Even looks like Captain James Holden of the Rocinante
@jamesogden77566 ай бұрын
Can't even say that crossed the Expanse of my mind. 😅
@obsidian006 ай бұрын
The Holden that we got in the show was nothing like the Holden I had in my head canon when I read the books...
@ronwatford73316 ай бұрын
@@obsidian00yeah, too grumbly and dead-eyed.
@toi_techno5 ай бұрын
he looks like if Henry Cavill and Jon Hamm had a kid
@BrayzenPaddles5 ай бұрын
Sounds like the "Hanover Fisk" plus Star Trek meshed storylines.
@mrblue46024 ай бұрын
As I do stare at picture. I noticed that he as shadow . On his face it’s look like it cover half his face . So the dark side was with him alway too ! After we are just human .😂
@dkbros15926 ай бұрын
U want me on that wall u need me on thta wall the wall that protect u
@williamsanders24395 ай бұрын
Had a start of a decent premise, but it kind of muddled the plot, especially the middle and end. Just the assassination of the alien leadership would have been a good "hook"...the "armada massacre" in the context of the story is needless overkill (pun intended) and the tribunal scene sounds unrealistic and pithy. Should we root for the protagonist? Should we hate his guts? Should we at least sympathize with him (or his victims)?
@Grim-HEX5 ай бұрын
Well the author of this story should never be in control of anything.
@Bwana_016 ай бұрын
Why use a known character name from The Expanse?
@motthomas42206 ай бұрын
👁👁
@mikegammon15 ай бұрын
is this AI narrated?
@MusikCassette5 ай бұрын
captain James Holden ? really?
@Antebios4 ай бұрын
James Holden? Expanse fan??
@johndowds57702 ай бұрын
All was good ,until a woman was the leader of humanities war council .
@arrendaled6 ай бұрын
Couldn't get past the AI grammar mistakes
@Briselance5 ай бұрын
Aye. Me neither. The story's pitch is good, though.
@paulh14935 ай бұрын
AI grammar is better than most people's writing besides I have taken enough classes to know correct or incorrect is too much of an ego based opinion. I wish we had a real comprehensive standard. How is cannot one word do not is not .. one word read can be red or reed with no indication in the word which one.
@peteramaranth853 ай бұрын
Haha this is halo 2 but with mc on triple for killing a profet instead of being a hero
@danielboatright88876 ай бұрын
Add a link
@ALLSciFi886 ай бұрын
All my stories are originals i only post them to KZfaq.
@slimking286 ай бұрын
Wait is this Captain James Holden of the Rocinante!? No!? Oh, Ok then. Continue.🫴
@noppornwongrassamee89416 ай бұрын
This story suffers from the flaw that it never actually backs up the assertion that the massacred aliens were trying to pull a false surrender. Yes, the humans SAY that their foes were trying to lull them into a false surrender, but no documents, recordings, etc etc were ever provided to back that assertion. A surrendering fleet was still surrendering. Imprison the crews and the ships are effectively deprived from the enemy nation withOUT a massacre, Without hard proof of that the surrender was a trap - even if only garnered after the fact - it's hard to call the massacre justified. Basically, all humanity has done here is guarantee that no one will surrender to them ever again because they can only expect to be massacred out of hand if the human CO feels like it.After all, the human CO can always use the "I thought they were faking a surrender" excuse to kill surrendering soldiers out of hand.
@christopherforsyth52846 ай бұрын
Your comments ignore what prompted such an extreme response .
@jonnypena76516 ай бұрын
yes, and the council conveniently ignore the attent of extermination of the other species.
@brendanh81936 ай бұрын
@@christopherforsyth5284No it doesn't, it addresses it directly. Then shows the flaws in the logic. Now, this has been a tactic used by military forces from the Roman Empire, to the Mongol Empire, to the third Reich (against Russian POWs). For all of them, this tactic was just destructive and tyrannical. If humanity's only option is military tyranny, it won't be united.
@jamesogden77566 ай бұрын
I'd laugh at you, but you never feared for your species or you'd end some dumb ideology. Too afraid to talk about it? 😇
@brendanh81936 ай бұрын
@@jamesogden7756 Who are you addressing?
@toi_techno5 ай бұрын
Cool story. We need unite under a world government and get off this mud ball. It's pathetic that we're still grubbing around down here with poor people working hard to keep some fat rich people like Donald Trump in luxury.
@JoaoSoares-rs6ec6 ай бұрын
Scifi has to stop showing energy weapons as super weapons,
@grogvaughan56496 ай бұрын
Why? We can currently shoot down aircraft and drones since the 1990s. In a few hundred years as technology improves why wouldn't they become even more powerful? A power source the size of an aircraft carrier powering a laser could bore straight through a planet.
@brendanh81936 ай бұрын
Ah, but even bullets are energy weapons. (Kinetic energy. )
@grogvaughan56496 ай бұрын
@brendanh8193 my only issue with kinetic weapons against warp capable ships is the shielding. If it can protect against micro meteors and other space particulates traveling at thousands of MPH then how do human weapons simply punch thru them.
@JoaoSoares-rs6ec6 ай бұрын
@@brendanh8193 OK wen people mention energy weapons, they are referring to lasers, plasma, particles, not to chemical propelled our electromagnetic, like gauss our railguns.
@JoaoSoares-rs6ec6 ай бұрын
@@grogvaughan5649 let's get this, the shields on those ships are electromagnetic fields, our some form of plasma barrier, this has the purpose of protecting the ship, they work against charged particles, maybe some very small particles, we also need to take into account the ship armour and mass, but against something like a slug designed to penetrate massive armour, moving at relativist speeds, the shields would be as effective as a sheet of paper to a 12.7mm bullet.
@sephiroaone-of-nine1015 ай бұрын
Another lame storytelling
@OriginalMergatroid6 ай бұрын
Good story, terrible naration.
@ALLSciFi886 ай бұрын
I am sorry for that i am working on getting better tools just keep up the support subscribe and hopefully soon the narration will get better when i can get the money to get it.
@siddharthkalantri50766 ай бұрын
I find this video deeply disturbing, reminiscent of historical injustices like the Jallianwala Bagh massacre where General Dyer, representing British rule, callously took countless innocent lives. This narrative, justifying such actions without moral principles, seems rooted in a Western concept that echoes the proverb: 'The strong do what they can, and the weak suffer what they must.' It's a troubling perspective that we must reflect upon and challenge.
@caelestigladii6 ай бұрын
“Tyrant”, not “western”. And as of today, there is no “western” nation that kills the opposition.
@lupaswolfshead99716 ай бұрын
oh this bullshit again.
@Dethbysnewsnewplx6 ай бұрын
Daduq?
@ericgrace99956 ай бұрын
You seem to have a twisted and one sided view of history. I would suggest that you research the Japanese war on China and Korea. More recently the Hammas attack on Israel that targeted civilians, babies, women and old people as a deliberate tactic. From your own country, how many civilians were massacred, on both sides during partition, because you could not live together ?? The numbers are estimated in millions. None of these incidents involved Europeans, so perhaps you should climb down from your posturing moral high horse. It's contemptible.
@peterwarner5536 ай бұрын
What a load of crap, firstly your "proverb" doesn't seem to have any relationship to the story, secondly just off the top of my head I can think of a dozen examples of non western peoples conducting mass slaughter out of expedience and shear enjoyment let alone out of a perceived existential threat, it's not western, and you calling it so merely exposes your inherent racist tendencies, mass slaughter has been a part of human cultures throughout history, throughout the world.