I didn't have a spike. Here's the essay that Stanford admission officers LOVED

I didn't have a spike. Here's the essay that Stanford admission officers LOVED | College Lead

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0:00 - Introduction
1:55 - why I wrote a mosaic essay and my story
10:35 - advice on writing the mosaic essay
15:48 - not forcing the metaphor
18:40 - ending
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@rujhanzaynab4887 3 жыл бұрын

this actually gave me so much more hope. college applications are so stressful, especially for international students and this just made me realise i dont HAVE TO portray myself as this overachiever if i dont want to portray myself that way

@1manasj 3 жыл бұрын

Wow. Seeing everyone's extended metaphors and single-foci essays, I was under the impression that this was the key to a great essay. This opened my eyes.

@joanne3330 3 жыл бұрын

to be fair this IS an extended metaphor (with the mosaic)

@emmadonnelly7028 3 жыл бұрын

Can she share her actual essay?

@angelinavezet 3 жыл бұрын

I am literally a mosaic LMAO, but I wrote my essay based on how I can engage with different types of people. But this vid has changed my perspective bc I have more pieces of diverse stuff in my life

@CollegeLead 3 жыл бұрын

Love it!!!

@giulianaayleenfernandez1610 3 жыл бұрын

@@CollegeLead can we read her essay? can you ask her please I really need it I feel like it would serve as inspiration

@yiyiluan5959 3 жыл бұрын

I wish i had watched this before application season

@dee5168 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you for introducing the one major I want in life right now. (even if it’s only available in the hardest college to get into)

@ismaaeel8957 3 жыл бұрын

This is SO helpful!! Thank you so much for this!

@CollegeLead 3 жыл бұрын

Of course! Kaylee is awesome 😊

@wishIKnewHowToLove 8 ай бұрын

AMAZING!!!

@user-ii6yq9jn1q 3 жыл бұрын

Loved your video! Do you think it would be good though if she could share her ecs and stats with us just to get an idea of what helped out in her application. Thankyou!!

@paulanavarro1457 Жыл бұрын

Amazing , thanks

@singhinderjitsingh 2 жыл бұрын

Can you please share this essay ? The structure of the essay is very hard to understand. I was already trying to write something like this but finding so hard to tie it together. Looking for flow in the essay,

@mariaclaramachadocorrea140 Жыл бұрын

I agree a hundred percent! The video is awesome, but without showing bits of the essay (like phrases), it becomes very hard to understand exactly how to do the things she advises on the video.