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No , there are many others

To be brutally honest, this so-called teacher herself has failed to spot her own errors, let alone the errors frequently made by many candidates. She implies that the synonyms she has used can boost the score of the criterion, "lexical resource". In reality, phrases such as "minor life", "according to my opinion", and "teenage is the happiest" do not sound natural at all. Also, the phrase, "and so on" and the verb, "get" sound too informal for an academic piece of writing. More worryingly, she claims that the opinion should be written as a separate paragraph apart from the conclusion, which is absurd! That's why I don't recommend many of the KZfaq channels run by so-called IELTS experts, who are, in fact, neither fluent nor suitably qualified to teach English to adults. For your information, there are much better videos shared by ex-examiners and native English speakers like Simon and Melbourne respectively. When you read their essays, you will see the difference between this model essay and much more accurate essays, which have been written by true professionals. Finally, I wasn't sharing my opinion as a learner. I have shared my input based on the experience I have gained as a TEFL certified (Cambridge level 5 certification) tutor. I hope this helps! 😉

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