2:15 I love that Max keeps a heart-shaped locket for her! He is REALLY into that girl!😂

****SPOILER**** I loved the foreshadowing of this show with the early songs including Literal Monster about the guy who becomes a demonic murderer and High School Is Killing Me opening with the two murder victims singing about how they’re dying, but all of this existing only in the teen drama sphere until the moment it doesn’t.

Great work! You’ve really improved on your framing and your animating. I love how you don’t officially show Max until later to build it up.

THAT LAST FRAME FORESHADOWING MAX'S DESTINY

I love how dynamic this is! And you really captured the unhinged energy of Max

This makes him feel as cartoonishly villainous as he is, fantastic job

Your improvement is unbelievable! This is so dynamic, your character designs for Ruth/Richie/Pete are instantly recognizable, and the shots of Max in the dark with the moving camera are incredible. So well done!

THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE THE COLOR CHOICES, LIGHTING, AND HOW SHAPED ALL THE CHARACTERS ARE!!!!! There’s so many clever little details and everything's so dynamic!!! Rjidhdeodicuejendj sndieko2ow 🤩🤩🤩

NOOO THE ANIME PILLOW!! Today we are gathered here today, to mourn the loss of Richie Lipschitz’s body pillow. Rip Body Pillow 2023-2023

That single frame at the ending was a perfect touch

2:59 did you just sneak in the fucking onceler pose

I love this so much! The style remind me of simplistic 80's cartoons especially with the eyes and how one caracter full on hid completely in a tiny locker and now Max hops on others heads. This was very nice ^^

I love how him running across everyone's heads perfectly captures the energy of his weird ass dancing lmao. I saw a headcanon that he thinks proper choreography is for nerds and I just 😂😂😂

this is the funniest animatic i've ever seen for npmd and it fits this song so perfectly

I love how PJ and Ruth Fleming get rekt over fangirling for Max.

Bro thinks he's in big city greens 😂😂

dude you literally never miss this is incredible??? your style is perfect for starkid songs 😭😭❤

"Blinky's Watching" No surprise there lol

I love how absolutely UNHINGED you drew Max

This is so good! When Jagerman made his appearance and dipped the nerd before dropping her!!! I cant. Every moment was perfection

THE LITTLE LOCKET WITH GRACE'S PICTURE MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD ALKDJSHFKJ

This is actually kind of horrifying. Max, at least in this animatic, is basically mutilating these other kids just for fun, and nobody is stepping in or has even NOTICED. For instance, at 0:49 By High School, kids have lost pretty much all their baby teeth. This is a serious dental injury that is pretty expensive to repair. This just adds to my point of nobody stepping in. This is damn near IMPOSSIBLE to hide, and still, nobody disciplines him. 1:09 I don't even WANT to know how those cuts got there. Those look FRESH, and with the amount of bruising around them, they look fairly deep. With how clean they look, though it might be a byproduct of the art style, those look like knife cuts. 1:46 He's STRANGLING a kid in BROAD DAYLIGHT for walking past him! Do I even need to explain this?

Soon after this musical came out, I was looking for some animatics for it and only saw a few decent ones that were even half of the song, then I realized that the truly great ones weren't here because they were currently being made. And you have proved me correct

WOAH THIS WAS AWESOME i loved richie's anime pillow being ripped and how long it is before we see max and also when he runs over everyone's heads there was so much personality and detail in this!!

THIS IS SO SO FANTASTIC AND EXPRESSIVE OMG. The way you captured Max’s energy WAS PEAK and I love how you conveyed everyone else’s fear. It would be so cool to see NPMD animated, especially in your style. This is also my favorite song of this musical and you SLAYED 👏👏👏

Max BARRING THE DOOR with a chair to prevent escape is great

awesome stuff man, i just saw the nightmare time one too

This was SO GOOD I loved every part of it. Max just beating the shit out of the nerds and then later JUMPING ON THEIR HEADS TO THE FRONT OF THE ROOM? Incredible stuff, actually mad me laugh at how cartoony it was (in a good way) Your style is so cool too, i love how you use shapes

tbh Max here looks like Matt eddsworld and thats so fucking based. love that

I love how dynamic the whole sequence is!!!

2:36 hi blinky!!! incredible work by the way!!!!! really enjoyed watching it and that last bit was actually really beautiful

i did not dare to blink during the entire thing because every frame was FANTASTIC

AHH THIS IS SO QUIRKY I WAS GIGGLING THE WHOLE TIME I love this so much. Talent talent talent ✨ Edit: Also, family guy death peter is now living in my head rent free

Ughhh im so floored with this! All the character design choices, the way you transition across diff shots/perspective, the goofy side of the all powerful bully you convey, etccc. and my sibling in christ is that a goddamn How Bad Can I Be allusion with the pan-down-look-up pov? and his lil grabby hand??? you absolute genius, i love it

I WAS JUST THINKING ABIUT HOW COOL A LITERAL MONSTER ANIMATIC WOULD BE

I really like the creativity in the different shots, like when max was jumping on the other students heads!

AAAAYO THIS IS SICK! ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE! I've seen your other hatchetfield related videos and they're great as well! You got so much talent! Oh and I love how at the end you showed Max as a ghost for a split second! You're amazing!

THIS IS PHENOMENAL!!! I love your art style so much!!! I do have a question though, is 2:58 a reference to The Lorax movie?

THIS IS AWESOME! love the style and illusteation of the lyrics the lil transition where pete shows up in his locker is really cool AND ITS SO COOL THAT YOU COMBINED THE TWO PARTS!!! works way better than i exoected honestly! the chaos of Max's part is absolutely amazingly conveyed... LIKE THERE IS SO MUCH CHAOS AND THEN ACTUALLY BEINGTHREATNING it looks so cool...

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i love how he just punches people in the hall way for no reason its so cool HAHAHA THE FRICKING SCENES ARE PRICELESS LMAOO

THIS IS SO GOOD THE MAX SECTION MADE ME HAVE A GIANT SMILE ON MY FACE

Really awesome! Your artstyle is the perfect mix of insane and goofy, it makes it really intimidating.

OMFG I JUSF SAW THE ENDING POSE THAF FORSHADOWS HIS GHOST DEATH

Ruth looks the most right in your style shes amazing.

I *NEED* to see this fully animated now

Dude this is super underrated! Great work!

YEA I LOVE THISSS, THE CAMERA ANGLES, ALL THE CHARACTER CHOICES, THE DESIGNS💜💜💜💜💜

WHY DID HE DO THE ONCELOR THING

Max looks so psychotic throughout the entire animatic I love it xD

Ohh this is so good, I remember back when you released the one of Watcher World, I really adore the creativity. In this especially, you really play with the cartoony to drive home how unhinged Max is, and some of those transitions (like the one with Peter and his locker)? Amazing

I have rewatched this at least 10 times already in the past hour, I am in complete and utter awe, this is so good

2:42 I can’t stop rewatching this the vocals mixed with the expressions. WOW. Perfect.

THE CINEMATOGRAPHY IS AWESOME I LOVE THIS ANIMATIC ITS ACTUALLY SO CHARMING..

this is so dynamic and fun! i really love the approaches you took to make max look fucking off his rocker, your style really fits the absurdity of this show :} keep up the good work!

That was a slick little elude to his monster form at the end there. Nice touch.

I don’t remember when I subscribed to you but I’m so happy I did so I could get notified by this video.

Phenomenal animatic!!! You knock it out of the park again!

Ahhhh, that was so sick!! I love how shaped they are, as well as the build up to max similar to npmd!! Also, your waycher world animatic?? SOOOOO COOL!!!! i love them a lot!

So cool. Your style is so expressive!! I absolutely love it. The frame movements are so great! not to mention just the ideas you put into this. (i saw that family guy death pose and onceler)

O thats so cool! Love the song and love your stlye Also 1:02 lmao

THIS IS SO COOL I LOVE UR ART AND I LOVE HOW THIS IS ANIMATED RAAAAAH

CRYING THATS SO GOOD

THE AMAZING ONE STRIKES AGAIN

This so good you did an amazing job your animatics are always so good

THIS IS SO GOODNOISCNWOUENC THENONCELER REF AT THE END-

THIS IS ACTUALLY INCREDIBLEEEEEEE it was SO entertaining to watch!! but i just HAVE to ask, is 2:54 an intentional lorax reference 💀

i love this SO MUCH it’s so wonderfully dynamic oh my god. favourite part is the .2 seconds of ruth getting hit by a basketball

HOLY SHIIIIIIT I LOVE THIS!!!! AAAAAAAH THE EXPRESSIOSN, Max looks fucking feral I love the sequence of him just absolutely wiping the floor with people in the middle of the hall (ALSO BRO BRO that ending split second flash of Zombie Max ❤❤❤❤❤)

This animatic is incredible! I'm in love with the cartoonish designs and dynamic frames!

OWHAHAJSUSHS THIS IS SO SO SO GOOD HOLY EHFUDBJD!!!! I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE I LOVR!!!!! DUDE THIS IS SO!!! EHFUEBFHDHF SO COOL SO COOL I LOVE HOW YOU DID MAX!!! ALSO RICHIE AND GRACE MY BELOVEDS EHDHEHR there's so much to love in this animatic YOU CAN SEE SO MUCH WOAHSIAHS ITS SO INCREDIBLE !!!!!

WOW! SO EXPRESSIVE AND FUN!!! I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS, YOU'VE GOT GREAT IDEAS THAT ARE COMEDIC AND FIT THE STARKID VIBE TO A T! (tea? tee?) MY FAVOURITE ANIMATIC OF THIS MUSICAL SO FAR! GREAT JOB!!!

2:57 HOW BAD?! HOW BAD CAN HE POSSIBLY BE?!!!!! ( Loved it its so good)

I love the expressiveness and visuals of this!!

this is so good!

This was very well done. Not only is this one of my favorite songs from NPMD, but I love the little foreshadowing at the end. Great work ❤

Im getting mad eddsworld vibes from the style. And its totally tubular! Love the characterizations broski! I'd love too see you do other NPMD songs.

the ART STYLE !!!

I love this!! In the nicest way possible this looks like captain underpants and I love it. ❤️

DUDE THIS IS STUNNIG!?! YOU CAPTURED MAX SO WELL OMGGGG

i always imagined this being like a student news segment or something where they all interview kids abt max cause. well

RICHIES BODY PILLOW BEING RIPPED APART AHAHAHA NOOOOOO

OHHH THIS IS SO GOOD. I love how nerdy Pete looks and that shit-eating grin on Max!!!!

i love this!!!! they're all so. shaped /pos ⭐⭐💛💛

I can't believe I almost just scrolled past this!! There's something absolutely wonderful about your animation style, and I'm subscribing right now so I can see more of it!

OH MY GOSH- i love your artstyle so much grhegeg you make them so goofy looking in the best possible way!! really fits the tone of the whole show :D

I really liked the animation and all great work! However you made it far darker than it was in NPMD but that was fun to

this is so amazing!! your transitions, expressions, everything about this is so fun and engaging. awesome!!

She did he do the oncler pose at the end??? MAX?!????

ooo this is neat, your style lowkey reminds me of eddsworld which is so cool tbh

THE ARTSTYLE IM EATING THIS UPP

DUDEEE CHILLS LITERALLY CHILLS

that was amazing

This is absolutely amazing!!

Amazing! Love the expressions and movement of the characters, especially with Max! Everything flows great together, it’s beautiful! Fantastic work

Woooow this is so dynamic I love it!! And the last frame 😶

THIS IS SO FUNKY /pos

THIS IS OKE IF THE BEST ONES AHHH

THIS IS AMAZINGGG

this ROCKS !!!