Men Writing Women (Poorly)

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Ай бұрын

Fractured Fantasy Tropes wonders about the amount of effort some guys put into their character building of the female characters in their stories.
Writing by Phil
Art by Midjourney
Voices by Elevenlabs

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@rebmakash8539 Ай бұрын

I was amused until I realized none of the art matched and that this was AI art.

@futuza Ай бұрын

AI voices too. The dialogue might even be AI generated too.

@NeversleepScrolls Ай бұрын

I confess the art and voices are AI generated, but I do write these myself.

@MagnaFae 29 күн бұрын

Agreed. AI “art” is not real art.

@futuza 29 күн бұрын

@@NeversleepScrollsYou should acknowledge that in the video's description so it doesn't look like you're trying to pass the AI stuff off as yours.

@macyfisher5209 29 күн бұрын

@@futuza Maybe it wasn't there two hours ago but it does say Art by Midjourney in the description now!

@genghiskhan6809 27 күн бұрын

Now we need a crossover between poorly written male made by a woman and poorly written female made by a man.

@futuza Ай бұрын

This Alara girl sure has a lot of attitude, passive aggressiveness and snark for someone with no personality.

@andrewmclellan1623 26 күн бұрын

Women writing men was funnier as the guy was oblivious to the fact that he was poorly written

@MayflowerField Ай бұрын

Pro tip to any dudes who want to write a great story with a girl: draw your dude, write his script, done? Good. Now add long hair, chest; and remove his front tool. Done. It’s a woman. You drew a woman with an actually backstory-personality-and aspirations. Job well done.

@bananabanana484 Ай бұрын

Of course, there would probably be some polishing to do. I always look back to the Overly Sarcastic Productions video on the subject when I’m having trouble

@SqueakyA5 29 күн бұрын

This is a good way to start! i would say after awards it's best to go and look back at the character and see what you could add to make them more interesting in what role they play. doing this can help with writting not just a good female character but also a fresh one.

@andrewmclellan1623 26 күн бұрын

Jack Nicholson said something similar in As Good As It Gets

@improvwithlions4173 29 күн бұрын

This writer is taking his personality tropes from Stephanie Meyer. EDIT: I feel like male writers more often want to write their female characters as kind of bratty or combative so the main character can "conquer" them.....or head over heels obsessed from the jump so that that problem is already solved.