I think part of why she prefers Trisha's poetry is actually exactly that. Trisha seems self aware and like she just uses poetry as an outlet, while Gabbie seems convinced that her poetry is just good, no need for actual effort on her part. Gabbie really takes herself too seriously in my opinion.

Everybody respects Trisha more than Gabbie in a lot of aspects 😂😂😂😂

Shed make a video asking why

Brit Ann of course not, she’s too much of a KiNd PeRsOn

It dosent matter, we must all be highschool bully’s 😭✨

Agreed, Trisha's feels more raw because she seems less concerned with catering to an audience and is unapologetically herself (trolling/real emotion. Gabbie's seems so polished, her style doesn't feel her own. It's empty observations that reek of a dishonest cash grab.

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Gabbie's feels like the kid who skated by in school because they had really good ideas and never had to execute, where Trisha feels like the kid with real talent who got overlooked because she didn't seem to try.

Seriously!!!!😂

It's not hard to be a better poet than Gabbie tbh

@@AmaniCarson true that

yeet yeet I feel like most of gabbies felt superficial and while Trishas weren’t that good they felt more real and emotional

@@amyd.5168 exactly,Gabbie was presenting herself as a real serious poet but honey she did NOT deliver

... damn

Maybe. Still so.... teen angsty.

I love that interpretation. Well said

i just thought it was because she was rhyming a word with the same word... so she spelled it differently

@@RickReasonnz analizing poetry can have some deeper meaning that may seem angsty, but sometimes it does have meaning

I know! I wasn't paying attention to who wrote it and i rewound it and she said it was Trisha and I was like "oh, no shit?! shes actually rather intelligent considering how she acts on camera"

Why? It was so basic and stupid.

she definitely is. i think her entire online presence is a character she plays, even when she's supposed to seem genuine.

Niti Kitti trisha is very intelligent. she's a business woman and she knows what she's doing

She is really smart

Absolutely. Her online personality is crafted in order to gain attention, and that can only be thought of by a smart person.

She definitely is

Conner McIntosh same

She'd probably send her 38 text messages ranting

Oh she must know... 👀👀👀

Simon Rubero Ugh, I hate her (Gabbie)

I think Trisha’s work is more respectable (not good definitely) bc despite not being an objectively good poem it does display her passion and her intentions are very clear so i can see why it would entertain people. Gabbie’s stuff is just pretentious and ridiculous so it entertains people by being just that crappy

Emily Kipp I agree. I may not like Trisha Paytas a whole lot, but I still felt a connection to some of what she said. The emotion is there, it just needs to be polished up a bit.

Kay Haven yeah I agree about Trisha she’s done and said some fucked up shit. But when it comes to her poetry, it’s kind of like ‘naïve art’, y’know? And I actually think that if it was polished up it might lose something. Like it reminds me of my horrible middle school poetry but in a way that evokes emotion, and I’m not sure that a polished piece could do the same.

Emily Kipp Lang Leav called it “pop poetry”. I think that’s a pretty good term.

Emily Kipp this is exactly what abstract or ugly art is, people think it’s ugly, without rhyme or rhythm, but it moves some people truely.

@Hans Hanzo i think of pop as pop art tho. Like with pop culture references and palatable colors that everyone can enjoy and understand. Which i think suits it very well, where pop as in pop music agreeably doesnt

I think it's because earlier, KZfaqrs were always trying to be the "older sister/brother" or "best friend" and now they're self-concious bc everybody thinks they're not working hard, so they want to be taken seriously and seen as "real artists".

I mean she is definitely thought provoking

I didnt see it coming when i click on this video though:))

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She is thought provoking as in her poetry still evokes emotion, I think if it were to be polished it would lose its emotional nature so it’s not like the work of Emily Dickinson or E.A. Poe but it’s unpolished which could add to the atmosphere of her poetry.

Trisha is like an onion. There are layers to her.

deadass same

Kyra's piggy noises are so adorable

Same lol

elle but our goth queen strange aeons has already done so.

@@kayhaven4710 And our Lord and Savior Krimson Rogue

Nah, she has more class than that

elle BAHAHAHAH 😆😆😆😆😆😆

if she gives any of her money to onision i'd be so mad

Sometimes I wish I had Trisha's confidence because she doesn't give a single shit but at the same time it can kinda be her downfall

fr!!

I really try to write my poetry by this rule, it has to make the reader feel something. I'm slso considering doing creative writing in uni, not sure what it's about as a course though.

@@possummagic1341 I don't know how every college is, but my creative writing course went over 3 styles of writing. Fiction, poetry, and creative nonfiction. I got pushed out my comfort zone for sure. But my school also wants us knowledgeable in literature and language. So it's more than just writing. Though again, i'm not sure how every other school is.

@@hopehurley1151 huh that's interesting def will still consider it.

@@possummagic1341 i recommend it. it's so fun! and, english nerds are some of the best people and friends you could have. 💜

mOist moisT moIST. I made 99% of people reading this uncomfortable. ART

Exactly my thoughts as well!

That's the way I interpreted it too.

I thought perhaps the shift between the two could represent the back and forth nature of being done with someone, then wanting them again. Damning them in your mind in one thought but worshipping them again in the next.

This is what I read it as. God is letting her down instead of giving her someone who cares, she’s upset with the man but also with God.

Omg I literally just wrote the same comment, that's what I originally thought as well!!

It's not that she isn't smart, it's just that she should have hired an editor to clean up her book before she put it out there.

i think shes smart and that assuming she doesnt know a lot about the technicals of poetry (and so being unsure if shes using some of those subtle tricks) doesnt take away from how smart she is. being smart doesnt mean youre good at poetry lol

@@smellslikelayne isn't she like this with all other insta poets, though? I don't think Rupi considers herself at the levels of classic poets or claims to be, not to mention the problem with her poetry in the critiques is that it's too short and doesn't have that structure of classic poems (line stanza breaks, different rhyming schemes, etc.) - all of which she can't do bc the poem is litterally to short. Rachel (and other insta poet critics like her) has a hard time accepting that there's just a different style of poetry that exists nowadays and people are trying to convult it into something that it's not. consistently in the critiques I'm seeing is that this insta poetry is just not done in the way that published, literary poems are done (which is a more abstracts and technical take on poetry) and people are clinging onto it so much hence why negative reviews. Many of these insta poets I don''t think they take themselves as seriously or claim to be as good as professionals/on a professional level. I'm not even sure if Gabby Hanna considers herself a poetic genius - but her reactions can be understandable if you've ever been a writer yourself where you've poured hours into your work and where what was an improvement for you was still not good enough for others; the thought realizing that you'll never be better than mediocre (which makes me question if people with that skill level means aren't allowed to publish books and their works bc it feels undeserving or as a cash grab? Like are we gate-keeping poetry rn?). People are invested in their creations that's why it hurts so much to receive bad reviews.

She's smart but rly insecure

Mariset Moone same

I wish I could watch Trisha read her poems out loud. I think they are almost written in a way to be performed.

I cba to come up with a username soz when I watch Gordon Ramsay eat something

@@elizabethbloom3313 Exactly what I was thinking!!

@@elizabethbloom3313 my first thought

HELP SAME

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yes PLEASE omg

And Florence Welch has a poetry book out too. I love that woman's writing.

I love lanas poems!!!

@@sunshineramirez7766 Franz Cantu has a poetry book too The Harvard Prince: Poems & Observations www.amazon.com/dp/B084DH5J44/ref=cm_sw_r_cp_apa_i_HGhxEbAQ87PSS

666 likes, can't ruin it 😌

yea

Wait when was that?

@@crownclowncreations 0:39

Same

That sounds sexual in a way and I’m uncomfortable 😂

@@urmom1313. No one on the internet knows I'm a furry. (Jk, please don't tell my Mom)

Why? (Genuinely asking)

@@Blue_Avatar creepshow has been since exposed has having done objectively terrible things. I personally don't know much about it but you can find videos about it pretty easily

@@Blue_Avatar CSA turned out to not be a good person

@@Blue_Avatar She's been stalking and copying her partner's ex for YEARS... as well as threatening to expose her childhood photos (explicit) as in underage

me being in a car and seeing another car very similar to the car I am in

@@saharamoon7700 Your apartment must be huge! Ha ha... Ha. 😅

Me too!!! My Edgar Allan Poe black collection book is one of my treasures ❤️

I believe in you! Good luck ❤️

@@RachelOates Thanks Rachel! 🍻

lmao this is similar to how i felt after i watched an on*sion book review. like, "well whatever i write won't be as bad as this at least"

@@beetlebugs Same here. Part of the reason I published my first book is because I saw other, lousier writers making a living off it. I figured I could write stories just as surreal or creepy, but with decent prose, storytelling and characters. Dunno if I succeeded entirely, but I didn't write Stones to Abigail!

That's the spirit!!

The "hours since my last" also sounds like the introduction to a confession which is so interesting when comparing her relationship with pain and sexuality and religion

@@katesnyder9634 that's what i thlught!

Ooh I love this interpretation! Turning mistakes into something we can learn and grow and create something beautiful from is so important ❤️

as a wise man once told me, we don't make mistakes. Just happy little accidents. Then we beat the devil out of it.

There are no accidents - Master Oogway

My best artworks are never intentional. Studio art classes messed with my head because every line, colour and material you used had to be tied to a meaning. I always used to just sit there like '....But why can't I just draw something i think is pretty why does it have to have months and months of thinking of meanings and analysing other artworks for ideas before we can even start?' I can most definitely say that I got away with not doing any of that by giving everything meanings afterwards and be like 'Oh I meant for that to happen because im 14 and this is deep' LOL

On this note, my favorite piece I've ever painted is a 5 panel scene. In one corner a tiny piece of hair got on my canvas. My spouse saw it and thought it was an intentional stylized R hidden in the picture. I loved that idea so much I've since adopted the symbol in my new works. Art is a beautiful amalgamation of mistakes that create a new understanding

Thank you so so so much! ❤️

Couldnt agree more :)

agree!

me TOO

Yea these videos reminded me of my love for poetry again

Ooo! I like that.

I like poetry and it’s my strongest form of writing (I think) but god poetry in school sucks. I had an assignment for a sonnet once and after I finished it and took it to the teacher he made me re write it because it wasn’t about love. Wtf? My mom is an actual poet and she called bullshit too lol

True lol

You won the bet

You mean a Wilde ride? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

yess

The poems from my emo teenager years... *shudders in horror*

Or even their good poetry. I think this style would also work with good poems, or alright ones, because she could still compare them to 'famous' poems

Fab idea

Yes

Just Ryan - my reasoning is: from my view she has never shown herself to be artistic in really any form. She wrote songs but they were surface deep and mostly satire, other than that the art of poetry seems out of her realm.

Ohhh!

I saw it as her refering to the guy the way she did before the betrayal. She used to see him like a man with a capital H, and is He going to do this to me? Am I making sense?

orangejuicedude yeah I’m shook because I like really liked the first one. Maybe it’s because I felt the emotions without all the complicated analyzing that I hate in poetry.

why would you censor god?

@@sofiaj308 I think either interpretation is valid!!

Eiko I was thinking the same thing!

To me it also reads a little bit like a continuation of a half-heard sentence

You made so many good point, and I honestly agree. Shes a confusing figure in media. Also, your English was fine

Gloria Folidis Your english is good! Also, while I myself don’t really like her and enjoy her content, I do also think that she isn’t really herself in her videos. Sometimes it’s because it’s easy to just brush off bad actions with “It was a joke!”. Other times, I think she’s afraid of people not liking her true self. If she isn’t taken seriously, at least she won’t get her true self insulted?

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Like others have said your English is good. I agree for the most part. I just think when Trisha uses real issues people face for her trolling is when it becomes not okay (the trans incident and the DID incident is what I mean.)

The main difference between gabbie and trisha, for me, is that Gabbie is very performative, "look how creative and artistic and deep I am," whereas Trisha is just straight up distraught and goin through it. There's so much more emotion.

If it had lesss autotune would it be stuck in your head?

Rupi Kaur is just....really bad. Very instapoetry

My exact thought when this showed up on my feed.

Bet she writes it sitting on her kitchen floor

She has also written a novel.

@@LittleMissLounge dafuc?

idk who allowed her

The thing is Trisha had been writing poetry all throughout her relationship and before that. She just decided to publish it, but she was specifically trying to make a book

Do it, it's quite interesting.

I'm not religious but I've read parts of the bible every now and then and I really like some of the stories. And you're right, it's referenced so much that it's good to know more about it.

i’d recommend the book how to read literature like a professor! it mentions a lot of common allusions in books including biblical ones, and imo it’s applicable to almost all media

You should read psalms! Pure poetry 😊

yes I agree the psalms, proverbs, and luke I feel are very good for basic biblical metaphors and references! psalms and proverbs are pieces of art while luke contains actual words from the Christian God (it's a biography of Jesus)

hi ily

SophanaR why is it bad?

Scranton Rogue of the Silver Trio Omg yes! I just commented this too

In my opinion, there's absolutely nothing wrong with that, especially if expressing those emotions creatively helps you get through them - I know for me, personally, writing through the darker emotions saved my life many times. It's an incredibly healthy coping mechanism and there's no shame in it. I'd be interested in reading your poetry, I'd probably find it very relatable and I'm sure there are plenty of others out there who would too. Keep writing and hang in there, okay? 💜

I found an old Instagram when I was 15 where I posted poetry. I don’t write anymore (I’m 20 now) but I wrote way better stuff then than I ever could now.

🤔 Interesting, because then what would you call Rembrandts art ? Rembrandts work was meant to provoke emotion and awe on the spectators through the representation of the world as we see it. Also, the concept of representing emotion in art (idk much abt literature so idk if its the same) is so recent, and it is a response to the changes of the world, so I understand the idea of giving merit to emotion more than accurate representation.

@@thepinatafightdani of course rembrandt was something new and awe inspiring at the time, and he definitely has an audience today, but he was the first person who came to mind when I thought of technical ability over emotional appeal, as most of his paintings are stark representations of reality with dull colour schemes and not much style, meant to showcase real settings and his skill. This is just my opinion though, and I definitely understand the people who disagree

@@xdlr22 yeah definitely. And you're totally entitled to that opinion, and I know rembrandt is one of the most popular artists so a lot of people probably disagree with me. My point was pretty much just that art doesn't have to be about technical skill or talent; it can also be about emotion and meaning that the piece evokes in the viewer

OG Crazy Cat Lady interesting! I didn’t think of that

boy did this age like milk

ASarcasticTulip she does indeed...

Still feel like Amberlynns is better than Gabbies.

Leanne Williams I took it as six months since last emotional connection, six hours since last physical connection

@@rileighsmiles whatever it means, it's a shame that she feels like she's had to put it on paper. Nobody should feel that way. Ever

YES