Tremble Enemies of Man | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi story

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5 ай бұрын

The following was originally posted by an anonymous author on 4chan's /tg/ board on 18-10-10.
The reddit link to this story: / tremble_enemies_of_man
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@jkellynewman9203
@jkellynewman9203 5 ай бұрын
'I have yet to meet one who can outsmart a bullet' Im hooked😅
@blackjacklives7616
@blackjacklives7616 4 ай бұрын
Cry some more
@MrPinballWizzard
@MrPinballWizzard 4 ай бұрын
literally was expecting this comment here :D :D :D :D yeaaap :D
@benjamingray2071
@benjamingray2071 5 ай бұрын
literally the one thing most terrifying is a human with nothing left nowhere to go nothing to lose nothing to love no reason to live no inhibitions and no limits it leaves merely a singular purpose to defy those who have wronged us until our last breath
@CarlosDiaz-om9nw
@CarlosDiaz-om9nw 5 ай бұрын
Excellent Story! In the last couple of years Hollywood movies has been lacking good stories and performance. This story its excellent for a good movie. Instead they continue making the same crap.
@brokeandtired
@brokeandtired 5 ай бұрын
If hollyweird made this the sarge would have tits and a penis....And the actor would have been on the Epstein Island flight logs.
@XpaceTrue
@XpaceTrue 5 ай бұрын
I did not care for the dystopian tone of this story. And I found it to be unrealistic: If humanity was ever reduced to a mere 20,000 individuals, in all likelihood, the species would eventually go extinct due to inbreeding and a lack of genetic diversity. This would be especially true if that 20,000 was split up on, say, many colony ships and/or stations scattered across the galaxy. Our analysis of human DNA shows that we're one of the most inbred species on Earth. Most animals have *_far more_* genetic diversity. The idea of so few human remnants just throwing themselves into war is *absurd.*
@niukal
@niukal 5 ай бұрын
​@@XpaceTrueyes everything u said made sense but not to much to give credit to the greys to help helping humans breed and help with introducing DNA from. Samples their collection from past visits All in all its a good story if it's not for u no big It's a story some one wrote in there spare time its never going to be perfect
@CHMichael
@CHMichael 5 ай бұрын
Wait another 2 years and ai will turn this into a TV quality movie in 24 hours.
@mikeschnobrich1807
@mikeschnobrich1807 4 ай бұрын
That's not a mistake. Hollywood will never make movies that have family and patriotism as core themes. At best, Hollywood would rewrite this story to have a dysfunctional protagonist fighting against corrupt human leadership to seek justice against an arch- enemy leader. The only plot line today's Hollywood is interested in is the outsider against the unjust powerful society.
@josephnolan8217
@josephnolan8217 5 ай бұрын
Tremble aliens who come with ill intent against mankind. We are a species that only needs a single reason to unite. Reading and listening to these stories makes me realise we need to orientate our thinking as a species.
@Shadow.Dragon
@Shadow.Dragon 5 ай бұрын
Great story! I hope this becomes a series!
@arcdecibel9986
@arcdecibel9986 4 ай бұрын
"I have yet to meet one who can outsmart bullet." Even with Earth destroyed, the memes just never die.
@darklightcyborg1105
@darklightcyborg1105 3 ай бұрын
In the far future, we'll may be extinct, and machines shall own our World... But MEMES will still live on...!!! LOL
@Leprechaunlock
@Leprechaunlock 5 ай бұрын
14:14 is hilarious transition from deep and dark to a more lighthearted tone.
@crsp76691
@crsp76691 5 ай бұрын
Why cant the movie industry come with another good sci fi series? Been really sad the last 7-10 years. The newer battlestar gallactica was the best i remember. Pandoram was pretty good.
@SatansOps
@SatansOps 5 ай бұрын
The expanse is honestly my favorite, check it out if you haven't already.
@Sevarrius
@Sevarrius 5 ай бұрын
I second the expanse, great story and the Newtonian physics on display in the space battles is very diferent from most Sci-fi but very realistic. The space battles in Battlestar galactica are actually probably one of the closer points of reference in other sci-fi to those of the expanse. I loved the 2004 Battlestar Galactica btw, just a pity about the rushed, underwhelming and somewhat contradictory ending.
@aitorbleda8267
@aitorbleda8267 5 ай бұрын
They only want to do soap operas. Lazy writing.
@XpaceTrue
@XpaceTrue 5 ай бұрын
Hollywood tends to avoid sci-fi as it's too risky and expensive to produce. Trying something new is especially risky. Studios like cheap reality TV and guaranteed hits from reputable franchises. BTW: Why mention the newer Battlestar Galactica when there are many other sci-fi shows that have bigger fan bases and received more fame? Babylon 5 and Farscape was *so much* better. I *hated* the 2004 Battlestar Galactica - bad writing with too many contradictions and plot holes. Besides, for the time in which it was produced, the original Battlestar Galactica was clearly superior.
@daomingjin
@daomingjin 5 ай бұрын
because their purpose is to program the public to think what they want to think. They want Western Society to hate itself and become weak as possible. This is the purpose of D.E.I.
@I98878
@I98878 5 ай бұрын
Shout out to the grays 😎
@Shinobubu
@Shinobubu 4 ай бұрын
I'm hoping the Greys get some of that sweet sweet tech as compensation for them saving our ass.
@Shinobubu
@Shinobubu 4 ай бұрын
Till this day. Aliens are still trying to outsmart a bullet.
@jamiepatterson1214
@jamiepatterson1214 5 ай бұрын
Really good story, one that could be extended with additional chapters.
@woswasdenni1914
@woswasdenni1914 5 ай бұрын
one captured human talked, told them about the greys and humans. aviax then hunted both species down, the end, youre welcome
@johncunningham4820
@johncunningham4820 5 ай бұрын
EXCELLENT Story . Any more of this to come ? Sounds like it could be TOLD in about 5 Episodes .
@darklightcyborg1105
@darklightcyborg1105 3 ай бұрын
IF ONLY zombie, STINKY GRAY Aliens could be like that...
@yrham8689
@yrham8689 5 ай бұрын
Very enjoyable! More, please!
@leadingauctions8440
@leadingauctions8440 5 ай бұрын
This was a good story
@zemy1313
@zemy1313 5 ай бұрын
Loved it! ❤
@DavidJordan-to7sn
@DavidJordan-to7sn 5 ай бұрын
I loved this story. 😊
@ireallyreallyhategoogle
@ireallyreallyhategoogle 4 ай бұрын
Never back humanity into a corner.
@fishfightgo6559
@fishfightgo6559 5 ай бұрын
In my head I can't stop thinking about Morgan Freeman as the main character. 😂
@ganieraorison6192
@ganieraorison6192 5 ай бұрын
same here
@rokulus7910
@rokulus7910 5 ай бұрын
I didn't think much of the Aviaks the first time I laid eyes on them. Looked like a stiff breeze would blow them over.
@graplingurty
@graplingurty 5 ай бұрын
Good yarn this one. Please continue.
@deanhawk3217
@deanhawk3217 5 ай бұрын
Happy New Year I am new to your channel and I really like your story
@gusgiroux2693
@gusgiroux2693 5 күн бұрын
This AI voice is amazing he sounds like Elmer Fudd. make him say im hunting rabbit's
@escobarjr6193
@escobarjr6193 4 ай бұрын
This with the new Sora ai would probably make great small movies, thanks for the story!
@lubomirkompis9441
@lubomirkompis9441 4 ай бұрын
Sergant Blood and Thunder playing TF2 when earth was lost confirmed.
@fakshen1973
@fakshen1973 5 ай бұрын
Well at least we weren't zoned for demolition to put in a new space highway... by some really bad poets...
@cindaschuster6725
@cindaschuster6725 5 ай бұрын
Good story 💙👍
@SageofStars
@SageofStars 5 ай бұрын
Does this one have a sequel? Because if not, I would love to play with this particular toy a bit, as this was the sort of story that NEEDS more to it. It's like Asimov's Foundation, it ends at the half way point. We haven't died on the guns of our enemies OR crushed them under the risen human power yet. It stops just short of all that.
@blackairforceone
@blackairforceone 5 ай бұрын
This is an amazing story, there needs to be a proper follow up on this...
@spencersullivan4447
@spencersullivan4447 4 ай бұрын
“Tremble enemies of man” said Kermit 😂
@guilhermearaujoandradedasi7390
@guilhermearaujoandradedasi7390 5 ай бұрын
This story resembles the movie of Titan AE.
@SupCom78
@SupCom78 5 ай бұрын
very interesting story sadly the beginning is not there just told that earth has been destroyed but great story i wonder how it will continue thx for uploading it.
@chopperchuck
@chopperchuck 5 ай бұрын
Any chance that for this upcoming conflict we are yet to be in I can get my power armor custom-made to look like mandalorian armor just asking
@kfeltenberger
@kfeltenberger 4 ай бұрын
No need to take ears…take beaks!
@IaIaCthulhuFtagn
@IaIaCthulhuFtagn 5 ай бұрын
Sounds kinda wasteful to crack a rare planet capable of supporting life when you have access to the whole of the universe and can harvest the same resources from any number of uninhabitable worlds. Wouldn't it be a nifty plot twist if it turned out that the Grays had secretly hired the Aviaks in order to gain a willing human workforce and galactic ally.
@michaelpettersson4919
@michaelpettersson4919 5 ай бұрын
Perhaps but maybe it was an attack to remove a competitor from the same type of worlds.
@Shinobubu
@Shinobubu 4 ай бұрын
We are familiar with the Harem system. It's called Pimping.
@hariseldon3786
@hariseldon3786 5 ай бұрын
... send the evidence (ship) into the sun...
@Torres001able
@Torres001able 5 ай бұрын
So is there a part 2
@mutterfudder401
@mutterfudder401 5 ай бұрын
@maxmoore9955
@maxmoore9955 5 ай бұрын
But who had the Aviacks .been working for .The Greys my Guess .No one would kill an enemy officer without milking him for information.
@davidturner4824
@davidturner4824 5 ай бұрын
We should start building space destroyers to defend our planet right now. There are hundreds of different species and their probes around our planet right now. They will have to have the heaviest armor we can devise; with the most advanced weapons and engines we can create at this time. Over a few hundred years, we should be able to have some pretty decent space destroyers to defend ourselves. Especially after we develop shields.
@blueeyeswhitedragon9839
@blueeyeswhitedragon9839 5 ай бұрын
Great story...suitable for enlargement into a movie or TV series. It appears that the narrator is a smoker, his voice changes in to more raspy accent after each smoke break. 😅
@eagle4570
@eagle4570 5 ай бұрын
Part one ?
@JosephKano
@JosephKano 5 ай бұрын
I'm not so sure the Grays are the innocent helpers they make themselves out to be.
@niukal
@niukal 5 ай бұрын
Agree I got the feeling the greys have a long term plan involving humans Might be as simple as trying to help humans to evolve to solve their problems with DNA or making themselves as saviours so we become willing foot soldiers for them be nice to see how it unfolds
@gemmel3197
@gemmel3197 5 ай бұрын
All that by 20k people? I think not, 2 million maybe.
@Shinobubu
@Shinobubu 4 ай бұрын
20K is not enough genetic diversity rendering us effectively extinct.
@00yiggdrasill00
@00yiggdrasill00 5 ай бұрын
Vengeance is a poor thing to chase and the protagonist here will suffer more for it eventually....but theres a point it becomes necessary. More to the point, if they have done this to a species once then they have either done it before or will do it again, and it falls to those who can stop it to stop it. And thats a different matter from vengeance entirely.
@dano7411
@dano7411 5 ай бұрын
Vengeance is best served cold, and it is sweet... Like Ice Cream! Now who doesn't like ice cream?
@00yiggdrasill00
@00yiggdrasill00 5 ай бұрын
@@dano7411 while I do agree ice cream is great, especially vanilla, vengeance isn't quite the same.
@niukal
@niukal 5 ай бұрын
Rationally I agree with everything u said But I imagine if someone killed my family I would be walking the path of vengeance till the my last days Either I die trying Or after I succeed I would think if the evils I did and probably off myself
@00yiggdrasill00
@00yiggdrasill00 5 ай бұрын
@@niukal well that's exactly my point, and why I said sometimes it's necessary, because not everything can be forgiven or dealt with through a just manner. But even if this character absolutely wipes out their enemies...there are things that will be sacrificed along the way that shouldn't be sacrificed, lines that will be crossed that shouldn't be crossed...and in the end that will only bring them more pain. Now the generations after them, that's another story.
@niukal
@niukal 5 ай бұрын
@@00yiggdrasill00 rational thinking Is sometimes overuled by emotional thinking almost never right But it under certain situations it's can be very hard to b rational unless it's gets u closer to Ur goal I'm not condoning it just understanding it
@danielh6015
@danielh6015 5 ай бұрын
Why not take the ship ?
@woswasdenni1914
@woswasdenni1914 5 ай бұрын
the ambassador thing makes no sense. humans are supposed to be unknown. why woudl that old bird say its impossible if humans are knoown to be still around.
@anonygent
@anonygent 4 ай бұрын
The constant change in pitch for no good reason was distracting.
@BENTLEYQUAMP
@BENTLEYQUAMP 5 ай бұрын
I don`t quite understand. You said the human survivors existence was kept secret from the aviaks, to stop them finishing the extermination. So why would there be human ambassadors? Wouldn`t that give their existence/survival away?
@OneJazzKid
@OneJazzKid 5 ай бұрын
Colossus time for the Aviaks. That is why xenophobe is the only way.
@mikeschnobrich1807
@mikeschnobrich1807 4 ай бұрын
Xenophobia is the opposite of "Keep your friends close but, keep your enemies closer."
@theFutureSoundWaves
@theFutureSoundWaves 5 ай бұрын
You can't do anything if all you have is 20000 people left out of 8-10 billions. You won't have enough mathematicians, physicists, software engineers, miners, refiners etc. etc. in order to build spaceships. You need to hide, grow food and have many many many babies for a long period of time before you'd be able to start doing any space military activities again. Maybe the Grays would compensate some of the needs, and provide highly intelligent robots with AI/AGI capabilities but still you'd need 1000-2000 years before being able to make moves. IMHO. 🤔🤷
@Bellator_of_the_Shadow
@Bellator_of_the_Shadow 5 ай бұрын
Actually. Thanks to there being no technology and people actually wanting children in such a position each family would probably consist of 5 to 10. We'll use 7 as a average. If 20000 survived most likely half are children. That leaves 10000 adults. That makes 5000 couples. 5000 x 7 is 35000 people. Divide by two and multiply by 7 again. That makes 122500 people. This is excluding the children that grew up originally by the way. Once again divide by 2 and multiply by 7. 428750 people. Repeat. You now have 1,500,625 people. And I know. It'd be slower but it wouldn't take more than a few generations to have millions of people again. Not only that but they still had technology and the greys were helping them. They would explode in population. And of course the 10,000 original children would grow up and get married by the second generation so that'd be another 5000 couples which means it would be way more. If we consider people dying randomly (cause why not) then it'd take roughly 6 generations
@jonnypena7651
@jonnypena7651 5 ай бұрын
Yeah, even if everthing is done by robots, even diversity of gens won't be enough to ensure humans without deformations.
@xirausgaming
@xirausgaming 5 ай бұрын
I don't like the first and last AI Voice (same). This rolling in the Voice. Your other Videos had better Voices. After all nice Story
@chrismcfizzle
@chrismcfizzle 4 ай бұрын
Universal advice about humans...F.A.F.O.
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