The BIGGEST College Essay Mistakes To Avoid (stop doing this!)

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from stanford university students: tips for college essays and common mistakes in common app essays. writing college essays can be tough! we've been editing essays for a while and love to help - we've also picked up some helpful tips and tricks that we share in this video.
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@sallygoose 3 жыл бұрын

we don't stan the mission trip essay

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

no we DONT

@jeannie1920 3 жыл бұрын

HAHAHA olivia pulled the "it's the white savior complex for me" 💅💅 thank u guys for ur gr8 tips! could you guys make a video about supplemental essays and making those unique, too? it doesn't have to be limited to stanford supps!

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

HAHAHA yes totally :) we will

@anya-kq7gw 3 жыл бұрын

This was sooo helpful. Just realized I was slowly crafting my essay into a variant of the “grandparent essay” . Y’all are the best no cap 👏

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

omg queen 👏 you’re gonna kill it

@erinye8327 3 жыл бұрын

hi! i know sammy has talked about being pre-med at stanford, but i would love if tara and olivia could share their stories about how you picked your majors + how different majors work at stanford. great video as always

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

thanks so much erin! will do

@Kate-hf4ms 3 жыл бұрын

this was so helpful! i'm a senior and i was worried because my essay isn't 'braggy' but this video cleared things up and made me more comfortable with my essay

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

yay i’m glad we could help :)

@Lila-mk2xm 3 жыл бұрын

Olivia spoke on that topic so well and respectfully - I wld hav just been like don’t write about ur fucking mission trip please

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

HAHA literallf

@purposefulperformance 3 жыл бұрын

you guys should vlog when you get back on campus!

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

yes! we're planning to meet up in a month or so and will totally vlog

@sarasolanki7022 3 жыл бұрын

olivia i love the sweatshirt ure wearing in this video😍😍 where did u get it from?!

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

aw cutie thanks for asking it's from MadebyJalyn on ig!!

@yoursistersclothes 2 жыл бұрын

Me after I just wrote an essay on my grandpa's enjoyment of movies and how that inspired me to create movies... I hope it's fine :) Stanfords deadline is tonight love that

@MoayadShehadeh Жыл бұрын

that sounds interesting! did u end up getting in?

@muskansingh3941 3 жыл бұрын

Hey this video was amazing.... I am actually gonna apply for Stanford this year. Could you girls help me out with the essays???

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

thank you!! yes you can email us to hear our prices :)

@wut9612 3 жыл бұрын

congrats on 1k! im an international student need my essay being check out but everyone charges and i can’t afford it rn😖 do you guys charge to edit essays too? much love ❤️

@stanfordtrio9834 3 жыл бұрын

we do charge but they’re pretty low rates!

@wut9612 3 жыл бұрын

Stanford Trio check email !