I have gotten so use to hearing your voice I can't listen to anyone else reading a Creepy pasta.

"It cut me. I'm running for my life. " Oh well, let's stop and write that on the wall LOL

NEVER, EVER do what that guy did to his friend's ankle. Under no circumstances. That guy could have just caused a painful but common ankle break to rise to the level of an eventual amputation of the foot. Just never take anything like advice from creepypastas actually.

Plot Twist: The room was filled with natural gasses causing hallucinations and other oddities. The world exploding around him was the flare gun igniting the gas- ....Yeah. THat's definitely it. o-o

Comes across not one but three warnings.......but by all means......proceed.😕😑😑

Ashley must really hate his parents.

Anyone else realize how badass you'd have to be to do this??

They probably should've used flashlights with flares as a back up.

"Take him to the hospital and give him these pain killers" Yea its a bring your own medicine hospital

I've tried listening to this 3 times but keep falling asleep. His voice is so damn relaxing

As i said when i heard The Gods Mouth, "THIS IS WHY YOU DON'T GO INTO CAVES KIDDIES!"

Shit, I would've left when dude messed his ankle up. "Well, let's pack it up y'all! Lol

That bone cracking noise sent a shiver down my spine.

I compleatly misheard that as "The Jackle waves." Now I've just got visions of this horrible monster sitting in the darkness, waving at cavers like "Helloooooo! Gonna nom your souls!" And, I'm sorry? Terrible things happened when this guy went climbing in the Andies? Terrible thing? Is this guy fucking jinxed or something?!

3:25 "Flares out everybody." You turned into Vince Vaughn for a second there.

I love when the author is suddenly able to just automatically know how to beat the immortal enemy

This sort of reminds me of the movie The Decent.

his name is ashley? tell him that his keys are behind his parents dresser

lol... "should we help him?" "NO. We already walked down some stairs. were like already 20 feet inside this cave. we cant go back." the fuck man. why even write in the characters if you throw them out a sentence later.

You cannot grasp the true form of The Jackal's attack! One of the best stories/creepy pastas You've done.

I find it odd that I cannot find any comments saying how absolutely amazing this story is. It is truly amazing and read extremely well. Thank you for the upload

This was actually the first creepypasta I ever heard. I listen to them a lot and I've written a few as well, this story is pretty special to me.

I think that was the single most entertaining, terrifying, and overall best story I've ever heard. Your voice is very complimenting as well, and I love it. (No seriously, I really like your voice dude. Its perfect for this and you know when and how to act according to the story. You're very talented) and usually something like this would leave me wanting to know more but I know exactly enough to be satisfied.

The ending is something Michael Bay would do.

why no flash lights.

i want a second part to this.

Mr. Creepypasta this is by far one of my favorite stories you tell. I can honestly say I was sucked into the story and very creeped out towards the end. Great story

i remember when i first heard your amazing narration of this one. Absolutely satisfying and such an awesome creepypasta. Id say this is to be among the hall of fame. Cant say how much i appreciate this one you did.

Great pasta,would be a epic movie

This was really great. Lol the only thing that startled me were the sound FX tho

I've not heard your stories until today and after seeing the "Jr." I was optimistic. I have listened to a lot of others Reddit etc. but YOU are by far the BEST one and I'll listen to your stories from now on! You are very good! The music in the background, the excitement in your voice climbing with anticipation!, it really grabs you into the story! It's great! Keep up the good work man! Xoxo Amber ;)

dude that was probaly one of the best creepypastas that i've heard so far. good job bro ;)

I wouldn't go as far as to call it a creepypasta, but GOD DAMN, this was a spectacular story!

Been a while since I listened to this. It's still epic. I'd love for a movie to be made, but they'd only make the Jackal look ridiculous. Like a big CGI blur or something. It would be impossible to properly capture the sheer impossibility of it. Perhaps if it's never actually shown...just a tendril wrapped around Ashley or something, like the tentacles from "The Mist" that killed the bag boy. Leave it up to the imagination. For some reason though, I picture it as a Morbolo from Final Fantasy, albeit sort of squiggly, like its flesh is wriggling. No clue where the image came from though. I love the ending. Sure, it's vague, but it's supposed to be. I'd like to think that he killed it at the cost of his own life...and that the ones who never crossed the gate made it out alive. The Jackal would gladly lie to fill the guy with despair. Maybe it makes them taste better. Like salting the meat, as Pennywise once put it.

Undeniably one of your best, despite the flubs. And what a rarity for a creepypasta to have some close to a happy ending.

What makes him great is his honesty. He doesnt cut out all the failed parts. He just tries again.

DAMMMM DAT BONE CRACKING SOUND.

Not going to lie, this started out good, but ended up cringe af.

Just come back for a listen - This was the first creepypasta I ever heard. And it's what got me hooked.

Oh my gosh a reboot of the cave. Love you mcp you're the best.

"The world Exploded around me" Me: Have Fun!

Does anyone else wish he would pronounce gesture right

Anyone using flares for lighting up a cave is an ideal candidate for natural selection.

MrCreepyPasta has such good emotion when he reads, and his voice fits the mood perfectly. Plus, he pauses at just the right time for a long enough time to have a good effect, and time for the listeners to process what is going on in the story. :)

This should be a movie

Am I crazy or does anyone else really want to go spelunking (with proper equipment) after listening to this? Really want to gather a group of friends right now and just dive right in.

This is a favorite of mine, very glad that was re-uploaded, not that the first was had any errors...I just like it more now.

i love the cave series, you get pretty invested in it after a few, especially when you narrate it.

When this began, I thought of the film The Decent.

I've had days like that.

I adore this story. Keep on writing, truly! :)

Love this one! Can't wait to see what I

Spelunky creepypasta!

The jackle thingy sounds like a big ugly bear.

Your narration skills are top notch. I swear as you speak I can envision everything in my head. The Jackal's voice still rings in my head booming and dark. It makes me wonder what happened afterwards? But we can leave it up to our imaginations.

You, my good man, are an excellent story teller!

This kind of bored me but at the same time I found myself unable to leave the video

Ashley's a guy...?

Love this one can't wait to see what's different

way to go mrcreepypasta, you made the freakin world blow up

ive heard you mispronounce this in a lot of readings, so its getting probably not an accident, but the word "gesture" has a soft g, like "giraffe" or "mirage". D: its a minor thing but i thought youd like to know

@ 26:40 "This Is My Cave" = Shrek "This Is My Swamp" lol #ihatehashtags #itsallogrenow #hopefullynotrealhashtags

I love this story. Really well done again MCP Love it and Love you

Oh that cracking sound was music to my ears... Awh yes, I'm not sure how many times I've replayed it...

The poor editing really killed this great narration. The dude is killing it, but the failure to edit out off-takes and repeating lines ruins the vibe and continuity. Bummer.

This is my cave. = Initiate phase one. And anyone who gets this is awesome.

wow this is way better then when he first posted its amazng how far hes came good job mcp

Wow, this one was amazing, I love your voice! ^^ it's amazing, very soothing even though your telling scary stories XD

Before i started listening to this story i thought it was based off the movie the descent

My name's Alex... i don't remember this... but I DO remember Ashley.

Holy this was really good, now i know why i love creepypastas

One of my favorites mrcreepypasta!

Brother and sister can't be identical twins. STORY RUINED!1

reminds me of the Movie 'The Pyramid'

best creepy pasta ive heard ina long time bravo.

This story was way ahead of its time

Every time I think of the creature I think of a deathclaw from Fallout

"Everything exploded" ...he caused the Big Bang...

your the best MCP i wanna thank you because you gave me confidence to be a author ive also learned from your voice the true me has been revealed thanks man i also have a story if you want me to give it to you

Dude, I've grown up with Pokemon since the beginning and THAT thought of Ash's name never really crossed my mind. You have now just blown my mind like seriously.

In 2006 I was a homeless crackhead. I got caught mBating in the bathroom of a library. Dark days

WHY DIDN'T THEY JUST LEAVE AFTER THINGS GOT EERIE!?

the original one you posted was my first non gaming creepypasta. u were my first non gaming creepy pasta sub.

I forgot how much u miss your early work

is it a sequel of fender woods

As Above, So Below, anybody? = 3 =

That was AWESOME!

This is my fave mr.creepypasata era

Cave writing says "Go back, The jackle wakes" Fuck it, lets fo forward

hehe ashley is a girls name

Well done... Another great one! 😎

What's up with you repeating sentences when u read?

Isn't "Ashley" a girl's name??

This is amazing

This was an amazing story with a very strange feel. Not like most I can say. And the reading was pretty good also, yes there were just a few mess ups, but really pulled you in. I love imagery and this had plenty of it, even though it was shrouded in darkness. Great pick creepypasta

sounds like the bedrock mist lol

I WROTE THIS!!!!! IN 4TH GRADE I WROTE THE JACKLE'S CAVE AND MY TEACHER READ IT ALOUD THE CLASS MY NAME IS ETHAN TOO! OMG OMG OMG

Your reading voice is freaking awesome.

Incredible story!

it's like a mix of The Descent and Blair Witch Project..