Every thing this guy writes is gold!

It's always an honor to do storys from Vincent VenaCava. He's fantastic.

I think a lot of you are missing the point here. It take a LOT out of you to actually kill someone. In fantasy it's easy to say, "oh yeah I'd take that guys heard off because he deserves it." But in a real life scenario, you start to think about what you're really taking away from someone. You relate to that person and try to understand why they are the way they are, and most of all you start to ask the question, "who am I to decide who lives and who dies?" [spoilers ahead] In the beginning he's young and naive so his emotions can get the better of him. Fear, panic, He just reacts without giving it too much careful thought, but when he's older, he's experienced and has better control on his emotions. Most importantly, he's a father. Yes a teenager can make a mistake, and yes his wife is gone. But like how he wouldn't want the life of his son taken from him before it really gets started, he can't take away the life of another kid before it gets started. So he does the right thing.

I read the title as "The Pasta Man" and the thumbnail looks like noodles

SPOILER: am i the only one who sensed irony in the fact walter's death was concluded a "drunk driving insident" and his wife and son met the fate of a drunk driver? this has been one of my favorites since my freshman year of highschool

My favorite thing about this story is the monster you make a deal with doesn't trick you. He doesn't make it impossible to find that whom you wish to kill, he doesn't make it impossible to say his name. I like the idea that the deal is still horrible, but not a cheat.

"My son awoke right as the sun had made its way out of the horizon line, and I was suddenly stuck with the most painful heart attack I could never describe appropriately. My son watched in horror as I hit the floor hard, nearly paralyzed by pain. His face went white, with his mouth agape, and I heard the last words I would have ever wanted spoken to any loved one I had. "I can save him...""

Long Creepy-pastas > Movies Creepy Pastas leave SO much more to the imagination than movies do, and damn... I love them.

uuh ... yo u got a .... bug on your face ... uh ... sir it's ... uh very big ... uh ... SIR ... neverm-mind

The fun part for the Pastel Man was the guilt of the protagonist. I feel he would complete the contract anyway and keep the guy alive even though he didn't hold up his end. He'd still be feeling guilty for agreeing in the first place.

22:57 "Walter's face was White" Breaking Bad Season 6 Confirmed!

I couldn't stop staring at that the thing in the corner. Took me a while to figure out that it was a bug.

QUICK SOMEONE DRAW THE MONSTER!

Am I the only one imaging The Pastel Man as an evil Mr. Meeseeks?

I'm literally a stupid sack of shit. I read the title as "The Pasta Man" and thought the thumbnail was a picture of spaghetti...

"Pastaman" - By Vinny Pizzapasta

Sorry to comment on a 2-year-old video, but I must say, the effect you put on your voice for demon stories is my absolute favorite!!! I just recently found your channel but I really hope to find more demon-based stories with effects like this. You do them so much justice, thanks for the great storytelling, sir :)

This was awesome! It's one of the few creepypastas that I actually felt sad at the ending. It's just great and I really love it!

I don't think I could actually kill someone. I have a hard enough time deciding what I'll eat for breakfast. Let's not throw life or death into the mix...

Am I the only one who pictures the Pastel Man as Ryuk?

Ah its 4;am and I think its finally time to go to bed... Oh look a new creepy pasta, it wont hurt right?

* I turn around, and see a creature behind me* OH HEY THERE BUDDY, HOW YA DOIN? SIDDOWN, LETS HAVE SOME TEA!

Hey dude, I think there's a bug on your lens.

That. Was. Unbelievable. I LOVED IT

I have to say, I rarely pay attention to the writers of these stories, but Vincent VenaCava is definitely my favorite creepypasta writer. His stories are well written, enjoyable, and they have a certain personality. He should really try to get published.

Creepypasta is at his best when he does over 10 min videos

My favorite creepy pasta of all time.

To summon the Pastel Man you must call his name.... AND HIS NAME IS JOOOHN CENAAAAA! DO DO DO DOOOOO! DO DO DO DOOOOO!

I thought the title said the 'Pretzel Man' and thought that the thumbnail was a bunch of pretzels in a pile.

Death is one thing. Torture is even worse... -.-

I 'm a longtime fan of your channel and your amazing narrative. You are a natural. Love and light and joy with plenty of time to enjoy them !

Big eyes no nose evil magic cannot speak his name THE PASTEL MAN IS VOLDEMORT IN DISGUISE

Wondering where the ambulance is 13 mins in...

Dude, that's a great deal! Get rid of a nuisance and save a loved one! How awesome is that?! And why would you hesitate to kill that deuchebag?! Pastel Man runs a goood biz

Dammit, Mr Creepypasta. This is one of your best work yet. Love the playful creepiness your voice lent the pastel man!

Drunk drivers don't deserve any sympathy.

Definitely a really good story to make up for the rather meh ones we've been getting recently. Vincent is obviously a very talented writer.

"Pure blue skin" hmmm sounds like your youtube avatar MCP.

I always half-expect a jumpscare at he end of Mr.CreepyPasta's videos, this one was amazing! Good job!

I have to say, this has got to be my favourite creepypasta to date. Fantastic work.

what is this, Beetlejuice?

I really hope Vincent creates a 2nd part to this story, told from the perspective of the boy.

Oh my gosh, amazing narration as always MCP, and loving writing from the amazing Vincent VenaCava. I'm really looking forward to more writing from him and more videos from yourself MCP. :)

This is my favorite pasta to date, you've already established me as a fan but now you're my favorite youtuber

Mr.Cava is a fucking genius

Walter From this story Sounds Like 98% Of People I Know!

I enjoy these emotional creepy pastas. They allow you to see through the characters eyes and think about what you would do in his or her situation. It was a well written story and had a very emotional ending. Many thanks to the author and to you Mr Creepypasta for reading once again for all of us here on KZfaq.

That was one of the best readings I have ever heard; EVER! Good job

This makes me question, "What if every saved life, a person dies in his or her place? Is The Pastel Man real?" Quite a rather interesting thought. But, no one will truly know. That is, with the acception of the people who have consulted with The Pastel Man. Who, obviously, will not say a word about it. Due to the simple fact that they may be either locked up in a psych ward for the criminally insane or thrown in a jail cell.

I like the Pastel Man's voice! :]

No-end house was my first creepypasta but this was my second and the one that introduced me to the creepypasta narrators such as mr.creepypasta and creeps. And it really holds a special place in my heart. It's also where I found my love for the stories of Vincent venacava. TLDR; Thank you for yet another job well done

An incredible story horror and a serious eye opener thank you to the writer and thank you to MrCreepyPasta. A round of applause for the two of you.

this story is great

Woah all these comments... i'm just here to say I loved this story and it was beautifully told. The end =)

Mr CreepyPasta I love you and the stories you find especially Vincent VenaCava Stories.

I so love the way you read these stories!! ^^

I imagined it as Him from The Powerpuff Girls o-o

I picture it as Sidoh from Death Note

Love this story! Amazing plot and conflict. Once again, fantastic reading MCP

Excellent! Bravo! I frackin loved this one MCP!

Kyubey, is that you?

Optimus Prime enters: One shall stand. One shall fall.

Vincent's done another great one, and you've done a great job narrating it, MCP! Love the View Askew reference, too.

yo mrcreepypasta i never cry when i hear a story like this ,but this one hit me at home, good job

I think this story would be very different if the main character had chosen someone like a rapist or molester. I don't know about other people, but I'd make that kind of deal in a heartbeat with no remorse.

saving anyone you'd like and watching the person you hate get brutally murdered doesn't sound so bad

you sor deserve alot more fame for all your hard work i love your creepy pastas keep up the good work i will be sure to spread your work

Oh my goodness this one was amazing, I didn't want it to end. The story is so interesting

This was a very interesting one, I wouldve accepted his deal

Great creepy pasta you had me when i thought he was gonna kill the young boy in the hospital and good work to you aswell vincent

This was really good. It makes you think a lot about what you would do for the people you care about . A+

My favorite pastas are the ones over 20mins they have enough time to build an amazing story. thanks MrCreepy!

HOW DIDNT I REALISE THIS WAS 40 MINUTES LONG

Frig that. I wouldn't have any guilt over letting the creature kill a drunk driver, especially one that took the life of my wife and nearly my son. Nah, he dead.

Oh man you did it?! I recommended this and you did it :D I love you!!!

I'm new to the whole creepy pasta thing. I've had friends that were into them, but never really got interested enough to look into them. However, after MrCreepyPasta i'm and addict. Keep doing it right man.

something so beautiful that belongs to something so repulsive, it gives life which is its beauty and then it makes you take a life which is its ugliness.

What did we learn here? Never drink and drive. XD

Out of all the creepy pastas I’ve listened to, I keep coming back to this one. Vincent Vena Cava is a beast.

The monster sounds like he is a big gingerbread man

That bug is nasty.

That was such an amazing, although creepy, story! Very well written and read! One of my favorites!

You have the most amazing voice I have ever heard. You don't stutter or anything. It's amazing.

Lock the door, shut the blinds, turn off the lights, but it's already to late. It's always to late. The beast is not in your house, he won't come through the door or the windows... He's in your mind, and locked himself in, never to come-out except in your dreams. There he is free to roam as in the dark behind your eyes. That's why when you walk down a dark path you think someone's behind you when there is a seizure like fear in the back of your mind. Now will the beast get you, or will you keep it at bay until the end of your life when you confront your demons in-front of God and the world. Will they in the end condemn you, or you them? To answer though would be meaningless because in the end all have at least one demon themselves, if you think you're above them or clean only makes you naive and only weaker to them. To finish I say, be prepared. (I don't know, just felt like writing a line or two and it exploded.) Good episode.

Anyone else creeped out by the bug on the screen

I can only imagine what kind of bloopers you make while reading these. Not to mention, I can see you as one if those guys that is all happy and funny out in the real world and on here you just become super creepy xD

I wanna say thank you to you cus I've been following all of your stories and to the others ones that's been doing the same I always check to see if you all will post something new some are good an others are great this is one of them thank you again

Sir, your voice for the Pastel Man makes him sound hot. Now, this is my favorite Creepypasta.

Did anyone else think of "Him" from PowerPuff Girls?

I love this. This concept is really interesting.

you have an amazing voice, I so enjoy listening too these. and this a pretty good story :)

Am I the only one who felt no remorse for Walter?

Hey, MCP I was wondering, how did u get ur icon?

Vincent VenaCava is such a brilliant author! I love all his stories.

I remember playing dark souls 2 listening too your story’s. Thank you for all you do

For a moment I was actually considering it. I know who I would target too. But nobody deserves that treatment, and becoming a murderer just isn't worth it..

-listens to this while building in minecraft, my cousin walks in- Walter: SHAUN THE SHITHEAD!? My cousin named Shaun: -puts his head on his chest a says in a high pitched voice- "EXCUSE YOU."

Truely beautiful Master Creepypaster. Truly a stunning reading and story,

I absolutely love this story. Pastel Man is such a great villain - I hope there will be more stories about him or stories that he plays a role in. This is by far my favorite pasta story.

No one deserves to die, even if you're killing someone to make a deal to bring back someone you love, you're still stealing the life of someone who may be loved by others. No matter what any of you think, no one deserves to die..