The personal essay that got me into Duke University
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Intro: 0:00
Essay: 0:11
1st paragraph: 3:32
2nd paragraph: 4:16
3rd paragraph: 4:52
Comparing the 2nd & 3rd paragraphs: 5:28
4th paragraph: 5:51
Turning point: 6:17
Recap of the first half of the essay: 6:52
5th paragraph: 7:07
6th paragraph: 7:42
7th paragraph: 8:30
8th (& last) paragraph: 9:57
Tip 1: 11:44
Tip 2: 12:02
Tip 3: 12:26
Outro: 12:43
@urmom-lr6sc 9 ай бұрын
Wow what a great essay! Youre such an amazing writer, I never felt bored or detracted while listening. Congrats!🎉
@admissionsgames 9 ай бұрын
Great example of an experience that led to self discovery. Essays can do lots of things (e.g. hero story where you over come a problem) -- in this case, truth seeking wins the day!
@user-bj4qm9zt7o 9 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@karenmusumecinolte5241 9 ай бұрын
Incredible- I thought I son's essay was pretty good until heating this. Are you still offering essay review? If so may be have your email address. You're writing paints such a vivid and beautiful picture.
@allobap.p 9 ай бұрын
Hey can I get your ig handle and I’m asking if it’s possible you could proof read my essay if you still do that*
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