The Secret To Writing A Superhero Story - Peter Russell

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@hercb4388
@hercb4388 5 жыл бұрын
The most popular superheroes character are the ones with everyday problems because despite there powers they are just like us, you know? Relatable interesting. I feel like this is a very 40s view of the superhero genre.
@johnmoser9731
@johnmoser9731 4 жыл бұрын
Tell that to Batman.
@hercb4388
@hercb4388 4 жыл бұрын
@@johnmoser9731 I mean batman is just a normal guy at the end of the day. Some writers take it to the extreme with making him invincible and giving him a solution to every problem in their story's but the core of why people like batman is because he is a man among gods.
@johnmoser9731
@johnmoser9731 4 жыл бұрын
@@hercb4388 I mean Bill Gates mixed with Sherlock Holmes mixed with Bruce Lee on Brock Lesnar's body is hardly relatable to me personally.
@johnmoser9731
@johnmoser9731 4 жыл бұрын
@@hercb4388 I personally think Spider-man is the most relatable but even that is like a wish fulfillment type of thing. A shlubby guy like me gets bit by a spider and becomes a badass. I think Batman is based on the fear of the street level stuff. Home invasions, muggings, serial killers stuff like that. We'd like someone to protect us from that. Superman is the fear of the unknown or something out of our control like a natural disaster or an alien invasion. I'm not saying these characters were specifically created with that in mind but I think it's a factor into why they're still popular today.
@hercb4388
@hercb4388 4 жыл бұрын
@@johnmoser9731 maybe for a child its a power fantasy, but I think for most adults they come not to see spider-man or batman beat a giant villain but to see how they will juggle being a hero with their personal life and what kind of tole that takes on their psyche. the reason batman is so popular is because of his complex writing he is a very flawed man but still a good one at the end of the day which is relatable to us.
@bjarkisteinnpetursson9736
@bjarkisteinnpetursson9736 5 жыл бұрын
He seems to have a pretty good understanding of how superheroes worked in the 40s and 50s but it sounds like he’s never even seen a Marvel movie. Stan Lee’s whole thing was rejecting that notion and making his superheroes feel like real people with normal human problems and the MCU understands this. If superhero stories were only about how big the villain could get, they would’ve died out no later than the 60s or 70s.
@freakyninjaman3
@freakyninjaman3 5 жыл бұрын
Russell is partially right. Superheroes CAN be wounded as the comment section proves, but the plot device he describes is valid as well. I think that what we recognize today as superheroes are much more complex than they were due to the mixing and matching of story concepts. The original superman comics follow much closer to Russell's idea. An overpowered dude who provided entertainment anytime he was put to the test by a clever villain. While he did have a wound which made him want to become a hero, the individual episodes of Superman rarely referenced these and instead used the wound as a simple backstory. All I would suggest is that we don't write off his advice so quickly. Instead, combine and mix and match to create something complex enough to fit what the story requires.
@Within_Cells_Interlinked
@Within_Cells_Interlinked 5 жыл бұрын
I always enjoy Russell’s comments on writing, but I have to disagree. Just looking at the MCU alone, we know heroes have core wounds and is why these characters have resonated for the past ten years. Tony Stark (Iron Man) has deep core wounds that are expressed through his suit of literal armor (something which he wants to extend to the world). Thor has to continuously prove his ‘worthiness’ to lift mjolnir, yet deems himself unworthy to lead his people, and when he does finally lead, fails in protecting them and avenging them. Steve Rogers (Captain America) has to constantly battle his past with his present, both literally and figuratively, while holding onto a set of values out of synch in the modern era. And it goes on... I think Russell should pick up a few old comic books. 😉
@thehmc
@thehmc 4 жыл бұрын
But their wounds or flaws aren't the story. They're the motivating force for why they're superheroes. They're wounds have already been healed by becoming a superhero. Parker is Spider-Man because he lost his Uncle. They're not trying to heal their core wounds, because those wounds are already healed by becoming superheroes. So it doesn't function in the story the way a core wound does. A core wound is something that needs to be healed. The main wound of a superhero is already healed by being a superhero.
@alexlopez4920
@alexlopez4920 4 жыл бұрын
Well damn I agree with all three of you 😳 Stop making valid points lol Im trying to write my origin story 😂
@JKwriter1221
@JKwriter1221 2 жыл бұрын
I agree, Spider-man, Barman, Nightwing are all very physiological and emotional stories
@thehmc
@thehmc 4 жыл бұрын
The people in these comments saying "But Superheroes HAVE core wounds blah blah" are totally wrong and Peter Russel is totally right. The villain drives the story in superhero stories. The core wound is secondary and has already been healed by becoming a superhero. How often do you see Batman actually dealing with the loss of his parents. Never. Because he's already dealt with it by becoming Batman. The problem is always whatever the villain is doing. The best Batman stories have nothing to do with his parents. In most Superhero stories, the way they dealt with a core wound is by being Superheroes.
@notspider-man7777
@notspider-man7777 4 жыл бұрын
There is a ton of Batman stories dealing with the death of his parents.
@heyarnold7256
@heyarnold7256 3 жыл бұрын
@@notspider-man7777 Sure but it's not at the forefront of every story. It's brought up again occasionally but thats not the norm.
@kennycooper294
@kennycooper294 6 ай бұрын
he mentioned original superheroes because he recognized the marvel heroes have that wound being from the silver age. dc has heroes from the golden age with batman having a more modern wound.
@bioticheart
@bioticheart 5 жыл бұрын
Mr. Russel, I implore you to watch superhero stories such as the Marvel Netflix versions of Daredevil and Jessica Jones. The entire point is the wounds they bleed for 3 seasons each. Heck even Spider-Man. Most superheros are all about core wounds. Do your homework.
@767scarecrow
@767scarecrow 5 жыл бұрын
Let's be fair he said "traditional superheroes". As in the archetypes.
@trevorprime2274
@trevorprime2274 5 жыл бұрын
Yes, it is perfectly fine to have a superhero with a wound. Nothing is written in stone and absolute statements are always to be taken with a pound of salt.
@johnmoser9731
@johnmoser9731 4 жыл бұрын
I disagree. When I think of Spider-Man I think of him buried under rubble and coming out of it, I don't think about him crying about Gwen Stacy. Outside of Batman, Daredevil, Wolverine, I think most great super hero stories are about overcoming the odds and being a hero instead of moping.
@alohatigers1199
@alohatigers1199 4 жыл бұрын
John Moser Nah, I see great superhero stories as to make mistakes, learn from it and get better. That’s what’s called “Rags to Riches”. Majority likes it because they experience it. They like to feel like they are not alone. You look at it like you can relate. Majority can relate to it. Majority comes from Rags. You don’t want to make mistakes? you must learn how to deal with it. Once you deal with it, you must learn how to get better. You can’t be a master if you don’t make mistakes and better from them
@johnmoser9731
@johnmoser9731 4 жыл бұрын
@@alohatigers1199 How often do the heroes make mistakes in these movies? I can't think of many.
@camronchlarson3767
@camronchlarson3767 5 жыл бұрын
I agree with lifting heavier and heavier weights but to say that super heroes aren't wounded is absolutely wrong lol
@thehmc
@thehmc 4 жыл бұрын
No it isn't. Their wounds are already healed by being superheroes. The only time a superhero has a core wound is in their origin story. And that wound is healed by becoming a superhero. After that, every superhero story is about the villain.
@alohatigers1199
@alohatigers1199 4 жыл бұрын
thehmc No. Not even becoming a superhero can heal your traumatic/PTSD wounds. You can run faster than light but you cannot outrun your horrible memories. Becoming the fastest man alive is not what’s heals the wounds, it’s surrounding yourself with the right people that always is on your side. People that can motivate you, support you, encourage you, help you build your confidence.
@chucksmash1
@chucksmash1 2 жыл бұрын
@@alohatigers1199 EXTREMELY well said. Thank you for saying it. I totally agree.
@sambakerman9406
@sambakerman9406 Жыл бұрын
Literally just 5.31 of this guy telling us how good he is...
@izzy4el
@izzy4el 5 жыл бұрын
Peter Russell's a fascinating dude! Always enjoy seeing his name on your posts Film Courage.
@greeneyerish
@greeneyerish 5 жыл бұрын
“Superheroes aren’t wounded.” Um, what?
@bioticheart
@bioticheart 5 жыл бұрын
Right? This guy clearly hasn't watched any in the last 10 to 15 years.
@greeneyerish
@greeneyerish 5 жыл бұрын
@@bioticheart I don't get the impression he's watched one, period or has much respect for the genre and that it could possess substance in its storytelling. His view on it seems dated and ignorant. And the idea of the villain or antagonist consistently putting a bigger "weight" in front of the hero to pick up throughout a story is not unique to the superhero. It's called raising the stakes and it's something in all stories to raise tension. Not a fan of how he's inaccurately trying to use the idea of superheroes to make his point work.
@ichbifeuertrunk
@ichbifeuertrunk 5 жыл бұрын
In another video, he keeps saying that "superhero movies are failing right now". Um what indeed.
@karagumruk7330
@karagumruk7330 5 жыл бұрын
He is an idiot.
@thehmc
@thehmc 4 жыл бұрын
@@ichbifeuertrunk Because most are. The MCU and other successful ones are the exception.
@guywainer4028
@guywainer4028 5 жыл бұрын
I think it depends on the superhero and which point in the story. If you take Spider-Man, in many incarnations Peter Parker's core wound is that he's not strong or popular enough. Then when he becomes Spider-Man and gets the girl his core wound is remembering the loss of his uncle Ben and what would happen to Mary Jane or Gwen Stacy when captured or had run ins with the villains etc. But each of those core wounds happen at various and different points in the story. In Spider-Man 2 in the scene where Peter tells Aunt May - his core wound is that he has kept what happened to uncle Ben for so long and that process is a step to Peter Parker healing. I will say what Peter talks about is also true but if they didn't have any wounds we couldn't be interested. His theories are for and of any movie or story.
@ianhtexas
@ianhtexas 3 жыл бұрын
Oh, wow, a lot of people are disagreeing and, yeah, but there’s more to it or there’s more that I’m seeing anyway. What he’s saying, that’s how you raise the stakes with a superhero, yeah, no doubt. You have to keep raising those stakes to a new, super high level, and doing it by using a different side of the spectrum usually makes it more interesting. Super strength versus super intelligence, a master of the psychic versus a master of magnetism, good versus evil, are all good examples. He’s not saying to take out the other stuff like the flaws and the inner journey. It’s like looking at Aragorn alongside Frodo. Frodo and Sam have the same conflict the whole time. Throw the ring into the fires of Mordor. They’re not superheroes. Even though Frodo has a magic ring, he’s not a superhero. He does have some of those superhero traits, though, and some of those non-super traits (and that is super compelling). There are ups and downs, sure, yeah, but the main conflict/goal is the same throughout. Aragorn is increasingly challenged by new threats, on new paths, that are bigger and completely different than the last, from without and within (it’s a tiny bit different with Aragorn because he’s becoming a great king - king is different than superhero, but still) and has to overcome them, or we won’t see him as a superhero or a king - again, king is different than superhero and Aragorn is both, damn, wow. Does that make sense? I think that makes sense.
@arichutfles9550
@arichutfles9550 3 жыл бұрын
Aragorn does have a cape...
@ianhtexas
@ianhtexas 3 жыл бұрын
@@arichutfles9550 😂 he sure does! 🍻
@nkanyisoinnocentkhwane3752
@nkanyisoinnocentkhwane3752 5 жыл бұрын
What a delightful soul
@squali1930
@squali1930 3 жыл бұрын
Does he speak more about superhero stories? I would love to watch a longer video on that.
@filmcourage
@filmcourage 3 жыл бұрын
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@gianni206
@gianni206 Жыл бұрын
By this logic, the Sword and Sandels genre is pretty superheroic. Or the Pirate Swashbuckler. But heroes from these genres also have wounds to heal
@flipbookboi3856
@flipbookboi3856 3 жыл бұрын
3:41 *When the superhero is sus* 😳
@ThunderAppeal
@ThunderAppeal 5 жыл бұрын
All super hero stories are made for people with serious social and personal issue, however these people who have these severe disorders have managed to accept it in their life and integrate it and by extension those people are able function as normal members of society. But they are not normal none the less.
@ItachiUchiha-ut6xj
@ItachiUchiha-ut6xj 4 жыл бұрын
I think he's wrong. The best superheroes are wounded. Healing themselves as well as overcoming what the villain throws their way is what's appealing.
@sash9249
@sash9249 3 жыл бұрын
With respect, if you've ever heard Stan Lee talk about superheroes you'd immediately understand that he wanted superheroes to be a metaphor for their own flaws and, yes, wounds. Without those RELATABLE wounds - those films simply wouldn't have been as successful as they were.
@aislemontecristo
@aislemontecristo 2 ай бұрын
It's good to listen to different points of view on the same matter. Yes, He's right about the foundational concept of the superhero; then there is the successful subversion of the concept by Stan Lee. So, which one suits your story?
@JohnCellini
@JohnCellini 2 жыл бұрын
we can talk about this later if you'd like
@IdiotinGlans
@IdiotinGlans 5 жыл бұрын
Some superheroes do have wounds but even then we're still watching to see them overcome bigger odds each time, the two are not mutually exclusive
@spunkytoonz
@spunkytoonz 3 жыл бұрын
Oh! The times have changed sir! Modern day super hero stories take a different approach. Nevertheless, you are a kind soul!
@russiancheems2275
@russiancheems2275 3 жыл бұрын
Do you guys think that control over quantum physics entirely is too overpowered? If so, then reply with some good drawbacks so there can be some development and character arcs. Thanks
@user-jp8rh6ts6m
@user-jp8rh6ts6m 2 жыл бұрын
well, for starters, control over doesn’t mean complete control of. so they could start by barely being able to manipulate their powers to being able to (eventually) stand toe-to-toe with gods. also don’t forget about real, relatable human problems. your protagonist may be able to bend reality at will but totally forgot to study for his physics test this morning.
@luka7158
@luka7158 5 жыл бұрын
This sounds a lot like mary sue / gary sue. Lol I thought we all partially agree that they make poor characters. Especially love how condescending he is about it haha. I strongly believe superhero movies were able to properly become a thing with superheroes that hurt and had internal problems. Look at Iron Man. One of if not THE best big screen superhero. Look how much internal shit he goes through. Yet he's one of the most beloved characters.
@dianazimmerman3107
@dianazimmerman3107 5 жыл бұрын
Fantastic interview!! Thank you.
@ianhtexas
@ianhtexas 3 жыл бұрын
Also, Jack Johnson is a real person with real history, idk, that seems like a different thing altogether lol kind of
@lilacDaisy111
@lilacDaisy111 5 жыл бұрын
Maybe it's because I'm a girl, but a superhero's biggest problem being a villain is soooo boring to me. It's so cliche, I can't even finish (DC mostly). I'm longing to see a superhero movie, where she/he is dealing with the things everyday humans do. Because *physical strength can't solve most problems.* The most compelling thing about Buffy was the problems in her life that could only be solved with conversations, compassion, strength of character, personal sacrifice and wit. Her superpowers *complicated the human experience,* adding delicious conflict. I would actually fast forward most fight scenes to get back to the compelling plot.
@ryannixon4138
@ryannixon4138 5 жыл бұрын
Woah good point!
@andrewgarfield9898
@andrewgarfield9898 4 жыл бұрын
Well in that case you would LOVE my comic that I am currently making
@thehmc
@thehmc 4 жыл бұрын
Yeah. Superhero movies and stories aren't for you. A superhero story where superpowers are irrelevant are what's known as "every other kind of story."
@roblinnbailey2359
@roblinnbailey2359 5 жыл бұрын
I can’t wait for this superhero bubble to burst.
@theylovesosa154
@theylovesosa154 2 жыл бұрын
Lmao he just says he uses his tools, that was the only “secret” lol
@jonathantrauner3742
@jonathantrauner3742 5 жыл бұрын
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@anavonrebeur6121
@anavonrebeur6121 2 жыл бұрын
Begins at 2:37
@user-gn6jj8qh1w
@user-gn6jj8qh1w 3 жыл бұрын
Which story did this person write? I mean, which super hero story??
@danman4581
@danman4581 3 жыл бұрын
He's thinking super man, and thinks every hero needs to be a super man.
@knifedreamer
@knifedreamer 5 жыл бұрын
Usually the deeper the core wounds, the darker the story. Batman has heavy core wounds which makes his story dark. Superman has no core wounds really which makes his story light. Just depends how dark you want the story.
@lilacDaisy111
@lilacDaisy111 5 жыл бұрын
Actually, the most compelling Buffy episodes were showing her pain after she had to kill the man she loved to save the world. No gigantic villain, just her trying to live every day, saving people's lives and putting on a brave face, pretending she wasn't dying inside.
@knifedreamer
@knifedreamer 5 жыл бұрын
Buffy was more of a drama than a superhero show though. It needed those moments, especially on a network airing shows like Dawson’s Creek. Roswell was another one like that.
@thehmc
@thehmc 4 жыл бұрын
Yeah, but why did she have to do that? Because Angel's alter ego, Angelus, who is the VILLAIN, created circumstances that forced her to do that. So your favorite Buffy episode is a perfect example of what he's saying.
@pellunderscore
@pellunderscore 2 жыл бұрын
While I respect his experience, the classic superhero no longer exists. There is nothing like that now, because we're in an era of media where we want our characters to be nuanced and interesting. The past is the past, we learned to tell better stories, move on.
@kennycooper294
@kennycooper294 6 ай бұрын
with a real life person he doesnt have to make anything up especially in the era jack johnson lived. its man vs man, man vs society etc. he mentioned old superheroes because most of the marvel heroes have that wound where as dc superheroes dont other than batman.
@gabrielagagodasilva1331
@gabrielagagodasilva1331 3 жыл бұрын
What a boring superhero that would give All the biggest superheros are wounded, that is precisely their biggest challenge. They can be strong - lift that rock. That isn't in question most of the times. Is - can their will and morals be enough to beat evil Swear, not denying this man's writing skills, but this advice on superheroes is the biggest bullshit I've ever heard
@gnarthdarkanen7464
@gnarthdarkanen7464 5 жыл бұрын
Another great video! AND another answer in short of "It depends"... Targeting younger or inexperienced and "childishly simplistic" audiences, the need for a Super- is likened to mythology. Superman's early years were fairly reckless, in his pursuit of justice and protection for the mere mortals around him. The origin story didn't change much over the years, BUT it was later, as his first iterations fell out of favor (and some weird progresses socially were ongoing about that same period) that the ever-infamous discovery was made that Kryptonite iconically robbed Superman of his powers and eventually (in some versions anyway) even his life. What happened? The man who was stronger and faster than anything imaginable just wasn't interesting anymore if he was invincible... simple as that. BUT what's that got to do with core wounds??? ONLY literally everything. But when dealing with creatures that borderline true immortality, godly strengths and durability, the core wounds that we "mere mortals" conjure up for them are simple enough to resolve... just live long enough and they heal... After all, they are only wounds. It seems kind of petty, but it's "do-able". I'd like to point out here, that Core Wounds CAN be crushing, BUT they do NOT have to be. ANY Character's Core Wound can also be subtle... secretive, or obscure. It can seem like such a lesser (petty?) thing to you and me, but for whatever reason it's been kept secret in intro'... We're self-investing in this character when we (audience...btw) find out about it, and we WILL accept that it's just as important and detrimental to us as the Character makes it out to be affecting him/her... The same principle works out in Supers. Peter Parker, famed as Spiderman. WOUNDS out his Wazoo! He was bitten as a teen... by a radioactive spider in a laboratory... He was OBVIOUSLY an exceptional kid or there's little or no way he'd even be in an expensive lab (do you KNOW how much it costs for a radiological lab in that day??? Upwards of "Holy F***!") BUT his Core Wound, was troubled kid, unpopular, coming of age, and crushing...etc... LOST in the unimportance of low self esteem. THEN he gets these powers (parallel to "coming of age"...ahem) and changes... Takes an experiment that "fails catastrophically"... As many youthful adults DO. Only this fails so spectacularly that it gets his Uncle Henry killed... SO new core wound. GUILT... SELF LOATHING... Here's the thing. He'd tasted the fame and fandom in that wrestling ring, showing off, hearing crowds roar for him. That's addictive... a high like NOTHING they can find on the street! BUT bitter disappointment comes crashing in when he's trying to get paid, and gets "screwed" because "it's not my problem, kid"... AND when the place gets shot to pieces, people hurt... money stolen... He's asked why he didn't do anything, like kick the guy's feet out from under him... AND turn about felt TOO DAMN GOOD at the time. (life lesson)... AND then of course, Henry's killed. EVERY SINGLE Superhero has a similar theme, too. Just as Uncle Henry told Peter while Peter was struggling with morals and questionable powers in the beginning. "With great power comes great responsibility." AND these neo-mythical pantheons are just that kind of theme. What drives any superhero to be heroic??? Think about that. Superman has nothing to gain... Why would he possibly need the headaches and aggravation for just to be the crutch of the human civilized world??? He has no father to prove anything to. Lois Lane gets into more and more serious trouble just for knowing about Superman... He's not making money hand-over fist, in spite of every responsible reporter and media franchise on the PLANET putting bounties out for anything material about or around him... What??? That boy has serious personal problems. I'd have to point to "extreme needs for external validation"... It's not a terrible wound, just a wound... at his core. It defines him. He has that internal DEMAND to be "the hero" in every article, every story... every photo. Think about it. When he's cast as "villainous" or "questionably disreputable" he goes BALLISTIC... and ass seriously NEEDS kicked. Pick any Superhero in the modern settings of stories, and you can pick apart to at least one (most have several) core wounds. They may not be the HUGELY detrimental types that cripple the "average joe" Character(s)... BUT they are core to defining the supers. We're grown up (mostly) and we respond to Characters with wounds. It's inherent. Now there are some who's wounds might land on technicality. The stories often premised more completely toward satire or humor (straight?) and augmented with the simple FUN of bigger and more epic scenes of bad-assery. Fine... It's not "bad" to go after that. It's just dubiously "Simplistic" in the nature of Character creation. I'd absolutely advocate sticking some deep-seeded and serious Core Wounds into Supers. It makes them deeper and more personable. Hell, all the way back through Pantheons to the Ancient Greeks! Have you SEEN any of that "Classic" storytelling? It's more like a weird semi-homogenous stew of High School Drop-out drama and really BAD 80's era Soap Opera Cliches... with occasional mythic bestiality and clearly more drunkedness than necessary (staring at you, Bacchus) AAAaaahhhh... but I digress. It's still a good discussion topic. ;o)
@soniap319
@soniap319 4 жыл бұрын
Wowsa that was long to read
@notspider-man7777
@notspider-man7777 4 жыл бұрын
Uncle Henry? Was there an error in translation or something?
@gnarthdarkanen7464
@gnarthdarkanen7464 4 жыл бұрын
@@notspider-man7777 It's exactly why I've turned auto-correct "THE FUCK OFF"... I might be fast enough, normally, to type all that in a couple minutes, but editing is a whole different wad of gum... SO I won't be going through it anytime soon. Surely, you have the sensibility to make the adequate substitutions, yourself, mentally. ;o)
@basics8592
@basics8592 Жыл бұрын
Hello friends 👋 I am making my own superhero comic and I have half of the story ready......But it will be way better if we will work together . What do you guys think , Shall we ? If yes , comment below 👇
@Davanthall
@Davanthall Жыл бұрын
So the secret to writing a superhero story…….is to have the villain be threatening….. …….wow…what a revelation… 🙄🙄🙄
@khakimzhanmiras
@khakimzhanmiras 5 жыл бұрын
absolutely disagree
@PressStartFonzie
@PressStartFonzie Жыл бұрын
All these comments are now tired of current superhero movies lol and love John Wick
@Cazzum007
@Cazzum007 5 жыл бұрын
this is a rambling mess
@christophercobb8008
@christophercobb8008 15 күн бұрын
Can I have my 5 and a half minutes back, please? You said nothing of value.
@iamu2247
@iamu2247 4 жыл бұрын
I only gave a thumbs down because of this guy. He's actually describing the Mary Sue archetype. Also his demeanor is comically pompous, and doesn't represent this channel's image very well. Boo this man!
@thehmc
@thehmc 4 жыл бұрын
He's not, and you don't know what a Mary Sue is.
@hannahgaming1724
@hannahgaming1724 2 жыл бұрын
Lol he has no idea what a superhero is
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